coogar:

medicine after death.
mikuz should have seeded the top netcees - making sure they don't come across each other during the early stage.

Hehehe dude,
i wasnt aware of the pairing cos v'been off the site for a while, I wuldda flagged it earlier.
Mikuz sent me a mail that's wat reminded me there was a battle sef.
Nonedaless, we can have a BPD campaign to bring U3 back, dude got sth to offer.


oNe

mikuz: Votes closed :

Result : Ibime 6 - 2 U3

Ibime wins and qualifies for the quarter final.

Congrats to Ibime!!

I have an issue with the fact that U3 is out so early tho.
This is the kinda match up one wuld xpect to see in semi/finals. .
Is there a way to remedy this?
Just a whimsical thot'. .

oNe

ojoawo: Mikuz, klean up these rants abeggi

U call a cerebral discussion on elements like cognition/rhymes/text /audio/ et al as rant, sir?
I'm. . errm.. .worried.
We do this!

oNe

da-whizkid:


Boss DBR, hailings. Personally, I don't understand why we'll be talking about slanting words/wordsplay in a text battle. if its an audio battle, it goes, for a text battle, I don't quite agree. But its all good though

LMAO!! I've had this argument too many time.
Ps riddle me this, When u read TEXT,do you not hear "sounds" in your head?
In fact, whether you are reading the words or hearing them,
the process of identifying whether a word rhymes with another is through sound cognition.
Mostly the final judgement is not by textual analysis in nature but by its auditory experience.
Great writers

coogar:

DBR needs lessons about text-battling. he still doesn't know it's different from an audio battle where words can be slanted & stuff. text-battling is pre-written(not freestyling) & battlers had all the time to smoothen their writtens.....ibime should be doing better than forcing rhymes......

i disagree ibime was better than U3 in the rhyme category.

Na u wan skool me? bwahahah!! Joker!
Get educated with ma response to Whiz .
Btw, I didn't say Ibime did better in rhyme. . it's a Close fight. .
check ma score, it's like they both got Tuxedo, cos i gave them Both TIE!



oNe

First all, the rules says 24 lines, no?
Now be it FB format or NL format there's no wat U3 lines are anythin short of 28lines.
If i add the gamut of ref. it'll be pushing over 40lines!!!!!

2: E'rone know i phuckin hate parenthesis, or footnotes explaining ur wordies!! sheeet gets on me nerves, very unprofessional!!


Good battle tho, but not highly thrilled about it.
The few U3 lines sm1 posted got my expectation so high that his bars in this match didn't match up.
But the dude døpe tho!
Ibi and I had a long run tussle n rivalry here so i've seen the best of him,
though he' remain technically sound, he aint as aggressive in this battle., but he was as clinical as ever.
Big ups guyz!

That said:, here's ma vote

Opener: U3

Rhymes: Tie
Note to the person complainin bout Ibime's AXE/ACTs line; act /AKT/ axe /AKS/. .but if it's actS. .
u can easily slant it to rhyme with axe in pronunciation.

Similes/ Metaphor: Ibime

Punchlines: Ibime
U3 had some good PLs,they were enjoyable, like punching with a teddy bear gloves. So many nice line, but they didn't pack a punch.
Ibime on the other hand though wasn't gloves off, hid some rocks under his pad.

Personals: Ibime.
U3 came pretty close but these barz swayed it for Ibime "before I 'turn Lites down low'. . . like Bob Marley and Lauryn!!!/"

"Numero Uno Femcees crushed your stúpid gimmicks/ with brutish lyrics/
So when you say "No girls allowed". . . I had to check twice. . . cos X-Lites’ . . . . got nothing but pússies in it!!/"

He took the fight to U3's crew, and nothin breaks a leader of a crew more than dismantling his team.

