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Barbie nice: @ prince, am really glad u hav bin unbanned am on page 32 nw more update plz.

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That night i prepared for the examination, calculating every topic in my mathematice textbook. That night was like a vigil, the time i should have used in sleeping, i manage that moment in staying awake to read.
I tore a piece of paper to solve maths practically without ceasing till 5:30am in the early morning. When i noticed that it's morning, i stood and packed my textbooks into my school bag. I left the parlour to my own personally room to observed my morning devotion.
After i had observed praying, i left the room and entered the bathroom to shower a cool water, since i spent so much time reading till my eyes got dim. I had felt stronger after taking my shower. I dashed into the kitchen to arrange for breakfast to eat before making any other preparation. My mother intruded into the kitchen yawning and stretching her body.


"Good morning mother. How was your night ?", i'd asked


"my night was fine, and i did slept splendidly without disturbance. And how was yours ?", my mother asked impatiently.


" hmmmm. I had a very stressful hard time reading, calculating through out last night without relenting ", i'd answered her.


She sighed and reluctantly walked towards where i stood and collected the kettle i had in my hand.

"go get yourselve ready for school while i prepare the breakfast", my mum instructed and i left the kitchen immediately to get ready for school.


I wore my school uniform, pick up my maths textbook and left my room as i approached the parlour to sit and wait for breakfast. My mother later came into the sitting room and placed a cup of tea with bread. I took in my morning breakfast, greeted my mother and left the house for school. Perhaps, when i infiltrated the school compound, many thoughts run through my mind as i had the feeling that something will happen in the school that morning. I stood from my classroom block to wave hands at miss grace when i sighted her, before i saw mr. Akpan heading towards the examination hall.
Students crowded outside the exams hall. Meanwhile, the principal changed the arrangement of sitting. Mr. Akpan actually organized for new arrangement of students. He instructed all the pupils to stand on a straight line, before he ordered us to moved on straight line to occupy a seat at the front of the hall.
Before the normal time of the exams started, the principal made a prolong annoying speech concerning the rules and regulations governing the exams. He forbids us to abstain from exam malpractice. Afterwards, the examination mathematices papers was shared according to the different combined classes. The exams went well tho, but not for me.
I hardly finished answering the first objective questions, when mr. Akpan called on four seniors to supervise us.


" um... Pls check them very well, because i dont trust some of them here. Is that understood ?", mr. Akpan asked the seniors.


"we understand you sirr", the seniors answered immediately in unison.


Mr. Akpan walked through the door and never returned back again to check on us. I whistled at emeka from the back and he stood up from his seat and carelessly turned to look towards my direction, but just as he stared towards my direction he got himself into trouble.


" hey.. You stand up. What were you look at the back ?. You no de fear say we de here ?", one of them seniors asked.


Emeka couldn't mention or say a word to support himself. He stood there muted without writing, untill i helped him say something.


" am sorry senior, i was the person who called him. His money fell from his pocket", i'd answered.


"hey shut up, you idiot. Did i talk to you ?", one of the seniors asked me silly question.


Emeka never knew i had been the one whistling on him. Emeka foolishly reminded those seniors that someone whistled on him. Confusion started arising when i identified myself to be the person. As the wanted to penalized me, one of them literally disagreed with them.


" my guy abeg leave that boy alone make him write him exams. Beside, mr. Akpan no de here. Allow them do what they want ", one of them instructed, but the other three seniors insulted him.


The four seniors that were to be supervising started arguing, rendering abusive insult on themselves untill it became worst when they started fighting. They fought in sure a way that they broke legs of desk, and use it as a weapon. Mr. Akpan heard the information. The principal came with the help of other teachers to settle them, but all was in vain.
Our papers were collected from all the students.
The fighting continued as they dragged themselves. Sooner, those seniors brought out knife and all the students in the examination hall fled away.
I couldn't wait any more as the last student to watch them fight when the tallest stabbed his fellow guy.
I ran out and headed straight to the direction of the hostel...



**TO BE CONTINUED**

chai. some ppl comments don make me die in spirit and i don begin de feel discourage.

Una no de fit point out where i need to correct ?, rather una the yan discouraging words.

I no be literature student oh. Am just a novice here, so pls ppl make una the write out the corrections, and i promise you guys will be suprise to see me change.

TYPING...

shollaire: Welcome back prince. please tell me from which section of nairaland you were ban? Let me go treat their bleep up! You don't promote someone to front page only to disgrace them with a ban.

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Literature my guy.

mezielo: Hmmmmm!!! U are making up this stories ryt?

. Thanks sir.

