shoutout to dope-headed MC's on this cyber..lets write short or long rap with imagery and story-telling in its lyrics....a lotta MC's only knws abt dissing..its takes a dope head to write a lyrics wit imagery in it..i drop mine when i see ur interest

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My temper brew as a tempest till rage stormed through this empress...

Clouded thoughts rained in essence, it gifted my presence...

Left my conscience narrowly minded on entrance...

This life sentence caused a chain reaction, the effect was domino....

As my world came crashing down, Atlas became comical....

My pupils were in pairs learning, D-vision came optical...

I don't want to add to your problems, let's not revise obstacles...

So I'll end it on a light note, I've had the best time of my life with bright chronicles...

Adanna28:

So I'll end it on a light note, I've had the best time of my life with bright chronicles...

I can feel the consciousness in your script. nice one




Dwelling in the past I was lyrical critical of fear and faith
The visuals of heaven shade at last ...The saints were eight
If deities can be legalized ...the government will tax tradition
We restrict spiritual pretense waning human condition
Ideas becomes nuclear if it's not topicals about Hebrews
I see through evolution of man.. then I walk on like zebras
Writing a wreck less verse of merchants, villain and slaves
Our future in reckless health ...we losing woods to graves
My expression is cold about the essence of Noah's Ark
Was humanity a virus?Eden didn't spark bout sinking in dark
Truth detached from root... we sequel to mystery unfolding
Strangers holding to stories..do we engrave what we molding?
The priest talks metaphor with a contented smile
On Christmas he pension lines with a bible and a file
Population slips... tortured by sleeper nest before dawn
Counter our bleeds.. or we can fight it with what's drawn

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I can feel the consciousness in your script. nice one




Dwelling in the past I was lyrical critical of fear and faith
The visuals of heaven shade at last ...The saints were eight
If deities can be legalized ...the government will tax tradition
We restrict spiritual pretense waning human condition
Ideas becomes nuclear if it's not topicals about Hebrews
I see through evolution of man.. then I walk on like zebras
Writing a wreck less verse of merchants, villain and slaves
Our future in reckless health ...we losing woods to graves
My expression is cold about the essence of Noah's Ark
Was humanity a virus?Eden didn't spark bout sinking in dark
Truth detached from root... we sequel to mystery unfolding
Strangers holding to stories..do we engrave what we molding?
The priest talks metaphor with a contented smile
On Christmas he pension lines with a bible and a file
Population slips... tortured by sleeper nest before dawn
Counter our bleeds.. or we can fight it with what's drawn[/strife, I think you and I are gonna get along just fine

What's drawn was set before the Sons met at dawn, society spawned a kingdom of pawns, play my position yet my chest feels gaunt from the taunts...

We create our own devils of soughts with the horns n the warts grotesque imagery of source...

Than say life unfair when we stumble off course, it can never be straightforward the pathway too coarsed...

I keep my circle small n honest, its naughts n crosses, never flaunt I'm modest, coz I dont need to sell myself like an object, to model a contest....

I'm a trooper with Victor vaughns humor so Super, my punchlines lead ahead, it left bullet points on Looper....

I switch styles P.oetically it about my life' blood runs cold' in strife ask Jedi mind, rest in peace Sean price...

Adanna28:
My temper brew as a tempest till rage stormed through this empress...

Clouded thoughts rained in essence, it gifted my presence...

Left my conscience narrowly minded on entrance...

This life sentence caused a chain reaction, the effect was domino....

As my world came crashing down, Atlas became comical....

My pupils were in pairs learning, D-vision came optical...

I don't want to add to your problems, let's not revise obstacles...

So I'll end it on a light note, I've had the best time of my life with bright chronicles...

Nice stuff..but i still cant picture the imagery or story..

Alexpissu:

I can feel the consciousness in your script. nice one




Dwelling in the past I was lyrical critical of fear and faith
The visuals of heaven shade at last ...The saints were eight
If deities can be legalized ...the government will tax tradition
We restrict spiritual pretense waning human condition
Ideas becomes nuclear if it's not topicals about Hebrews
I see through evolution of man.. then I walk on like zebras
Writing a wreck less verse of merchants, villain and slaves
Our future in reckless health ...we losing woods to graves
My expression is cold about the essence of Noah's Ark
Was humanity a virus?Eden didn't spark bout sinking in dark
Truth detached from root... we sequel to mystery unfolding
Strangers holding to stories..do we engrave what we molding?
The priest talks metaphor with a contented smile
On Christmas he pension lines with a bible and a file
Population slips... tortured by sleeper nest before dawn
Counter our bleeds.. or we can fight it with what's drawn

