Show me what you've got, Sauron.

stillwater:

Show me what you've got, Sauron.

Piece of cake. . . . .

BEAUTIFUL WOMAN

Hey girl. . . . love it when you say "Hey J"
Your smiles brighten up my whole day.
I had a dream i sculpted us making love.
I shaped it to remake the way i've been seeing us.
I've liked you for a while now, i felt it's time.
To tell you my feelings are true.
I'm letting you know i'm really feeling you.
Your beautiful full lips, your soft hair.
The long lashes on your big brown eye's, i can't help but stare.
I love the friendship we have,
So please don't let this affect that.
If you don't feel the same way, that's ok
I can respect that.
Dancing with you is like dancing with a star.
Dance you, romance you.
I'd like to really get to know who you are.
Your like's, your dislikes.
Show me the way you'd like to be kissed like.
I'd like to be the shelter that protect's you in storms.
I'd like to be the blanket that keeps you warm.
At night, while your sleeping and dreaming.
I'd like to be the knight that a princess like you can believe in.
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Love is blind, if so i consider my vision cloaked,
Astray in a pendulum of sentiment
Radiant, evoked with a passion that God envies
Fervor my feelings to you, for i have perceived a bountiful future
12 months complete, we have become one and the same
Primitive appeal, intellectual, elegant, black woman
Us juxtapose, is the best love proposed
The day we announced our fidelity, time froze
You are mine, a sign from the divine
With time, we will devise a future together
Feathered touch, us fettered,
Forever my divine wish be true
Tethered for eternity just me. . . . .
and you.

~Sauron~:

Piece of cake. . . . .


Hey girl. . . . love it when you say "Hey J"
Your smiles brighten up my whole day.
I had a dream I sculpted us making love.
I shaped it to remake the way i've been seeing us.
I've liked you for a while now, I felt it's time.
To tell you my feelings are true.
I'm letting you know i'm really feeling you.
Your beautiful full lips, your soft hair.
The long lashes on your big brown eye's, i can't help but stare.
I love the friendship we have,
So please don't let this affect that.
If you don't feel the same way, that's ok
I can respect that.
Dancing with you is like dancing with a star.
Dance you, romance you.
I'd like to really get to know who you are.
Your like's, your dislikes.
Show me the way you'd like to be kissed like.
I'd like to be the shelter that protect's you in storms.
I'd like to be the blanket that keeps you warm.
At night, while your sleeping and dreaming.
I'd like to be the knight that a princess like you can believe in.
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Love is blind, if so I consider my vision cloaked,
Astray in a pendulum of sentiment
Radiant, evoked with a passion that God Envies
Fervor my feelings to you, for I have perceived a bountiful future
12 months complete, we have become one and the same
Primitive appeal, intellectual, elegant, black woman
Us juxtapose, is the best love proposed
The day we announced our fidelity, time froze
You are mine, a sign from the divine
With time, we will devise a future together
Feathered touch, us fettered,
Forever my divine wish be true
Tethered for eternity just me. . . . .
and you.

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww Thats beautiful
Sauron has a soft heart afterall
But what is the name of the poem?

tope5000:

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww Thats beautiful
Sauron has a soft heart afterall

There's actually milk and honey right under my venom-sac.

But what is the name of the poem?

Beautiful Woman.

~Sauron~:

There's actually milk and honey right under my venom-sac.

lol. . . .well it wud be nice to see the milk n honey side of u more on NL

Beautiful Woman.

Nice . . . . u shud try and write poems more often darl

my fave parts are:

Your smiles brighten up my whole day.
I had a dream I sculpted us making love.
I shaped it to remake the way i've been seeing us.

Show me the way you'd like to be kissed like.
I'd like to be the shelter that protect's you in storms.
I'd like to be the blanket that keeps you warm.
At night, while your sleeping and dreaming.
I'd like to be the knight that a princess like you can believe in.

Love is blind, if so I consider my vision cloaked,
Astray in a pendulum of sentiment
Radiant, evoked with a passion that God Envies
Fervor my feelings to you, for I have perceived a bountiful future
12 months complete, we have become one and the same
Primitive appeal, intellectual, elegant, black woman
Us juxtapose, is the best love proposed
The day we announced our fidelity, time froze
You are mine, a sign from the divine
With time, we will devise a future together
Feathered touch, us fettered,
Forever my divine wish be true
Tethered for eternity just me. . . . .
and you.

tope5000:

lol. . . .well it wud be nice to see the milk n honey side of u more on NL

I cannot guarantee that.

Nice . . . . u shud try and write poems more often darl

Rap lyrics are better.

You can as well shoot an arrow to [i]her [/i]heart and get it over with . . . Lovely!

stillwater:

You can as well shoot an arrow to [i]her [/i]heart and get it over with . . . Lovely!

It's for ma lecturer, one gorgeous woman.

