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| The Nag (a Poem) by emekagh(m): 8:36pm On Aug 14, 2009 |
THE NAG I don’t like this. I don’t want that This is not fair! That is not good! Why did you do this? Why did you do that? What do you mean? What does that mean? Why not this? Why not that? Answer now! Answer straight! She nags about this, She nags about that On, and on, and Day by day She nags! Angling for a fight Seeking an outburst Trying my patience Troubling my mind Distorting my thoughts My peace, my health With nags like her Who wants a wife? When loneliness’ a blessing A place of peace. I won’t hit the bottle No, I will not I won’t crave for women Of easy virtue I have a remedy Simple and easy I’ll bury myself Deeper, and longer With work, and art A better companion Is work, and art And a better home My place of work! |
| Re: The Nag (a Poem) by OnoEdosio(m): 7:08pm On Aug 16, 2009 |
Really really love this piece,esp about sinking deep into work to escape.I think it would flow beautifully if it rhymed.Bravo. |
| Re: The Nag (a Poem) by C2H5OH(f): 7:09pm On Aug 16, 2009 |
thumbs up guy |
| Re: The Nag (a Poem) by naijalove(f): 8:40pm On Aug 16, 2009 |
LOVE IT, loveeee it, llloooovveeeeee it mister! |
| Re: The Nag (a Poem) by C2H5OH(f): 8:44pm On Aug 16, 2009 |
naijalove:nice. you hve pretty eyes |
| Re: The Nag (a Poem) by TheSeeker(m): 3:44pm On Aug 17, 2009 |
Nice one |
| Re: The Nag (a Poem) by AccoPen(m): 5:45pm On Aug 17, 2009 |
It can't be more beautifully expressed! |
| Re: The Nag (a Poem) by emekagh(m): 8:25pm On Aug 17, 2009 |
Thank all for your comment, @ OnoEdosio, thanks. I have tried my hands on rhyming, but I find out that to rhyme, you may have to distort your message a little (or alot). But I do have a collection of other rhymed poems. I have one posted on my blog. http://extramantra..com/2009_07_01_archive.html My Conscience |
| Re: The Nag (a Poem) by Nobody: 10:23pm On Aug 17, 2009 |
ch: has pretty eyes?? Jeez!!! but guy i do love the peice |
| Re: The Nag (a Poem) by C2H5OH(f): 10:25pm On Aug 17, 2009 |
yes, the poster above me has pretty eyes. solami why are you following me around? is that you in your profile you haven't answered that question |
| Re: The Nag (a Poem) by Nobody: 10:51pm On Aug 17, 2009 |
u knw what they call stalking?? , dnt flatter urself, just always curious what u have to say, sometimes not worth i must say, ueah.thats me, any problem? nt like u would like to take on ur normal rendezvous? |
| Re: The Nag (a Poem) by C2H5OH(f): 10:54pm On Aug 17, 2009 |
i'm not flattering myself. you have no reason to be so riled up or defensive. that was a cheeky comment earlier anyway. i don't care if you follow me or not. i actually have a lot to say but i would rather goof of instead. yes since that is you in your picture, you should be flattered by my compliments. |
| Re: The Nag (a Poem) by Nobody: 11:01pm On Aug 17, 2009 |
okay, thanks , im flattered,  |
| Re: The Nag (a Poem) by C2H5OH(f): 11:30pm On Aug 17, 2009 |
ok let me stop disturbing you before your boyfriend or boyfriends start calling for my head. |
| Re: The Nag (a Poem) by bluespice(f): 11:59pm On Aug 17, 2009 |
i like! tons of people can relate to this |
| Re: The Nag (a Poem) by SeanT21(f): 4:25am On Aug 18, 2009 |
MENNNN  NICE!! |
| Re: The Nag (a Poem) by Orikinla(m): 7:19pm On Oct 02, 2009 |
Good for perfromance on stage. I love the dramatic musicality. |
| Re: The Nag (a Poem) by Nobody: 6:35am On Oct 14, 2009 |
not bad  |
| Re: The Nag (a Poem) by gorociano: 10:15am On Oct 14, 2009 |
Brilliant men, just brilliant |
| Re: The Nag (a Poem) by emekagh(m): 9:25pm On Oct 15, 2009 |
^^^ Thanks guys and gals.  |
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