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Is There Anyone Here Who Loves Poem? Pls Appreciate This Or Criticize by Drabeey(m): 11:31pm On Sep 17, 2015

I can't say this poem is perfect but I just wrote is some minutes ago. someone challenged me to write it within a stipulated time. please, i need to make it better and your suggestion and editing is welcome. Thanks

The women conscience

Are we but nothing to say
Her mordern conscience,nothing but nay

Eve realized but compromise
But this llater,nothing, a negligence

Your pride even now, worsen
Even this act inflaming
But we read she's mind broaden


Every step into civilization path
Maketh this later one, sociopath

Yet she claims feminism
Belay! This, nothing but vague egoism

All sparkles and self- loathing

Your conscience, dead as doornail
And an agradisement of yard sawmill



...... yeah its sonnet.
dedicate it to BENEDICTA who challenged me to this
and all Nairalanders

cc:
Seun
Lalasticlala



From Drabeey

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