MY DAD When I was 4 Yrs Old : "My father is THE BEST When I was 6 Yrs Old: "My father seems to know everyone When I was 10 Yrs Old:" My father is excellent but he is short tempered When I was 12 Yrs Old: "My father was nice when I was little When I was 14 Yrs Old: "My father started being too sensitive When I was 16 Yrs Old : "My father can't keep up with modern times When I was 18 Yrs Old : "My father is getting less tolerant as the days pass by When I was 20 Yrs Old :" It is too hard to forgive my father, how could my Mum stand him all these years When I was 25 Yrs Old :" My father seems to be objecting to everything I do When I was 30 Yrs Old: "It's very difficult to be in agreement with my father, I wonder if my Grandfather was troubled by my father when he was a youth When I was 40 Yrs Old: "My father brought me up with a lot of discipline, I must do the same When I was 45 Yrs Old: "I am puzzled, how did my father manage to raise all of us When I was 50 Yrs Old : "It's rather difficult to control my kids, how much did my father suffer for the sake of upbringing and protecting us When I was 55 Yrs Old:" My father was far looking and had wide plans for us, he was gentle and outstanding. When I became 60 Yrs Old: "My father is THE BEST Note that it took 56 Yrs to complete the cycle and return to the starting point " "My father is THE BEST " Let's be good to our parents before it's too late and pray to Allaah that our own children will treat us even better than the way we treated our parents Allah(SWT) says: "Your lord has decreed that you worship non but him and show kindness to parents. If one or both reach old age with you then do not say uff! To them nor repulse them, but speak graciously to them" {Surah Al-Isra: Ayah 23} O our lord, forgive me and my parents and believers on the day when the reckoning shall come to pass. {Surah Ibrahim: Ayah 41} O my Lord, have mercy on them (parents) just as they nourished me when I was small.{Surah Bani Irail: Ayah 24} Salim ahmed ali

Very good piece. But, you spoilt it when you brought allah in. You know why? You can't find a father figure in Allah, but you do in Yahwey.
Think about it.

Both Yahweh and Allah are irrelevant.

Be nice to everyone,treat them as you wish to be treated regardless of their age,sex,sexual orientation and belief.