Flow: Ibime

Wordplay: Tie

Closer: U3

MVGT: IBIME





oNe

COOGER ma mehn!!!! What it do. .
It's always a comic relief for me e'rtime i read ur isshhh. Too much talk and less action.
U r like one of those off-pitch-virtual-fans who fancies himself a coach.
U hav all the verbose vocabs and do pontificate what's to be done. U can tell what Messi is not doin right
and even suggest ronaldo aint a great player.
But that's where it all ends..MERE TALKS!!
But if u try urself here now, DJ5 alone will cremate u! (no diss to the young niggie tho)

Good to have u back tho. .howz togo?



oNe

mikuz:

Oga I don dey find you since. You are in as one of the judges.

Hian!! u find me to judge, so u hav written me off say ma bones don weak to battle abi?

Mikuz Achebe, clap for yaself. .weldone!#MI'sVoice




oNe

Fam'!!!!
this place is still up and runnin...Bis, Mik, Prek, dj5 and rest of the guyz .
Good job guys.
I see y'all . .much respect.



oNe

Mikus, if ibime is in then i'm in!!!














but as an observer


oNe

Ibime:

Mehn, spars back then were sweet. I'm going back to prioritizing flow over everything else.

Encore that bruv!

Ibime:

I'm well travelled ninja, no be google. I told ninjas I was in Cape Verde when I wrote ma verse against Streetz and somehow the battle turned to a flexing thing between me and DBR.

Yea, KMT. .I remember this season so well


oNe

Ibime:

Hahaha. . . . Canning Town tins!!

As a man of the manor, allow me the honour to educate you on the pronunciation of West India "keys".

lol. .oga manor de landlord. .
but its Canary wharf tinz . .noy Canning Town o. .we talkin over 2miles apart na
im sure they not 1 and the same, afterall West india quay in in C.wharf innit?
and the Marriot i stayed is in WIQ.
u kno na u be landlord and u know every. . lol.

Boisdale. . La Tasca for some spanish cousine. . West india Quay/

Cineworld with the kids. .splurgin like i got money in the keys/
don't tryna diss. .

mnwhile..i kno Quay is pronounced KEY,
thats y i rhymed it with KEY in the next line so errmm. .the edjucacion
wont be needed. .at least not yet. .tnx still tho. Lol

How u been tho, howz fam?

oNe

Dont call this a come back pple. .
These are not even barz. .no punch to metas, .just events of the past weeks. .
This was tough to pen, retirement can sure make a guy really rusty. .



True story. .unrehearsed. . .
wifey chillin in Amsterdam. .gotta get ma 2 kids to her/
been away 2wks, shud meet up in Uk . .cos damned, i miss her/
but when shit hits the fan, fam' . .it hits it so well/
cos friday nite. .duty call. .Ceo said D, u aint goin nowhere!/

this' no booty call. .penalty of leadership. .sometime it sucks/
WTF! . .on this vacay iv put lots bucks, can it be worse?/
just a fuss. .been in wars. . was I'm heading Canary Wharf/

damn! head spinning. .confused. .but i knu wat to do/
resolute. .saturday nite. .off to London 3 of us flew/
touch down Heathrow . .
sunday 5:05am dew. .a changed point of view/
took a nap. .8pm hopped in jag. .11pm, flew. .
phheeww!! monday 5:09am back in 9ja with MMA crew!/
but y'all knew. .D been fly since get go. . so this aint even news/
i need to get away. .deep down i knu i paid ma dues/

cos D played his part for his department b4 he deParts/
4 days later. .immigration stare at me queer cos I'm back at the spot!/
have plans to aaiting at d port of West India Docks. ./
i'm about the paper dawgs. .watch out for waste from the Isle of Dogs/

mehn. .i deserve these weeks at the Executive Marriott Apartments. ./
where i sit to execute this lyrics wit ma mac pro as the parchment/
getting chauffeured in Jags and benzes. .plannin a charriot compartment/

phuck d black cabs, ,black benzes. .im sticking with d black Jags../
grown man swag . .none u sissy posies hitting me with the gay jabs/

feasts in Manhattan Grills. . .shuttin down restaurants in Cobot place. .
evenin strolls in the square. .getting unruly with wifey so cudnt cavort babes/
Boisdale. . La Tasca for some spanish cousine. . West india Quay/

