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Thoughts! by tohpahz(f): 11:50pm On Jun 22, 2015 |
Do i do this, do i do that Should i give up without a fight Better than suffering it is Although i told him,i was his Stay,a little voice says He's still your bae , You can't cope with his ways Day after day.. Optimistic or realistic I tried making this artistic, But the pain knows none of that Love itself is confusion of the heart.. #tohpahz.. 4 Likes 3 Shares |
Re: Thoughts! by GIYAZZ(m): 11:56pm On Jun 22, 2015 |
A self-consoling poem I guess. |
Re: Thoughts! by tohpahz(f): 11:59pm On Jun 22, 2015 |
GIYAZZ: Lol.i honestly don't know What it is |
Re: Thoughts! by forandy(m): 12:09am On Jun 23, 2015 |
Re: Thoughts! by SleekyP(m): 12:14am On Jun 23, 2015 |
tohpahz: |
Re: Thoughts! by GIYAZZ(m): 12:42am On Jun 23, 2015 |
tohpahz:Hmmm. . . One could guess you're passing through a relationship trouble. Is it? |
Re: Thoughts! by Nobody: 5:38am On Jun 23, 2015 |
tohpahz: Nights will lengthen and days will be crippled, and for every time that these waves are rippled, I'll look back on all the hugs and sweet words, after a befitting funeral to these love buds. Nice poem, tophaz. The simplicity is charming. 2 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Thoughts! by Nobody: 6:50am On Jun 23, 2015 |
Re: Thoughts! by tohpahz(f): 6:56am On Jun 23, 2015 |
tunnamania11:Kilode!! |
Re: Thoughts! by tohpahz(f): 6:57am On Jun 23, 2015 |
laykorn: Thanks dear.. wanted it very simple I like ur add -on |
Re: Thoughts! by tohpahz(f): 6:58am On Jun 23, 2015 |
GIYAZZ: Something of that sort.. |
Re: Thoughts! by Nobody: 7:47am On Jun 23, 2015 |
tohpahz:I don't even know |
Re: Thoughts! by dharay99: 7:55am On Jun 23, 2015 |
SleekyP: woman wrapper. Na u she post am ⁴. |
Re: Thoughts! by Nobody: 9:28am On Jun 23, 2015 |
tohpahz: 1 Like |
Re: Thoughts! by Nobody: 9:31am On Jun 23, 2015 |
laykorn:I'll never allow someone like you be friends with my girlfriend. |
Re: Thoughts! by missstella(f): 9:52am On Jun 23, 2015 |
tohpahz:Ermm hello dear I sent u a pm,need to rectify sometins from u. |
Re: Thoughts! by GIYAZZ(m): 6:40pm On Jun 23, 2015 |
tohpahz:Hmmm. . . I'd advice you to take things easy. Don't give in yet if you really love your man. But most importantly, know what you want and get it when it's time! |
Re: Thoughts! by Nobody: 10:51pm On Jun 23, 2015 |
Re: Thoughts! by Nobody: 10:56pm On Jun 23, 2015 |
laykorn:With that poetic skill you've got, you wouldn't even know her not to talk of been friends with her. It's not insecurity, it's wisdom. |
Re: Thoughts! by joseph1832(m): 11:04pm On Jun 23, 2015 |
tohpahz:I'm curious as to what you meant when you said "Love itself is confusion of the heart" in the last line of your poem. Kindly elucidate on this. |
Re: Thoughts! by Nobody: 11:19pm On Jun 23, 2015 |
AgapeCharis: What Nigerian girl cares about poetry these days? Poetry koor...... Prose ni Na money sure pass, my brother! |
Re: Thoughts! by Nobody: 11:36pm On Jun 23, 2015 |
laykorn:Friends with benefit don't spend a dime! It's better to be safer. |
Re: Thoughts! by Nobody: 12:36am On Jun 24, 2015 |
laykorn: Laykorn I care about poetry. 1 Like |
Re: Thoughts! by Nobody: 7:49pm On Jun 24, 2015 |
Krystalxxx: Really? Here we go....... As I lay my head upon your lap I'm able to see the carefree clouds drifting high above in the light blue sky while the swans are swimming in the lake nearby Summer breeze is wafting gently your faint fragrance onto my body and blowing your soft long hair all over my face I feel like I'm dreaming and I'm willing to dream my life away this way to lie here for a thousand years and more, to let your tender green hands touch me, and cover me with layers and layers of your loving leaves, till one day, of you I'm a part. Till death, do we never part! Are you dead yet, baby |
Re: Thoughts! by Nobody: 8:10pm On Jun 24, 2015 |
laykorn: I'm going to show you now Did you hear of the riddle Is love, death or death love? If thy ode followeth not the fiddle From your nostrils the blood must dribble As death sinks it's fangs Into the fair neck of life Dost love not do the same On the chest of sweet, pure innocence? The dance of death Is a dance for eternity The dance of love Is a dance of cursed unity Unexpected death comes! And so does the vampire master love The two share the same favourite color Red is love, and red is blood At the moment of the full moon You must submit to my boon Solve the riddle or be cursed Or your vial of time may be bursted Watch my sardonic smile As I sit on the throne of life Is love death or death love? I watch as your confusion devours you |
Re: Thoughts! by Nobody: 10:07pm On Jun 24, 2015 |
Krystalxxx: What! I suck at freestyle poetry but leggo Don't go about solving love riddles..... For This is you...... The images hung in mid-air ; frozen suspended stuck somewhere between thought and execution like a treasured landscape from eons long past and thought forgotten Flashing in glimpses, sparking your neurons and for a brief moment you feel the laughter brim in that harbor that was once your heart, love abounds and you are there, as time stops on days like these when whispers remember daffodils scream and butterflies curse... And after 'saving you; this is us...... next to the burning ocean there was you, like a golden umbra intoxicating mesmerizing a mortal soul like me salty sea breezes played with our tongues as our minds wandered below cinnamon waves grasping one last vestige as we held out hope this resuscitation would be something more than lips to flesh silk to felt meet me in the hydrosphere we will make our way there sharing quintessence having lasted for days and weeks and months is this our epiphany or do we need more... Marry me, so we can do these freestyles back and forth everyday. |
Re: Thoughts! by Nobody: 7:08am On Jun 25, 2015 |
laykorn: Lol laykorn, you're so funny. La Coy..... She sits and gingerly feeds on shrimps Eager, but yet, unsold by pimps Her smile, the very signature of mockery Her actions readily point towards debauchery The fly he envies, it touches every place Suitors cannot touch for the sake of her grace It spies on her lips And cloth hidden tips La coy, la coy Will you not agree to be his toy? No no, forever more Everyone ,to her, is a bore The suitor embraces his anger His advances become mere furious banter Still la coy, proud la coy She wil not submit to anyone's ploy Perhaps she will rot in the grave Married at last by death's knave And she and her spouse will stand brave Upon her grave, her new domestic cave. |
Re: Thoughts! by donbenedict(m): 8:27am On Jul 12, 2015 |
Tohpahz |
Re: Thoughts! by tohpahz(f): 8:28am On Jul 12, 2015 |
donbenedict: Cutehector |
Re: Thoughts! by donbenedict(m): 8:30am On Jul 12, 2015 |
tohpahz:hw are u? |
Re: Thoughts! by joseph1832(m): 8:41am On Jul 12, 2015 |
tohpahz:Tohpahz! Why have thou forsaken me? |
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