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The Forbidden Land...(a.k.a The Treasure) by Nobody: 3:11pm On Aug 15, 2015
ONE
AT Twelve Nidnight
(Knock On The Door)
Temi; (she open her eyes)who is that ?( no response) mum is that you(she pause and cont) it not yet time to go to school mum(still knocking)ok am coming
She stand up from the bed relunctantly and head straight to open the door,she was surprise cause no one was outside, she looks forward and saw the sitten room door wide open,she was afraid and she pick up the broom
TEMI; is anybody there (she ask with her voice shaking)
She Was About to the close the door when she saw a shadow
TEMI; (she scream loud)mummy,mummy,where are ...( She Stop When She Saw A Young Girl) Who Are You ?Are you the one knocking the door by this hour time and can you please come forward N let me see your face
The Girl Move Forward, She Looks Shaby And Was Wearing A Rag,and Her Look Seems Unkept
TEMI: why dont you go to your parent, it too late for a girl like you, anything can happen.
GIRL: i am an orphan,and am hungry,can you please give me sometin 2 eat
TEMI:k,come In.
2 B Continue..
Re: The Forbidden Land...(a.k.a The Treasure) by EfemenaXY: 8:20pm On Aug 16, 2015
Re: The Forbidden Land...(a.k.a The Treasure) by Nobody: 1:20pm On Aug 17, 2015
two
after finishing the indomin and the mineral, the girl stand up
Girl: thank you very much ma, may our ancestor be with you, may you never lack any good things in life
TEMi : ( with smile) Lol, please don't call me ma, am just a girl like you( she stop and cont) what your name ma
GIRL : my name is tee quin.
TEMi: Wow! nice name you got .
QUIN : I will be on my wat now.
TEMI : what ! ( she check the time) this is past one for crying out loud, you can stay here till morning.
QUIN: don't worry ma
TEMi: but I insist
QUIN: ( she put her hand inside her pocket and bring out a diamond ring) it was given to me by my parent, do you like it?
TEMI: ( she gaze at the ring) wow ! it beautiful, I like it.
QUIN : you can keep it with you then, I will come for it later .
TEMI : are you kidding me?( she said with a smile)
QUIN : you are funny, am serious . please help me
TEMi : OK, I will
quin hand it over to temi, she accept it with joy
QUIn: I will be on my way
TEMI: let me escort you ..
they both went out then Quin stop at the door step
QUIN: from now on, you are the ring princess.
TEMi : ah ah ah ah ( she burst into laughter) ring princess?
QUIN :yes. bye .
she move forward and wave at temi . suddenly she turn into a very pretty lady , temi keep on starring with wonder then she disappear
TEMI : ( still starring ) is this a dream
to be continue
Re: The Forbidden Land...(a.k.a The Treasure) by nimat158(f): 5:09pm On Aug 17, 2015
V.I.P.seat booked
Re: The Forbidden Land...(a.k.a The Treasure) by Nobody: 7:43pm On Aug 17, 2015
continuation...
she heard a knock at the door, she opens her eyes gently, she can't believe she has been dreaming all this while
MUM: wakeup sun shine, you will be beaten in school if u are late
TEMI : OK mummy( she stand up) hmm, nice dream
MUM: temi
TEMI: ma( she run to the kitchen) ma
MUM : did you cook overnight ?
TEMI : cook overnight ke, I didn't ooo, why will I?
MUM : but some noodles are missing, and see this ( pointing at the used pot) so are u saying am lying ?
TEMI : (she starred at the pot with surprise) oh my God ,i can't believe this
MUM : believe what ?
TEMI : nothing ( on her way out) am coming mummy)
she rush inside her room
TEMI : it a dream, nothing but a dream ( she lie down on her bed) what this ( she pick up the diamond) wow! it real ( she put the ring in her hand) it beautiful
( immediately, the ring disappear)
TEMI : what! is this another nightmare
( she heard her mummy calling )am coming ma, am about to dress up
2 be continue ...
