this is nice. ilke!
Yuppp! june da14th. . let's go there!!

oNe

Got a lil free time tday, so just penned a lil sthn-sthn. Vibe wit me. . .   



I put in work. . the rest are Lazy Cats. . Garfield/
Heart weak, cold Limbs. .can't react that quick!/
They UK cold. .I'm MMA hot, if u ask me/
And Ma Heats row In gland. . but their Gats weak!/ gettit?
Yea I'm dat sick. .this is drastic/
Run. . u still won't catch up if I do back flips/

your verses mushy like essay on *Kiss Tips*/
Reverse it. .ma Phlegm contaminated. . I *Spit Sick*!/
Don't think I'm  Floppy cos I got loadz of  Diss kit./
U Got Canibus Tool? Hahaha. . reason  u weak like BIScuit!/

Best know. .this dude  been ill from get go/
Ate barz like choco. .goal poacher like Crespo/
power Surge tru ma pen at Night. . I got jet flow/
Execute d Lines like d verbs been waitin on Death row!/

I'm a Beast, untammable. .u Vets know/
Spit Fire on Flammables whereever u [i]Pet rol[/i]l/ getit?

oNe

There's nothin heated bout this nau . .
Plus X.O shudnt feel like he's been slept on here. .
His knowledge base is applauded. .and yea he's lyrical. .
All we just sayin is that he aint better than M9.
But he's sm1 to watch out for. . kapish!

oNe

Been this good while y'all was sleeping on me/
"Clint Eastwood" aint even got a shot flippin on me/
drop your "up north" Call. .go to work. . no more sleeping hommies/
u know me. .
i scribble  Arsenal of verses. . that dribbles like Persie/
mercy. .d meanings always triple in parts. .see!/

Crip on me when i pass. . i leave your blood tricklin fast/
cos like Candle wit No Stand. . i Cripple u Wacks!/
wit your Cheesy pen game. . i aint feelin' u Rats/
watyu scribbling lacks. . wordplay. .see im back bringing it back/
loose your Candy's Foil. .the only way u lay[i] Hands On Raps![/i]/

looks like i lost ma Head. .and got no plans to find it/
rewind it. .i spit Heartless barz. . cant confine it/ getit?
ma punch from a-cute-angle. .know our math. .cosign me/
if u cant figure that out. .dude e nor concern me/

ironically im in a circle. .lookin for right angle/
Stretch your side . .till your tri angle dangles/
slaves to the chains. .these b!.tches call it bangles/
hang dudes/. . rockin fake ice till necks feel strangled/
yea im a stronghold/. . u'z a class clown. .ni99a i clap down/
this' ma town/ stand up to me, beat u black. .flat down!/

Happy holiday . . .

oNe

Back on ma BS. .still rusty tho, just tryna ease back into this. .


This s'pose be penultimate verse. . see i pen ultimate verse/
ugly bait served. . i congregate dirge wit Consummate verb/
your team Mates on verge to be crushed. . their limb converge/
Large body of Outta the world Bars/  u can call them Mars/

Math. .See i calculate. .flawless verses immaculate/
concept is accurate. .the game got me accolade/
i culd Pop jean paul. .like i got beef wit catholic. ./
i Count real paper. .y'all bunch'a Count.erfeit/

count to three.  .good boy, thats your count of defeat/
intelligent verses. . count on me to  counter fakes/
im a Bright boy tho. . but no fam' of Chimeze/
so y'all tryna Ape me.  .i guess y'all Chimpanzee/

and if y'all zoomed in Sedan. . no one got that far/
Sudan flow.  .i Beast on FFR like i got Tha Fur!/
got the Bread cos your Pen is Idle , , u Phukin Loafer/
go Deep in on d Couch. .our chic nickname me So far!/

oNe

slimshay:

Na wa o. ya'll want to start this debate again. I think M9 should have added a 'just' for those fixated on the grammar.

'I'm not a star, I'm just a bigger planet than jupiter'

Well, maybe but Honesty SLIM, that "just" aint even necessary, really.

rapjunkie:

only dunces can not understand that line. . . . . .

Church!

oNe

Em is a better rapper by miles.
BUT i prefer kanye's state of mind, his POV.

oNe

The PING PONG/KING KONG line wasnt an error but a deliberate juxtapositional rhyme.
Listen closely, iceprince said "psych" at the end of it.


