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Before Her Very Eyes by ghostwritter(m): 10:19am On Feb 19, 2018
From the stables of GHOST PRODUCTION in partnership with BLACK-SKULL ENTERTAINMENT and NAIRALAND STUDIO Presents...


BEFORE HER VERY EYES



Written by : Omotayo Taofiq Suleman
Email : osuleman11@gmail.com

If you've ever read LUCIFER'KEY, CORRIDOR OF HELL, THE DAY I DIED: APRIL 14, THIRTY-NINE SHADES OF ME, A CALL FROM THE GRAVE and many more from my stables, then you should expect nothing less from this thrilling, suspense-filled, investigative, very easy to read and carefully crafted piece (with less literary and grammatical yamayama). But before you guys read any further, it's not going to be free o. But I promise the read will be worth your pay.

Re: Before Her Very Eyes by Fazemood(m): 2:51pm On Feb 19, 2018
Waiting, pls mention me once this meal is ready 4 consumption sir, cool

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Re: Before Her Very Eyes by Slimberry123(f): 3:33pm On Feb 19, 2018
dearest ghostwritter, dont forget to mention me pls.. i booked d first row already.... Divepen1 ure sitting next to me

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Re: Before Her Very Eyes by Lotiababe(f): 4:16pm On Feb 19, 2018
[color=#770077][/color]I don cross my leg already. Ghost, am waiting

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Re: Before Her Very Eyes by Lotiababe(f): 4:17pm On Feb 19, 2018
[color=#770077][/color] I don cross my leg already. Ghost, am waiting

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Re: Before Her Very Eyes by ghostwritter(m): 9:53pm On Feb 19, 2018
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Prologue
A farmer was heading to his farm through a narrow path around the thick bush, his four children hurriedly walked behind him in close pace. It had rained heavily the night before and had left the ground very mushy for easy cultivation. While the farmer and his children kept matching on along the lonely path, one of the children made excuse into the bush to go ease himself as the others ignored him and forged ahead. While the young boy squirted and was at it, he turned to see something strange laying still beside him, he strained his eyes and had a closer look, he immediately screamed out so loud on realizing what it was.
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Five hours later, the scene of the footpath to the farm witnessed heavy presence of various security personnel, journalist and medical practitioners all doing their jobs. The lifeless body of a young woman had been found in the bush, a deep slash in her throat from ear to ear was a clear evidence for security officers that she had been gruesomely murdered many hours ago by probably a psychopath. Her mouth was covered with a cloth, her hands tied together with red fabric and her eyes were still wide open that one would have thought at a careless glance that she was alive.

“Any identification yet?” Detective Agnes a tall dark lady asked while she walked up to a man who was standing close enough in observing the dead woman within the taped area.

“I’m afraid yes, and it’s no good news” Detective Imran replied without turning back. He already knew who it was merely by the pitchy voice. He had earlier put a call to Agnes his partner telling her to come meet him at the scene as quick as possible.

“Wow! This is bad” she exclaimed after seeing the corpse that had turned a sea blue-green color, making it difficult to recognize the victim even at a closer look. Her skin had molded much like a burnt old bread, flies buzzing around the swollen body that laid carelessly. It oozed so badly like there are a million dead and rotten rats around. The smell got into Agnes throat and she could almost taste the thick stench hanging in the air. She had the urge to literally run to find some fresh air as she was sure the horrific image would hunt her for weeks. “Who is she?” she managed to asked as she covered her nose with a handkerchief.

“It’s Ashley Shida” Another voice from beside Agnes replied, sounding so convinced. She quickly turned and saw a young man standing beside her with a small camera and was busy taking pictures. Agnes concluded he must be a journalist, probably a freelance judging by his boyish and bookish outfit.

“And who is Ashley Shida?” she inquired.

The young journalist appeared so surprised by the question, “You mean you don’t know Ashley Shida of the campus radio?” the young man inquired.

Agnes slowly shook her head trying hard to remember if she had ever listened to the campus radio or any of its kind at late, as she had always been busy.

“She is also the deputy governor’s daughter” Imran chipped in, he knew Agnes would be quick to relate to that. He wasn’t surprise when he saw her froze with shock all over her face.

“You mean Rashidat Koker? She asked with her eyes widen in horror and a heart wishing it wasn’t true.

