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Essyydiamond: E be like Say u be omo ibo *money things* lol

Lol!

Essyydiamond: #amidst tears# Dave am really sorry 4 those very awful things I said to u. I swear I didn't know Audrey was going to let u die soooooo soon. U will always be remembered by me 2 not just Eric and Oleng. Rest on now my hero,4 once u overcame jealousy and did the right thing. Audrey o Audrey! Why did u take that life that way,what if he had no chance 2 make a last wish.#crying profusely# Dave,I will miss u.

Lol! Sorry o! He made it na

bibie01: Dave, my poor Dave I forgive you wholeheartedly
I couldn't control my tears, I kept on thinking abt d whole scenario like it was real, like I was there. It felt so real n I cried real hard cos I loved Dave.
But am happy he was able to right his wrongs b4 dying, n he found peace at last. Even as am typing ds am crying..

Audrey you are so good, ds episode is so real n emotional. Nobody does it better, you are d best! Thank you.

Eiya, sorry. Wey dt guy wey dey sell hankie? Bring one here. Tanx dear

toykathy: Audrey mia, why re u so good? All d hatred i felt for dave now gone and all i cud do ws just weep cuz of his pains. BTW is dis a true life story? Weldone sis, i wish i can see u right now and envelop u in warm embrace for a job weldone. All d same, million e hugs for u sweetie. Less i forget, happy resumption.

Sorry. Nah, its fiction. Tanx dear.

PrettySpicey: Weep not child for when the arrow of God strikes, people are no longer at ease and things fall apart... LOL... Well done, Audrey Timms

I luv dis. Tanx dear. Tanx also 4 gracing dis thread. I'm grateful

charijee: Very emotional. ......poor Dave. ......I'm happy for the peace you found
Rest in perfect peace. ....

Hmmm....me 2. Amen

Cheriepet: Audrey u made me shed tears for Dave afta d wrongs he did to Oleng.... buh Audrey his death was a painful one inspite of his effort to forgiveness n be forgiven... RIP Dave

Sorry. Hmm...indid it was. Amen

shaks97: au revoir dave I don't care if other people say they will miss uu me I won't miss uu for shiiiii uu were too fake all along

Beeeffff!

Mj45: Madam Audrey pls update oh, we don mourn Dave finish. And he exited peacefully.

Update na till later. We r stil in mourning. Flag flying @ half mast

Costlybabe: a song 4 d late Dave sokari,
wen u say u were going i cried
wen u left me alone,i wish i cld hold u tight once again in my arms.
Audrey y did u make me soak my pilow wit tears,do u mind teling us y u cried?dis story is so real,
audrey i need point some tinz out,u started ur story so wel but then u started usin so much dialougue,i tink u shld cut down on this and be a litle bit narrative and discriptive wen u want to publish,i hope u get me
congrats ,u deserve it.u are simply 2 gud

Lovely write up. I cried bcs 4 an instant, I became Dave. Hpe u dried ur pillow outsyd sha.

Tanx so much 4 ur input dear. I totally get u and agree with u. I tank God I posted dis story here cos it opened my eyes 2 a lot of flaws in my writing technique. I hd 2 stop d two stories I'm working on presently wen I realized I ws making d same mistake wit dem.

I hv alredy discovad wre d prblm began. Lyk I told anoda reader who pointed dis out also, its frm hw I read novels. D narrative and descrptive parts bore me 2 hell (yep, am sum1 dt is easily bored. Bored wit dis present story already). So after dis story, I intend changing my manner of reading novels and also 2 read frm other writers here (I've alredy started with flakkydagirl and prettyspicey)

Its too late 2 do anytin abt it nw cos I dnt hv d tym nor energy 4 dt now. Bt by d tym dis story is published, its gonna b different, evn in oda areas.

Tanx dear

Mj45: Dave's death was inevitable in d story from d moment he married Oleng cos of course d Dave-Oleng story has to end 4 Eric-Oleng story continue. So sad but Dave put himself in d tracks of d Chinese CONCORD-TRAIN. It's only to be expected. I pray 4 all those who lost THEIR OWN real life partners as a result of someone's wickedness, greed, manipulations or selfishness that by divine intervention they shall all recover them in Jesus name, Amen.

See as Audrey don make me become pastor.
Audreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeyyyyy.

Lmao! Ride on pastor! Amen o!

vance12: Poor oleng finaly found her true luv, dave is bad for keeping dis secret but am sori 4 his death, may his rest in gentle peace. Audrey timms u re d best kip it up, waiting 4 another story....... I luv dis story, i feel lyk reading it again.

Hmm....amen. Tanx dear

ifyonoj: oh my godddd. i am speechless. i had to drop my pad. n cried. no sobbed seriously. audrey. u lived dis story. i felt like i was der. thk you so much. I LOVE U. hmn

Eiya. Sorry. Hpe ur tears didn't spoil ur pad sha. Uw dear. Luv u 2

hephzibahbeulah: Tank u switie,it isnt easy at all!

