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[b][/b][color=#006600][/color] Nice Story Pleasssse Continium

Has yogurt got anything to do with sperr*m?? Victvames? Maka why? Tell me why?

I DON LAND ...Even though donkross1 no call me,i don hear as d guy howl...next time u do dat,i go challenge u...vict vames u too o....anyways donkross1 con serve me fried rice with yoghurt...vict vames gud work uv gat here...DONKROSS1 answer me o..man dey H

I DISLIKE SUSPENSE

I said it earlier please.

Chai!! Vames dis story is lovely,, waiting for the nxt episode, cnt believe I stayed up till 4am reading dis.. Tuale bro,, forget grammer, fire dey go (Y)

Guy Abeg come update us na, why d wait?. Good write up i must say

jupitre:
I DON LAND ...Even though donkross1 no call me,i don hear as d guy howl...next time u do dat,i go challenge u...vict vames u too o....anyways donkross1 con serve me fried rice with yoghurt...vict vames gud work uv gat here...DONKROSS1 answer me o..man dey H

No vex for me bros . I go pay for your food no worry.

This guy don put everyone for waiting game.

Plssssssssss wen d episode 21 to end is out plssssssssss email me @ ipheholluwahmodupeeholluwah@gmail.com....cant just stop thinking abt it. Eager to knw d ending

Plssssssssss wen d episode 21 to end is out plssssssssss email me @ ipheholluwahmodupeeholluwah@gmail.com....cant just stop thinking abt it. Eager to knw d ending [color=#770077][/color]

getting more interesting,victvames weldone o but'we want more'. Mirabel abeg slow down loving some1 wit everything makes u easily get hurt,u need 2 use ur brain not just ur heart til u prove he equally love u as u do or more than.

[b]Episode 21

All my life that I've lived so far, I've never been in this kind of situation, I've never been this emotional. Now, I don't need a psychic or a fetish to tell me that 'I'm in love'...

Me: U see... Mirabel, I dunno if I acted blind or I was so naive to realize how much U care for me but to tell U the truth... I really appreciate everything U did for me, the love, the care, the kindness and the extra love that you've shown me, I Love U Mirabel...

I looked at her, I saw tears dripping down from her eyes yet she was some how smiling...

Mirabel: (Straight-face) U know what Victor, I've stopped liking U a long time ago

Me: (Shocked) What?

Mirabel: Yes!

Me: Mirabel please no don't do that,,, I beg U, baby I love U. Please forgive my naivety and all the sadness I cost U... I can see clearly now, I'm very sure of myself that I'm in love for the first time of my life... please baby don't do this to me not now not ever I beg U...

Mirabel: U don't get it do U?

Me: Mirabel please, I'm so crazy about U now, I might go mad in fact my brain is shattering already. I'm going crazy Mirabel!!

Mirabel: Victor, I don't like U anymore... U didn't even asked me why

Me: Why? Please why??

Mirabel: (Laffs) Because I love U so much...

Me: Really?

Mirabel: Yea!  I can't believe you're this sweet

Me: Well, U made me go crazy

Mirabel: Thats what U get for being so naive

Me: (calmed) I love U Mirabel

Mirabel: I love U more

We hugged each other for almost a minute or so before we slowly adjusted to kissing position. We shared our first kiss which lasted for 4secs, she turn down her eyes in a shy way while smiling. I smiled to myself as well, I used my hands to raise her head up, pulled her closer then we lip-locked for about 8 minutes before....

Lola: Yes! I catch una. Cynthia show!

We adjusted on hearing her voice but with smile on our faces...

(Cynthia walked in)

Cynthia: Whats up here?

Lola: Cynthia, U won't believe it

Cynthia: What?

Lola: I caught them kissing

Cynthia: Really? Wow! This calls for celebration. I'm so happy for U guys (ran in side)

Lola: At last...

Mirabel: Lola!

Lola: C'mon girl! I caught U red-handed, this is happening girl... I know it will work he's a nice guy but hey, obviously not for my liking but good for U

I was just there smiling feeling much comfortable like we've been together for the longest time. Cynthia came back with a champagne bottle and 4 glasses.
She poured some champagne in the glasses then everyone took theirs...

Lola: Lets toast for the new lovers

Cynthia: Cheers!

