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Teah I know I was late,but I'm here now nice story,pls keep it flowing

Wow great work pabon,it's been so interesting and different,such a sweet delight.
I can't wait for the episode 2,where all the powers will be unlocked in Vince

And most of all I sincerely appreciate your time and energy,even in some bad times,you always pull through,thanks so much for dishing out the lovely story � hot.

Hmmm,I'm beginning to suspect Mr Lance, I thought Vince was losing his senses before,but for the Mr Lance lied about their disappearance and backing it with fake letter,and with what Vince saw in the attic, I don't believe he's innocent.

Weldone pabon,it was a great read,keep it flowing.

[quote author=Chibuking1402 post=83432387][/quote]Seriously do you have to quote everything?

Ride on pabon

I've been following your story
Pls try to update

@topher052 you just can't resist the sandra name

Been awhile @pabon and I can see you're waxing stronger
I enjoyed all the missed updates and I must commend your good work,pls keep it up

I feel for Rammah and his family,now Abdul can also feel the pain of losing something dear to his hearth too?
Does he even know how many families is evil ways or acts affect at all?

Thanks topher052,but this update seems brief
Abeg don't blame joor,I too enjoy your stories jawe

Just watching that crazy Usman
He should ask from Abdul,it's not a good thing to have issues with Andrew and Susan,him body go tell am when the time comes

Nice job @topher052 feeling you like burger and milk shake

pabon:
I think it's the part that 198800Mam quoted that got you confused. Check again please. It wasn't me updating. It was the guy quoting an update to say he couldn't follow as I changed to upndating with pictures. You dig?

You're right,I didn't take note of the quote
Ride on

At least,that monster can provide the needed security.

Weldone sir

@pabon you're doing a wonderful job with this story,pls keep it up.
But I noticed some mix up with the updates,
1st Vince was running for his life,after Bensworth saved him,and the next update was when he first met Mabel at the library,before their journey to the realm they are now,
I believe the update that was to show how Vince escape from the monster pursuing him is missing.
That should come before Jandel showed his real self.
I know you've been under some stress,hold on bro,Jah is your strenght,I truly appreciate your effort and time,in which you put in this amazing story.
Pls clarify and fix where necessary.Nice work sir.And pls don't kill Mabel

Oooh yeah

The hunter turned the hunted

Trouble in the camp of the enemy,Weldone topher052,enjoying the ride, ooo lala

BankyGee:

Fúck! Abdul is in trouble.

Wait! Why do I feel as if I'm starting to like Abdul?

Lailai can't never feel nothing for that animal,I know he will do everything to save Susan,and Susan will have miscarriage and loss the bastard child,case closed.

It was short but meaningful
Nice work

greatme2good:
Where please can you copy it coz I can't remember reading where he touched her.

Sorry I mistakenly quoted the full page,just go through this chapter and you'd see where that animal chop Susan

greatme2good:
I don't think it's Abdul's baby.

If you remember clearly,it was that crazy Abdul that has the last touch of her puna,before the all commotion.

So that crazy Abdul had planted a seed in Susan

topher052:
You all should help me thank God for seeing another new year. People die every day and God who hasn't judged me by my faults has showed me abundant grace to be alive and celebrate another year.
Happy birthday to me. I wish me many more prosperous years.

Happy birthday to you topher052,may your days be long.

But she didn't sleep with Noah nau?
What is Tolani's problem sef or she too wan go rogue ni?
Nice update

Weldone Devilpen,nice work but rushed ending,still beautiful all the same.
Much love and keep doing what gives you joy and peace of mind.

TBM
You just know how to turn my mumu button sha

See me smiling like I win award,just reading the bound and loyalty of those inmates,and after all the excitement this stupid Lewis just wan put sansan for person gari

But sango the god of thunder nor go let am succeed.
Thanks for the lovely update,may sango continue to oil your elbows and brains for more inspirations,and remove any form of body odour like Tasha's from your body

pabon:
Next update will come up this evening.

You'd have noticed some errors in the previous update. I've made corrections. I may have to re-upload the screenshots again.

Please comment your thoughts. I'll value your observations and constructive criticism.

You are doing a wonderful job @pabon,what more can I say than keep doing what you love doing,it not easy to pen down a fantasy story and with all the plot and directions of the story,you sure need a good dose of inspiration to put this down.
I'm enjoying the story so far so good,keep updates flowing and thanks for the beautiful work.

Flakins:
This man that is doing Alaga iduro and Alaga Ijoko, Enudunjuyo abi, hope his very good? Because I'm thinking about patronizing him o.... I have a wedding sha

It will be so nice if you can patronize him,at least help support his ministry,those MCs and pros started from somewhere.
Pls give baba TBM a chance.

Na so,one day at a time,Andrew and susan are the real deal,the one and only true survival

Thanks topher052,pls keep it flowing

Now it getting hot in here

Action mode activated,bad guy in control

Thanks topher052,just feeling the boi right now.