“Yes” both men chorus.

One day after Shida’s death
The news of the gruesome murder of the young pretty On-air sweet personality of the campus radio and also the only daughter of the deputy governor soon went round the entire city, every media house made it a breaking news as soon as possible, everyone who knew the famous Ashley Shida really missed her for her sweet, soothing and witty character on the campus radio. Majority of the newspapers had a beautiful image of her and had beside it another one taken from the crime scene with a bold caption ‘Who killed our radio sweetheart?’
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Few hours ago, the daughter of the deputy governor chief Moshood Koker was declared missing after her car was seen abandoned on the road, it was made a top priority case by the police and other security agencies within and outside the state. The case was handed over to Imran and Agnes the two detectives in the state. They had applied every possible means to locate her but it had appeared fruitless not until she was later found dead.

An autopsy report submitted by the forensic pathologist to detective Agnes showed a deep, oblique, long incised injury was found on the front neck. There were no hesitant or defense injuries, the primary cause of death was cut throat. The left end of the injury started below the ear at upper third of the neck and deepened gradually with severance of the left carotid artery. The right sided end of the injury was at the mid third of the neck with a tail abrasion and the lungs showed aspiration of blood.

“My goodness!” Agnes banged her table in disbelieve, she had just read through the autopsy report and from it she deduced Ashley Shida had been a month pregnant. She ran off to Imran’s office and told him about it, he brushed through the report....

...if you wish to continue with this story, kindly or (unkindly) send with your email an Etisalat airtime worth 200 naira into this email (osuleman11@gmail.com) and you will have the completed novel sent into your box within an hour of confirmation. Trust me.
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Re: Before Her Very Eyes by ghostwritter(m): 11:09pm On Feb 19, 2018
And also...

Fazemood Slimberry123 Lotiababe Divepen1 Adesina12, Aitee1, soleski01, Creeza, Lawlahdey, sexybbstar, jagugu88li, ADECULATE, Amenaghwon, okorro1, Simplebea, Nmaglit,, osleek, xamster, sirOrubebe, Bobbybube, julietogbo, Osman1966, chii8, tonye72, Winters22, omamush, Twinkle004, debra101, samyfreshsmooth, mozb, prinxxdave, cutietee, kinah, IamLukas, harameede99, ladySuperb, dominicnuel, sod09, chara019, teel123, Pureheart91, Mobecs, latbas, Babsopey, opal4real, Mobecs, latbas, AndyAustin, kingsmith4, ladyverere, KunkeAkinola, mrsuccessful, JMK9600, Michelle55, Audrinakane, Smooth278, Ashley87, Sonamjs, orluuchi, brighttech95, DavidPaul, Kaycee625, Perfectionist11, skillz121, samwise180, Lastking147, suffy834, Prinxxdave, emmynku, aryan28, bossy512, nikz, BlissfulJef, Michelle55, sunshine46, IemFava, segunjowo, harrygold, estie92, clitx, tusinsola, yusufibrahim, Oyindawealth, harunablezin, EpBerezi, chade, bentube, JeffreyJamez, boffinjay, chukslawrence, Akposb, yewande1234, Ikdbabie, dime
Re: Before Her Very Eyes by ladyverere(f): 8:44am On Feb 20, 2018
ghostwritter:
And also...

Fazemood Slimberry123 Lotiababe Divepen1 Adesina12, Aitee1, soleski01, Creeza, Lawlahdey, sexybbstar, jagugu88li, ADECULATE, Amenaghwon, okorro1, Simplebea, Nmaglit,, osleek, xamster, sirOrubebe, Bobbybube, julietogbo, Osman1966, chii8, tonye72, Winters22, omamush, Twinkle004, debra101, samyfreshsmooth, mozb, prinxxdave, cutietee, kinah, IamLukas, harameede99, ladySuperb, dominicnuel, sod09, chara019, teel123, Pureheart91, Mobecs, latbas, Babsopey, opal4real, Mobecs, latbas, AndyAustin, kingsmith4, ladyverere, KunkeAkinola, mrsuccessful, JMK9600, Michelle55, Audrinakane, Smooth278, Ashley87, Sonamjs, orluuchi, brighttech95, DavidPaul, Kaycee625, Perfectionist11, skillz121, samwise180, Lastking147, suffy834, Prinxxdave, emmynku, aryan28, bossy512, nikz, BlissfulJef, Michelle55, sunshine46, IemFava, segunjowo, harrygold, estie92, clitx, tusinsola, yusufibrahim, Oyindawealth, harunablezin, EpBerezi, chade, bentube, JeffreyJamez, boffinjay, chukslawrence, Akposb, yewande1234, Ikdbabie, dime

Honestly ghostwriter you sabi tease person well well o. After you don hook person finish, you no go finish wetin you start. But I still find myself addicted to your stories.