BIGGER PLANET THAN JUPITER, by M9 aint an error.
I'v discussed this on another thread, so wont waste ma time wit any1 on this.

RM has good delivery and. . .well, only good delivery.
Lyrically RM is. . . .
"i can’t think of nothing nice to say, you’re NOT nice okay"#in Ortiz's voice


oNe

Was gon pen ma usual stuff. . But Shaz kinda got me goin a differently. .


I got a pen in ma mouth. .ma tongue a ready writer/
Speakin truth in d booth. .tryna make throngs of many wiser/
See I'm an early riser. .Easter?. .there nothin nicer/
Flexin ma muscle fiber. .yea I'm buildin ma faith/
Apprehend things u can't comprehend. .ma new mind state /
So I'm hangin on to Him. .cos He hung on d cross/
Not catholic. .so rosary aint even the crux. ./
But when His blood hit d crust. .I knu I cld trust/
Put ma life in His handz. .of course I knu I'm on course/
Gave Him ma heart like organ surgeon/
I escape the fiery dungeon/
Was dead but resuscitated by His resurrection/
He's the way. . when I was lost He gave sure direction/
And He's ma dictionary. . cos He gave ma life a meanin/
Not sayin I'm perfect yet. .I kno ma flesh still sinnin/
Tempations I'm still feelin/ . .Thank God He's always forgivin'/
So ma spirit keeps beamin. .wit d light
Of His salvation/
Thanks Shaz. . for this ecclesiastical motivation/


Happy easter y'all. He's d reason for d season.

oNe

@slim
Wtf!! Hehehe. . I knu guyz been brewin hot ishhh! O'l boy, ma pennin' career had beta stay on hold.
Nice one dude. .

oNe

@Ibis.
Now that'll be nice. Beta get urself there ASAP and send in d heat. .

oNe

mykali:

@jonjnr. . .liked the LMN3 isht mehn, really nice.

@DBR. . .seems we're all engrossed in 'real life' to have much stuff to write. You used to 'spice' up this thread back in the days naw, maybe it needs your 'cookin'g abilities again, lol.

Yea Mykali. .wat it do.
Just been sooo busy like u rightly mentioned.
Just hurts to see this place so cold.
I'ma try do stuff again. .lets see if we can get ppl's interest up again.

oNe

goshh. . .this place has gone so forkin cold!
Lame a$s havin a field day. this aint good for NL FFR section.

Wia ma generals at

oNe

PPle just like beef sha,

Thos eof u that heard "shut up DBR" got diks in ur ears, so fukk watchu heard!

Ibis. .u went in bruv.
I like d fact that u even spazzed outta ur comfy zone. It can only get beta bruv.

Take all the comments and criticisms. .they all ingredients for a doper u.

oNe

@Ofokality

u kno nau. .pple alwayz get carried away with "new" acts.
im sure u rememba threadz and comments that says M.i is more lyrical when he 1st dropd.

Its just d wayz of those who dont know ishhh bout poetry. .thinkin if u do multies and
u can  weave flowery words tgeda, howbeit forcefully. .u automatically take d label of a lyricist.

oNe

Errrmmm. .XO. .ermmm. .dude aiyte.
Compare wit M9. .not just yet! But start by comparing him wit V.E.C 1st,. .
talkin' bout hangin' wit OD and Modey, Mode aint even in d same lyrical zone wit OD. .
scratch that, he aint in d same lyrical zone wit nobody. .Y'all need to go listen to Malcom iX again.
The cohesiveness of his barz. .d 'seemlessness". .and that way years ago!

Senovoe is a nascent lyrical dude no doubt, flow is cool, but still needs some tunnin' and tonnin' here and there.
Needs to shed some weight on the 'forced' punchlines approach.

Its different when u have bright lines, and when u set out to deliberately create them.
The former sound believable and in sync, the latter sounds forced.

XO has the lyrical buddin' genes to be d next in line to receive d mantle from Nine. .
but for now. .no need to even put it in vote, cos nobody touchin' Dr. Ninestein.