Re: The Forbidden Land...(a.k.a The Treasure) by Nobody: 10:08pm On Aug 17, 2015
at the class room
JESSY : ronke how fa
RONKE : am cool and you ?
JESSY: am cooler. why are you not in school on Friday?
RONKE : am strong
JESSY : that serious, hope you are getting better ?
RONKE : yesso.
JESSY : thank God . but you miss a lot ooo
RONKE : ( with anxiety ) gist me please
JESSY : the school prefect were selected on Friday
RONKE: you dont mean it
JESsY: am serious. abbey was the head boy,mario, his assistant, lanre was the time keeper, he is also the punctuality prefect ,temi was the head girl and bola is her assistant
RONKE : wow! that serious, so that rugged boy abbey later become the head boy .
JESSY : na so we see am ooo, bola said it not just
RONKE : don't mind her. ( pause and continue) but abbey is having a grudge at temi since she came to this school.
JESSY: abi ooo, he is a bully .
( lanre enter the class. he went straight to RONKE)
LANRE: ronkky ronkky, how are you? na only you I see
RONKE: tan kiri epa, am cool ooo
JESSY : you don't see me abi?
LANRE: so you are there, I no see you ( tope kiss) na u sabi. ronke I heard you went to sonka
RONKE: you don start again abi
( temi enter the class)
LANRE: head gogoro, how fa now?
TEMI: lanre am cool. good morning class
( they all respond)
RONKE : temi congrat , I heard that you are our head girl
TEMi: ( with smile) na God oo. how your body ?
RONKE: it getting better.
( the teacher came in as light went off)
Re: The Forbidden Land...(a.k.a The Treasure) by Nobody: 10:25am On Aug 18, 2015
at twelve
TEmI: (she heard a knoch on her door, she open her eyes gently) who is that?
QUIN: it me, tee quin
( temi jump out of the bed and open the door. this time around, tee quin is dressing gorgeously)
TEMI: ( she hug her ) I thought i won't see you again
QUIN: am always with u
TEMI: come in
they both went inside
TEMI: the ring you gave me, I.I.I ( stammering) it disappear
QUIN: i know. but you don't no it usefulness princess
TEMI: princess ? I dont ...
QUIN : ( she holds temi's hand and whisper to it, then the ring become visible) you can ask the ring anything, it yours to command .
TEMI: anything? even food?
QUIN: yes, just make a wish .
TEMI; OK. i wish to have a plate of salad (immediately the salad was in her front) wow! impossible! ( she dip her finger in the salad and taste it)it real, it so real
QUIN: i told you.
TEMI: i wish to know the literature question which will commence tomorrow.( nothing happens) what happen?
QUIN: (she smiles) give a full explanation. like who will set it
TEMI: i wish to know the literature question which will commence tomorrow,by Mr Rufus
RING: (it start talking) list the different between a short story, novelette, and a novel
TEMI ( she was surprise) do you just here that?
QUIN: I do cause am like you ( she stand up) i will be on my way, my time will soon expire
TEMI; will you come back?
QUIN: sure ,she disappear
Temi wakeup and see it another dream. but she was surprise to see the salad on her bed and on her right hand was the ring
TEMI: is this real? . k, I wish to see tee quin
tee quin appear
Quin : you sent for me?
TEMI : wow, you are real.( with joy) you can go
Quin: I can't. u wish I am here, so u are d only one that can send me back
TEMI: k, I wish tee go back to her place
tee quin disappear
TEMI: ( she shout with joy ) menhhhh.... it damn real
(her mum c0me in)
MUM: who are u talking with
TEMI: nobody, am just reading
MUM: with a plate of salad. tell me u kidding me(
she went out without waiting for for reply, temi off the light and went back to sleep) light off
2 be continue
Re: The Forbidden Land...(a.k.a The Treasure) by Nobody: 11:16am On Aug 18, 2015
IF You Are Having That Kind Of Power Like Temi, Wat Will You Do?