Cineworld with the kids. .splurgin like i got money in the keys/
don't tryna diss. .
webbed feet. .i dodge shots..cos been feeding at Dock MasterHouse/
touring. .shoppin. . spoiling ma spouse . .cos I'm d master of ma house/
off to Romford in a bit for a week. .to make that suburban town rouse. . .

oNe

Ibime: Glacierz better pump his breaks/ I'm eating luncheon steak/
while he's busy making dumb mistakes/
So if he make any attempt to punch above his weight/
Newtons third law will ensure. . .that something breaks!/
I'm puffing brown Marley/ You dumbing out? hardly!/
So if Glacierz say he's 'going in'. . . I'll station guns at the entrance. . . for his coming out party!!/
You a parody of my shine/ seeking parity with my lines/
I throw you off the NASA space station. . . to demonstrate the 'gravity of my crimes'/
And peace to Prekky/ for following Jesus heavy/
but if you feeling like Mase. . . then quit rap. . . and please leave already!/
I ain't tryna mimic or joke/ or ridicule hope/
My only beef is Noah. . .cos the species in anthropology. . . couldn't fit in a boat!/
How they expect a nigga to float?/ I'm glad you quit and eloped/
cos a Lion such as myself. . . shouldn't be in the same ship with a goat!/
Psych! . . . I'm just pulling ya legs. . . and twisting ya arms/
I love Prekky. . . I don't wish the lil' nigga no harm/
But Deli Dimes tryna dance with a Cobra/ and battle Jehovah/
till a punch to the jaw. . . ensure his chin is parallel with his shoulder/
I'm the kinda emcee you could never disdain/ cos I forever remain/ the unquenchable flame/
Even Prince recall how I left several enemies slain. . . on memory lane!/
I leave niggas crying tears/ when I ignite their fears/
DBR the big homie. . . I say my peace to pioneers/
Mikuz also upped the stakes/ with lots of plays/
And nowadays we got ill niggas like Joshuabase/
All things said, I think the level has risen/ more dudes are better at spitting/
But any nigga hailing Sleakid must be definitely kidding/
That dude never deserve any cred he was given/
Espec'ly considering/ he semi literate. . .and most of what he texting was bitten!/
Can't forget Ema Prince and Jamez3D/
who made the rhymes flow easier than abc/
Thunderstorm, Nosagold, much talent abound/
Airmark, Glacierz and others hanging around/
And Prekky one of the tightest netcees, whether home or abroad/
On FB, dude was controlling the board/ before the homie found God/
Illscripts was exposed as a fraud/ when Mik tested him/
Just like Sauron lost to Ibi. . . even whilst biting Metasin/
Mikuz and DBR were crazy devils/ who forced niggas to raise their level/
Golden emcees. . . while others tainted with other shades of metal/
2009, Streetz owned the winter/ He scolded niggas/
Even though he first came posing as an unknown beginner/
Can't forget the Don King, the founder of Warcraft/
Eldee refereed many bouts that we all clashed/
And the award for most improved goes to DJ 5 Naira/
Whenever he shorten his lines, all his rhymes are livewires/
All things said, peace to all the players and posers/
FFR staying alive. . . till the day that it's over!/

Ibime bruv. .this is some d0pe memory lane ishh man.
Kinda feelin tempted to pen but havin too much london fun on family vacay
Not a good time to come out of retirement. .lol
Good looking out bruv

