Beauty without Vain
Oh, I am pleased to be your beholder
For Lady, your beauty is like a gander
Of which every goose must adore
A thousand times did I fall
Like d rain that has lost temper

I saw you being Kissed by Aphrodite
Your beauty is worthy of makin me
The mammon of unrighteousness
I shall gaze on the sun for centuries
A decade nd half in admiration of your charm

There was chaos among the Angels
For Lady, You have impressed your maker
A perfect beautiful touch that Glooms like a candle in a cimerian darkness
Your beauty is ointment that soothes my soul

Your beauty is as mild as the mornin dew
It wets my warm soul nd makes me anew
Ask me to wait for Ages, nd not even a wrinkle
Your face illuminates my spirit
Nothing will take away d glory from ur wrath

Sadly, your beauty is vain without love
But, my heart I give as a token
Loving you shouldnt be that easy
The whirl wind is mine to wrestle
Just for a moment of every passing love's day.

cupsofxo:
Beauty without Vain
Oh, I am pleased to be your beholder
For Lady, your beauty is like a gander
Of which every goose must adore
A thousand times did I fall
Like d rain that has lost temper

I saw you being Kissed by Aphrodite
Your beauty is worthy of makin me
The mammon of unrighteousness
I shall gaze on the sun for centuries
A decade nd half in admiration of your charm

There was chaos among the Angels
For Lady, You have impressed your maker
A perfect beautiful touch that Glooms like a candle in a cimerian darkness
Your beauty is ointment that soothes my soul

Your beauty is as mild as the mornin dew
It wets my warm soul nd makes me anew
Ask me to wait for Ages, nd not even a wrinkle
Your face illuminates my spirit
Nothing will take away d glory from ur wrath

Sadly, your beauty is vain without love
But, my heart I give as a token
Loving you shouldnt be that easy
The whirl wind is mine to wrestle
Just for a moment of every passing love's day.

Wow, awesome poem! I like the paradoxical effect in line 20 especially. I hope to see you post more of your works.

Please check your abbreviations; they could be confusing to readers and avoiding them makes your work neater, sir.

laykorn:


Wow, awesome poem! I like the paradoxical effect in line 20 especially. I hope to see you post more of your works.

Please check your abbreviations; they could be confusing to readers and avoiding them makes your work neater, sir.

Thanx Bro, I dedicate d poem to my Angel, as for the abberviation, I didnt really take note of dat, but will surely adjust it, and I posted a poem last week pls read it here, www.nairaland.com/2324735/tears-unity