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My Raps: What Should I Work On? by Jduck13(m): 2:20pm On Dec 22, 2006 |
Can Anyone give me some advice on my rymes Yaw have seen me spit what should I work on @ Kaydee thanks for your advice |
Re: My Raps: What Should I Work On? by Jduck13(m): 2:54pm On Dec 22, 2006 |
OK here is my rymes tell me which ones you like da most and what I should work on then rate me overall as a rapper 1- 10 Thanks holla @ metafuckas Hoodloyalz crew real cats and real rappas u know how we do jus killl cats and kill rappas we some ill rappas not touch and feel rappas want to talk junk ya fall victim to da steel clappa Yaw whack cats aint tochin a soul I burn yaw up im da furnace yaw da coal u keep dissin but ya bullets keep missin and u keep tryin and b u jus keep missin Yea I be trippin yea B jus 9 clinchin yea man im rich yea b jus dime pinchin theres talk about us when theres talk of da game u talkin bought us when u talkin bought fame because I'm enflamed like one da devils gnomes everythings burnin B except fpr my throne we hold da crown its HoodLoyalz kingdom Dey in da backgroung tryin to hide but i seenem I'm a HooDloyalz soldier ready to brow dey brain HLoyal Advocate man this crew is insane If Rap was rome wed be ceasar and if we talkin bought ice den id be a freezer when we talkin bought hoes u know im da pleaser and I sellin More albumns den drug dealers do reefer This is hoodloyalz territory our domain and so U know we gon reign longer den a hurricane U Got Mo dots on u den a giraffe take aim and spit more lines den a graph Hold ya ears c yea u feel my wrath Who won? now lets all do da math I'm a algebric eqaution hes kindergarten addition dese people is hatin tryin to take up on my mission Dese people wishin dey could defeat this man in adolescence that aint never been beat I leave a hole in ya heart an evalastin impression And i have u people fallin like da stocks in da depression every thing I spit u know I spit literally because B u know I got more cheese then freakin Italy I undastand why u talkin why u be hatin me because U know I got more dough then a bakery and i Cant be fakin man I gotta spit real got more Ice on my neck den in ya grill and im so real im so ill wit a gun* hear gun cock in back ground* I Got 99 problems but this Bit$$ aint one * here gun shots* @ Tianshie U out like a dyin flame please u is da dyin flame My spit put u out and cool down ya game u started as a spark and now u jus ashes I'm a forest fire and da rest is jus matches U aint a match homey U is nothin u da smallest flame in da game u jus fromtin man u couldnt set A barn wit hay to flames u couldnt burn toilet paper ya games to lame couldnt melt a candle couldnt make it wax when im meltin da mic and everyone who attacks Man im so syk that dey callin me young pac and yea u goin down like ya names young jok it wont stop so don't sweat da tech have pieces of u ever where like u a car in a wreck Ive been In da game for ever ruled da world for a century and I spit more bars then da state penetentury im 6 inches away and im still out ya reach because I keep da mic stainless like I washed it with bleach I don't herem speakin I guess they plead the fifth and he make more attempts to run then Emmit smith Enough playin and enough of this sayin time to start sprayin yea time to start slayin I'm gettin laid ya girls legs im spreadin and I got more cake then a mothafu$$in weddin got more cheese then a motha fu$$in burger people talk wit ease and ya c dey get murdered don't play I get hoes every day like da x and y axis deygo every way okay and u fake gs tryin to faze me keep on talkin u be pushin up daisys wipe my feet on u like a rug step on u like a bug I aint puttin words in ya mouth nah man jus slugs I don't need a knife or a gat don't even need a pen jus need my freestyles to guarantee a win I can make it syk if I ryme or I hum Homey I beat u like u was a fu$$in drum I don't stop heart pains no I aint no tum I jus start aches blow da brakes off this bum Sink u like the titantic erybody trip and panic because U still da second largest like u was the atlantic Gettin all this money cats call me a billionaire and yea im ridin dirty like my name was chamillionaire I'm da sykest in da game and all u cats c why call this man frodo because like peach hes nehi I'm puttin u down mollify u like lotion I spit so much man I could make a sixth ocean my glock speak loud and proud so im a slaughter hoes and I spray more then a motha Fu$$in water hose Yea I be gettin all da hoes so dey call me J-Nice and this man be grabbin more balls den Fu$$in J rice I keep on blowin up like a supernova and I got more venom den a fu$$in king cobra when it comes to talkin