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Perfect Imperfection by andra112(f): 3:30pm On Apr 17, 2016 |
We fight We argue We ignore our hurt We go our seperate ways We cry We plead We make up We make love We have fun But What keeps me me going, is the fact that no matter how much we fight or argue We still find a way to come back running into each other's arms, even just a kiss wld mk me smile Do u know why I fell in love with u? It's because of how u scold me How u take the blame for my mistake How you make me feel like a little child after being scolded I love your smile Your kisses The tenderness in your touch Everything about you burns down my ego It kills every pride that is left in me Makes me obedient I always want something more More than love More than watching water from the sea splashing on the shore at the beach More than dancing all night with you at you the club More than having a food fight with u More than ssitting in front of the TV and watching your favourite sport on ESPN I want to fight with you Tell you, you did something wrong I wnt us to be imperfect I want us to argue Break things when we fight Pack our bags and leave Then Come back running into each other's arms, kissing, crying and promising never to leave because that would be the strongest kinda love I love you but I don't want us to be perfect. 1 Like |
Re: Perfect Imperfection by andra112(f): 11:17am On Apr 18, 2016 |
Please i want you guys to rate this, I want to be good at what i do but i need to know if I'm good at it |
Re: Perfect Imperfection by imohchard(m): 7:52am On Apr 20, 2016 |
The poem is nice Atleast for starters But it sounded more like a prose than a poem.. Next time, add a little ryhmes, even if they is no rhymes, they should be rhythm.. And figues of speech too.. They had substance to poetry |
Re: Perfect Imperfection by andra112(f): 11:28am On Apr 23, 2016 |
imohchard:ok thanks |
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