oNe

Ema prince:
Reading all y'all posts/ . had me feeling indisposed/
A bit out of sorts..cos y'all stinking lies,I perceived it through the nose/
I'll be beating all my foes/ till fluids start leaking through they dome/
And it will never be a 'tie' . . not even with a rope/
All my writtens are in gold/top models,they see me with the most/
Rocking designers till 'a-tire'..and u twats wuldn't fit into my clothes/
I'll do a steven to this bloke/cos this heathen should be stoned/
And make the 'man go' fruitless . . he died from ripping what he sow/
The truth is hidden in this flows/and it will begin to unfold/
That battling mike doesn't give a nigga the chance of sitting on the throne/
Cos we know who the true king is in this zone/..try asking the fans/
Snap out of your reverie cos you pose no treat..but a 'flash in the pan'/
So,step back with your plans/cos if my cage rattles,he'll be choked/
Saving FFR? . . I remember when DBR was saddled with the load/
And there was Ibime . the same cat that won and battled him the most/
Ballerinas 'took to they heels' . . like they had shackles on they toes/
Now they back to prattle with they flows/ as if they done enough/
Like a bible story,he'll be taken directly to the spirit world when i give the scum 'e-noch'/
And if I'm gon' recall/ DBR kinda passed the torch to mike/...
...who fought with scythe/along with bis and the thread was warm and bright/
Untill some boring guys/ invaded the thread with stuffs they bite/
But whoever calls himself Moses should leave with his people cos I'll 'schurlee' arrive/
A lotta y'all deserves no respect/ that's why your verse,I neglect/
I make you play the role of a man laid 6ft..nigga rehearse for ur death/
Cos ur demise been decided/ . . especially biters and pirates/
And if we battling for the throne,I'm smoking y'all till I'm tittled 'his highness'/



respect to all the people that have always kept this thread going..Ibime,mikuz,5naira,sleak did his part sha etc

I see u dude. .this is the issh right thuuur!!

oNe

opuses: so i step in d room. . with fork and spoons/table ds beef. . to get u. . torn and bruised/really dnt nid gun abuse/
. cos ur chances of winning. . abt to turn 'fairy tales'. . when i attack with 'c o c k and bulls'/

phuck!!

. no escape when ds subtle boy spits/
I brought beef. . while u come to boil beans/
so if i were u. . I'll put dose 'baby materials' u call bars aside. . cos am really not d sort to 'toy' with/

. Now let's start ds way/im dat brute who madly slay/or would hardly say/
. . 'i will phuck ur chic'. . instead i ask her on a date. .'relate with her'. . and put her in a 'family way'/

. cos ma deadly flows tighter/am david wit the hits. . u merely goliath/
so its laughter when i see u sending blows sire/
or throwing techs. .
. . cos we knw u 'run thru streets with no real threat'. . like telephone wires/

so i brought ma 16s/to murder heathens/
.hv him 'firing on all cylinders'. . when i hit him with 'rods and pistons'/
then when he insist. . on a further meeting/
. I'll simply storm hs 'office' wit mobs. . to give him a 'formal' beating/

i dn't stretch. . bt got good flexibility/
I remove ds 'cow's bone'. . 'hang hs skin to dry'. . and present u guest, 'kilishi'/
. Now he runs@mention of ma initial. . cos he knws i bring 'Forth knocks'. . like us military/(fort knox)

bt am d son of d soil. . dts what ds G's nature proves/
I leave u with 'red cheeks'. . when I wield 'make-up' tools/. to force an agreement. .
. . then seal off d 'contract'. . . with 'signature' moves/

I'm not sympathetic boss/cos I'll hv u 'running ill'. . with ma sick 'athletic' punch/
then leave u stucked. . betwn 'north&south poles'. . to knock u down. . with 'magnetic force'/

Hmmmm. .me likey likey. .nice!

Ibime: .

I leave black niggas with red lesions/ when I grip their neck region/
Priests perform excorsisms. . . to cast ME out. . .of possessed demons!/
I enslave devils/ and great rebels/ in encased metal/
Niggas think their cars are lightning fast. . .till I cycle past. . . while pressing my brake pedal!/
I'm a man with a bright mind/ so don't stand in my sight line/
I brainstorm in petrol tanks. . . then put my plans in the pipeline/
Y'all are crude weak muppets/ spitting routine subjects/
Even before this dude seen profits . . . I was wearing Louboutins . . on a shoestring budget!/
Office colleagues say I know too much/ . . So whats the reason for my golden touch?/
They at the coffee machine, loading cups/. . . while I get my caffeine. . . by chewing Kola nuts!/
Hold a cobra clutch/ till ya blue and aphysixiated/
Every dude I'm affiliated/ is groomed and sophisticated/
Cats know they damned and doomed/ when this masked man land with goons/
Cos we shot callers. . . while you barbershop ballers . . . couldn't score at the last chance saloon!/
Ya chick'll form position/ when my dikk in composition/
cos y'all flaccid lovers can't compete . . .with stiffer competition!/
Any fan on location/ will give a standing ovation/
cos I bamboozle dudes with simple a b c. . like the formula for quadratic equations!/


