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Welcome On Board! by lindalee(f): 8:12pm On Feb 02, 2011 |
I really need a critique for this poem, would like to know what you think about it!!! Its like a New Month Poem With jolly and merry i welcome thee, who'd conquered all to be with me, Fear not to enter with cheerfulness, nor to ravish each of my loveliness. I've come with all your heart's delight, Aligned to all your cheers ignite, To lift your soul and awe your spirit, and keep you thrilled throughout my visit. I hold in me another opportunity, to make your dreams a possibility, I hope this time you'd try once more, to all your talents really explore To thee i'll give all that i bring, with all the love into your wing, Just hold tight lets sail together, and make the memoirs stick forever, |
Re: Welcome On Board! by lindalee(f): 9:36pm On Feb 03, 2011 |
hey!!!!!!! |
Re: Welcome On Board! by Xfactor2(f): 7:25am On Feb 04, 2011 |
I absolutely love the message but question: do you man for it to have rhyme or just flow? have any of the words been edited by the site moderat Hope to hear from you soon |
Re: Welcome On Board! by lindalee(f): 10:28pm On Feb 17, 2011 |
Nope, no words has been edited. it was written as a welcome message of febuary to its month!!! |
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