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Jesusbaby93: I really enjoy it and i c notin wrong wit d story. Kudos to you ma!

Jesusbaby93: I really enjoy it and i c notin wrong wit d story. Kudos to you ma!

annylove: Wow...what a touching and wonderful story, keep it up Audrey and i promise u,u'll go places.

Shokoloko: [code][/code]
Funny. I actually wanted more dialogue. Different strokes for different folks

JeffreyJamez: I personally don't see any flaw o...all those "flaws" above are actually what makes your story unique. And there is nothing like too much suspense Abeg.It's what makes we the readers to always come back...your type of writing is emotional... Your choice of words triggers emotions... You can't be an allrounder na...prettyspicey's best attribute is her witty convos between her characters, Royver's best attribute is his description..yours is your ability to bring out the emotions of your characters . So while some people will say "lack of dialogue " is a flaw...I don't see it as a flaw...and for those saying it lacks "narrative parts"..please they should come and define Narrative Part....as for the descriptive part,it is there but not too much,but then again this particular story doesn't need much description because it is more of emotional description that is needed for it and you got it spot on.

Honestly, no flaw for me but then again what do I know I'm just a reader.. *chews groundnut and walks out*

hephzibahbeulah: Too long,too much suspense,d outcome is predictable. Even though most parts of d story is unreal,it stil makes for good entertainment and meditation. In all,ur writing,grammar,punctuation,etc are flawless...kudos to u!

PrinceAdepoju: I can't sight any flaw yet..


###just passing

Komzzy1: [img][/img] [color=#006600][/color] crying,the best touching story ever

hephzibahbeulah: finally! Audrey,network no gree me congratulate u o...bt network don bam sha...so,big congratulations switie. Bt pls,try and end dis Oleng story now,abeg...i cant wait to see d end. U are four much,seriously!

charijee: Serious!! you donated it to me. .....thanks sweetheart

Pororo: Lol, na so I see am o.
I live in South Korea and Pororo is d name of a popular penguin on kiddies show. But I got to nairaland b4 I saw the other "meaning".
Wetin I for do?

PrettySpicey: Thanks dear and hope you enjoy it. You need patience though... because I don't update as fast as you do. I'm a firm believer in serving the dishes one at a time

stormybucci: xo na husband?? **opens mouth wide till fly enters** mummy audrey no vex ooo, it was a slip of d hand

chibwike: Madam Audrey Timms....i cant help but love you...u re xo gud...thanks again for giving me a follow back..am honoured.

Harrychocoberry: Awww..Thanks For Indulging me.


Though it sounds Hard to believe..its alright by me,if its not your story,Nne daalu.

I'd have Loved asking another question,but Make I Respect Myself sha,make e no be say na my own worse pass..


As for my Moniker,Yeah,alot of Persons says its Sounds feminine,thats True I must admit.

but..

Thats what all those Pretty Close to me,especially Female Folks call me.

The name Has a Story behind it.

Funny enough though,Na still Woman give me the name.

#TeamAudreyTimmsShouldWriteAnotherToriShekina!#

JeffreyJamez: Hahaha I swear I make sales die....I Don run out of stock sef........

Dave come back and die again o,make I buy Jeep lol
*counting money *

goldwaters: Lol. I've never been 1 to stay away from a good read and this piece is wonderful.
( whispering in audrey's ears, "Coming from one who started reading m&b before I was 8" its not flattery".)

goldwaters: Lol! Ahn ahn Audrey, u wan spoil mkt for me so.
Don't worry I'll give u a cut from d profit.*wink*

stormybucci: yesss at last dave don evaporate. Dat dave na ba$tard, all he did from d beginning were evil till he died, may is soul rumble in hell mtcheew... Back 2 u audrey, **No comment** wetin i wan talk wae pple neva talk finish?? yesss!!! audrey don't forget d money

YOURS FAITHFULLY
STORMYBUCCI

ebysandra: at this point i have to say WELLDONE.Your work is so real made me cry,more gease

stormybucci: **runs as fast my leg can carry me b4 i get my handsome face bruised** dere's God ooo, so because of wat i said dats y u wanna call dat bouncer u call a bf 4 me abi??

bookhy: U r d best!!! Datz all i can say

Essyydiamond: Yes o,she deserves it and more. Audrey is really a star and am loving her handiwork everyday.

codedbaby: Audrey I can't help the tears. it keeps flowing. RIP to Dave. he made an impact on Oleng. I think without him Oleng and Eric will never come in contact again.
To u Audrey I pray that from whence this came forth, the stream will never dry up. Expecting more from u.

olarafiat: emm aunti what of aunt vien's secreeet d 1 oleng mama take yarn dat year

Queenxstar: Ma'am, I learnt a lot, thanks for sharing.

Queenxstar: Jeffrey, I'm trying so hard not to laugh, we're mourning Dave.

3Dimension: A min silent for Mr. Dave


At last a final rest for a troubled life.

thepatroit: RIP Dave


Back to the matter at hand. Please let's go and vote for her as regular updater of the month. Yesterday alone, we got four updates- one in the morning, one in the afternoon and two last night. And all the updates were long. Who else here does that? Please tell me. Its the same link but I'll post it here anyway. Thanks.

https://www.nairaland.com/1804027/free-n5000-writer-here-every

omotalkie: Sad & touching. RIP Dave

gal10: Sad much