LarrySun:
Lol! Gooseflesh.

LogoDWhiz:
But why does it seem to be that John Balewa is over reacting... Move on, not turn your best friend to your worst enemy, even when he showed remorse...

Skimpledawg:

Has someone broken your trust before?

It's not just about Black gbenshing Rhoda.


I have broken my madam's trust before according to her even though I did not do what was alleged. Trust is one funny thing. One time you are in good terms another time you are pleading to be taken back

LarrySun:
Patience is the key. Consider the time difference.

LarrySun:
Patience is the key. Consider the time difference.

fumiswtpusytwo:
Larrysun how can you not tell your readers that.I am the amara and rohda.with my sexy bighips and flat tummy.

Kisitic:
Hmmmm so sad
a brother turned to become enemy
larrysun welldone nice work u got

bonarhyme:



This part almost made me cry.



A short but powerful update.
John Balewa should listen to what his friend has to say.
Peter Black should have gone away after saying i'm sorry.

But nevertheless peter isn't wrong at all and John isn't too. They are only victims of circumstances.

Rhoda Amara is not human. She is probably possessed but obsessed with peter's big "Member" . I bet she has a fresh boo somewhere.

I hope John doesn't misbehave because of a b¡tch

Rick9:

I appreciate your writing, anyway I saw the part where you felt down, I understand that's exactly what's happening to me now, lots of ideas no way to bring them out but we still have to encourage ourselves.

Never lose hope, I still believe that you writings would pay off someday, your name command awe in Nairaland Literature section along with my Aunty Audreytimms, (can't believe I am re reading Letting Go again, thanks Aunty Audreytimms.)
And of course Aunty Repogirl I wished she would complete 'Forever and For Always'


And other amazing writers too numerous to mention
I wished I had the means right now, I would have gladly assisted you writers in anyway I could.

But keep on writing y'all inspire us all.

Vicoch:
Oh no! just 5 minutes could crumble what you've built for over five years...

I guess the real battle begins.

I foresee Black killing basky in the future.

lumzybo:
A very emotional update. I feel so sorry for the two friends.

They had a good relationship until the evil men can't do without came and scatter things for them _WOMEN.

The trust is broken nothing can be done to fix this. Sorry Blacky! Sorry Basky.

But to you Rhoda,

Nice work Larry. You are gbaski

dabywhite:
I talk am say women dey devilish, Roda I'm coming for you

Fazemood:
What more can one say ?

The guilty must pay for the sin he commits #sad fact

Silensa:
Fear women .Fear women. Fear women. Fear women.
(Even my mother)

Rhoda or nah Amala or Amara....

LogoDWhiz:
But why does it seem to be that John Balewa is over reacting... Move on, not turn your best friend to your worst enemy, even when he showed remorse...

Raynino:
this update was so emotional I couldn't believe they end up like this ,but basky should remember that While seeking revenge, dig two graves - one for yourself.
any way it goes ,may God crown your effort Mr larry sun(amen)

jasmine2013:

No words, just very sad.

bossy512:
Lo ba tan

ftosino:
now no more black n basket going on an operation again, am so emotional right now, wehdone sir mr Larrysun.

crislyn:
Jesus! This is heartbreaking.

Koolcat01:
Junior son to peter black while Lola daughter to basky.... I think.... Well done boss larry

Patotelli:
@koolcat01, i go with that ur suggestion, just what i was thinking...
Nice update oga larrysun, mb fall on ur phone.


#PATTOSKI_PATOTELLI

honourable356:
seconded!!! This is close the truth..! As I am a 100 percent convinced that this story had already been written down by larrysun... the challenge is just to type it here on nairaland and having the time to do so.

I am quite impressed.

stuff46:


Those years sound like generations and the blanks is too complicated to be easily filled.


I know Larry has more twist...

so i patiently read

domido:
this is emotional. Friend turned foe cos of a woman. How sad. Like they will say, after the devil, fear women.

macpetrus:
I love this line :::

Rhoda was irresistible. It was like I was under a spell; I couldn’t refuse her for long. I tried to stay away, heaven knows I tried; but I obviously didn’t try enough, my body was too weak to resist her.

AryEmber:
This is the part in India movie when you hear that action theme song and see INTERMISSION. I so much love this story! My dad would say women are Necessary Evil but don't I just love that I am!

SNOWBOI360:
[color=#990000]now u ar on track then u shall move mountains with ur story MR LARRY KEEP ON WITH THE WORK OF ART WELL DONE SIRE.