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Re: The Hole In The Wall by WAACUT(m): 8:01pm On Nov 21, 2018
SOULOHO. YOU NA BUHARI.... PROMISE AND FAIL TOO BAD
Re: The Hole In The Wall by do4luv14(m): 5:19pm On Nov 22, 2018
WAACUT:
SOULOHO. YOU NA BUHARI.... PROMISE AND FAIL TOO BAD


hahahahahahahaha
Re: The Hole In The Wall by souloho19(m): 10:36pm On Nov 22, 2018
IAmkingoludav:
Jesutofunmi won

or so i thought

Eberechi24:

Yea, we won cheesy
Soul, come and pay tithe.
Thanks to us for voting grin

Yea she did, thanks to you all that turned up for me. Cos I already made enough mouth that I have people that can turn it around grin
And you guys didn't let me down. Jah bless

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Re: The Hole In The Wall by souloho19(m): 10:45pm On Nov 22, 2018
WAACUT:
SOULOHO. YOU NA BUHARI.... PROMISE AND FAIL TOO BAD

Bro these words are deep and extremely hurtful grin

But on a serious note, my method of writing is such that when I sit down to write, the idea of the story starts flowing, which is why most times it changes direction anyhow. When I say I would update tonight it means I would sit down and write tonight, that's why most times the update drops 12am or even 2am cos the storyline may head in a direction and I'd need to do some research. Sometimes a few minutes of Google may take care of it, other times it has to go deeper than that. So pls don't think I'm starving you guys updates on purpose. I've rushed updates in the past, this same story and going over it again I saw so many loopholes, not necessarily grammatical, I mean like plot wise, a lot of connecting dots I should have laid the groundwork for but which I skipped.

Then again I can understand that you look forward to the updates and that can only be because you enjoy the story so I'm glad about that and I tender my apology for "promising and failing"

After all these plenty talk, the update is not still ready grin
But it would be worth it, trust me.
Jah bless

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Re: The Hole In The Wall by okeyben10: 11:14pm On Nov 22, 2018
yuh welcome boss.

for our own share of d win make d update longggggggg such that you'd need to post 3times tongue
Re: The Hole In The Wall by arrestdarrester: 11:28pm On Nov 22, 2018
souloho19:




Yea she did, thanks to you all that turned up for me. Cos I already made enough mouth that I have people that can turn it around grin
And you guys didn't let me down. Jah bless

Good thing she won. I voted and sent it to guys who didn't ask me anything before voting as 'directed'. Now that is trust.

And talking about trust, you've won it here Soul. It takes much more to keep it. I'm sure you're also reading the closures of great stories and already making a decision on how you want "the hole in the wall" to 'end'.
Re: The Hole In The Wall by Eberechi24(f): 9:05am On Nov 23, 2018
okeyben10:
yuh welcome boss.

for our own share of d win make d update longggggggg such that you'd need to post 3times tongue
Seconded!! 3 update at a go cheesy

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Re: The Hole In The Wall by dimssy(m): 9:24am On Nov 23, 2018
I feel you, bro.
Take your time, you know to cook the suspense up.

And at the same time bro, fast forward the time, so that the present suspense won't kill by the time the next update is ready.

So when make them boys dey expect?
souloho19:


Bro these words are deep and extremely hurtful grin

But on a serious note, my method of writing is such that when I sit down to write, the idea of the story starts flowing, which is why most times it changes direction anyhow. When I say I would update tonight it means I would sit down and write tonight, that's why most times the update drops 12am or even 2am cos the storyline may head in a direction and I'd need to do some research. Sometimes a few minutes of Google may take care of it, other times it has to go deeper than that. So pls don't think I'm starving you guys updates on purpose. I've rushed updates in the past, this same story and going over it again I saw so many loopholes, not necessarily grammatical, I mean like plot wise, a lot of connecting dots I should have laid the groundwork for but which I skipped.

