markkuss:


https://docs.google.com/document/d/14Kyf3STWtU1ttyq0MHW4VzBv6DjQFg306icfgkuPG_0/edit?usp=drivesdk


This is one of the sample you requested I follow on the writing style

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Le2MNs6nCnAgUJiJ0rE4OV_5TUabv4mb/edit?usp=drivesdk&ouid=107728963235017540912&rtpof=true&sd=true

I just read the first article and I agree with Kyuhani that it leaves much to be desired.

The write-up is unnecessarily verbose (too much big English used sometimes out of context) and the meanings are unclear in several instances.

I also spotted some grammatical errors although not too many. The spellings were correct but many words were just misused. Moreover, the presentation could be improved upon and the readability too. It just feels too mechanical.

The writer needs to understand that Grammarly Premium is a machine and not a human. It can correct errors but it's suggestions are often too robotic and make reading difficult since it can't feel.

Remember to balance Grammarly with your human judgement. Read your article with neutral eyes and check if e dey sweet or not.

Honestly, if I don't blame the employer for rejecting this but I do believe that the writer deserves some compensation for his time and data at least. We can only keep getting better.

WarHammer2000:


I just read the first article and I agree with Kyuhani that it leaves much to be desired.

The write-up is unnecessarily verbose (too much big English used sometimes out of context) and the meanings are unclear in several instances.

I also spotted some grammatical errors although not too many. The spellings were correct but many words were just misused. Moreover, the presentation could be improved upon and the readability too. It just feels too mechanical.

The writer needs to understand that Grammarly Premium is a machine and not a human. It can correct errors but it's suggestions are often too robotic and make reading difficult since it can't feel.

Remember to balance Grammarly with your human judgement. Read your article with neutral eyes and check if e dey sweet or not.

Honestly, if I don't blame the employer for rejecting this but I do believe that the writer deserves some compensation for his time and data at least. We can only keep getting better.

thanks for your review..
reviews are inevitable..even if my writing doesnt meet his needs, he should appreciate the fact that this is a mental activity..

WarHammer2000:


I just read the first article and I agree with Kyuhani that it leaves much to be desired.

The write-up is unnecessarily verbose (too much big English used sometimes out of context) and the meanings are unclear in several instances.

I also spotted some grammatical errors although not too many. The spellings were correct but many words were just misused. Moreover, the presentation could be improved upon and the readability too. It just feels too mechanical.

The writer needs to understand that Grammarly Premium is a machine and not a human. It can correct errors but it's suggestions are often too robotic and make reading difficult since it can't feel.

Remember to balance Grammarly with your human judgement. Read your article with neutral eyes and check if e dey sweet or not.

Honestly, if I don't blame the employer for rejecting this but I do believe that the writer deserves some compensation for his time and data at least. We can only keep getting better.

You've said it all, really. If they reached an agreement that it's a paid test, the writer is deserving of his wages. But I understand the employer's frustration. It's not a good read.

markkuss:



Use grammarly for spelling..dear hirer.

I'm making money. You may focus on the errors. Not my biz

Kyhuani:



I'm making money. You may focus on the errors. Not my biz

pele o..

Kyhuani:
Please dear forum members. Read and access the first fifteen lines and see if the writer performed well

I did and my first thought was, "there's no hook, element of surprise, or something to even keep readers intrigued and engage." The word choice is bland and vocabulary reads like grade 10 or 11.


Can i be your writer? If your pay is good we could be make a great team for your next writing project.

I'm ready to take a test. Let me know what you think.