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Re: Entangled by Pearl05(f): 7:27pm On Jul 09, 2017
Shalomdee:
CHAPTER NINE continued

He had been five when Amaka his little sister had been born, Gerard had been his immediate younger brother, the one who he always had fights with. He could not remember how pleased he was then when it was announced that he had a younger sister, but his parents said he had been joyful. He took part in her dressing and feeding as an infant and his mother was quick to leave Amaka in the company of Lancelot who would even request that she be tied to his back.

Things moved fine for them, even though Amaka was later diagnosed with Sickle cell anemia, the family managed to cope with her frequent bouts of sicknesses. But when Lancelot would go nowhere without her, eat nothing without her and spend sleepless nights if she was ill, Mr and Mrs Okoronkwo knew they had a lot to deal with. Then his obsession about Amaka became serious, he wanted to always be around her at all times and when she was hurt, he cried with noticeable tears and made frantic steps to alleviate her pains.

They took him to see the psychiatrist when he was ten; Obsessive-Compulsive Disorder (OCD), the psychiatrist told his parents disinterestedly; this had to do with a combination of obsessions and compulsive behaviours that were abnormal. Why had they waited for long before coming to the hospital? He hoped the boy did not molest the sister sexually? The child had to start receiving medications and intensive Cognitive Behaviour Therapy; he would have to be admitted in the mental health ward for monitoring.

As his parents contemplated keeping him in the ward, he cried loudly and rolled on the floor. He did not want to stay in the hospital, they had to take him back home, Amaka would be seriously sick if they did not do so and he would not forgive them if anything happened to her.

The psychiatrist who was used to handling patients like these insisted his case required admission. If they wanted to see their son normal again, they had to leave him in specialized hands. The parents agreed and deposited money for his admission; Mrs Okoronkwo left for home to pack his clothes and bring back while Mr Okoronkwo stayed back to calm Lancelot but it was of no use as he already knew he was going to lose his sister soon.

The treatments started, he was given an injection to knock him out so that for three days he was too weak to move from the bed, in his semi awaken state he would call out for his sister and demand to see her. Nobody paid attention to him, they felt he was not yet fit to see his sister again, he was just a crazy boy in need of more medications. Back at home Amaka caught pneumonia because of exposure in the fierce Jos cold. Her mother left Lancelot and returned to battle with it, it became severe, she was rushed to hospital to be relieved of the congestion in her chest as she struggled to breathe.

“Lancelot,” she kept saying in between deep and difficult breaths, her eyes wary and sad.

Her mother shed tears as she looked at her sick daughter. She made a frantic call to her husband in the mental ward. Lancelot needed to come and see his sister, there was something going on she could not understand. She dropped the call and went back to the Intensive Unit where her child was kept to be with her. An hour later, Lancelot, awake but in a weak state was accompanied by his father and a nurse, they came to the I.U and looked on through the glass.

“Allow my son to come in here; he needs to see his sister, Doc.” Mrs Okoronkwo begged the Doctor.

She shook her head in reply. “Kids are not allowed inside; your daughter needs a peaceful atmosphere.”

“My daughter needs him,” she cried in a low tone.

“I’m sorry,” the doctor muttered, he clearly was. “It is hospital policy.”

Outside the I.U, Lancelot sobbed as he viewed Amaka from the glass, she was in pains and she needed to see him. He silently begged God to help his sister. As he cried, Amaka started gasping, her mother called for the attention of the doctor. He came to her and tried to fix the tubes well. Amaka jerked on the bed thrice and lay there still. Lancelot wailed, his only sister was gone.

“Lancelot Okafor Okoronkwo!” A nurse in a plain white gown called from the doctor’s office.

He turned to her direction, she beckoned to him. He removed the hand on his chin, stood up and walked with heavy steps to the office.
Thanks so much for the updates and welcome back.

