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A Slave To The Arse by LifeofEl(m): 12:38pm On Oct 14, 2018
Two round butt on each side
Firm and enticing
One gander at it and all is lost
You become another being



Time and money becomes a thing
Just for a taste
In the field of desire, the gateway to where
Delilah calleth
Woe to the thousands who hear the call



For her you do anything and everything
Like a lonely puppy in need of affection
All for two cheeks, you lose everything on it
Just for a taste



You always come back to where it all began
The middle of the thigh that changeth destiny
The honey pot they call it
Both parties in need of something



A one sided lust in the tale of the arse
Seeking favour of an inevitable sand
The arse with it's fame
The arse speaks and you keep quiet



You deny all when it calleth
Losing yourself in the tale
Just don't get lost, it is hard to get back
In the tale of the arse.



By: ADEBAYO DANIEL DAMILOLA

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Re: A Slave To The Arse by skipper9526: 6:59am On Oct 24, 2018
Nice one... Great work...( FTC) DEDICATION goes to regulars in this forum

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Re: A Slave To The Arse by Nobody: 7:03am On Oct 24, 2018
cheesy

Re: A Slave To The Arse by NaijaFutbol: 7:19am On Oct 24, 2018
Arse
Re: A Slave To The Arse by Loveworld12: 7:20am On Oct 24, 2018
skipper9526:
Nice one... Great work...( FTC) DEDICATION goes to regulars in this forum

Re: A Slave To The Arse by Ksslib(m): 7:21am On Oct 24, 2018
beautiful work

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Re: A Slave To The Arse by jnrbayano(m): 7:22am On Oct 24, 2018
cheesy cheesy cheesy
Re: A Slave To The Arse by Heywhizzy(m): 7:35am On Oct 24, 2018
Ayam not understanding, what kinda poem is this



The only slave to the arse I know was Arsene Wenger
Re: A Slave To The Arse by HajimeSaito(m): 7:40am On Oct 24, 2018
How did a poem titled "Slave to the arse" make it to nl's frontpage? Osewa must be desperate for traffic.
Re: A Slave To The Arse by nNEOo(m): 7:44am On Oct 24, 2018
HajimeSaito:
How did a poem titled "Slave to the arse" make it to nl's frontpage? Osewa must be desperate for traffic.




We need more of this on fp so ppl like you can deactivate.
Re: A Slave To The Arse by mozona(m): 8:33am On Oct 24, 2018
nice poetic writing....pouring out enough message

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Re: A Slave To The Arse by JeromeBlack: 8:33am On Oct 24, 2018
Lol...a slave to the arse.


Sex makes the world go round
Re: A Slave To The Arse by HajimeSaito(m): 11:33am On Oct 24, 2018
nNEOo:





We need more of this on fp so ppl like you can deactivate.

I can see this one's brain has already deactivated even without external stimulus. Blame his parents.
Re: A Slave To The Arse by wittytezzy(m): 11:39am On Oct 24, 2018
Could the author please help demystify the lines? An analysis to help reveal its inner meanings? Much as I like to pay attention to poems, I think poets have an extra task of analysing their works for optimum communication of their ideas
Re: A Slave To The Arse by Nobody: 1:58pm On Oct 24, 2018
Let me make justification to its meaning, I realised some people don't really love poems! I'm a great fan of poetic elements. See reading poems makes you understand life in a different form! ... well, least I should talk about this.


Here, the poem is talking about the *Lust* of the male gender towards the female gender and yes, he used the word 'arse' to describe the female gender. So let us all agree that part of the Lust is centred around the female's waist towards the leg!




I can't but admit the fact that Nairaland Moderators are so intelligent to have brought this calibre poem on the front page!


Two round butt on each side
Firm and enticing
One gander at it and all is lost
You become another being

A very firm 'two round butt' of a female cannot but entice a young man, well of course good part of the older men too. some even get sexually awoken without seeing the 'butt' bearer's face)!
'One gander at it and all is lost
You become another being'


You cant but admit that a glance at the good butt can make driver lose his driving license! Your LUST part if you immediately takes over hence 'you become another being'


Time and money becomes a thing

Just for a taste

In the field of desire, the gateway to where

Delilah calleth

Woe to the thousands who hear the call

The poet tries to explain how money and time is been lost by men who lust after females 'just for a taste'!
He further likened the female as the 'field of desires' for every man who lust after having sex with, he then asked a rhetorical question.... the gateway to where( I see he wouldn't want to attach a religious sentiment)

Delilah calleth
Woe to the thousands who hear the call
'Delilah calleth'
Delilah here means 'death', every lust yet, woe to as many who wants it delilah is a woman potrayed in the bible as the Achilles heels of the powerful Samson! Of course she caused Samson his power and his life on a combo!


