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Oga SammyHoe, bin luking 4u.

Present Sir!

I saw wat u wrote abt me in d competition thread. What can I say? I was humbled by it. Thanks a million. It brought tears 2 my eyes. It will grace my dp on my bbm 4 a week. I'm grateful.


That said. Concerning dis thread, I dnt no hw to write short story bt I'l try my best. I'll be here fully wen I'm through with my story. Tanx.


Weldone everyone

Orikinla: OP. This is brilliant.
Engaging narrative with exciting dialogue.
Have you published any book of your prose?

Tanx dear. No, I hvnt bt I'm thinking of publishing dis one and anoda. Hw far wit ur stole nemesis? I ws following it. Tanx 4 gracing dis thread wit ur presence and 4 commenting

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Hey guys, long update coming up bt dt will b it 4 2day. I nid 2 take drugs and rest cos of d flu. Tanx 4 alwys following and commenting. I appreciate u all. *u guys shdnt judge Dave harshly sha*

capip120: what has thou done not to see an update by the Day? Audrey you bringeth me out of thine nemesis and set me on the path to Genesis, yeah thou I was reading through the path of an elongated depression then I saw your story. I heard a voice say unto me "read son! for in this you shall find solace and when I started reading this piece I didn't just find solace but I found comfort also.
I opened my eyes and saw the Angels saying son! never forget to check on this story cos this story promised to offer something unique and since that day I have made a resolve to see this story to the end.
Audrey you can give chimamanda an oso for her ego! (a run for a money). Keep the piece coming.
Goodmorning Nigeria =

Hw could I have missed dis beautiful piece! *stretching out my hand 4u 2 flog it* I'm so sorry. Tanx so much dear. Chimamanda? Hmm.....

Cheriepet: How can u hurt sumone u claim u love like dis? Audrey no matter his reasons it was so selfish n wicked of Dave to have kept it a secret... yl watch his wife cry her eyes out thinking d fault of their childlessness was hers...

Wen love pass love, e go turn 2 obsession. I guess dts Dave's prblm. BTW tanx 4 inviting pple 2 check out d story. I appreciate it.

charijee: Finally!!! **wipes tears**
OMG!! I've never read any story as emotional as this on NL. ...
This story touched me so much. ....see me reading and shedding tears. ....
AudreyTimms. ...i must confess. ..you're an exceptional writer. ..love the twists and turns. .....just keep the story rolling pls
@cheriepet. ..thanks for the invitation

Aww...please dnt cry. We will all smile @ d end bt we go stil cry small sha. Tanx dear. Tanx 2 cheriepet also

bussyzionite: Something tells me that Dave will open up about how he became sterile and Oleng too, about the pregnancy while the former will plead that Oleng should never inform Eric about it.
Thumbs up Audrey. U are indeed gifted!
*Goes back to ghostmode*

Nice theory bt dts if Dave won't b blinded by anger wen he finds out Eric is responsible 4 his wife's pregnancy. Tanx dear. Abeg come bck o!

goldwaters: I spy with my little eyes someone who's name begins with A and ends with timms viewing. Any update?

Lol! Soon

Essyydiamond: I ga asikwa! I come here almost every 1hr expecting new update,only to meet nothing,nothing,ok maybe somtin, small smtin. Audrey can u put all the story once,make I swallow am once? Hehehehehe! I pass Oliver Twist shey?

Lol!

vonn: Hehehehe........pass me the food nah

Longthroat

Savigne: Audrey U are good!!!....A Sandra Brown book couldn't have been more captivating.U are da BOMB!!!!
Biko come and update cause if you dont I wont eat ooooo

Sandra brown? I dnt no if I've read any of her books. Make I quickly go find dem. Tanx dear. Lol!

vonn: Looooonnnnnggggeeeeerrrrr!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Lol!

Chiamaka01: Audrey, thanks for the update, but, it's too short. Can we have another and can it be longer?

Haba! Too short? Three scenes? I'l try my best

vonn: I can sight Audrey here...
Abeg no just view, post another

Make I hail evrybdy first

maryhaam: I thot as much,now I just shout jisos in front of my bozz,dave Chaiiii u b devil ooooo

Lol!

Chiamaka01: 1000 likes.

Lol! Soon

christabeli: Nice one dear. When are we getting another dose?

Tanx dear. Editing mode

bountiouz: I knew dave had 2turn out either hurt or bein d bad guy for oleng and eric to work. I still like his character though.

Weldone Audrey!

Hmm. Sory I cdnt disappoint u on dose 2 tins. He's hurt and he seems lyk d bad guy rite nw. Since u cud actually predict one of dese two tins happening to him, u've given me an idea in twisting d story again. Its 2 late 2 do dt here. Mayb in anoda site or my blog or evn wen I publish it. Tanx dear

PrinceAdepoju: Wow.

Hmm....

princesa: Nigerians and drama eh, I never see!

weldone Audrey

Lol! Tanx dear

seunviju: Hmmmm,I wonder how Oleng will take this?I don't like the dave for anything before eventhough Oleng shouldn't have slept with Eric but he should have make known the truth to the wife.wetin me dey wait 4 his for Eric and Oleng to settle their dispute and come back together as husband and wife o.Thanks for the update maam

He hd a reason 4 nt teling her. Lol! Uw dear

wunmzylala: I knew it! wicked soul Dave.. he's just so evil keeping Oleng in such misery, hiding such a very very important information just goes to show how evil he is.. i really feel pity for Oleng.. emotional turmoil right from childhood...

Audrey... i'll continue to doff my hat for you.. Meanwhile, abeggggggg, this is weekend oooo.... let the epistle be loooooongggg and continuosly flowing in like milk and honey... God bless you dear

Afta all d curse wey Dave don receive, I don dey pity am. Lyk sum1 commented awhile bck, obsession can rily b a terrible tin. Tanx dear. More 2 com. God bless u 2

Shoelace1: . Poor Oleng, make dave sha no kill her o.... I'm xo scared!

Lol!

d4real890: Yepa
Dave needs to be dealt with

His past actions r alredy doin dt

avuekwe: I am waiting, infact we are all waiting for part three. Audrey why nah, i wanted her to have a second chance at loving someone else. You do know that 90 percent of this story doesn't happen to anyone in real life. Beginning to look more like all this Mexican soap opera, when you are mine, etc.

My dear, ask around and u'd b shocked 2 no pple hv lives jst lyk dis. I dnt want 2 mention names. Karma or shud I say nemesis is d one dealing wit Dave. Jst read on...

shomart: Even though I guessed David might be impotent, I was really hoping my hunch was wrong. David is really a two-timing bastard, how dare he keep such a big thing from the wife he claimed to love, by the way how then did he impregnate his two ex-girlfriends?

Nice piece Audrey and for real Nollywood could not have come up with a better script.

Mayb it ws b4 he became sterile. He hd his own reason 4 hiding it. Tanx dear

Jennimma: Audrey Timms o! Hian! Biko,gimme Eric's number o,that dude must be hawwwt to have scored a goal before 2nd half.hehehe

Lol!

Timothy3113: audrey made a mistake, these is the correct word.

Lol!

bibie01: Dave is wicked, he betrayed me.

Eiya, am so sorry

vivikul: #teambringbackourEric#

Lol!

Okinjay: Hehehehehehehe...I knew it. Audrey,what's in it for we that guessed right??

I don order champagne 4 una. Ask d bar man 4 ur share