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My Love Is Hatred by emaculate99: 10:27am On Jan 05, 2016 |
I will kiss you with the kisses of age, Filled with French fantasies; A lamina of Latin language, With a cistern of English love, And the saplings of truth. Let me behold your blindness, And protect your virginity, Your sword sharpen will I, And your laundry man, I will be, With this, your scale will be balanced. Your temple will I clean, The “minister of truth,” my aim, So that the saplings will grow, And the sword of justice be safe. But now, my love is in shackles, My truths are now lies, My holiness is dizziness, My tears are changeless, And my hope is hopeless. My love has become hatred, For my love can now see, Her blindfolding, removed it is, And her sword, slighted, Her robe sowed with blood, And her scale useless! Her temple, a brothel; And a plague for righteousness, The death of the truth saplings: The fortress of the corrupt. ©Emaculate Ife 2016 8 Likes 5 Shares |
Re: My Love Is Hatred by merit12(f): 2:09pm On Jan 05, 2016 |
I will kiss you with the kisses of age, Filled with French fantasies; A lamina of Latin language, With a cistern of English love, And the saplings of truth. This first lines means the writer is very happy with his new found love that's a hyperbole an exaggeration poetic device which is an overstatement. Let me behold your blindness, And protect your virginity, Your sword sharpen will I, And your laundry man, I will be, With this, your scale will be balanced. Still in his happy state ready to do anything for the fondness and love he has found still using hyperbole. ..blindness can't be hold neither virginity can be protected ..laundry man and scale will be balanced represents he is ready to any thing for his love .. Your temple will I clean, The “minister of truth,” my aim, So that the saplings will grow, And the sword of justice be safe. Also this is hyperbole also using metaphor.cool But now, my love is in shackles, My truths are now lies, My holiness is dizziness, My tears are changeless, And my hope is hopeless. Now the mood of the writter has changed to sad state he seem hurt and betrayed.he is expressing how he felt now discovering using shackles lies dizziness change less hopeless this are sad words.truly hurt metaphor he uses very well when you using a word to compair other but not using but as is a metaphor for example my holiness is dizziness it compare holiness to dizziness but didn't us as or Like .that's metaphor well done .. My love has become hatred, For my love can now see, Her blindfolding, removed it is, And her sword, slighted, Her robe sowed with blood, And her scale useless! Placing her as virgin from the previous lines now he discover her clothes is not white now it stain meaning he though she was clean and holy but she is not .....maybe she has been pretending too to be perfect now the writer hate her more Her temple, a brothel; And a plague for righteousness, The death of the truth saplings: The fortress of the corrupt. He goes as far to describe her as a prostitute. After the discovering it really hurting when you think some one is perfect good and all that and later discover she was just pretending Something as perfect as our leader that we think they are ready to obtain justic for us are prostituting (by taking money and giving people favour )the sword of truth which stood for justice. I hope my explanation is correct Well done love this poem it opens my heart looking at it literally I modify some part ©Emaculate Ife /quote] 26 Likes 4 Shares |
Re: My Love Is Hatred by JigsawKillah(m): 3:11pm On Jan 05, 2016 |
Ha-ha This man can write though 1 Like |
Re: My Love Is Hatred by emaculate99: 4:56pm On Jan 05, 2016 |
BACKGROUND: The justice system in the country is malled with a lot of regularities. Corruption has taken over the system and this has led to a lot of miscarriages of justice. Corrupt leaders can easily escape its long hands because of the bias and corruption in the system. |
Re: My Love Is Hatred by emaculate99: 5:15pm On Jan 05, 2016 |
JigsawKillah:You dey whine abi... |
Re: My Love Is Hatred by emaculate99: 5:23pm On Jan 05, 2016 |
Llaykorn donifez JigsawKillah Pdizzle Bolakale40
emaculate99 GidiQuotes Yuzjet E383 Qaisar1 Joseph1832 1 Like |
Re: My Love Is Hatred by E383: 6:19pm On Jan 05, 2016 |
emaculate99: I have seen your work bro. Been very busy lately. Nice work though. |
Re: My Love Is Hatred by Pdizzle(m): 8:27pm On Jan 05, 2016 |
Nice work emma, i hope this is not reality. You write effortlessly! |
Re: My Love Is Hatred by donifez(m): 8:55pm On Jan 05, 2016 |
I love this...Merit did a good job too,Nice one Oga. |
Re: My Love Is Hatred by merit12(f): 9:06pm On Jan 05, 2016 |
donifez:Thanks oga me. Just following your foot step. |
Re: My Love Is Hatred by Qaisar1: 11:30pm On Jan 05, 2016 |
merit12:Impressive. I wish I can analyze poems like this. 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: My Love Is Hatred by LordVince: 11:55pm On Jan 05, 2016 |
I think the poem is talking about the justice system. vivid allusions to that effect. |
Re: My Love Is Hatred by emaculate99: 9:02am On Jan 06, 2016 |
E383:OK boss |
Re: My Love Is Hatred by emaculate99: 9:04am On Jan 06, 2016 |
donifez:seriously, Merit12 did a great job. I doffed my fila when I saw the analysis. |
Re: My Love Is Hatred by emaculate99: 9:11am On Jan 06, 2016 |
LordVince:Yeah, it is. The Lady I was in love with in Merit12's analysis is "the Nigerian justice system"... #kudos to you and Merit12 for the great analyses. |
Re: My Love Is Hatred by merit12(f): 9:28am On Jan 06, 2016 |
emaculate99: Oops Well Am at my beginners stage .. Am here to learn Hope to become a better student Thanks 1 Like |
Re: My Love Is Hatred by merit12(f): 9:34am On Jan 06, 2016 |
emaculate99: Doffe Doffer Doffest Any other addiction to the above?if not I comment below I doffest my Capello for you Seriously,sincerity, am satisfied I hoped to become better Do all my assignment and read my book. 2 Likes |
Re: My Love Is Hatred by blazetitov: 10:45am On Jan 06, 2016 |
Write up like this should make front page often and not Olamide vs Don Jazzy bull fight. Well done to the writer. 1 Like |
Re: My Love Is Hatred by AsherStorm(m): 10:45am On Jan 06, 2016 |
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Re: My Love Is Hatred by vicostyles(m): 10:46am On Jan 06, 2016 |
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Re: My Love Is Hatred by timilehin007(m): 10:46am On Jan 06, 2016 |
Thank God ur love is not wicked like brick$lace this time |
Re: My Love Is Hatred by Zoolife: 10:46am On Jan 06, 2016 |
K |
Re: My Love Is Hatred by Nobody: 10:46am On Jan 06, 2016 |
poems
boring as hell 3 Likes |
Re: My Love Is Hatred by lampardizik(m): 10:46am On Jan 06, 2016 |
Story for the gods |
Re: My Love Is Hatred by Chiscomax(m): 10:46am On Jan 06, 2016 |
Oh crap! |
Re: My Love Is Hatred by Holamidhe(m): 10:47am On Jan 06, 2016 |
Master Class Kudos to OP |
Re: My Love Is Hatred by BTT(m): 10:47am On Jan 06, 2016 |
Justice served. |
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Re: My Love Is Hatred by Nobody: 10:47am On Jan 06, 2016 |
. End time love.... End time writer failing in end time love since 1760.. |
Re: My Love Is Hatred by Psalm18: 10:47am On Jan 06, 2016 |
You were more interested in words that ryhme and not the depth of emotions which poetry is meant to convey. These are rhymes not poetry 2 Likes |
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