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Hi KimberlyWest,

You're back with your style of writing. Its nice, it has just began and is has already been filled with sorrow and joy, deceitfulness, and grace, hatred and love, kindness and wickedness, blood and pain...…. keep it up. I'm sure you'll someday do yourself, family and Nigeria proud. More ink to your pen and more twist to your thoughts.

Nice story, I had to read from the very first page to this end and I wish you had finished it, cos it is so captivating and engrossing.

Though some little miss up here and there, but I must confess Bibi, you have a story right here and it worth the whole time I spent on it.

I shall be following up to know when you shall drop your next line.

Keep it up and I wish you good health and fresh inspiration as you deliver your next episode. Keep ridding.

The sky is opened for you.

I have a feeling, uncle Mike will team up with Jordan for a show of shame and Jordan will eventually impregnate Nancy but Kevin will marry Nancy and adopt Jordan's baby.

Nice story, I have been reading this story with keen interest. I'm sure u have a writing gift, watch your tenses especially third person singular and past participle tenses. I'm sure there are some typo errors, but I must commend your effort, keep the flag soaring. I'm familiar with Ph, it makes it more interesting to me, as I may like to read if Feranmi dear ventured into some of the club pubs/night club in there. Or probably use some days off work in Shewa's residence or being framed by sharpies I.e sharp Ph girls who are desperately in need of sweet sugar boy like Feranmi. Anyways, keep us updated on time. More grease to your elbow. One luv.

Hehehe, I no de fit share my love o. Well done guys, waiting for the next throb. Pls load ASAP!

I really didn't like Nancy and Jordan coming back again, it really doesn't work out like that, no lady will like to surface it an heart broken guy without a come back or pay day effect. I believe Nancy is just enjoying her groove for now until the right man comes. However, Jordan becomes a star by having a compass of the safe haven of two most beautiful girl in his world even after 5 yrs. congratulations to Jordan. I don't blame him, he likes them cool. What I know for sure will happen is him finally sharing the two beautiful damsel all in the name of a vow he made to always be with Kelly. As a guy, I know what it means to have almost the same body and soul chemistry. I won't be disappointed to see Jordan doing the two simultaneously. No one becomes terrible when someone's love is doubled. Babe I love u more than DTOB. Ride on!

Angelinastto:
Brethren! On behalf of A.J i am apologizing for my inability to update tonight. Tomorrow is my birthday and we gon party party party hard.... Lets see if i can squeeze out time tomorrow........... Goodnight readers

Happy Birthday Sweetie. LLNP. Can I pop up champaigne on your behalf? Where is the party at? So we could come parry with our darling. Great work, I must commend. Your work is great, creamy and cool. I believe you babe. I'll make sure I send my gift from ph. Well done.

Tactically waited the last crow. Loving the master piece any way, keep up glowing dear. You made me come out of my reserved shell. Well done!

Waiting for tripple update pls

Pls update fast ASAP. The story looks interesting. Waiting........