Re: The Forbidden Land...(a.k.a The Treasure) by 0lushola(m): 11:31am On Aug 18, 2015
africanqueenly:
IF You Are Having That Kind Of Power Like Temi, Wat Will You Do?
I'd ask the ring to take me to a lonely island where I can think.
Re: The Forbidden Land...(a.k.a The Treasure) by Nobody: 11:36am On Aug 18, 2015
0lushola:
I'd ask the ring to take me to a lonely island where I can think.
THINK OF WHAT?
Re: The Forbidden Land...(a.k.a The Treasure) by 0lushola(m): 11:38am On Aug 18, 2015
africanqueenly:
THINK OF WHAT?
To think about Me, About lot of thing.. Hmm sweetheart, its kinda complicated tho.. am sure you dn't wanna kn0w.
Re: The Forbidden Land...(a.k.a The Treasure) by Nobody: 11:40am On Aug 18, 2015
0lushola:
Hmm, to think about Me.. sweetheart, its kinda complicated tho.. am sure you dn't wanna kn0w.
KKK
Re: The Forbidden Land...(a.k.a The Treasure) by 0lushola(m): 11:42am On Aug 18, 2015
africanqueenly:
KKK
so can Y0U c0ntinue wit the st0ry pls.. atleast this shld keep me company 4 a while.
Re: The Forbidden Land...(a.k.a The Treasure) by Nobody: 12:00pm On Aug 18, 2015
0lushola:
so can Y0U c0ntinue wit the st0ry pls.. atleast this shld keep me company 4 a while.
I Will Continue V.Soon
Re: The Forbidden Land...(a.k.a The Treasure) by 0lushola(m): 12:44pm On Aug 18, 2015
africanqueenly:
I Will Continue V.Soon
aiit
Re: The Forbidden Land...(a.k.a The Treasure) by Nobody: 6:29pm On Aug 18, 2015
an with this story body and soul,pls go on.
And if am Temi,I would ask the ring to keep me and my loved ones safe always
Re: The Forbidden Land...(a.k.a The Treasure) by Nobody: 10:21am On Aug 20, 2015
YOU GUYS ARE NOT ENCOURAGING ATALL. I DONT KNOW IF YOU LIKE IT,OR NOT. NOTHING NOTHING, NOT EVEN A COMMENT... PLEASE, I NEED YOUR COMMENT OOO. sadYOU GUYS ARE NOT ENCOURAGING ATALL. I DONT KNOW IF YOU LIKE IT,OR NOT. NOTHING NOTHING, NOT EVEN A COMMENT... PLEASE, I NEED YOUR COMMENT OOO.
Re: The Forbidden Land...(a.k.a The Treasure) by Mopricelezz(f): 11:51am On Aug 20, 2015
Darling, we are enjoying the story pls keep it coming sweetie. Me in particular, am waiting to read what Temi would start doing with the power. Good job sweetheart.
Re: The Forbidden Land...(a.k.a The Treasure) by Nobody: 2:38pm On Aug 20, 2015
temi was on her way to school, when suddenly, abbey n his friend cross her on the road
Temi: not again
Abbey: you can't greet us abi. because you don become the head girl now u no wan know your senior abi
Temi: am sorry. how far?
Abbey: ( with anger) didi see this girl ooo, you dey mad abi
Didi: miss know all, you wan make I sample your face abi? you see person you no feel salute m sharp sharp
Temi: you guys have started again. am begging you, stop the harassment. I beg of you.
Abbey: e gbami. see how this pikin dey talk to me
Whales: you wan make I swallow you alive? gbagbe o, u no feel come out like Jonah .
( they saw Mr Rufus, the literature teacher going to the class)
Abbey: oh boy, e be like say we get test today ooo
Whales: for real?
Didi: for fake ni,don't you see him going to the class( pointing to the direction)
Didi: omo make we leave this wictch they go o, u no say she go finish before us
Abbeysadwith anger) what do you mean?