Following you back to back.
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Re: Entangled by bummybummy(f): 9:32pm On Jul 09, 2017
tnx for d update
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Re: Entangled by talk2saintify(m): 1:43pm On Jul 10, 2017
following.....



awesome story......
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Re: Entangled by babyface224(f): 5:47pm On Jul 10, 2017
more update pls
Re: Entangled by hormobolanle: 12:22am On Jul 11, 2017
Tanku for dedicationing d Tori for my name, Iyam say I apicia8

but y is Lancelot behaving like a pikin dat was denied breast milkhuhOBSESSION?
TORH ISSOKAY......




lemme Kontinue to b observing n c Wat d witch called FATE have in store for jane


Kari on ooojecheesy
Re: Entangled by VeeGeeCee(f): 11:02am On Jul 11, 2017
Eeyah Lancelot is really going through alot. But don't send my sweetest Jane away oo. She has done nothing wrong,,,im warning you. Even Rahila is not aware of this. Nice story all the way.
Re: Entangled by Shalomdee(op):
Get the book
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Re: Entangled by queenitee(f): 12:25pm On Jul 11, 2017
Doctor Shalom, wehdone ma
Re: Entangled by Shalomdee(op): 12:29pm On Jul 11, 2017
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Re: Entangled by Shalomdee(op): 12:30pm On Jul 11, 2017
queenitee:
Doctor Shalom, wehdone ma
Nurse queenitee thanks
Re: Entangled by Queensiju: 12:34pm On Jul 11, 2017
I wonder oo. Abeg Lancelot explain how he dey do you ooo. Let no evil befall Jane oo. Thanks for the update, shalomdee.
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Re: Entangled by Fijumokesayo(f): 12:37pm On Jul 11, 2017
It's like Doctor Tunde is confused too
This is a great piece, God bless you writer.
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Re: Entangled by Shalomdee(op): 12:37pm On Jul 11, 2017
Queensiju:
I wonder oo. Abeg Lancelot explain how he dey do you ooo. Let no evil befall Jane oo. Thanks for the update, shalomdee.
Welcome dear
Re: Entangled by Hadampson(m): 12:59pm On Jul 11, 2017
Shalomdee:
EvaJael Ayoomolabake holuwanoisy111 Lilyjoe567 queenitee mhizgap hormobolanle Chumzypinky Ifecoded talk2saintify MhizDerbee Kayzybaba anambraamaka abefe99 Hadampson WHOcarex Nathblessing Pearl105 VETSURGEON123 yewande1234 Kimardashain bossy512 kesterkendra royalty18 babyface224 crislyn Psalmwhyte Toyin223 VeeGeeCee Godmother Odufanabasa Loboski bossy512 joiful Misselocon AyarmBoye FreshestManny Labrey95 elyna Queensiju bummybummy smokeydrinky, my muses, I have updated
Present.. btw, nice update
Re: Entangled by Shalomdee(op): 1:09pm On Jul 11, 2017
Queensiju:
I wonder oo. Abeg Lancelot explain how he dey do you ooo. Let no evil befall Jane oo. Thanks for the update, shalomdee.
Thanks bae
Re: Entangled by AyarmBoye(m): 1:48pm On Jul 11, 2017
Shalomdee:
EvaJael Ayoomolabake holuwanoisy111 Lilyjoe567 queenitee mhizgap hormobolanle Chumzypinky Ifecoded talk2saintify MhizDerbee Kayzybaba anambraamaka abefe99 Hadampson WHOcarex Nathblessing Pearl105 VETSURGEON123 yewande1234 Kimardashain bossy512 kesterkendra royalty18 babyface224 crislyn Psalmwhyte Toyin223 VeeGeeCee Godmother Odufanabasa Loboski bossy512 joiful Misselocon AyarmBoye FreshestManny Labrey95 elyna Queensiju bummybummy smokeydrinky, my muses, I have updated
Weldone ma'am..... Nice update... Hmmmmm
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Re: Entangled by talk2saintify(m): 2:10pm On Jul 11, 2017
Shalomdee:
EvaJael Ayoomolabake holuwanoisy111 Lilyjoe567 queenitee mhizgap hormobolanle Chumzypinky Ifecoded talk2saintify MhizDerbee Kayzybaba anambraamaka abefe99 Hadampson WHOcarex Nathblessing Pearl105 VETSURGEON123 yewande1234 Kimardashain bossy512 kesterkendra royalty18 babyface224 crislyn Psalmwhyte Toyin223 VeeGeeCee Godmother Odufanabasa Loboski bossy512 joiful Misselocon AyarmBoye FreshestManny Labrey95 elyna Queensiju bummybummy smokeydrinky, my muses, I have updated
THanks Ma



nice work yhu gat der
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Re: Entangled by Pearl05(f): 2:28pm On Jul 11, 2017
Thanks for the update.
Yea, knowing how the obsession started with his sister will definitely help Lancelot condition.
He should open up to the wife too or ask her to accompany him at his next visit to the doctor. The emotional support the wife will give him can help the situation.

