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Where is u souloho19? Comman update biko, dis suspense is killing me oo

U is weldone kim kim, u re da bomb

Finally finally am here, great work darousmart. U re truly a fabulous writer. Patiently waiting 4 more update sir, more mb to ur fone nd more thunder from sango to ur brain. Lol

Hapi birthday to d best writer on nairaland, wish u llnp. Long life is certain dearie 4 u

Creeza:
awwnnnn happy ending! me too sweaty and all that did come to my head but hey , Charlie saved Ben's life and there is a twist. Like I said very early in the story about Charlie's death: it did one thing which is forward the plot.

Don't worry , Ray will die somehow, he is fast. I know and might kill those officers in a blink or who knows, just who knows, Benedicta might hit him from the back Or, now here the twist that might shock you.


What if Ben had tampered with Ray's gun back at the jungle. Remember when Ray gave it to him? Ahhhhh!!! You see?

But still if all these do not meet his end... Then we will find out in ' A dance Of Fury' expect it.
I feel stupid explaining this to you. But still its my duty.

So be cheerful... This was just the beginning of the End.

wooow i luv a dance of fury already, tanks very plentiful 4 d thorough explanation. Pls do mention me wen u start it

Hmmm na sofiri be d devil abeg. I don talk am before

Creeza:
okay dear, please air out your views... I know the story has an open ' END ' .. There is a reason for it, but if you think it should have ended otherwise, please let me know what you expected.


Mean while, here is the phone that stopped the bullet.

lol. Dat gun lasan bt tanks 4 saving our ben life. I tink ray is suppose to be killed 2ru ben's hand jare nd ben should be exonerated sumhow sha. Nd a great reunion 4 ben nd benedicta. Dats wat i tink sha

souloho19:
lol..I'm coming few more minutes

ok oo, am impatiently waiting. Lol. Just hope dis devil will be unmasked tonite

Wooooow Op tanks 4 a wonderful nd lesson filled story, i wish every1 would read dis most especially d men, pls do mention me wen u start anoda 1

Oya na souloho19, update na. I can glimpse u on d thread sha

Yeeeeeeeeeepa creeza, y na? No do us like dis jhu

Haaaa audu, i feel so sorry 4 u btw duch12 tanks 4 a wonderful update as always

Otunba ur own don done ok. Oooobi

Hmmmm i pray ben is nt dead ooo, pls creeza do d needful

Kip it coming sharperly nd fasterly op. Weldone sir

Very short nd superb story. Weldone Op nd tanks 4 sharing dis. Pls mention me wen u start anoda 1

See dis idiotic monster of a man oooo, am glad audu killed him. Weldone Op, following u till d end dear

Hmmmm dis last episode got me teary eyed nd emotional. Thumbs up penshalom, pls kip it flowing in

jagugu88li:
There's 1 man like that thinking he can get away with nonsense. I wanna experiment na
You sef.....cant a girl be shot of petrol money? have a candle but no matchstick to lighten the house? Ohh ypu live in Aso rock so ypur house shine like that everyday abi?

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These two people ontop will be disturbing me upandon yet fight dey for there. Make I collect my weapons esaypee

Where be my military men sef na? ROYH call on the squad to quickly report for duty. Tell Girlhaley shit dey for here, so she needs to come prepared....I. SAID. FULL. ARMOUR. That Lawlahdey of a lieutenant must bring the submarine squad. We are tired of this man.

Left, right
Left, right
Match match.........

Hadamspon and Adesina12 we will call you after we are finished here......prepare

lol, no prob bt i hope u wont mind if i tag along??

Hmmmm, impatiently waiting

Oga souloho, biko na, dis one short jhur, hungry 4 more

jagugu88li:
Mama will be scolded for borrowing money, he maggot man refused to pay......watch.

Can someone borrow me a lighter and petrol please....

madam jagugu to do wat, i sha hope its wat am tinking ooo?. Lol

Penshalom, i will help u to complete dat sentence, rose is a fool nd an idiot. Ride on ma'am, following u bumper to bumper

Hmmmmm foolish musa nd a yeye wife beater at dat. Ride on OP, u re doing a great job here

Creeza:
Mellisa is not a fool indeed.

This Rose of a girl is a big mumu.
* the whisper aspect though

Reminded me of someone, nice .

Although I can't always comment due to some reasons, I will try to read up when I find time, but meanwhile I trust my friends to keep you occupied.

Adesina12 jagugu88li lotiababe adeculate enyinimofeoluwa oluwafemi1993 lawlahdey girlharley
Here is something for you, its unique and the writing is straight to the point.

Please pardon me, I don't know when next I might post online.

Penshalom nice story , more please.

GOD bless u creeza 4 calling me to dis thread, ur head dey dere. Weldone Op bt come to tink of it dis rose gal mumu ooo, no be small mumu sef. She come spoil everything go marry d foolish abuser sef(am just guessing ni sha) lol

Heeyhun:
Wow
The best I've read so far.
Welldone OP
My prime suspects are Benedict, Pastor Bat and his brother.

God bless u my dear, am also suspecting dat pastor batholomew broda too nd in between weldone OP

Woooow super update bro, pls kip it coming

Tank u so much 4 making d effort, d sky is just ur starting point

Good to ve u back duch12, pls more update

As 4 me oo, i tink d devil is safiri or sofiri (pastor bathlomeo broda) am just guessing nani sha. Lol