Kingademos: prince na jazz u use?....better come update o

. Guy no be so na

LogoDWhiz: Chai!!! Alas!" I finally catch up... Nice piece... I dey wait for more updates o @prince.... No one is perfect, but strive to be perfect... #peace

. Thanks sir. Nice comment

LogoDWhiz: Wow!! I saw this post on the FP this evening, and the title captured my mind, I had difficulty reading it at the beginning due to some mistakes, but along the way it got better and the mistakes were corrected.. But not totally tho.. I hope for better improvement... More grease to your elbow....

I have some questions for you concerning the story so far:: firstly, when do u start the assembly anf when foes it ends, cos im kind of confused in that aspect... Also, why do get annoyed easily like that? Take things easy, and leave room for explanations...

About u not bleeping miss grace and other feminine characters that made advances to you is something that's extraordinary,, u really tried.. I can't imagine having that opportunity and not making use of it... *we are all diff tho*...
Overall, I will rate the post so far, 7.0.... U really tried.. Try working on the grammatical errors... You have a gift, make good use of it.. May God shower more blessings on you... #AllTheBest

P.S.. Its Shower not shawer..

. Hmmm. Well there are alot to explain as you said, but i think i need to do that aspect slowly.

Like you said about hav that an opportunity, it depends on the personality involved. I no be baddoo that why i shy away..

Am a easy going guy. I dont take things hash.
I just that i did that with all the characters because i tried provoking them so that they might leave me.

As for the shower of blessing, i therefore shout..AMEN..

The rock5555: Congrats son. We did it, i told u, Front page is ur starting point, keep em coming.

Congrats

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Thank you my dad. I think this should call for celebration ?

Where my mum de?

linpok: oh thank goodness! I was about chargin prince to court for kidnapin u o!!

Tnk God u r bak if not prince for hear NweH!!

*Big Hug*

. *shivering* na wetin i do ?

captain sinzu: #ok I don land like aeroplane....nice 1 bro.....

. Thanks goes to you for reading

jaybossYBNL: Hey dude u really tried o
pls come and complete this thing u started o
i had to take a break before i will come back and complete it

. I will sir. Thanks for checking in

linpok: ehn!!! prince u don finali mak front page o....wetin we go use celebrate nau..
I dey wait o!

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Chai!!! Finally! Finally !! You come enter online.
Bros me happy too oh.
Thanks for your comment

fishmakas: C com u no fit hit d point abi na watin

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Pls make your point clear sirrr

mimifavour: Prince u made front page. Drink to dat

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Thanks my dear.
Thanks for your kind support.

Is like you are someone familiar. Right ?

dedarks: What a collection of phrase

. Good evening sir.

Thanks for clicking in

Emzybrown: what a bunkum! heavy blow on my mouth again, whatta a hogwash

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Good evening sir. I de salut you with my two legs up

thanks boss

Hardeluv: He be lyk say, we wld start collecting gate fee money on dis thread. See as pple dey read prince story.
Welcome 2 first page dear, n thumps up. Abeg, mak we pour somfin jere, n celebrate.
Counting fingers n waiting patiently.

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Thanks my dear.
Am so much glad for everything.

Dont worry we go pop lakasara

Ishuajoe: U must be a good story teller, (novelist) keep it up

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Thanks sirrr.

Thanks for your inspirational comment

Yahoogirl: @op,you have the flair for writing but you need to improve your grammar and sentence composition. The ideas are in your head but you need a better way of getting it across to your readers. I think you should take a course in creative writing as it will go a long way to help you. The story is quiet captivating. I can't wait to get to the end of it. Keep it up. You could also get someone who is better than you in English to edit it for you before you post online. Keep it up.

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I'll do as you say.
Thanks for the warm encouragement

Warlord3000: As much as I like the storyline..

I just wish prince will go back to the beginning of the story and modify or edit most of the post..

Not everyone is a big fan of typo or spelling errors.. Total turn off..

Keep up the good work and do that in your spare time..

Starting from the first update.. Good luck..

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Thanks my main guy. I promise to do as you directed.

Your comments are encouraging and i promised to keep up the good spirit.

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The moment i had walk in through the parlour door, the person sitting on the
couch smile childishly at me, while i stood at the door entrance transfixed.


"what the hell are you doing in my father house!?. Who brought you here ?. Who gave you the premision to visit me", i'd asked her so many question .


" prince, can you pls calm down lets talk ?", precious mentions as she stood up from the couch to meet me.


" just drop your yansh for that chair. Dont come any closer, if not am gonna smash your white face!". I threatened precious and she hesitated not. She walk angryly and sat where she stood up.


