Thanks so much for this! It's lovely!!!

Wow!,.lesson well learnt......be patient and never rush into things outta competition

Present o..jez saw d mention..this is a great piece,bro..more ink to your pen..but i got on your blog n cudnt find d rest of d episodes..maybe i will jez wait till i get dem here..nice work,bro

Nice job op I soo love this ur story. The mother did well when she told Zoe that they should watch that movie War Room. Make I no lie u mehn I still can't believe I cried at some point when I was watching that movie. You u won't believe a pastor entered that room and he was like Someone has been praying in this closet cos this place is hot! Mehn that movie is great!

Another Christian movie I love most is Am In Love With A Church Girl. I soo much love this movie fam! Jarule omo igboro turn pastor!

Thank you very much. Good diction, captivating story. More Grace.

jsharp:
Present o..jez saw d mention..this is a great piece,bro..more ink to your pen..but i got on your blog n cudnt find d rest of d episodes..maybe i will jez wait till i get dem here..nice work,bro

[size=14pt]Here is the link to the final episode http://gospelbreed.com/2016/05/devils-proposal-episode-10/[/size]

Please leave a comment behind, i'll sincerely appreciate that.

Thanks

you are such a prolific writer

kaakaa1:
Thanks so much for this! It's lovely!!!

angeloadrian:
Wow!,.lesson well learnt......be patient and never rush into things outta competition

Am glad you find this worthwhile, thanks for your time

hefelove:
Nice job op I soo love this ur story. The mother did well when she told Zoe that they should watch that movie War Room. Make I no lie u mehn I still can't believe I cried at some point when I was watching that movie. You u won't believe a pastor entered that room and he was like Someone has been praying in this closet cos this place is hot! Mehn that movie is great!

Another Christian movie I love most is Am In Love With A Church Girl. I soo much love this movie fam! Jarule omo igboro turn pastor!

Lolz, Am glad you enjoyed this

JOSSYTEM:
you are such a prolific writer

Aww! Am not the writer though, the story is written By Oyebola Lizzy

My soul has been blessed by this. May God bless you... Op

richG:
My soul has been blessed by this. May God bless you... Op

Amen! Thanks friend

Op oya update more story na.. captivating story I must confess!!

Lolaabokoku:
Op oya update more story na.. captivating story I must confess!!

Aww! Thanks dear

Incase you miss any of my previously published stories, check here http://gospelbreed.com/collection-of-all-stories/

I recieve Grace to reject d devils proposal. Amen

I sincerely bow to ur writing skills.....its really great reading this

Baba u dey aiit

Is this a true life story? You can write abeg. I wish to be like u when I grow up.

Hmmmm

Wow, my first time reading a story on nairaland.
The story is quite interesting.

Why must every story have a happy ending?

Nyc story op.. am touched

Ok

Its been like a year since i commented on any post on nairaland. But this short educative story forced my hand to type.. Just exactly what i needed...thank you...you might not know it but u just saved a soul..

INTRESTING

Some people can write o! I enjoyed the short fiction. Thanks for sharing.

Awww, I just saw the mention, such an intriguing story, may God grant us the grace to always say no to the devil's proposal. thanks Ola!

wow!!I am really thrilled.what got me most was d active involvement of the ministry of the Holy Spirit.Good work op.looking forward to better tales ahead.You have a great gift

Dannykool:
I recieve Grace to reject d devils proposal. Amen

I say a BIG AMEN to that

Clonus:
Is this a true life story? You can write abeg. I wish to be like u when I grow up.

No! It's a Fiction... Thanks for your time, God bless

Edd1e:
Wow, my first time reading a story on nairaland.
The story is quite interesting.

Why must every story have a happy ending?

Glad you find this worthwhile!

To the question asked....'An HAPPY ENDING is not applicable to all stories, it all depends on the writers choice' and the LESSON he/she aims to pass across via the story

deebarbie:
Its been like a year since i commented on any post on nairaland. But this short educative story forced my hand to type.. Just exactly what i needed...thank you...you might not know it but u just saved a soul..

Wow! Am really glad you were blessed by this, God be praised.

Thanks so much for your time