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If You Never See Me Again by hola2ng(m): 11:57am On Nov 23, 2007
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Re: If You Never See Me Again by hola2ng(m): 7:32pm On Nov 24, 2007
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Re: If You Never See Me Again by iice(f): 4:29am On Nov 28, 2007
nice
Re: If You Never See Me Again by hola2ng(m): 3:27am On Nov 30, 2007
Really,thanks for the note.
Cheers!
Re: If You Never See Me Again by hansibone(m): 6:50pm On Nov 30, 2007
That was nice hol2ng.

well i hope you dont mind, cos i wrote my own version when i read yours, , hope you would like it.

here is it.

[center]IF YOU NEVER SEE ME AGAIN[/center]

If you never see me again,
Pain fades, but our love remains,
Something i did gain,
Expressed together as we claim,

If you never see me again,
Sit back and recall does times,
Painful indeed, because we had no time,
So sour, it tastes like lime,

If you never see me again,
Remember i loved you and made you my first,
With loving heart, i took of my vest,
And together we shared our best,

If you never see me again,
Deep inside i would remember,
Like the last rain that falls in September,
YOU, my body sees as a MEMBER,
Re: If You Never See Me Again by hola2ng(m): 11:49pm On Nov 30, 2007
Hansibone, it's good that you found the poem interesting enough to modify. That version of yours is quite good, and no i don't mind at all.
Cheers!
Re: If You Never See Me Again by hansibone(m): 11:13am On Dec 04, 2007
hi,

Hola2ng thanks for appreciating my own version. dont you have any new ones. really want to meet upcoming Nigerian poets.

please post some more.

just came online to check my reviews, going for CD, would be back online in the evening.

CIAO
Re: If You Never See Me Again by hola2ng(m): 4:21pm On Jan 10, 2008
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Re: If You Never See Me Again by micklplus(m): 1:48pm On Apr 08, 2008
hola2ng and hansibone, good thing u both have done!

Nice stuff u have got.
Cheers
Re: If You Never See Me Again by hola2ng(m): 2:47pm On Apr 16, 2008
@micklplu
Thank you!
Re: If You Never See Me Again by hansibone(m): 5:20pm On Apr 18, 2008
micklplus:

hola2ng and hansibone, good thing u both have done!

Nice stuff u have got.
Cheers

tank u bro, u are appreciated,

one new poem is comin soon

wats up hola2ng
Re: If You Never See Me Again by hola2ng(m): 5:17pm On Apr 22, 2008
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Re: If You Never See Me Again by hansibone(m): 6:38pm On Apr 22, 2008
i'm super fine, ive been mowin around d phone section 4 a while, i tink i got sum gud stuff i want 2 share wit dem, but u know that HOME is always home, so i slip in here and drop a POEM when i find it spinning in my HEAD. hehehehehehehehe
Re: If You Never See Me Again by hola2ng(m): 1:25pm On Apr 23, 2008
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Re: If You Never See Me Again by scarphase(m): 10:45pm On May 07, 2008
imagine tommorrow never comes
in the clouds i dwell
to form a part of ur cell
in the end i bring the bell


down the road of memory
i lost ma power of sensory
ma mind preoccupied thinking of u
but am so real cos am blue


am just a beginner hope i made some sense
Re: If You Never See Me Again by hola2ng(m): 9:11am On May 19, 2008
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Re: If You Never See Me Again by Epi: 4:55am On Feb 11, 2009
@Poster

Ilike. I really do


1love
Re: If You Never See Me Again by hansibone(m): 10:28am On Feb 11, 2009
IF I CRY

Vision of love evolve us both,
Entwined in a passion of a voyage in a love boat,
Intimacies god's felt and men loath,
Love in my mind the end was an oath,

Kisses we shared so deep i fell,
Moments my being dared the word fear,
So into you with ligthing speed i was there,
Heaven ha! I felt my dear,

Time my enemy chose to invade us,
Revealing your face hidden behind white gloss,
Travails of all sort erupted from no cause,
The END was ''Im Leaving '' a dreadful clause,

How then do you think to console me when you try, ?
My love is empty, my heart stack dry,
My being aching for touch i cant let lie,
What then can you do IF I CRY, ?


Hansibone
01/27/2009
11:50
Re: If You Never See Me Again by Epi: 2:57pm On Feb 23, 2009
I can relate.
I like
Nice!!!

1 love
hansibone:

IF I CRY

Vision of love evolve us both,
Entwined in a passion of a voyage in a love boat,
Intimacies god's felt and men loath,
Love in my mind the end was an oath,

Kisses we shared so deep i fell,
Moments my being dared the word fear,
So into you with ligthing speed i was there,
Heaven ha! I felt my dear,

Time my enemy chose to invade us,
Revealing your face hidden behind white gloss,
Travails of all sort erupted from no cause,
The END was ''Im Leaving '' a dreadful clause,

How then do you think to console me when you try, ?
My love is empty, my heart stack dry,
My being aching for touch i cant let lie,
What then can you do IF I CRY, ?


Hansibone
01/27/2009
11:50
Re: If You Never See Me Again by hansibone(m): 3:04pm On Mar 03, 2009
@epi,

wats cookin, do u av anything up ur sleeve, ?

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