Still following back to back.
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Re: Entangled by Queensiju: 2:31pm On Jul 11, 2017
Shalomdee:
Welcome dear
Thank you.
Re: Entangled by bummybummy(f): 2:58pm On Jul 11, 2017
Shalomdee:
EvaJael Ayoomolabake holuwanoisy111 Lilyjoe567 queenitee mhizgap hormobolanle Chumzypinky Ifecoded talk2saintify MhizDerbee Kayzybaba anambraamaka abefe99 Hadampson WHOcarex Nathblessing Pearl105 VETSURGEON123 yewande1234 Kimardashain bossy512 kesterkendra royalty18 babyface224 crislyn Psalmwhyte Toyin223 VeeGeeCee Godmother Odufanabasa Loboski bossy512 joiful Misselocon AyarmBoye FreshestManny Labrey95 elyna Queensiju bummybummy smokeydrinky, my muses, I have updated
thanks for d update , Dr. Tunde help Lancelot out of his predicament
Re: Entangled by Toyin223(f): 3:09pm On Jul 11, 2017
Shalomdee:
EvaJael Ayoomolabake holuwanoisy111 Lilyjoe567 queenitee mhizgap hormobolanle Chumzypinky Ifecoded talk2saintify MhizDerbee Kayzybaba anambraamaka abefe99 Hadampson WHOcarex Nathblessing Pearl105 VETSURGEON123 yewande1234 Kimardashain bossy512 kesterkendra royalty18 babyface224 crislyn Psalmwhyte Toyin223 VeeGeeCee Godmother Odufanabasa Loboski bossy512 joiful Misselocon AyarmBoye FreshestManny Labrey95 elyna Queensiju bummybummy smokeydrinky, my muses, I have updated
Thank U U Did A Nice Work
Re: Entangled by Akazeta(f): 8:42pm On Jul 11, 2017
Next update please :DNext update please
Re: Entangled by queenitee(f): 6:11am On Jul 12, 2017
Shalomdee:
Nurse queenitee thanks
Hihihihi, how you take know?
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Re: Entangled by Countrygirl(f): 10:52am On Jul 12, 2017
I pray Lancelot finds solution to his obsession... nice story shalom
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Re: Entangled by Nobody: 2:24pm On Jul 12, 2017
Thanks for the update Shalomdee kiss
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Re: Entangled by FreshestManny(m): 7:21pm On Jul 12, 2017
Shalomdee:
EvaJael Ayoomolabake holuwanoisy111 Lilyjoe567 queenitee mhizgap hormobolanle Chumzypinky Ifecoded talk2saintify MhizDerbee Kayzybaba anambraamaka abefe99 Hadampson WHOcarex Nathblessing Pearl105 VETSURGEON123 yewande1234 Kimardashain bossy512 kesterkendra royalty18 babyface224 crislyn Psalmwhyte Toyin223 VeeGeeCee Godmother Odufanabasa Loboski bossy512 joiful Misselocon AyarmBoye FreshestManny Labrey95 elyna Queensiju bummybummy smokeydrinky, my muses, I have updated
Thank you for the mention Shalomdee. This story is really interesting and I'm willing to follow bumper to bumper till the end.
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Re: Entangled by Shalomdee(op):
Get the book
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Re: Entangled by Shalomdee(op): 11:06pm On Jul 12, 2017
Countrygirl:
I pray Lancelot finds solution to his obsession... nice story shalom
Appreciate you ma, nice of you to drop by
Re: Entangled by Shalomdee(op): 11:09pm On Jul 12, 2017
Akazeta:
Next update please :DNext update please
I understand you wanted more updates, please bear with me, I don't have too much time on me and light sometimes is not constant. Thanks for dropping by.
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Re: Entangled by Toyin223(f): 11:15pm On Jul 12, 2017
Tank U Doctor Shalomdee
Re: Entangled by Shalomdee(op): 11:28pm On Jul 12, 2017
Toyin223:
Tank U Doctor Shalomdee
Haha, my pleasure nurse Toyin223, you have joined bad gang abi?
Re: Entangled by Toyin223(f): 11:34pm On Jul 12, 2017
Shalomdee:
Haha, my pleasure nurse Toyin223, you have joined bad gang abi?
Nooooo Am Just Passing Bye
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