Didi: am just joking now
Abbey: OK. make we dey go .(@ temi) we sha meet later..
they move as fast as they can as light went off)
***
inside the class
the test has already started
Mr Rufus: 15 minute more(abbey n his friend enters the class)see lazy student, Is this a good example for others? I wonder why you were chosen as the head boy( they sat down)10 minute more( temi enters hurridly ) see them( pointing at temi and abbey) husband and wife ( the student laugh out loud) is OK pls( everywhere was silent)
temi sit down gently. the first thing she saw aback her because the question is exactly the way she expected . the ring was right was all she was thinking
Temi: this ridiculous! ( she pick up her book and start writing)
some minute later
Mr Rufus: 5 minute more
The student : ah( they all exclaim)
temi stand up with her sheet of paper . everybody gaze at her with surprise
temi hand over the sheet to Mr Rufus
Mr Rufus: bee ni tie ri ( he collect the book and glance through it) hun,that good( nodding )very good( stop) excellent. you always amaze me, sincerely, keep it up. hope you and lanre haven't forgotten the spelling B competition we are having?
Lanre and temi: (@ once) yes sir
Mr Rufus: good. ( he check the tym) 1 minute more
light out

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Re: The Forbidden Land...(a.k.a The Treasure) by Nobody: 6:39pm On Aug 20, 2015
Two Weeks Later
During the spelling b competition , only two schools are left out of 15 schools
Miss sola: high school, it your turn, spell pyroclastic
Mary; p y r o c l a s t i c
Miss sola; final answer(the girl respond by nodding) correct(audience clap)now godwin high school, spell quadriplegia
Abbey: q u a d r e p l e g i a
Miss sola; final answer (temi raise her hands) ok miss, ur last attempt
Temi; q u a d r e i e p l e g i a
Miss sola; correct ( the audience claps) now we have come to the end of the competition, let wait paciently for the result
( one of the judge standup)
Judge; you guys really impressed me.sincerly.ok,here is the result. High school score 50 and godwin score 50 also( the audience started clapping and shouting)so we have to give them one question, and that will be set by me{everywhere was silient) high school, spell palaeozoic
Timi; p a l i e o z o i a
Judge; wrong... Bonus for godwin
{temi and abbey both raise there hands, when suddenly abbey standup)
Abbey ; p a l...
2 b continue

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Re: The Forbidden Land...(a.k.a The Treasure) by Nobody: 6:56pm On Aug 20, 2015
Judge; keep shut . Who ask you to talk. For disobeying the rule,your school have been disqualify(one of the judge call her and they have a secret meeting,within some minute, the judge went back to the stage) my collegue here plead on your bhves, so you are disqualify . Only the girl can participate and the bonus has also been cancel(abbey walkout of the stage) now, spell leukaemie
Temi; (siliently) i wish to know the spelling
Ring; i e u k a e m i e
Temi; i e u k a e m i e
Judge; (he look at the other judge with surprise then back to temi) correct, the winner is godwin high school
{the people start shouting, the photographer are also snapping temi, the principal went together with the student and carry temi.all the judge started shaking hands with her as light went off)
****
One month after
Temi lekan and mr rufus was inside the principal office
Principal; i heard those student refuse to pay the excusion fees
Mr rufus ; that true sir . 95% of the student have not payed the excusion fees
2 b continue

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Re: The Forbidden Land...(a.k.a The Treasure) by Nobody: 12:14pm On Aug 21, 2015
Principal; just imagine! Anyway, i want you n abbey to inform all the student that, the deadline for the excusion fees is friday. Ok?
Temi and abey; yes sir.
Principal; you guys are very lucky to visit the land of the treasure.
Temi; but sir, is it true that the land is full with gold,silver minerals and resources?
Principal; yes that true, but it a long story.
Abbey; we will love to hear it sir
Mr rufus; are you guys not having class now?
Abbey; we are having free lecture now.