oNe

Landlord. .i see ya.


oNe

airmark:

D.ont B.e R.ude, am no boy. Besides,i gave him his own dose. Old man check his past claims that other ninjas bit.Were you blind when he claimed I stole 'Floor reader' ish from him?

Rude? Dude dont be so sensitive!
So u took it as being rude tellin to chill?
oh i gettit? 'da'phuck' part is rude?
ohhh. .no wonder the "oldman" respose. .lmao!

ok Boy!. .or girl if u like,(just kidin') i dont read everybody or e'rthin here,especially d lenghty ones
so ma response was based on that your very comment.
Waeva history both of u had aint important. I was just tryna educate . .
cos dudes are blowin' this bitin' thing outta proportion.

E.g if i threw a shot at u sayin :

see i got fact. ./
sm1 tell this Dirty Mouth f@g. .to Close Up the gab . .and chill with the brag. . /
cos he cant Fit in my Cap. .cos his Mac lean. .'fore i Shoot off his dental with my Fat Gat!

Guess u'll call me a biter and ask Mik to ban me, yea?
But by the share level of tripple to quad entendre in it,
i'l be peeved if any1 said i bit u or DJ5

U ma dude airmark, so i wasnt even goin at u. Wat for? y shud i?
But if u were offended, lemme act as an oldman u called me and apologize

oNe

airmark:



Mikuz should ban you for this. Don't know when you gon start innovating ya own puns and wordies.

Boy. .chill'da'phuck out!
There's no connection btw dj5's bars n mik's..cept
U sayin Mik has cornered d toothpaste text ref market
In all its homophones and alliterations. .which I think not.

oNe

Ibime:

Joell Ortiz and Cassidy murdered the replies. . . As in!

Would also love to hear response from J Cole

Yea Ortiz killed it. Hvnt heard Cass tho, but i kinda like LOS response too.
Then Lu's "SLR2" response and MickeyFacts'"SouthPark" response is aii. .
Funny the cats respondin' are those not even called out on the list. .lol
As much as i wuld like to hear Cole's response i hav a feelin he wont.
Wat Kdot did is kinda similar to wat cole did on Lookin4Trouble where he
killed e'rybody on the track and declared himself "the chosen one".
These sure are interrestin' times. .

oNe

Joshuabase:
Bro you just broke into my head and stole an idea! . . . . Again!!!!!!! Like seriously #TotallyUncool Bro . . . . . I'm changing the locks

Lol. .iv lost count how often that hapns to me..
Its like some dudes here hav access to ma mental rhyme pad.

oNe

Ibime: Hahaha. . . Kendrick Lamar responses got me bugging.

One dude Astro spit. . .

You pompous/ tryna take two sides of the Compass/
Astro came to put an end to all this nonsense/

Hehehe. .ibime azin ehn. .
And d way 9th wonder was hypin it didnt help matters.
Personally I think its an ok verse..jayE in ma opinion had a better verse.

oNe

mikuz: .
.
.
I roll with Phantoms/ phucking ho's in mansions/ cos Im dop3 and handsome/
I floor you in texts or even in audios . . cos you still wont handle MIK'S TAPES . . even if you own an ALBUM!/

Im never rusty with flows/ thats something he knows/ cos Im fresh from top to the toes/
. . his bride call me farmer . . cos I 'rip' 'her vest' . . each time my 'tong' and lips are sucking the 'hoe'!/