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Re: Before Her Very Eyes by Slimberry123(f): 9:25am On Feb 20, 2018
ghostwritter:
And also...

Fazemood Slimberry123 Lotiababe Divepen1 Adesina12, Aitee1, soleski01, Creeza, Lawlahdey, sexybbstar, jagugu88li, ADECULATE, Amenaghwon, okorro1, Simplebea, Nmaglit,, osleek, xamster, sirOrubebe, Bobbybube, julietogbo, Osman1966, chii8, tonye72, Winters22, omamush, Twinkle004, debra101, samyfreshsmooth, mozb, prinxxdave, cutietee, kinah, IamLukas, harameede99, ladySuperb, dominicnuel, sod09, chara019, teel123, Pureheart91, Mobecs, latbas, Babsopey, opal4real, Mobecs, latbas, AndyAustin, kingsmith4, ladyverere, KunkeAkinola, mrsuccessful, JMK9600, Michelle55, Audrinakane, Smooth278, Ashley87, Sonamjs, orluuchi, brighttech95, DavidPaul, Kaycee625, Perfectionist11, skillz121, samwise180, Lastking147, suffy834, Prinxxdave, emmynku, aryan28, bossy512, nikz, BlissfulJef, Michelle55, sunshine46, IemFava, segunjowo, harrygold, estie92, clitx, tusinsola, yusufibrahim, Oyindawealth, harunablezin, EpBerezi, chade, bentube, JeffreyJamez, boffinjay, chukslawrence, Akposb, yewande123, Ikdbabie, dime

Thanks for d mention... i will definitely send the email coz i must finish d novel... more creativity to ur genius mind
Re: Before Her Very Eyes by Fazemood(m): 11:47am On Feb 20, 2018
Thanks man for the mention, I'm gonna do that.
Re: Before Her Very Eyes by youngoracle: 12:55pm On Feb 20, 2018
Prof. ghost pls check ur email, I haf sent d card around 10:30am and I neva see anything for mail. Wetin dey happen?
I must follow this story to the very end...I love crime story.
Re: Before Her Very Eyes by ghostwritter(m): 5:18pm On Feb 20, 2018
youngoracle:
Prof. ghost pls check ur email, I haf sent d card around 10:30am and I neva see anything for mail. Wetin dey happen?
I must follow this story to the very end...I love crime story.
I'm so sorry, pls forgive me. I had sent it moments ago. I hope you will find it intresting.
Re: Before Her Very Eyes by ghostwritter(m): 5:48pm On Feb 20, 2018
ladyverere:


Honestly ghostwriter you sabi tease person well well o. After you don hook person finish, you no go finish wetin you start. But I still find myself addicted to your stories.
very nice to hear from u my love. Truth be told, I don't even like this idea but I thought it wise to have a list (emails) of my own true fans who will henceforth have exclusive opportunity to more wonderful stories to come from my stables this 2018 for free...
Re: Before Her Very Eyes by sussybae(f): 6:14pm On Feb 20, 2018
[quote author=ghostwritter post=65231962]
very nice to hear from u my love. Truth be told, I don't even like this idea but I thought it wise to have a list (emails) of my own true fans who will henceforth have exclusive opportunity to more wonderful stories to come from my stables this .......
......
Re: Before Her Very Eyes by ghettochild(m): 8:02am On Feb 21, 2018
ghostwriter that couldnt finish a previous horror flick abt d sheihk wt mysterious power. Is that one a writer? Better expect him to finish dis one.
Re: Before Her Very Eyes by youngoracle: 10:28am On Feb 21, 2018
ghostwritter:

I'm so sorry, pls forgive me. I had sent it moments ago. I hope you will find it intresting.