~Sauron~:

It's for ma lecturer, one gorgeous woman.

Is there more from where that came from?

~Sauron~:

I cannot guarantee that.

lol. .  . . . . very typical of the jackal

Rap lyrics are better.

Well make it a rap love lyrics then _{if that makes sense} . . . . not necessarily poems

stillwater:

Is there more from where that came from?

I think so. . . . . .

tope5000:

lol. .  . . . . very typical of the jackal

Hehehehe

Well make it a rap love lyrics then _{if that makes sense} . . . . not necessarily poems

I'll try. . . .

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2 LOVE BIRDS. . . .

Your eyes shine through the night, they look so brilliant
Stare up into the stars, witness a sight of millions

We lay sprawled on a blanket, on wet grass but we got each other
Its mid-January so its cold but we got these covers

We just came from a candle lit dinner so i know you're feelin right
And by the smile on your face, the blazing stars pierced and killed the night

I leaned in for a kiss, you looked at me and smiled
Your lips on my lips, i'm addicted, i'm high

Your smell, intoxicating, your touch, incredible
We're both actors in this lover's story, I'll direct the mood

You rolled over on top of me, you laughed and pinched me
You whispered dirty thoughts, they started sounding tempting

Do this and you'll do that, oh no, sounds too good
My heart raced the daytona 500, i tried to resist but who could?

Your lips met my neck, i bit my lip with pleasure
You went down and i went down, we did some things together

It wasn't nasty, this was love set in motion
Poetry that was moving, our feelings were ferocious

You finished and i finished, the timing just worked
You looked in my eyes, you were murmuring your words

You were perfect in that moment, i just wanted to keep it
So i wrote this down beside you, i'll tell no one, its our secret

~Sauron~:

I think so. . . . . .

Hehehehe

I'll try. . . .

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2 LOVE BIRDS. . . .

Your eyes shine through the night, they look so brilliant
Stare up into the stars, witness a sight of millions

We lay sprawled on a blanket, on wet grass but we got each other
Its mid-January so its cold but we got these covers

We just came from a candle lit dinner so i know you're feelin right
And by the smile on your face, the blazing stars pierced and killed the night

I leaned in for a kiss, you looked at me and smiled
Your lips on my lips, i'm addicted, i'm high

Your smell, intoxicating, your touch, incredible
We're both actors in this lover's story, I'll direct the mood

You rolled over on top of me, you laughed and pinched me
You whispered dirty thoughts, they started sounding tempting

Do this and you'll do that, oh no, sounds too good
My heart raced the daytona 500, i tried to resist but who could?

Your lips met my neck, i bit my lip with pleasure
You went down and i went down, we did some things together

It wasn't nasty, this was love set in motion
Poetry that was moving, our feelings were ferocious

You finished and i finished, the timing just worked
You looked in my eyes, you were murmuring your words

You were perfect in that moment, i just wanted to keep it
So i wrote this down beside you, i'll tell no one, its our secret

Bravo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sauron is getting me HOT tonite
stephen had berra move over

tope5000:

Bravo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sauron is getting me HOT tonite
stephen had berra move over

So you have been crinking StephenP all along??
Hmmmmmmmmmm. . . . . . .
U are in trouble.

~Sauron~:

So you have been crinking StephenP all along??
Hmmmmmmmmmm. . . . . . .
U are in trouble.

Oh no babe
U know i have been faithful to u . . . . it was my nu yr resolutions
Oya lets go practice some of the things u said in ur poem again

OMG!!! Sauron!



I've been hoping to see this side of you and you came through. I can't even pick my fav, they are both beautiful.

tope5000:

Bravo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sauron is getting me HOT tonite
stephen had berra move over

lol both of them are good.

St☆rStruck:

OMG!!! Sauron!



I've been hoping to see this side of you and you came through. I can't even pick my fav, they are both beautiful.

lol both of them are good.

Lmao@gif
Yep they are both good

I don't believe this! Is this really Sauron?

What have Stillwater, Tope and St☆rStruck done to you?

It sounds so real; like it's not some BS but you actually have these feelings for someone.

Good job man.

StephenP:

I don't believe this! Is this really Sauron?

What have Stillwater, Tope and St☆rStruck done to you?

It sounds so real; like it's not some BS but you actually have these feelings for someone.

Good job man.

He has always had it in him . . .he just needed a lil push

So i wrote this down beside you, i'll tell no one, its our secret

Humming Alicia Keys "Diary"

I won't tell your secrets
Your secrets are safe with me
I will keep your secrets
Just think of me as the pages in your diary

StephenP:

I don't believe this! Is this really Sauron?

Sauron reloaded!!!

What have Stillwater, Tope and St☆rStruck done to you?
It sounds so real; like it's not some BS but you actually have these feelings for someone.
Good job man.