Then again I can understand that you look forward to the updates and that can only be because you enjoy the story so I'm glad about that and I tender my apology for "promising and failing"

After all these plenty talk, the update is not still ready grin
But it would be worth it, trust me.
Jah bless
Re: The Hole In The Wall by honourable356(m): 10:13am On Nov 23, 2018
Souloho19 the man who knew his soup and the exact time to add maggi or pepper.

....That awkward moment when you suddenly drop an update to please the ever demanding audience only to read it again and discovered that you erred here and there as in the direction you want the story to head.

Then trying to make a next update to fits or flows accurately with the already new direction is a huge work on its own...

You level of writing is extremely close to that of the kings or probably still up there with them...

so

Calm down dude and do your things majestically.
Soar on confidently also and ..
Grow from strength to strength for your story has already begun!

Ladies and gentlemen....wishing you all a great weekend ahead!

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Re: The Hole In The Wall by donteanz(m): 3:04pm On Nov 24, 2018
Take Your Time To Serve The Best Of Your Imagination Bro
Re: The Hole In The Wall by iamloyalty(f): 6:48pm On Nov 24, 2018
just do the needful when is time.
Re: The Hole In The Wall by HelenBee(f): 12:01am On Nov 25, 2018
I trust you Souloho19

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Re: The Hole In The Wall by Ann2012(f): 8:52am On Nov 25, 2018
Souloho19, we still dey wait oooo

Happy Sunday
Re: The Hole In The Wall by mitchelljnr(m): 5:03pm On Nov 25, 2018
souloho19 pls come and give us update
Re: The Hole In The Wall by mimilight: 12:40pm On Nov 26, 2018
soul update is taking too long nah. Abeg try update soon
Re: The Hole In The Wall by trusted(m): 10:41pm On Nov 26, 2018
souloho19:
The next update should drop either tonight or probably tomorrow, barring unforseen circumstances.
But in the main time I need your help for a little voting exercise.

This writer has been helpful in exchanging creative ideas and giving me tips to improve in aspects like dialogue construction and the rest. For example I never knew the importance of a (comma) in a dialogue tag. Like say: the old man shook his head sadly, "I heard an explosion killed the man and woman," he said, his voice dripping with emotion. Normally I didn't even know of this and so many more things I'm now learning because it was brought to my attention.

Anyway, before this post turns to update grin
Let me paste the link here.

Hi guys.

I'm a participant in the *Short Story Champions League* and I need your votes to qualify. No sign up needed. Just scroll to the bottom of the page, click on my name and vote. Feel free to read my story, it's of a different kind... � Click the link below:

https://swiftspeededu.com:443/short-story-champions-league-competition-commences-kelechi-odoemelam-vs/

Jesutofunmi Fekoya
Jemma

Please guys vote for the second story, the one about Sherlock Holmes by the second writer, Jesutofunmi. Jah bless you.

Hint:

At the bolded. So both Andy and the Lady Repoter were killed in the explosion. Too saaaaaddddd cry

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Re: The Hole In The Wall by KpagoGIN(m): 8:06am On Nov 27, 2018
trusted:


Hint:

At the bolded. So both Andy and the Lady Repoter were killed in the explosion. Too saaaaaddddd cry
You are smart........reading in between the lines I see.

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Re: The Hole In The Wall by wintersnow(m): 9:36am On Nov 28, 2018
souloho19:


Cool designs bro wink

Thanks boss
Re: The Hole In The Wall by Leesah(f): 6:34pm On Nov 28, 2018
souloho19.... Come and update nah ahbi light4life didn't allow you I know planning a wedding is stressful but please update cry
Light4life, beg him to update na you've been holding him o. 6
Re: The Hole In The Wall by light4life(f): 6:59pm On Nov 28, 2018
Leesah:
souloho19.... Come and update nah ahbi light4life didn't allow you I know planning a wedding is stressful but please update cry
Light4life, beg him to update na you've been holding him o. 6

LOL!!!!! Leesah, I dunno what you're talking about oo... I am not Souloho19's wedding planner, so I can't hold him cheesy
Re: The Hole In The Wall by Leesah(f): 7:45pm On Nov 28, 2018
light4life:


LOL!!!!! Leesah, I dunno what you're talking about oo... I am not Souloho19's wedding planner, so I can't hold him cheesy
How would you agree to know what I am talking about? Souloho19 should answer me and not you.

