FICTION: LETTING GO


by Yomi Edward

I ran as fast as my legs could carry me. I cried as I ran. Then, I stopped. Looked back. The boys were still there. Howling words I could not hear, but I knew it was all about the fun – their fun. Mother would kill me, a voice whispered to my ears. I started running again. I ran. I fell. I ran. And ran. And ran. Then, I looked at my hands, the banana tray was gone. How could I ever stepped into the house without my tray? Without my mother’s money for my sales? I stopped. I could hear my heart beats like the sound of the pestle pounding against the mortar.






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I love the narrative,so vivid like a picture in a paint.And the experience,so sad.

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@FEANAD,

Good work, i saw wonderful write-up on your site, i can still feel the spirit of the university days. hmmm


Gbammm over and out