For her you do anything and everything
Like a lonely puppy in need of affection
All for two cheeks, you lose everything on it
Just for a taste

Here the poet tries to explain why every man who lust after sexual escapades with with ladies will end up doing 'anything and everything' for her.

The poet further explained how a man who wants to get the attention of a woman would do everything just to appear good and acceptable to her!

The poet wants us to understand by likening the man to a puppy in need of love and could play with everybody!
'All for two cheeks', cheeks here is still referred to the the butt! It looks so much like the face cheek, doesn't it?


You always come back to where it all began
The middle of the thigh that changeth destiny
The honey pot they call it
Both parties in need of something

We all understand that life starts in between the legs of our mothers, yet he explained what the place does to a man who lusts after it that it changes destiny! He uses the poular word it is called 'Honey pot'
The first party here is the man who needs sex in return for money his money and time, the woman is the second party who wants.....


A one sided lust in the tale of the arse
Seeking favour of an inevitable sand
The arse with it's fame
The arse speaks and you keep quiet
Here the poet tries to explain why the lust of woman is just all in vain. We all agree that the who big and small butts are nothing but foods to worms when we finally get into the ground! As notorious as the 'arse' is, when the a lady ask his suitor to keep quiet, they does that without much ado, just because they haven't gotten the taste yet!


You deny all when it calleth
Losing yourself in the tale
Just don't get lost, it is hard to get back
In the tale of the arse.

The funny thing about life is thay whenever we are about taking a wrong step, we still all get the conscience that speaks a lot to us and yet most people would feign ignorance to it and thereby 'losing the mind and reasoning to its tale'. The poet wants us to understand why it is hard to get back when we are truly lost into the dilemma that 'arse' causes! Infact some are even dead or forgotten in the prison, some not for what they are guilty of!
So many tale of what 'arse' has done to people. Yes, so many untold stories!

Big shout out to
ADEBAYO DANIEL DAMILOLA (poet)

Simplified by Wealth Abiodun Itunu (Drabeey).

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Re: A Slave To The Arse by LifeofEl(m): 12:22am On Oct 25, 2018
Thanks a lot fam, there's no much better explanation than this.
Re: A Slave To The Arse by Pusyiter(m): 5:18pm On Oct 25, 2018
The Rhythm is great
The rhyme is fair
Line content/message, great
Need more of repetition of the subject matter and increase in the rhyme scheme

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Re: A Slave To The Arse by Twoclans(f): 6:05pm On Oct 25, 2018
Lefulefu come and read this poem wink

@OP nice work ,I was just giggling like a goat cheesy

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Re: A Slave To The Arse by Nobody: 6:54pm On Oct 25, 2018
LifeofEl:
Two round butt on each side
Firm and enticing
One gander at it and all is lost
You become another being



Time and money becomes a thing
Just for a taste
In the field of desire, the gateway to where
Delilah calleth
Woe to the thousands who hear the call



For her you do anything and everything
Like a lonely puppy in need of affection
All for two cheeks, you lose everything on it
Just for a taste



You always come back to where it all began
The middle of the thigh that changeth destiny
The honey pot they call it
Both parties in need of something



A one sided lust in the tale of the arse
Seeking favour of an inevitable sand
The arse with it's fame
The arse speaks and you keep quiet



You deny all when it calleth
Losing yourself in the tale
Just don't get lost, it is hard to get back
In the tale of the arse.



By: ADEBAYO DANIEL DAMILOLA
gbam! gbam!! gbam!!! gbammmmm!!
u are goood grin
u derserve this gift grin grin

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Re: A Slave To The Arse by Nobody: 6:58pm On Oct 25, 2018
Twoclans:
Lefulefu come and read this poem wink

@OP nice work ,I was just giggling like a goat cheesy
i love d poem like hell
so lomantic cheesy

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Re: A Slave To The Arse by LifeofEl(m): 6:51am On Oct 29, 2018
Thanks man...The inspiration for it tho���

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