Na so na

dubylhover:
well,just listened to d track,first nd foremost,you shud know I was listening to jay z's nickel and dimes before stumbling unto ur thread about your song...so you should knw I was in another realm of music...so I conditioned my mind that I'd stem down to listen to yours...

I'd have to say that whoever did that beat for you and d instrumentals is really really good..cos honestly that's d only good thing in this your song..sorry but d lyrics were too too shallow and amateur..ish.
my advise,still work with your producer,den settle down and pen your lyrics or look for someone who can cos I'd b sincere d beats of d songs is very good,if managed by a proper nd good artiste,it cud b a club banger..but you're getting there sha,just put more effort and meaning to your lyrics nd you'd b there..
one luv nd good luck..

cc airforce1

9ja track don't need to b meaningful to blow quote me?