Hi everyone, I hope you are all having a wonderful evening. Okay so straight up, I write and I like to share my writings with others and also read theirs. I hope I will find my time here enjoyable and a good learning experience. So I start with something I wrote a while ago. P.S Your critique is highly appreciated.

BIRD'S EYE VIEW
He winks
She smiles
Four eyes locked
in silent, sensual convo

Drug dealer
tucked, polished, with no creases liases
the black brown apparelled figure
baton rocking, hands twitching
for roja

I see...
As evening comes
and amber lights sprout
in flickers

Mothers, with babies strapped
justle for L300s
tyres worn, patched with fufu balls
made for throbbing bowels
destined for speed bumps
morphed into cash points
for friends in lime green
or black,
when they wish to marry
the night time darkness
As objects of protection
become tools for coercion

I see Lovers
on a balcony
intertwined, rocking to the pleasure beats
of mixed body fluids
as the Commodores
fill the dark night
telling the world
of the night shift
to tend

I don't get it

Read through the lines