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Perfect Imperfection by andra112(f): 3:30pm On Apr 17, 2016
We fight
We argue
We ignore our hurt
We go our seperate ways

We cry
We plead
We make up
We make love
We have fun

But
What keeps me me going, is the fact that no matter how much we fight or argue
We still find a way to come back running into each other's arms, even just a kiss wld mk me smile

Do u know why I fell in love with u?
It's because of how u scold me
How u take the blame for my mistake
How you make me feel like a little child after being scolded

I love your smile
Your kisses
The tenderness in your touch
Everything about you burns down my ego
It kills every pride that is left in me
Makes me obedient
I always want something more
More than love
More than watching water from the sea splashing on the shore at the beach
More than dancing all night with you at you the club
More than having a food fight with u
More than ssitting in front of the TV and watching your favourite sport on ESPN

I want to fight with you
Tell you, you did something wrong
I wnt us to be imperfect
I want us to argue
Break things when we fight
Pack our bags and leave

Then

Come back running into each other's arms, kissing, crying and promising never to leave because that would be the strongest kinda love
I love you but I don't want us to be perfect.

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Re: Perfect Imperfection by andra112(f): 11:17am On Apr 18, 2016
Please i want you guys to rate this, I want to be good at what i do but i need to know if I'm good at it
Re: Perfect Imperfection by imohchard(m): 7:52am On Apr 20, 2016
The poem is nice
Atleast for starters

But it sounded more like a prose than a poem.. Next time, add a little ryhmes, even if they is no rhymes, they should be rhythm..
And figues of speech too.. They had substance to poetry
Re: Perfect Imperfection by andra112(f): 11:28am On Apr 23, 2016
imohchard:
The poem is nice
Atleast for starters

But it sounded more like a prose than a poem.. Next time, add a little ryhmes, even if they is no rhymes, they should be rhythm..
And figues of speech too.. They had substance to poetry
ok thanks

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