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Nice one.

eduevolutionnow:
Nice one.

Thanks...
This is a link to my first script.. The bad Network.. Check it out..
https://www.nairaland.com/3048848/comedy-skit-bad-network

@sholay2011, I need your constructive criticism on this.. thanks..

kennypoka2:

Thanks...
This is a link to my first script.. The bad Network.. Check it out..
https://www.nairaland.com/3048848/comedy-skit-bad-network

Sure. Cool concept BTW.

eduevolutionnow:

Sure. Cool concept BTW.

Thanks... More coming..

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Upcoming: ANGELA: THE UNTOLD STORY

A cool Mental Awareness story.

prof800:
A cool Mental Awareness story.

Thanks man..

*Space booked*

Will read soon.

sholay2011:
*Space booked*

Will read soon.

Welcome sir!!

**In a few words**


A little adjustment in the story, especially with the Doctor and the patient's mother, and you'll be knocking the wind out of us with the ending of the story.

A nice story, for me

morsadh:
**In a few words**


A little adjustment in the story, especially with the Doctor and the patient's mother, and you'll be knocking the wind out of us with the ending of the story.

A nice story, for me

Thank you sir!
"Adjustment" in what way?

morsadh:
**In a few words**


A little adjustment in the story, especially with the Doctor and the patient's mother, and you'll be knocking the wind out of us with the ending of the story.

A nice story, for me

Thank you sir!
"Adjustment" in what way? To their character or their dialogue..

Newkidoo:
Nice script.. I love the way you put us on edge about what was wrong with Angela.. great, I have different angles to this story.. keep it up bro..

Thanks. there is more.. on those angles you mentioned! Was Melina alive before or was she made up? If she was alive before then was she killed or wat happened?

kennypoka2:

Thank you sir!
"Adjustment" in what way?

More of the dialogue for me. I feel like there are many who would sense the girl's condition from afar with it. I have no problem with the story though; its quite lovely.

morsadh:


More of the dialogue for me. I feel like there are many who would sense the girl's condition from afar with it. I have no problem with the story though; its quite lovely.

It was only towards the end it got revealed!
Thanks though..

kennypoka2:

It was only towards the end it got revealed!
Thanks though..

No problem!

morsadh:


No problem!

From what point in the script did u get the feeling of her condition??

I would appreciate your reply..

kennypoka2:

From what point in the script did u get the feeling of her condition??

I would appreciate your reply..

Chairman, sorry for taking so long to reply you. I have been off air for a while, due to some personal errands, and the expiration of my data.

I am also sorry if my comments may come across as strange. The truth is that I read the script.and it was brilliant. I only tried to point out that some people may see the ending from afar. I didn't. I miscommunicated, and I'm so sorry for that.

That being said, I really hope you get this to screen very soon.

morsadh:


Chairman, sorry for taking so long to reply you. I have been off air for a while, due to some personal errands, and the expiration of my data.

I am also sorry if my comments may come across as strange. The truth is that I read the script.and it was brilliant. I only tried to point out that some people may see the ending from afar. I didn't. I miscommunicated, and I'm so sorry for that.

That being said, I really hope you get this to screen very soon.

Thanks.. It will be coming out soon.. I want to make it into three parts!! I am trying to write the remaining two parts

kennypoka2:

Thanks.. It will be coming out soon.. I want to make it into three parts!! I am trying to write the remaining two parts

I'll be watching this space.

I really love this script. Just little rewriting and the script is good for the screen.
@kennypoka, I will like you to do some rewriting on this. It has potential

Nolaneye:
I really love this script. Just little rewriting and the script is good for the screen.
@kennypoka, I will like you to do some rewriting on this. It has potential

Thanks.. I will. But I am busy with a feature at the the moment.. may be when I am done I will rewrite.

prof800:
A cool Mental Awareness story.

@prof800, please I need your assistance. Will appreciate your reply @pm. Thanks

Hmmmm...

CNARIOjoseph:
Hmmmm...

Boss, Welcome... Any issue