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adegwurulez: my people i'm still waiting o. You guys should tell me which area i need to improve and what you dont like about the story or my writing in general

Bros you should know there is nothing to be corrected, if not we would have bombarded you with critique or perhaps constructive criticism. You're one of a kind.

....and finally the short story has ended. Bruv you're an embodiment of talent. I like the fact that you were able to write something totally different from how you started. My story also ended yesterday and until next year before i'll start another one. May God grant us more and more wisdom. Peace!!

adegwurulez: as u wish sir, i'll remove the tag 'short story'

u neva still remove am ooo, this na action film

Mehn, this story dey do me strong thing like say i dey see kako with that sinister smile. Thumbs up bro

Welcome back bro, i know it hasn't been really easy for you cause i've not been seeing you online as often as before. This is one of the best stories i've read on this section and it's unfortunate that it's coming to an end. I don't know if it's just me but i'd love if this story had ended in the court scene because after that time it had been here and there. The storyline became weak because i didn't get more action like it was in the beginning. perhaps, it was the writer block ish coz i still don't know who is the babe in total control. The gay part caused alot of controversy but i think it was unnecessary, John shouldn't have turn out gay. Despite her wealth i think you gave jummy alot of pressure and made her look like nothing. If i was taofeek i could never abandone my father's company in Canada and come to Africa (Nigeria) to start searching for a job and then come across such a cheap scam, it's so unnigerian and unrealistic. Now i think you want to rush the story because of your tight schedule but i do think you can still do better, maybe take some time off and think of a stronger plot, i expected you to bring back Richard. What about the doctor in S.A? This story can't just end like that, it's not just about writing for our reading pleasure but if you put in more effort, it could bring you REAL money in the end of the day. Please know that i'm not hating in any way, it's just a lamentation from a big fan.

D rock i dey fell your story no be small, e no easy to write at all, and collabo com still join, my story sef don end yesterday..mayb before i go start another one na until nxt year, xmas tinz!!