Principal; ok. The land was once known for having the best minerals resources, and best known for gold, silver and diamond.the people believes in there gods so they sacrifies to him every year. But there is a sacrilege that no male child born by the queen must be crown, only the princess have the right to sit on the throne.unfortunately for the queen, she was only able to give birth to a male child so he beseech his husband to marry one of her slave ewa and his husband concur. Fortunately for them, ewa gave birth to a baby gir...
Re: The Forbidden Land...(a.k.a The Treasure) by Nobody: 12:25pm On Aug 21, 2015
continuation
This leads to conflict between the chiefs and the royal family, because the chiefs said a slave daughter cant rule over them. This also lead to the death of the queen, and after she dies, the chiefs send the princess and her mother away from the palace, and plain to put the prince on the throne, on the day of his coronation, there gods get angry and came out openly, bringing along all the bad spirit he has banned from entering the village. And on that faithful day, the prince turn into a very big snakes,and killed alot of the villagers, some were able to escape, some were killed by the evil spirit,and some of the powerful men and woman turn into alot of thing, and a town known for resources was destroyed,the gold n minerals was never found again, the only hope for them to be safe is the princess .but the prince is still out there,waiting to kill every living been he comes across
Temi; (frighten) that scary.sir why should we go to a place like that...
2 b continued
Re: The Forbidden Land...(a.k.a The Treasure) by Nobody: 12:36pm On Aug 21, 2015
CONTINUATION...
Mr rufus; it just a story, it a myth.
Abbey;wow!that will be nice. If am able to get one gold, i will be stingly rich
Principal; is beter for you to caution yourself, ok? I am sure you remember how you almost make us loose the 2million naira of the spelling b competition.if not for temi , what are we going to be saying?
Abbey;{with regret} am sorry sir, such a thing wont repeat itself
Principal;you better do.
Light went off.
Re: The Forbidden Land...(a.k.a The Treasure) by Nobody: 12:51pm On Aug 21, 2015
FOLLOW THIS FORUM IF YOU WANNA GET NOTICE WHEN I POST A NEW SCENE.YOU CAN ALSO FOLLOW ME TO NO WHEN I POST A NEW STORY...THANKS FRIENDS.
Re: The Forbidden Land...(a.k.a The Treasure) by Nobody: 1:10pm On Aug 21, 2015
On The Excusion Day...
Only Few People Payed For The Excusion Fees, Only Two School Bus Was Used and only two teacher will follow them,one For The Junior And One For The Senior.Temi was co ordinating the student when suddenly abbey push her from the back
Temi;(she standup from the floor)abbey what again
Abbey;why are you standing on my way
Temi;i dont no you are coming,am sorry for that
Abbey;sorry for yourself (he went inside the bus)
Miemie, temilola best friend was coming hurriedly
Miemie; temi whatup?
Temi; am cool sweety ...why are you in hurry
(miemie snatch her school bag)what do you want with my bag ooo
Mie mie;{searching her bag}you promise to bring me biscuit
Temi;opssss! Have forgotten(thinking) i wish to have 5 biscuit in my bad
Mie mie; i found it, but have check this place before now
Temi;maybe you dont check it very well.
Mie mie; you always surprise me. Sometimes na witch i they call you before
Temi; na you sabi
The two teachers came by,miss sera went to the junior bus and mr rufus went...
Re: The Forbidden Land...(a.k.a The Treasure) by Nobody: 1:26pm On Aug 21, 2015
CONTINUATION,..
Went to the senior bus, temi went in also and findout that the only sit left in the car was beside abey
Temi; not again(she went to have her sit beside him)
Abbey; mumu,why you come sit down, cant you find somewhere else to sit
Temi;abey please it enough
Mie mie; abbey e don do ooo
{the driver start the car}
Abbey; sweethrt dont be angry please(back to temi)(talking silently)because say you don win the competition you know no your mate abi, i senior you for this school, before you arrived i have won alot for this school, now that you make me look like a fool abi.
