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Re: A Very Long Night. by Greenhero(m): 11:40pm On Dec 27, 2015 |
story for the gods |
Re: A Very Long Night. by Emodeee: 11:51pm On Dec 27, 2015 |
ikedi94: e help ilaycorn, see him thread for front page. |
Re: A Very Long Night. by BRAVAGAD0O(m): 11:59pm On Dec 27, 2015 |
Re: A Very Long Night. by GIYAZZ(m): 12:01am On Dec 28, 2015 |
Nice one |
Re: A Very Long Night. by Rexaxe(m): 1:04am On Dec 28, 2015 |
llaykorn: Nice Nice Nice bruh.. you an awesome poet |
Re: A Very Long Night. by slap1(m): 5:58am On Dec 28, 2015 |
Good one, llaykorn. It appears the smoke from the sacrifice actually got to the heavens. |
Re: A Very Long Night. by Ajerry: 7:06am On Dec 28, 2015 |
laykon.....nice poem though,
a long wrong- night
war among the knight
slaying for pride
they re'fighting for the bride
long long night
blood split as they fight
they crawl and run
fighting until the earth bring the sun.... Laykon u re no longer on whatsap pls kindly reach me back on 08075776863 |
Re: A Very Long Night. by Msquare220: 7:13am On Dec 28, 2015 |
Nice piece though i'm yet to decipher the theme. |
Re: A Very Long Night. by valeno(m): 7:15am On Dec 28, 2015 |
Only 3 or 4 quote frm d female.
If its abt sex,marriage,love,and romance u wil see dm jumpin out lik sperm.:-/
dem gahs.olodo.com 1 Like |
Re: A Very Long Night. by llaykorn: 7:21am On Dec 28, 2015 |
Msquare220: The theme is suicide, sir. |
Re: A Very Long Night. by llaykorn: 7:22am On Dec 28, 2015 |
Ajerry: Oh! Jerry? I'll add you up right away. |
Re: A Very Long Night. by Msquare220: 7:36am On Dec 28, 2015 |
llaykorn:Oh, thank you. Then I have to reread it; interesting. |
Re: A Very Long Night. by simplisity(m): 7:54am On Dec 28, 2015 |
In all these dont forget to attach urself to Jesus Christ, the only source of restoration, He will restore all u have lost, especialy, ur hope, peace, joy and happiness. |
Re: A Very Long Night. by Vock(m): 7:58am On Dec 28, 2015 |
this poem is rather poor, the only thing going for it is some elements of rhyme, when you have to tell people what the theme is after reading, then you know there's something wrong 1 Like |
Re: A Very Long Night. by Nobody: 8:07am On Dec 28, 2015 |
llaykorn:Are you feeling suicidal? |
Re: A Very Long Night. by desmondDessi(m): 8:09am On Dec 28, 2015 |
Nice one llaykorn |
Re: A Very Long Night. by llaykorn: 8:13am On Dec 28, 2015 |
mysteriouxx: No, no, never. Do you offer help to people who are feeling suicidal? |
Re: A Very Long Night. by Pdizzle(m): 8:32am On Dec 28, 2015 |
Laykorn and long poem sha. You didn't paint the picture clearly. Nice one still. |
Re: A Very Long Night. by llaykorn: 8:33am On Dec 28, 2015 |
Vock: I agree with you; the poem is quite poor in that sense. I'll pay more attention to that in my subsequent works. Thanks for noticing, Vock. |
Re: A Very Long Night. by danbrowndmf(m): 8:38am On Dec 28, 2015 |
Ma Nigga llaykorn we made it to FB. |
Re: A Very Long Night. by llaykorn: 8:52am On Dec 28, 2015 |
danbrowndmf: Shey FB ni abi FP? |
Re: A Very Long Night. by danbrowndmf(m): 9:13am On Dec 28, 2015 |
llaykorn:lmao...na FB..edit am for me...na mistake . |
Re: A Very Long Night. by joseph1832(m): 9:28am On Dec 28, 2015 |
Vock:Since you say the poem is poor, can you tell us the mood the llaykorn used? Okay forget about the mood, just tell us about the rhyme scheme since you acknowledge that the poem is rich in rhyme. Thanks, and patiently waiting for your reply. |
Re: A Very Long Night. by PipSurgeon(m): 9:59am On Dec 28, 2015 |
nice on, am officially now a fan |
Re: A Very Long Night. by texanomaly(f): 4:09pm On Dec 29, 2015 |
It is a bit maudlin. Great job...as usual. |
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