I swear to god 'intresting' is an understatement. I no fit sleep until i read am finish. It feels i was watching an advanced naija version of How To Get Away With Murder. The way and manner u described how shida died towards the end got me thinking u must be a psychopath in real life, bros i dey fear u. But my only problem is that u never explained what later happened to Moshood for killing Dupe and Bridget...or does it haf a part2.
Re: Before Her Very Eyes by Alsini6(m): 3:18pm On Feb 21, 2018
CORRIDOR OF HELL and LUCIFERS KEY is thr anyway I can get d complete story frm u, nt for free ofcus
Re: Before Her Very Eyes by ghostwritter(m): 6:28pm On Feb 24, 2018
Alsini6:
CORRIDOR OF HELL and LUCIFERS KEY is thr anyway I can get d complete story frm u, nt for free ofcus

send a message to my mail above.
Re: Before Her Very Eyes by ghostwritter(m): 6:51pm On Feb 24, 2018
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Re: Before Her Very Eyes by ladyverere(f): 9:21pm On Feb 25, 2018
ghostwritter:

very nice to hear from u my love. Truth be told, I don't even like this idea but I thought it wise to have a list (emails) of my own true fans who will henceforth have exclusive opportunity to more wonderful stories to come from my stables this 2018 for free...

Really? Yay. Look at me shinning my 32. I hope I'll make that list. Can't wait.

BTW I will send the card and email .I must finish this story.
Re: Before Her Very Eyes by Lotiababe(f): 10:47pm On Feb 25, 2018
thanks for the mention, Ghost. I will definitely sent it just wait for me,okay?
Re: Before Her Very Eyes by Adesina12: 9:48pm On Mar 01, 2018
ghostwritter:
And also...

Fazemood Slimberry123 Lotiababe Divepen1 Adesina12, Aitee1, soleski01, Creeza, Lawlahdey, sexybbstar, jagugu88li, ADECULATE, Amenaghwon, okorro1, Simplebea, Nmaglit,, osleek, xamster, sirOrubebe, Bobbybube, julietogbo, Osman1966, chii8, tonye72, Winters22, omamush, Twinkle004, debra101, samyfreshsmooth, mozb, prinxxdave, cutietee, kinah, IamLukas, harameede99, ladySuperb, dominicnuel, sod09, chara019, teel123, Pureheart91, Mobecs, latbas, Babsopey, opal4real, Mobecs, latbas, AndyAustin, kingsmith4, ladyverere, KunkeAkinola, mrsuccessful, JMK9600, Michelle55, Audrinakane, Smooth278, Ashley87, Sonamjs, orluuchi, brighttech95, DavidPaul, Kaycee625, Perfectionist11, skillz121, samwise180, Lastking147, suffy834, Prinxxdave, emmynku, aryan28, bossy512, nikz, BlissfulJef, Michelle55, sunshine46, IemFava, segunjowo, harrygold, estie92, clitx, tusinsola, yusufibrahim, Oyindawealth, harunablezin, EpBerezi, chade, bentube, JeffreyJamez, boffinjay, chukslawrence, Akposb, yewande1234, Ikdbabie, dime

Thanks for invitation
Sweet hot popcorn for you
Re: Before Her Very Eyes by philoedu: 7:17am On Mar 03, 2018
Great indeed,keep it !!!
Re: Before Her Very Eyes by EnEnPeecee: 8:19am On Mar 03, 2018
is that all
Re: Before Her Very Eyes by blesoh(f): 8:50am On Mar 03, 2018
Come and finish what you started
Re: Before Her Very Eyes by itsandi(m): 5:42pm On Mar 03, 2018
Interesting already... Interesting smiley Enjoy other interesting stories on Tushstories via

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#Read!
Re: Before Her Very Eyes by promgurlP(f): 7:49pm On Mar 04, 2018
Just finished reading the story and it was all I had expected! I just wish the deputy-governor had paid for he's sins too but it doesn't need to have a cliché ending every time. You're truly gifted and I look forward to more of your works. Cheers kiss

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Re: Before Her Very Eyes by Iraug(m): 6:44am On Mar 06, 2018
If u haven't read d full story u re missing mehn..! I wasn't expecting anything less from Mr Ghost � though. I would like to meet you one on one one day. More ink to ur pen.

One would have thought it's Henry dat kills Maxwell and shida. U re something else with d way u twist �
ur stories. But what later become of Mrs Bridget killers

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