Temi;she smiles, you are nothing buh a fol
Abbey; what did you just call me,you bitch,you...Temi; (i wish abbey mouth should be shout )
( immediately, abbey was just making a sound, he cant open his mouth )
Mie mie; (mocking) sweethrt you no feel talk
Lanre; the guy be fool na, waiting hapen to his mouth, he just they display
Adeola; oga ooo
Abbey was still displaying as Light went off
To Be Continue.
Re: The Forbidden Land...(a.k.a The Treasure) by Nobody: 1:50pm On Aug 21, 2015
After Some Hours, They Finally Get To There Destination...
Driver; We Don Get To The Place Ooo
( The Student Come Out Of The bus, They Were All Happy But Exhusted)
Mr rufus; welcome to iludunbiyo, a land once known for mineral resources,gold, silver and diamond
{the town seems empty, everywhere was silent,they were all looking around when suddenly they saw 4 men coming directly to them}
Rays;welcome to iludunbiyo, am by name rays and am a researcher, here are my 4 brothers, we have been here for more than 10 years just to find out about the this town and we will be the one to show you around
Tunnex; hi, my name is tunnex, am a scientist
Caliph;my name is caliph am also a scientist
Dr dave; my name is doctor dave, am a doctor
( a beautiful lady come to join them)
Xaynab; my name is xaynab, the wife of this team and am also an historic .am here as an histography
Mr rufus; nice to meet you all, my name is rufus and here with me is miss serah
Tunnex; ok, let show u around...
Light went off
Re: The Forbidden Land...(a.k.a The Treasure) by Mopricelezz(f): 2:04pm On Aug 21, 2015
Ok... Patiently chilling to see what happens next. keep up the good job dear.
Re: The Forbidden Land...(a.k.a The Treasure) by Nobody: 2:06pm On Aug 21, 2015
The excustion is over, the bus is ready to leave
Xaynab; nice to meet you guys, temi i hope you will come and visit us
Temi; sure ma
(the junior bus has been loaded)
Mr rufus; abbey and temi, one of you should join the junior bus
Temi; let abbey join them
{abbey mouth as been shut for a while,temi have forgotten that her spell is still on him)wont you answer us(abbey was demostrating) oook(she exclaim,she just remember that the spell is still on him) {thinking) i wish abbeys mouth should open)
Abbey; i said...(he was surprise to hear his own voice) i can talk, i can talk, i thought cant talk
Mr rufus; hello, will you follow them
Abbey; i am not deaf , i hear you and am not going,let temi go.
Mr rufus; see this rude boy, i command you to follow that bus
Miss sera; allow me to go ,am going to church and i dont want to be late....
Mr rufus; ok sera
Miss sera enter the school bus then it zoom off
Xahnab; am going to spend few tim...
( they heard a very loud sound and eveywhere become dark immediatel)
Re: The Forbidden Land...(a.k.a The Treasure) by Nobody: 2:19pm On Aug 21, 2015
Temi; What That ? And what just happened?
Xahnab; what todays date?
Tunnex;100 days after the town has been destroyed
Rays; and 100 days prince harold was crown
CALIPH; 100 DAYS that the prince turn to snake
Xahnab; marks the 100days when the bad spirit occupied this town...
(they all look at each other)
Xahnab; it has started
Mr rufus; what that, it a myth
Xahnab; to you it a myth.but the story is true.
Temi; then we are all doom
Abbey ;just one gold then am rich( they all look at him)i dont mean it...
{suddenly everywhere was shaking, then suddenly ,a big snake appears}
Xahnab; run for your life
{they start running as light went off}
what are you thinking, you have been reading the preamble since,This Just An Introduction...The Story Just Begin...Your Comment Before I Continue .

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Re: The Forbidden Land...(a.k.a The Treasure) by Mopricelezz(f): 2:30pm On Aug 21, 2015
Dearie dont put me in suspense mode biko. pls continue, kiss

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