When are we saving the date?? I have the venue, color, MC, caterers, pastor and the rest.
Re: The Hole In The Wall by light4life(f): 9:12pm On Nov 28, 2018
lipsrsealed Souloho19!!!!! please coman update oo....see how lack of updates are making your silent fans to run wild with imagination cheesy cheesy...please!!!!!!
Re: The Hole In The Wall by Leesah(f): 7:17pm On Nov 29, 2018
light4life:
lipsrsealed Souloho19!!!!! please coman update oo....see how lack of updates are making your silent fans to run wild with imagination cheesy cheesy...please!!!!!!
It's not By shouting here. You know what to do else sad
Re: The Hole In The Wall by queenitee(f): 9:24pm On Nov 29, 2018
dimssy:
Dear Uncle Souloho19,
It is with a great heart that I welcome you back.
Thank you for consciously putting us in mind and updating this wonderful piece.
On behalf of the Readers Association of Nairaland (RAN), thank you so much.
Also, don't forget to give us more updates soonest


Regards,
Dimssy
Cc: queenitee (Vice president, RAN)
Bcc: Mhizgrracie01 (Fellow, RAN)
Hello o, Mr President and Other Members of the association
Re: The Hole In The Wall by souloho19(m): 10:14pm On Nov 29, 2018
My people sabali biko....there's a strong possibility this story would be ending this weekend so I don't want to rush eh...
@Leesah @light4life you guys weldone o grin

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Re: The Hole In The Wall by souloho19(m): 10:15pm On Nov 29, 2018
honourable356:
Souloho19 the man who knew his soup and the exact time to add maggi or pepper.

....That awkward moment when you suddenly drop an update to please the ever demanding audience only to read it again and discovered that you erred here and there as in the direction you want the story to head.

Then trying to make a next update to fits or flows accurately with the already new direction is a huge work on its own...

You level of writing is extremely close to that of the kings or probably still up there with them...

so

Calm down dude and do your things majestically.
Soar on confidently also and ..
Grow from strength to strength for your story has already begun!

Ladies and gentlemen....wishing you all a great weekend ahead!

Thanks boss, you're deeply appreciated
Re: The Hole In The Wall by Oroolorun(m): 10:53pm On Nov 29, 2018
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souloho19:
there's a strong possibility this story would be ending this weekend

You don start again Oga Souloho19, the last time you told us something like this in Okrika, pian pian pian, you turned DELAY to HOLE.
Hope you are not about to turn OKRIKA to ABA?
When that won't be a bad ideal. At least we wan know how Paul (the son of the devil) would strike and what would become of the white man.
I can't just wait.

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Re: The Hole In The Wall by dimssy(m): 10:56pm On Nov 29, 2018
Madam VP, how you dey?
queenitee:

Hello o, Mr President and Other Members of the association
Re: The Hole In The Wall by ernesty20(m): 11:49pm On Nov 29, 2018
queenitee:
Hello o, Mr President and Other Members of the association
rubbish
Re: The Hole In The Wall by Leesah(f): 10:58am On Nov 30, 2018
souloho19:
My people sabali biko....there's a strong possibility this story would be ending this weekend so I don't want to rush eh...
@Leesah @light4life you guys weldone o grin

End ke cry cry cry.. Weldone to you for the suspense o... i know who to deal with
Re: The Hole In The Wall by queenitee(f): 9:37pm On Nov 30, 2018
dimssy:
Madam VP, how you dey?
I'm fine o and you?
Re: The Hole In The Wall by EbonyQueen001(f): 10:29pm On Dec 03, 2018
Wow!
This is so captivating.
I still dey follow you.
Kudos bros

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