Ima be on ya girls case like attorneys/ if her waistline is curvy. ./
but if i see her on a 'spaghetti' top . . Ill make her my bedmate . . or better still . . . 'ma crony'!/

I control real mills/ but thats no big deal/ cos I patrol sleek wheels/
with chicks on those big heels/ ya broke peeps feel/
. . I bore ya 'honey well' . . that she now eats my c0ck like a 'whole wheat meal'/

. . You not aggressive . . You just an angry dude/ with an appalling attitude/
You get shot for real when Im throwing weapons . . cos I 'hurl marks' . . . now thats an 'iconic attribute'!!/
(hallmarks)

You heads are starters/ but Im a test for titans cos Im an fervent rapper/
. . so if anyone claims that this 'pro test ants' . . I stab him severally . . till the 'cat leaks' like Reverend fathers!/

These gents are stalling/ but what I pen is something/ even ya goons could bet is stunning/
. . So if he 'meddles' in my affairs . . my men will gun him/
And say his funeral 'rites' . . even if its just his mum thats 'left' to mourn him!/

so you best retire/ before my tecs will fire/
I tame with wild beast . . cos even 'terrorists in Sri Lanka' . . couldnt stand my Tamil Tigers!/

Nice barz there boy! iLike.

Tho i HATE seein parenthesis within barz!!
Or u too wan start yori yori tinz?

oNe

ThaBlaqBonez:

Dbr I'v been following for a long while, as far back as ur battles with ibime, ur digesting line still rings in my head........

Jes need to swing swords with ibime! Atleast once

oh! seen. Didnt realise.
Aii dude. .t'will be nice if u cld drop more barz tho. .at a high rate

ThunderStorm:
Lol . "been following". . Aint thesame as "been dropping".

lol. .exactly Thunder. .
He needs to have "been droppin"b4 he swings sword

oya lets keep it rollin. .wanna feed ma eyes!
Retirement sweet o!!

oNe

ThaBlaqBones. .
nice. .not bad at all. .but boy easy on the call out.
U wanna throw in more barz b4 u do that tho.

oNe

Ok. .personally I think this is a weaker battle..less aggression and no major wow bars.
Maybe ibime predicted his opponent wdnt cause any upset hence decided to take it easy. .far from epic IMO, but wat do I know?
Still he edged it..but not by an impressive margin..Glacier did well.

My call is straight forward. . Ibime wins this.

oNe

ThunderStorm: RULES!!!
»30lines each
»No Biting and Recycling
»Good Comments are welcomed
»Deadline: 21st July 2013
»these ninjas can post fo themselves or email ur verse to
magneto4243@yahoo.com


VOTING PROCEDURES

»Methaphors,
Wordplays,
Rhymes,
Flow,
Punch,
Personals

NB: credible voters are only those who have thrown a couple of rhymes here since last week, other than that, dont vote,
unless on the consent of both battling ninjas!

GOOD LUCK NINJAS

What?!. .so i aint even a credible voter any longer ..?
Haba Thunder, cut retirees some slack na. .u harsh o. .
Na by force say i must to drop barz?
i imagined i'v dropped enuff bars on FFR to make me credible voter for 9 life times na

oNe

But this Thunder na badt guy tho! Gor mad barz!!
This is really an impressive showin bruv. .really impressive.

Thunder VS MIKUZ plssssss


oNe

WOW!!! Now that's right thuuur is a battle!!
Both went in HAM. .no burger tho!

Hope it aint to late to vote tho


Opener: Ibime

Flow: Tie

Rhymes: Thunder! clearly

Metas: T¡e! Both went bonkers

Personals: Thunder

Punchl¡nes: Ibime edged this.

Wordplay: Ibime

Creativity: Ibime

Closure: IBI-phuckin-ME! i actually clapped when i read that. Thats what vets are made of

Overall, Ibime had relevant, circumstantial bars, name-bars.
Been a while i saw him in this form. Good one son!