We hit up our glasses doing 'cheers' as we see in the movie 'coz I've never done it before.

Mirabel: Thanks girls for been there for me, I really appreciate U guys and I love U both

Lola/Cynthia: We love U too

**Laughs**

Lola: Hey mister, U've been silent all this while aint U goin' to say something?

Me: Oh yes uhmm... I really dunno how to express my gratitude, I dunno how to thank U guys for a job well done.

Lola: Just try, U're doing it already

Me: **smiles** Thank U guys for everything, your help, courage, advice, mind activation, motivation, stimulation, the actualization...

Lola: Its Ok and you are so welcome

Cynthia: You're welcome Victor, and thank U too.... now our friend is back to herself again, even better.

Lola went to a corner and brought something out. A video camera!

Lola: Well well well... lemme see how it all began

Cynthia: What's that?

Lola: A camera

Mirabel: U set a camera for us?

Lola: I just want to know everything that happened here, U know I'm not good in listening to stories like this, and besides, U won't even tell us.

Mirabel: Could have be more if U hadn't interrupted

Lola: I don't mind, this will do

Mirabel: So pathetic... (jokingly)

As for me, I dunno what to say or what to feel. Is it right or wrong? I dunno jare.

Me: U are really funny Lola

Lola: **Smiles**

I turned to Mirabel, held hands, then took her outside to the garden. Now, I want to like... be in charge.
We walked slowly in the garden in silence. Then I stopped, used both my hands to hold both hers too while facing each other

Me: Mirabel,,,, U are a new experience in my life, U are another chapter of my life, U are another person worth thinking about in my life, U are another moment that is worth remembering in life, U are my new found joy, source of happiness and U are my first love,,,, I love U Mirabel... Will U be my lover?[/b]




☆☆☆   To Be Continued.   ☆☆☆

donkross1:

No vex for me bros . I go pay for your food no worry.

i no fil vex 4 u now..u be ma guy..btif u don c anoda tori weh make sense lyk dz...holla me o...NOW MY FOOD

@victvames, I have a few observations, additions, questions

We all know that the setting of this story is in nigeria and even if you don't want to tell us the name of the school, you should tell us the state(fictional or real) or perhaps the region(north east, south east, south west etc) so we can flow with you while reading it..

You should add a lot of suspense to keep readers glued to your thread/story..

As we all know that most presidents in Nigeria don't send their children to school in Nigeria; we would like you to help us to ask mirabel why she and the commander in chief decided that she should school in Nigeria.

Are you from a very rich background in the story?? Because the president's daughter is more likely to school in a very expensive private school with full time hostels...

And finally, na only indomie you sabi cook ni??

Meanwhile your story is very interesting, keep it up...

Abeg come nack us another update in time ooo

oga abeeeeeeeg finish dis tori if u jo want make i vex wit u!!!!! ;Doga abeeeeeeeg finish dis tori if u jo want make i vex wit u!!!!!

prof30:
with d plenty yoghurt! wen he go release give Mirabel na belle direct!!!

guy u no well o

Yes

Vames, update us now

YINKS89:
Yes

the girl already told him she loves him, so why ask to be her lover again?

With all dis yoghurt....... Better not mess infront of d presido's daughter

ritababe:


the girl already told her she love her, so why as to be her lover again

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Honey pie, Pls read Wat yu typed....... Somethings re off

Sammypedro18:
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Honey pie, Pls read Wat yu typed....... Somethings re off

thanks sweet

Now I cant read ma textbooks again cus i'm tinkin weda d president will eventually hang u or go wit firin squad..anywayz,come upload d next episode b4 I vex 4 u oo

[quote author=Ibukun003 post=41418190]I DISLIKE SUSPENSE
I said it earlier please.[/quote
i Hate It Too

Nice one OP.

Oga Vickvanes(ugh)make i tell u hein,(ugh)no try am;no break her;if u try am hein,i go break una head with dat bottle of alomo here(gulp my alomo) like seriously well done.

this guy dey burst my brain..pls continue na..
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Enjoying this thing ooo

I must say well done for the story so far keep it up but to be sincere if u have a story for sale I will buy it.....

Its been a while I've read from the literature section, but this story caught my attention and kept me glued to the screen, well done bro

nice one op...I enjoined every bit of this

keep it up