Hmmm.....

sammyjay3: I can't believe dat i almost shed a tear when i was reading this episode....Dave last words were so touchin......made me remember when i lost my Dad in d year 2011.

Eiya. So sorry abt dt. I hpe u've gotn ova it. May his soul rest in peace. Amen

seunviju: Wow,am finding dis story interesting day by day but felt bad dave died in the end.Lovely story dear,great work

Tanx dear. Sorry

trusted: ........ and the man die.

Hmm....

Vickthoriah: RIP to Dave ..even though he made some wrong decisions,I stil feel for him....madam AT left me awed with his sad departure

Hmm. Amen. Sorry

preciousberry: Wow!!!....you are really good.the writting is so real and emotional.more ink to your pen and RIP to dave sokari,felt sorry for him though

Tanx dear. Amen. Me 2

bussyzionite: The hatred I feel for Dave is all gone... what a sad end for him!
...Seems there are generational curses in Dave's and Oleng's families which will never linger on in d latter's family as it will be broken when she finally marries the love of her life.
Audrey, why the tears now? I hope it's not what am thinking... hope ds ain't a non-fiction?
All in all, KUDOS TO OUR ARTICULATE AUDREYTIMMS!!!

Hmm....I tink so 2. I jst put my self in dier shoes o! And I'm a cry baby 2. Its pure fiction. Tanx dear

Harrychocoberry: FIrst and formost,
This is
the first time am commenting on this Piece of Class.

And I must admit:

SOME PERSONS KNOW WHERE THEY BELONG.
Mrs Audrey,You belong to this Litreture Section.
If it were that we are in an Auditorioum,I'd Have beckoned you to
come and Stand on the Platform,for the World to acknowledge you.

but..

since it's an e-World,All I can say is Well done!

As for the Story Mrs Timms,Anywhere or Anyhow you still ask Me,I'd put
it to you that this story is a TRUE LIFE STORY,IF NOT YOUR OWN(which I
find it Hard to believe) or ATLEAST SOMEONE YOU'RE RELATED TO!!

N/B:I didnt say someone you know o,I said Someone you're related to!

but..

If its an Imagination,Mrs Audrey Timms,YOU'RE A TOP-NOTCHED WRITER!!

on a last note,is much of questions;
Where do you Stay?
&
Whats your Main Occupation?

~Chocoberry~

Wow! Ur comments blew me away. Had to hold on to a pole. Tanx dear

Dis story isn't abt me. Dre's no part of it dt is abt me. It is pure fiction with real life occurrences. At d risk of sounding highly spiritual, d Holy Spirit is my inspiration.

Hmmm....such qsts! Bt since I've never bin asked b4, I'll indulge u. I live in d northern part of dis country and I work 4 a state government. Shikena.

BTW, ur moniker sounds feminine

maryhaam: Waoh eventually I felt for him,the episode was emotional my eyes was filled wif water,ur description was beautiful,like I was there,u got me hon....love is weird.

Hmm....tanx dear

lait: This is so touching. May the fear of God be a watch over what we do in life.

Madam Audrey Timms, may God's fountains of knowledge continue flows in your life.

Hmm....Amen o!

promzee4d: pls i nid two. crying!!!

Mays dave soul rest in peace. Audrey well done.

sniffs!!!!

Sorry. Amen. Tanx dear

onosj: abeg give me five handky i don cry tire.

Sorry dear. Hpe say na tears u wan use am clean o! No hidden agenda of selling dem abi?

eneLight3: gosh have bin a slient reader but I cant kip it in anymore..... youre awesome Audrey.. the story is awesom... everytyn awesome.... me likey ;

Tanx dear. Am glad u likey

Gibjewel: Even NL will miss David sokari on ds trend. may his soul RIp.

Audrey , tnx for d update. More wisdom & greater height.

Abi? Amen. Uw. Tanx dear

chii8: I startd readn ds story today oo,here i am,cryn for Dave,ds op u too good ooo

Eiya, sorry. Tanx dear

orla01: Tanx 4 d updates Audrey Timms u are d best.Do av a sound nyt rest Dearie.

Uw. Tanx dear

Funniez: Chai Dave so na only u waka go?? Audrey, chop knuckle, ur head dey there!

Lol! Tanx dear

pricelesslove: Ha Audrey why nah? why did u allow dave to die? God, am crying right now. i just cant help it. oh poor dave, may ur soul rest in peace. Audrey dearie you are the bomb. may God strengthen you. good night.

Sorry. Amen. Tanx dear

Balley: I can't beliv dat i'm cryin because of Dave. Audrey dear, u are 'guddest'. Hmmmm Rip dave.

Sorry. Lol! Tanx dear. Amen