Didnt know Thunder is this cray either. .thumb up to u bruv. Will like to see THUNDER vs MIKUZ tho.


Final Verdict: IBIME!!!!

oNe

BIS, noooo, u cant retire o. Y na??!!
I must negotiate u out of this retirement move.
watchu want son ??

Ibime: .

See me, see trouble/ I thought niggas wanted to beef and rumble/
all of a sudden, they both acting meek and humble/
Telling us about their whereabouts/ but that's something we don't care about/
They just beating around the bush like marabouts/
Now Mik is suddenly busy/ when he the one who wanted to diss me/
but battling at short notice is something too risky/
When you phucking with Ibi/ you need to beware/
I type their verses in one sitting. . . they need a week to prepare/
Last week, Thunder begging me to give him some lessons/
His exams wasn't important when he was pleading and begging/
See, I do this leisurely. . . weekend is when I shine/
These unemployed jokers use all week to rhyme. . . but on weekends, they aint got time/
These dudes only pose like manikins/ with their sabre rattling/
Only question tomorrow is. . . which of these cocksuckers am I battling?/

oNe

Lmao badt guy! i like that closure die!

mikuz: .
.
.

Quick 16 . . .

Phock the frees you drop/ with that verse it must prolly mean you nuts/ this rubbish needs to stop/
cos how can you claim I begged for the rematch . . when you were the one who first brought the issue up/

I leave this foe sent with ten crooks/ to mess his fair looks/
I remain a formidable force . . and his form won't still 'take shape' . . grabbing a geometry textbook!/

I've surpassed this dawgs' pinnacle/ to beat me you gon' need luck or a very strong miracle/
cos you can't be my equals . . when you can't go past 3 to 4 syllables/

I text rap with golden rhymes/ vets dash when this stern chap is loading nines/
even Alba could tell you 'bout my heroics on facebook . . where I 'left backs' with swollen spines!!/

I bring carnage to homes/ you not the first king I've ravaged his bones/
Ask Chuka . . Rap genesis gave me a title . . after I beat their ruler . . and made him vacate the throne/

You vexing because I'm bright/ and ya fame is domestic compared to mine/ if we do a check on the other sites/
Ya scheme is deluged with loopholes . . but I aint talking about a 'liquid offering' . . when I say my technique is 'watertight'!/

. . com Sunday . . Ill blaze real gats on him/ fat mofo . . Ma lines will have the hazy fäggot scream/
cos hence he'll be sold in petrol stations after the beating make him 'gas or lean'!/

You got fame? now you claiming what? celebrity?/ look there's no need to ask . . you don't drop intergrity/
cos I wonder why would you want to fight me again . . after postulating vividly . . that you got me murked comprehensively/

Nice. .



oNe

LOL. .see charcoal callin kettle black!
U are a d!k rider if u always need to make dippy point bout ishhh witout understanding the context.
E'rbody, well xcept the dumb ones which u tryna be part of, understood the lines so i worry much bout ur motivations.
How on earth will U, who usually use parenthesis in ur bars come here
and troll about sm1 who did a "breakdown" of his verse because its was requested for?

Way back I was the one tellin U that u dont have to xplain ur lines in parenthesis smack in the moment of delivery. I did my breakdown after i'v dropped the verse (which artiste do).

U the guilty 1 here dude, u use annotations, parenthesis. .i dont!
Niggaz lie a lot, proofs dont.
Now, true story. Remember when i dubbed ur lines "YORI YORI" verse. .cos u always puttin d meanin in BRACKETS ??
Now u'l tryna talk smart? Now u talkin trash? Mtcheww. . boy, take a walk!


I know u just wanna drag me into stuff. .but sorrwieee not tday.

