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REGRETS: A Motivational Poetry / Beyond Regrets: A Poem Written By Michael Livingstone / Even When I'm Down With Regrets.. (2) (3) (4)
Regrets - A Poem. by Nobody: 7:33pm On May 31, 2017 |
So I decided to try my hands on poetry today and I came up with this... P.S-: I'm a science student and this is the first time I'm writing a poem so please take it easy on me , constructive criticisms only. REGRETS You look at the couch, the same red couch On which she snuggled up with you even though you were a douche. You gasp and tears trickle down your face, She's no longer there and there's nothing to take her place. You look at the dimly lit kitchen, the same kitchen In which she prepared your favourite spicy Chicken. You wipe the tears once more from your face, She's no longer there and there's nothing to take her place. You take a walk to the room, the same room Where you made love to her on many nights. Now your face is covered with gloom Because she's no longer there and now you've lost all bragging rights. You sit on the bed, the same bed On which you saw her every morning. Now it feels so cold like the body of the dead Because she's no longer there and now you're mourning. You start to remember those times Those times you yelled at her for no reason And called her fat and ugly. Those times she cursed herself for loving you And cried herself to sleep. You remember those nights Those nights you shared your bed with other women And rubbed it in her face. You grab the bottle of whiskey from the fridge You gulp down it's contents and beg for death. You wish you could jump off a bridge Cause you can't handle the burden of regret. If only you had appreciated her If only you had treated her like the queen she was At least now she's much happier, Safe and smiling in the arms of Santoz. 2 Likes |
Re: Regrets - A Poem. by VanNistelrooy24: 7:40pm On May 31, 2017 |
You take a walk to the room, the same roomIn which you made love to her on many nights.Now your face is covered with gloom Because she's no longer there and now you've lost all bragging rights. Oh my Shakira,
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Re: Regrets - A Poem. by Nobody: 7:44pm On May 31, 2017 |
VanNistelrooy24:Lol |
Re: Regrets - A Poem. by VanNistelrooy24: 7:47pm On May 31, 2017 |
Mhizgracie01:Really good poem you got right there. |
Re: Regrets - A Poem. by Nobody: 8:00pm On May 31, 2017 |
VanNistelrooy24:Thanks |
Re: Regrets - A Poem. by VanNistelrooy24: 8:03pm On May 31, 2017 |
Mhizgracie01:You welcum beautiful. How's Benin? |
Re: Regrets - A Poem. by Nobody: 8:26pm On May 31, 2017 |
VanNistelrooy24:Cold |
Re: Regrets - A Poem. by Jayson1: 8:30pm On May 31, 2017 |
Mhizgracie01:Eyah, it means no flying this night for those "Benin Pilots" |
Re: Regrets - A Poem. by Nobody: 8:32pm On May 31, 2017 |
Jayson1:Lol |
Re: Regrets - A Poem. by Jayson1: 8:37pm On May 31, 2017 |
Mhizgracie01:Onojeta? |
Re: Regrets - A Poem. by Nobody: 8:41pm On May 31, 2017 |
Jayson1:Yeah..any problem? |
Re: Regrets - A Poem. by Jayson1: 8:43pm On May 31, 2017 |
Mhizgracie01:No problem at all. You from Delta state right? |
Re: Regrets - A Poem. by Nobody: 8:45pm On May 31, 2017 |
Jayson1:Yeah |
Re: Regrets - A Poem. by Jayson1: 8:46pm On May 31, 2017 |
Mhizgracie01:No wonder you fine finish.
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Re: Regrets - A Poem. by Nobody: 8:47pm On May 31, 2017 |
Jayson1:Thanks |
Re: Regrets - A Poem. by Jayson1: 8:50pm On May 31, 2017 |
Mhizgracie01:You welcum. |
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