Hi friends, can you use "the sun dances in your eyes" to write a poem if u can pls post it here and u will be doing me a great favour.

Hi Deshalom,
This is what I have about what you asked
I hope it is not already too late
Hope it sounds like what you want.
Enjoy

The Sun Dances In Your Eyes
As written by Ceebase

Wife, I’ll tell you about your eyes
As exquisite as marble carved on ice
Beneath the open skies
The sun dances in your eyes

Yes, the sun dances in your eyes
Beautifully and giddy as butterflies
I think I hear as it cries
The sun dances in your eyes

You’ve got the most beautiful smile
Complimenting the fire in your eyes
Stretching, making that beautiful face an artistic prize
The sun dances in your eyes

Should I tell a tale of lies
About my gray hair and the dyes
You’re the woman of my younger days
The sun dances in your eyes

Not by powers nor might
If I should roll across miles of mire
Or swim across rivers of fire,
I’ll never tire, gazing into your eyes
The sun dances in your eyes

The sun in your eyes
It attacks me like missiles
Contentedly I sigh,
The sun dances in your eyes

For me a glass scotch on the rocks
And a plate of French fries
For you two chicken pies
And a bottle of Smirnoff ice
While you get the foods and drinks
I’ll continue about your eyes on ink,
The sun dances in your eyes

Yes we are old, but very much young at heart
You are the woman after my heart
The mother of my kids and priestess of my loins
The sun dances in your eyes

You raised my sons and made us proud of each other
My daughter you taught the beauty of fires
Fires to captivate another
Woman, thou art of great styles
The sun dances in your eyes

Our kids are all grown
Married and in their own homes
It’s just the two of us again
Saying hi, never saying bye
Whilst the sun dances in your eye

I was a firefighter
A fireman fighting fires
But how do I fight these fireworks?
The sun dancing in your eyes

Through my years of firefighting
Saving lives and bodies from burning buildings
One fire I dared not fight
The fiery sun dancing in your eyes

Nigh draws the night
Here we sit in twilight
Waiting the dusk and fireflies
Yet, the sun dances in your eyes

I could talk all day about your eyes
As exquisite as marble carved from ice
Never minding time as it flies
Like ghouls beneath the open skies
But tomorrow in ambush lies
Moving towards dawn with great strides
While I sleep, I’ll dream again as other nights
The sun dancing in your eyes

Wow wow wow wow, that was blastin cbase, gawd, dat was a fabolous piece, u deserve a laurel for it. That realy was a master piece.
Chop knockle mehn

lets just get the fun out of this, i try my best i cook out somfin now n post it below dis one, and wud b xpectin oda contribution. I like d way cbase took the challenge, its sensational, aite lets crack em nuts.

*THE SUN DANCES IN UR EYEZ*

nne, i have been watching u from afar

4rm that distance i saw d twinklin of a star

how come?? Wait! Should that be fire flies

i got closer and saw the sun dancin in ur eyes

who are u i stuttered and ask

the rays emittin could make even cupid bask

i tot to myself, could she be an angel

a pearl, a treasure, oh it struck me mother earth's jewel

but how come the sun was dancing in eyes

nope, i fink u must be a breed of some paradise

God! Yea God, u must be heaven sent

does it mean God has sent u to me as a present?

The way she looked at me i knew she loved me

what?? Me?? Dia was no dancin sun in my life but she gbadu me

my val, lemme tell u straight my mind

its clear u are one one of a kind

dark me, ur dancin sun eyes came findin'

lookin at tchu, i knew sun love was blindin

take my hands and lemme die lookin into ur eyes balls

just like an unendin flame in paradise halls

u brighten my days with ur sun rays

and radiate my ways with ur eyes always


oh my seraphic dear

the sun in ur eyz wif the rainbow, what a pair

dis mystery is hard to unravel

did i say ur smile was a marvel

gosh! I must have to take u as my val

its end time, i need u for my survival

ur hotnes made me froze to zero

can't imagine myself being ur romeo

i breath u wif every breath i take

wif out u my world wud b a mistake

ur lighten the darkest part of me

locked up in u is when i feel free

coz the dancin sun in ur eyes

brings me freedom 4rm al my latent lies

the sun dancing in ur eyes

makes agkow my darky skies

havin u wif me up in the sky i cant fall

wif the storms of life ragin i stand tall

d dancin sun in u became my inner strength

the strength of being me at any length

my sun shine i crave u to my core

i never realy existed without u

there was no life before

not until u came dancin thru

i see u and my heart blaze

in ur sunny eyes forever i wana gaze

even if it makes me loose my sight


the dancin sun in ur eyes would remain my light

who cares whether there is nitefall

who cares if there is darknes atall

all i need is the dancin sun in ur eyes

and to darknes, se can kis$ my a$s goobyes

i cud sing and write of the dancin sun in ur eyes

even if eternity becoms the prize

the xpression of my lips i wouldn't minimize

for u, for the dancin sun in ur eyes i'd mak dat sacrifice

the other words wud remain in my heart my valentine

forever hold my hands and lemme die carressin ur eyes

i'd rather die with ur lips on mine

than live forever wifout sayin d sun dances in ur eyes

MITCHA IN PARADISE

*JOECOOL*

What a challenge!Cee-base I read your After All These Years and it struck my locked-in- wanting to write now I smile at this as I read through,it dawned on me that you are not a novice.

Joecollenrenzo you got the sun dances in your eyes too with the twist you gave it.


Hmmn I'm thinking can I put on something down I wish I could beat you two but I'm only good at Prose.My poems have been flat without much of Figuratives.Maybe I wont type on-line without editing.Cheers

Thank You, Joe 4 putting somethin up,
mehn u get am well well oo, ur post was fire.

and Thiscounts,
i know you can do something about this, if you put ursef down to it
i've seen what you can do.
thanks for the compliments, man. you give me the inspiration to continue
writing you and Joe and other friends here.
come on, do it, we're all waiting.
blesss us with ur "the sun dances in your eyes"

We were just in our early twenties
right?

You were my Eve
and I was your Adam

The innocent us!
raring to become the new Adam and Eve

We were'nt that recursive in our expression
It was just Yes or No of rectitude

The nature was just in its holiness
In the garden of Eden,
Not until the Adam and Eve ate the apple
and began to see the nature in a diferrent way
They were naked
I saw it clearer
that we were and we began to see in our ravings

that the horses fly
that the moon weeps
that the sun dances

And that is the way it is now
that,and always

I n your eyes
the sun dances

The feeling of another paradise full of lies.
Not untill we ate the apple.






Thanks C-base you prodded me into writing this

wow, and you said u can't write,
that was a sweet piece up there

well, whateva happend to deshalom.
has he offed with our favors and no thanks returned
or what?

@cbase, or maybe he is still expecting to hear from Uncle Wole.Cheers

@Thiscounts.
i wonder oo, lol

lol.I will try to compose another beautiful one for him on this thread and maybe he would appreciate that