Nice one.. But too many imagery.. Nd dat confuses d listeners or viewers(since we typinq) imagination

Wayward nigga dropped outta high school..said can't longer take d shit he z passed through..

started on suckinq on a cheap petty smokes.got his state of mind changed, now he is buying real dope

hangin out with gangsters,bangin bitches..boy got fascinated by 'em quickie riches

.forgot all the consequences and all the jeopardy..before u step in d hood u gotta tribute.u shouldnt get caught f*kkinq in their territory

his crew activities is goin outta control..'em cops in mufti swarmed in d hood on patrol

they all got busted by angry cops..when they made for the exit d police called d shots

got detained on NO-Bail term..all slated for a trial at d court..they all got tried.. ''y'all hereby sentenced to a f*ckinq life sentence'', said d judge.

emryxleena:


Nice stuff..but i still cant picture the imagery or story..

No wahala oo, each to their own.

Kill these cats with minimal effort, spot the method left dead the leopard..

Blood of the lamb I smeared on shepherd, before the cutlass, got his head severed..

I'm brutal Ada ask my father, strangle you that how I barter..

Punches always came off harder, left scarlet blue' she blamed on barca...

Play the victim or role the martyr, I am the villain that kills for starters...

Leave you two face, now you got a partner, coz dis mami wrap's Ish up, in Egyptian plaster..

You want to chop knuckle?
but I don't bump fist with a trans that dick suckles..

Getting yo thrills when a lad unbuckles, you're like em dykes that ass lick n suck all...

emryxleena:


Nice one.. But too many imagery.. Nd dat confuses d listeners or viewers(since we typinq) imagination

This rap section, I don't have to tune down my lyrics for mediocrity sake. People have to live with new ideas,beautiful objects of thoughts one at a time.




The legal way....I lavish my God's given wisdom creating verse
I rehearse a tribute for late pops...pain hurting like curse
Am scripting my genesis...created a chapter of good,bad and ugly
Seen boys profit on net..girls embracing Gomorrah..reason eyes puffy
Extending my echo rhythm as my shadows down to earth
Born with a vision of worth ...I gained praises as our Savior's birth
Stone hearted elders frown at my weep ....tips of the iceberg
I approached vultures with principles of Joseph ...now feeling cyborg
Got a detective mind false priest mistook me as Elijah
My prophetic words flows river Niger....created atmosphere of a preacher
Sowed seeds to Abraham's offspring ..Jesus was a business man
I recognized opportunities as entrepreneur I scan a Quran
The laws repelled my 99 problems ...how do I reach my goals?
Shared my hopes on crescent moon.. I couldn't mount poles
15 I understood my concept why my name came from Africa
Baby-sited my feelings... learned the art of black America
Motivation of Gandhi's helmet got me a power shifting
Apollo thoughts with rhyme frequency of mind I lifting
Educated my body with Theresa teachings... I explored ideas with pen
I invaded devils space rhyming godly tone with Jerusalem men
Never painted a picture of moment ....the system flawed my written
spoken endowment of my gift...you can tell my story not bitten

Alexpissu:


This rap section, I don't have to tune down my lyrics for mediocrity sake. People have to live with new ideas,beautiful objects of thoughts one at a time.




The legal way....I lavish my God's given wisdom creating verse
I rehearse a tribute for late pops...pain hurting like curse
Am scripting my genesis...created a chapter of good,bad and ugly
Seen boys profit on net..girls embracing Gomorrah..reason eyes puffy
Extending my echo rhythm as my shadows down to earth
Born with a vision of worth ...I gained praises as our Savior's birth
Stone hearted elders frown at my weep ....tips of the iceberg
I approached vultures with principles of Joseph ...now feeling cyborg
Got a detective mind false priest mistook me as Elijah
My prophetic words flows river Niger....created atmosphere of a preacher
Sowed seeds to Abraham's offspring ..Jesus was a business man
I recognized opportunities as entrepreneur I scan a Quran
The laws repelled my 99 problems ...how do I reach my goals?
Shared my hopes on crescent moon.. I couldn't mount poles
15 I understood my concept why my name came from Africa
Baby-sited my feelings... learned the art of black America
Motivation of Gandhi's helmet got me a power shifting
Apollo thoughts with rhyme frequency of mind I lifting
Educated my body with Mama teachings... I explored ideas with pen
I invaded devils space rhyming godly tone with Jerusalem men
Never painted a picture of moment ....the system flawed my written
spoken endowment of my gift...you can tell my story not bitten

Ahhh it beautiful!

Adanna28:


Ahhh it beautiful!

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Adanna28:


Ahhh it beautiful!

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