It was a mid sunny day in the ever busy city of New York. The streets were busy as usual and evident that Summer was right around the corner. Flower shops were more colourful these days, as now orders of Sunflowers and sweet smelling Roses were everywhere, in and out of each shops. Beauty salons were making a lot of money these days too, as ladies were doing all they could to look good and travel around the world with their loved ones. Lana Gomez worked as a beautician and professional hair stylist in one of these beauty Salons. She was the brown skinned woman, with charming looks. She always looked sixteen with her tight skinny ripped jeans, white t-shirts and that pink apron, she always wore before and after every beauty masterpiece. She was New York's favourite and one time, she got featured in one of those New York Times daily newspaper cover. She was beyond amazing with looks and her work. She wasn't sixteen at all but she had a sixteen year old daughter, Sophie Gomez. Sophie was the replica of her Mother. She had a large face, small squinted eyes and beautiful hair. Her lips were always pale and purple like the weird scientific experimented Purple Hibiscus flower. She was tall, had the puberty 16 year old body sized and was super smart. Lana was extremely proud to have Sophie in her perfect life even though the life wasn't even that perfect, since her lover, Martin Rico fled far away and was never heard from again when Sophie was only just a baby.
The other world of Danielle Richards was luxurious and much more perfect. Danielle was sixteen as well but her height and achievement was unbelievable. She was the upcoming model, just like her elder brother, Jason Richards, the bad boy of the Media. Her Mother, Flora Richards was the City's district attorney and very famous as well when it came to those popular law suits you would come across on Tv or on the internet. Her Father, Ewan Richards was the business mogul . He travelled a lot and Danielle got to see him very less than often. She loved her family and how things were organised and perfect. She was locked up in her own make believe world, with great trips to many great places, her career was a boom and her best friend, Sophie Gomez was tagging along to their upcoming family vacation in Alabama.
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RemenZack, I like your concept and originality.

But your work lacks paragraphing, work on it and your stories are a lot catchier.