Bes' believe it. . . . .

oh lord sauron!

im pleasantly surprised
u papi be giving darling stephen a run for his money?
naw position
yes position


on a more serious note im loving these pieces
lucky is the object of these many affections u so sweetly profess

Negro please! 

Your raps contain much more poetry and a wider breadth of language than what you wrote up there. 

Ibime:

Negro please! 
Your raps contain much more poetry and a wider breadth of language than what you wrote up there. 

That is because we are now allowed to swear and romance has a smaller scope in the grand scheme of things.
Anyways. . . . .I will improve.


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ELEMENTS OF DESIRE
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Sweat winds down my skin, I’m dripping with our love
Droplets collect on my chin, licked off by your tongue
Our flames lick the sky, stretching up to the heavens
Worries evaporate, from the heat in our possession
The windows are steamed, concealing our desire
Your warmth calls to me, several logs in your fire
Bodies rubbing together, the friction is shocking
Our chemistry is electric, no signs of sparks stopping
Your face is flushed and waiting, hips gently swaying
Blush with anticipation, from the rush of copulation
The air is hot and humid, your curly hair flys
Boiling together fluids, i’m stirring your insides
We reach a feverish pace, prod the coals to ignite
Explore every devious place, every hole grips me tight
Your moans echo off me, burning impressions in the sheets
An orchestra of sounds, gasping screams and bed squeaks
One last final thrust, we both shudder in unison
You squeeze out every last ounce, as we reach the conclusion
Our bodies glimmer shadows flicker, innocence surrendered
The blaze allowed to simmer, down to glowing embers.

To be continued. . . .

My long dead hormones are suddenly alive.

~Sauron~:

That is because we are now allowed to swear and romance has a smaller scope in the grand scheme of things.
Anyways. . . . .I will improve.


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ELEMENTS OF DESIRE
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Sweat winds down my skin, I’m dripping with our love
Droplets collect on my chin, licked off by your tongue
Our flames lick the sky, stretching up to the heavens
Worries evaporate, from the heat in our possession
The windows are steamed, concealing our desire
Your warmth calls to me, several logs in your fire
Bodies rubbing together, the friction is shocking
Our chemistry is electric, no signs of sparks stopping
Your face is flushed and waiting, hips gently swaying
Blush with anticipation, from the rush of copulation
The air is hot and humid, your curly hair flys
Boiling together fluids, i’m stirring your insides
We reach a feverish pace, prod the coals to ignite
Explore every devious place, every hole grips me tight
Your moans echo off me, burning impressions in the sheets
An orchestra of sounds, gasping screams and bed squeaks
One last final thrust, we both shudder in unison
You squeeze out every last ounce, as we reach the conclusion
Our bodies glimmer shadows flicker, innocence surrendered
The blaze allowed to simmer, down to glowing embers.

To be continued. . . .

WoW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sauron just got me HOT N WET . . . . . . . .

TOPE2000!:

WoW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sauron just got me HOT N WET . . . . . . . .

~Sauron~:

That is because we are now allowed to swear and romance has a smaller scope in the grand scheme of things.
Anyways. . . . .I will improve.


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ELEMENTS OF DESIRE
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Sweat winds down my skin, I’m dripping with our love
Droplets collect on my chin, licked off by your tongue
Our flames lick the sky, stretching up to the heavens
Worries evaporate, from the heat in our possession
The windows are steamed, concealing our desire
Your warmth calls to me, several logs in your fire
Bodies rubbing together, the friction is shocking
Our chemistry is electric, no signs of sparks stopping
Your face is flushed and waiting, hips gently swaying
Blush with anticipation, from the rush of copulation
The air is hot and humid, your curly hair flys
Boiling together fluids, i’m stirring your insides
We reach a feverish pace, prod the coals to ignite
Explore every devious place, every hole grips me tight
Your moans echo off me, burning impressions in the sheets
An orchestra of sounds, gasping screams and bed squeaks
One last final thrust, we both shudder in unison
You squeeze out every last ounce, as we reach the conclusion
Our bodies glimmer shadows flicker, innocence surrendered
The blaze allowed to simmer, down to glowing embers.

YES!!!! You've given all I needed today!

~Sauron~:

To be continued. . . .

Alright now

St☆rStruck:

YES!!!! You've given all I needed today!

You do know it was sauron that wrote that poem not stephenP

TOPE2000!:

You do know it was sauron that wrote that poem not stephenP

You and Sauron broke up remember?

MrCrackles:

Tope2000 and Starstruck

Both of you are morons!

Sauron only copied and pasted the poem, he didnt write it!

I know how Sauron writes and that is definitely his work.

St☆rStruck:

You and Sauron broke up remember?

we r back together. . . .eat that

MrCrackles:

Tope2000 and Starstruck

Both of you are morons!

Sauron only copied and pasted the poem, he didnt write it!

I have verified it. . . . . .the poem is sauron's original
dont hate