homeboy im da husher and I let my sh$$ burn like I was fu$$in usher and when u lookin through my cell homey u gon get shook because I got more digits in my contacts then a phone book So u get head well bit$$ I get more head and my game stay bigga then ya mothafu$$in forehead feel u wit dread and i will feel u wit lead feel da streets wit heat even till da beat bled even ya seat said homey sit down this cat got u beat wit da heat from motown Me without a mic is like a beat without a snare comin wit a flow so inventive and rare I'm a freestylist and a poet off da top and a writer either way I Have u passin da mic jus like a cipher have u sayin no I don't want to go I'm through haha now u witness what J-Nice da Lyrical Assasain can do yo yo as soon as he wake up this fool put on makeup rippin cats poppin cats droppin cats who fake up Who I take up anyone I please and jus like a mouse homey all I want that cheese don't u c homeboy im a g been doin this Sh$$ $ince da age of three Dont mess wit me I got a Lyrical sword and I'm super bowl Mvp like hines ward To all them bitches and all them freakin hatas man I soar like jordan and get hoes like chamberlain aint no playin b c aint no playin me keep on talkin shit den u know im gon be sprayin b haha weak bit$$ lil snitch paddy hoe got ya girl im my crib have her sayin daddy o sayin daddy slow because u do it so well I stroke so mean man i make her shit swell Yall can call me names like white bitch and cracker but ya shit cost less den a kfc snacker betta yet da wrapper u aint worth that bit Ya mom cost a penny and she aint worth that shit wastin time not worth da clit tell her go to school and I might think about a hit Call me mr. clean because im fresh like soap and call me crack slanger because i always got that dope no joke and I aint talkin bought no coke I'm jus talkin bought pimpin ya kno im rippin I hope and I'm da # 1 shampoo because im da best bet think clear listen hear as I cruise like a jet and keepem off so dey don't dirty da scene i set hold up this soap opera that is dope aint ova yet because ill freshen up da place like I was febreeze a spray a spit and da company I will please set da stage grab ya swords ready for war ya lyrics betta be tight because da best whatll soar What u here for u strapped wit a dagger and we rock great swords that is longer den a ladder and sharp as could be jus like a hornets stinger a real bell ringer ready to fell any singer who step in da midst of battle without some protection so please get some lessons get strapped or be regrettin 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Re: My Raps: What Should I Work On? by DaSnake(m): 2:58pm On Dec 22, 2006 |
Well ruff I think U good but U need to work on ya vocab a bit u r syker than u used to be ill say dat but if you r to get better u need to freestyle 24 - 7 and work on ya vocab |
Re: My Raps: What Should I Work On? by tianshie(m): 11:52pm On Dec 24, 2006 |
@ Jduck I think if anyone in your crew impressed me at all it was you. You got imagination.
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Re: My Raps: What Should I Work On? by Jduck13(m): 2:03am On Dec 25, 2006 |
@ Tianshie Thanks bro I really think Ya rymes is hot too I dont wanna admit it I dont know bought ahyone else on ya squad no offense to them. but u is nice though |
Re: My Raps: What Should I Work On? by Jduck13(m): 2:11am On Dec 25, 2006 |
anyone else got advice. I really appreciate everyones advice drop some it ya got some |
Re: My Raps: What Should I Work On? by ThoniaSlim(f): 7:16am On Dec 27, 2006 |
em good luck,thats also a good advice,don't you think |
Re: My Raps: What Should I Work On? by Jduck13(m): 11:31pm On Feb 28, 2007 |
wassup tell me what I outta work on and if u hatin Den Ill battle u |
Re: My Raps: What Should I Work On? by dblock(m): 9:16am On Mar 01, 2007 |
You've got good flow and your punchlines are tight If you made your Spits, based on a "subject Matter", you'd be gettin a record deal in to time, that's if you want one. Yaw whack cats aint tochin a soul These verses are tight, nice flow and a good imagination |
Re: My Raps: What Should I Work On? by gbadex1(m): 11:43am On Mar 01, 2007 |
yep, dblock said it all. If ya wanna rap about sum'thng else then you gottta have subject matter, u know like an underlining theme. Other than that, you've improved tremendously with ur battle rhymes. Thing is, battles are about you and ur opponent, ripping an mc to pieces. Heck ma previous battles are testimony to that. You spit it sick J, u just keep slaying and elevating. |
Re: My Raps: What Should I Work On? by Jduck13(m): 11:33am On Mar 02, 2007 |
aight yaw thanks appreciate da input |
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