My heartbeat ranged faster in anger wondering how she knew the road to my place.
I wanted asking precious about the director or the person behind all this, the person who showed her where i
lived. But i couldn't face her that moment. I swiftly dash in the corridor, as i approached my room door.
Thereafter, i later came back to the parlour to check if she had gone home. But that munite i tried peeping someone tapped my shoulder and i jolted scaryly.
Miss grace was the person tapping, i frowned my face in annoyance and away from her.
She followed me, asking whats wrong with me


" surely something is wrong with me. Do you wanna know what that is?", i'd asked when we entered a quiet place


"yes!. Pls speak to me now. What is it ?", miss grace asked as she tried holding me to her body but i shifted away from her.
I didnt want her touching to provoke my second, THE SILLY SMALL PRINCE in my trouser.


" i came checking on you but you where not around. Where did you go ?, how did you manage to come in here?, Where is my mother ?", i asked some many questions because i couldn't remember inviting any of them to my resident.


" i thought about telling you, but you were busy writing exams.
Ermm, i actually came here to visit your mum and not you. Do you understand ?", she mentioned rolling her eyes, demonstrating her fingers too.


" the only time i remember was when i under-slept. So explain yourself better. How did you get in here without my mum around ?" i asked.


Miss grace sighed and walk away from me heading towards the parlour.
I waited there, memorizing whats happening. For the fact that i spoke to miss grace didnt mean i had forgiven her.
I exhaled heavily and barge into the kitchen.
My mother was in the kitchen when i got there. Everything was just so confusing when i met her.


"mum!!, Were you here ?. Did you hear my conversation with grace ?", i asked my mother as i swiftly moved towards where she had stood.

" yes, i did", my mum answer

" they are your friend, go and meet them and stop behaving like a father here ", my mother replied while backing me.


I complaint about the way miss grace make friends with people i hated talking with. I told her about precious being my classmate, but i never wanted seeing her in my father house, because it was gonna complicate things. My mother later interrupted my mind thought speech, as she change the topic. My mum asked me about the exams. My mother made mentioned that i rushed to school without taking my breakfast. She warned me never to attend school whenever i refuse eating. Perhaps, as she made mentioned of food i immediate reached to the pot on the fire and opened it.


" not again!!. Why always soup and fufu now ?". I lamented and walkout from the kitchen heading towards the direction of parlour.


Miss grace sat silently when she sighted me approaching the parlour door.
I sat on the couch beside her.
Precious on the other hand was thinking i hated talking to her.
But that wasn't my problem.


" this one were una sit silently as if na mourning we gather here for, wetin de happen ?, Una husband die?", i asked sarcastically and miss grace change her frown face to smiling.

I faced the direction where precious sat and I winked playfully at her, and she smiled back.

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settled, right ?
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We chatted for a long time forgetting that we had a misunderstanding some moments ago. My mother brought food and we all gathered round the table to eat. After the meal, miss grace and precious appreciated my mum's cooking.
I later escorted them and came back to prepare for the next examinations.
I promised to start reading, as soon as i had returned from escorting grace and precious.
But before i grabbed my school bag, i decided checking my time table first.
Suddenly, a thought leaped to my mind as i tried bringing out the list for exam time table.


" chai!!. Tomorrow na wahala, what will i write in the examInation hall ?.
MATHEMATICES no be my friend 00oo! ", i complained to myself


Perhaps, maths was the only hardest subject i hated so much. whenever the maths teacher entered my class. Sometime i do walkout and never return untill when the teacher goes out.

it gonna be a bloody stressfull tuesday...



**TO BE CONTINUED**

Tying the next up date.

Pls stay with me..

255viewer and 102guest..
You all are highly welcome.

Winnie1950: Did u just say coffee My friend go and prepare pounded yam and afang soup for me jare.

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It already prepared

Winnie1950: i boarded a keke napep to romance section and got banned by antispambot but it was lifted immediately. Those guys at the romance section are crazy.

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Am sorry for that it just that you disobeyed. I hope you didnt insult anyone?

Winnie1950: am seeing u too

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Hey. Tell me where you went for your vacation.

Winnie1950: @prince: is that how to welcome someone after a long vacation? U are supposed to post a very long update. That's how to say welcome.

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You just came back from a long vacation, so if i should give you a long up today your brains will bubble

but i prefer giving you after noon coffee. How about that ?

linpok: Na waoh!!! Hw two of una go dey suffer d same tin nau....

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Menn a guess we are not luck to have the good girls na.
All the good girls have been taken.

linpok: Na waoh! Mayb una dey play girls wella oo

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Omo no be we the play girls oh, rather na them the play us.