#thatAll

oNe

GLACIERZ!:
@DBR. . .help me
I mean decipher please

aint BARS for CLUB dancers. .nor TOT of young lovers/
colon cancer. .hard to stomach. .memory of forlon mothers/

bars(ma lines, a real bar). . .club..dancer( u know this). .tot(a young child) also means strong drink
when u preggy u shdnt take strong drinks. .plus kids cant stomach strong drnks. .

sojourn altered. . water broke while waiting for the mail man/
who got the wrong address. .with complex dispatch from her failed marriage/

SOJOURN ALTERED(her stay in the man's house changed) WATER BROKE(culd be tears from her eyes, also when water breaks in a woman its time for DELIVERY)
WAITING FOR A MAIL MAN( mailman aka DELIVERY man, or she's been waiting for a MALE child)
wrong address( wrong DELIVERY) complex dispatch (complex message and delivery ) If pple dont get the intricacy of these bars, its either cos its complex or the wrong pple are readin it(wrong address)

now she's docile with hate. .secreted bile of insipid rage/
seat of ancient love poisoned. .like that vital organ went under d blade/

The Liver is referred to as the seat of love and Violent emotion, so if the liver fell under a blade= cut off=DE-LIVER, love dies hence hate, so is violence, which makes u docile. .however bile which figuratively speaks of anger is secreted by the liver creates the paradox of insipid rage, and hate becomes docile.

trapped by lies. .desperately needs a saviour to set her free
been the truth in the booth. .who let all these deceivers in/

trapped=caged,imprisoned by bars, lies spoken = , deceitful bars Delivered/
savior to set her free= lookin for some1 who spits the truth to come Deliver her
And who else speaks the truth in here apart from DBR

grievers in/ complications. .she's tryin for a male child for him. ./
lookin for excuses. .but pain numb her elocution. . smile foreign/
quite gory. .breach conception ..cant push. .hard parturition/
clueless of situation. .half baked knowledge. .cos y'all paid half tuition/

This quartet zeros in on the difficulties of DELIVERY. .in different ramifications
Complication, breach conception, hard parturition.
While Numbed Elocution also reinforces the inability to articulately Deliver
And anythin half baked. .bread, cake, thats half paid for wont get Delivered either.

over ur heads wat i dispatched. . re-read d bars. . see wat its tied to /
see i convey d governin totz. . convoluted talks bout the title/
in other words. .16bars on d topical no mentionin of the topic/
few mins in. .so tell me who d phuck culdda topped me/

and cos not e'rbody will get it, i guess it mustav gon over pple head talkin bout DELIVERY witout saying the word DELIVERY..

#thatAll

oNe

Ibime:

What's the story? Who dey find male child? I hope you are not putting your wife under pressure oh. Hehehe

LMAO. .nahh bruv. All fiction. .u know how i does

Ibime:


DBRs topical only obfuscates the theme/
Postulate for me/

Hehehe. .im sure u of all figured the connection to the title.
Guess u just want me to break it down for others. .
there plenty knowledge, wordplay, sub-mentions and allusions to the word "delivery" and its variants in that 16. .
eg. .the second "quartet'.
Will gladly decipher them if y'all want tho

oNe

errrr. .hvnt written in a looooooooooong time, so kinda rusty.
But this is how i approach "topical". .
vibe with me. .

this aint bars for club dancers. .nor totz of young lovers/
colon cancer. .hard to stomach. .memory of forlon mothers/
sojourn altered. . water broke while waiting for the mail man/
who got the wrong address. .with complex dispatch from her failed marriage/

now she's docile with hate. .secreted bile of insipid rage/
seat of ancient love poisoned. .like that vital organ went under d blade/
trapped by lies. .desperately needs a saviour to set her free/
been the truth in the booth. .who let all these deceivers in/

grievers in/ complications. .she's tryin for a male child for him. ./
lookin for excuses. .but pain numb her elocution. . smile foreign/
quite gory. .breach conception ..cant push. .hard parturition/
clueless of situation. .half baked knowledge. .cos y'all paid half tuition/

over ur heads wat i dispatched. . re-read d bars. . see wat its tied to /
see i convey d governin totz. . convoluted talks bout the title/
in other words. .16bars on d topical no mentionin of the topic/
few mins in. .so tell me who d phuck culdda topped me/

#picksRace

oNe