PS: i tot pple said M.i is lyrically beta than M9, so y not compare X.O and M.i #JustWonderin

oNe

Im on it! *gettin a cotton bud clearin wax for lyrical eargasm*

oNe

Chynewho?! Not to be discounted?
Hehehe. .this one na serious "gbanjo"!!
mtchheeeeuuwwww. . .nonsense *in M.i's voice*

oNe

M.i2 is an ok , no, a good album. .
but classic? hell-freakin-noooooo!!!
I'v even played more of TAI since Mi2 came out.


oNe

Hot n cold poles. . u in d middle  .  . a goalkeeper/
im a soul sweeper. .win your gurl over but aint gon' keep her/
Im Headlite to this dudes. .they plastic back fenders/
1st class kinda dude. . .tho labelled a back bencher/

All their hates ricochet. . back to the sender/
We dey Attack. . . now na dem be Defender/
Male and female. .  both feel wat i enGender/

i Matter. .Occupy space. .of salient agenda/
Real skill.  . no Projector. . not silent pretende[/i]r/
Remember. . .i [i]fashion bars. .iron bender/

your chic is in splendor. . .cant resist how i bend her/
banged her. .get her juiced up like a blender/
your verse Weak ,  like u Serve  drink. . u' BarTender/
Im a big spender. .each verse a legal Tender!

oNe

Wow. .been an effin long time. .im as rusty as a moorefuca! i see u all. .



Been a while. .lemme jump in. . i got this one/
if i dont like any rapper. . i'ma diss one/
make their eyes get the shine when i put ma blings on/
and if i get Pissed off. . y'all will get pissed on/

most y'all Spineless. . cant Back up wat y'all claim/
cant raise the roof . .got hands like john Mc cain's/
i do it lyrically. . i dont need to flog wit my cane/
even when i name no names  targets still feel the pain/

u dirty non hiphop heads shud get your a$.s to d saloon/
get your hair shampooed. . i get Cheer u get Boo
and if i get boos. . it's haterz baby boos/
so pay attention. .matta fact gimme salute/

To see u haters i'ma need some zoom lenses/
cos all i see tru ma shades are cool benzes/
now u acting defensive. . wit ma pen im pensive/
no offences. .ma flow is the future urs past tenses/

must be outta your senses. . if u haven't sensed this/
dudes wanna test lyrically put 'em on death sentences/


oNe

hey. .Bams2pac.
Nice one. .voice doublin not as bad tho. .cos there are time u mute or swing the projection ports of the voices
all depends on watchu tryin to achieve. .its not e'rtime u sync the voice timind accurately.

Nice hook. .Bamsyle is so good at the hook thing im tempted to call him a hooker


and i like the Atiku line. .i wonder y. .errmmmm. .ok cos i'v had a line like that playin in ma head since,
mtcheeeww. . damn u Bamsyle for beatin me to it!
good lookin' Bam. .

I can predict how this is gon go. .no octopus
Cos when ur 2 bruvs fight u sure kno who's gon win, dantcha ?

oNe

Let's go diaaaa!!

oNe

Tot i had dropped ma comment. .just found out i didnt.
H.Jizzle ma bruv. .u know u got these tracks on the lockdown.
Thumbz bruv.
Now, Bamsyle. .c'mon. .we'v always hapnd to be on same page
but this time around i beg to disagree. .*sure u got a reason for ur position*

Mayb a way to settle this isshh btw both of u ma bruvs is a battle.
I say a 2way battle. 1st text and 2nd audio.
Do i get an amen?!!!

oNe

The peace was cut short wit M.I's release of the BEEF track! Nor blame KH abeg.

oNe

M.i just got "Pyro[i]ed[/i]"!!!!!


oNe

The beef is legit.
Now whether u think KH can spit or flow or not, dude is gettin the job done.
Which reinforces ma stance that when push comes to shove. .LYRICS carries d day in this genre called Hiphop/Rap

oNe

Courage da-whizkid, clap for urself. .weldone! *in M.i"s voice*

Keep grindin' boii. .u can only get better.
Good lookin'

oNe

Kelly handsome handz down. .sadly so

The fact that M.i only dedicated few linez and KH did a whole track is no excuse at all.
Emcee like M9 snuffed out GP who did a full track with just a bar!now thats a lyricist.

From "Kelly handsome is handsome i'l tell him when i see him" to "See wowoh pikin dey form handsome"
"kelechuckwu clap for urself. .weldone", im like WTF? mtchhhewww. .
I like d "super eagle dont play against the falcon" line tho, but
M.i needs to lyrically spaz out and kill KH for good!
Serrizly, i cant take this singer humiliatin african rapper #01 like this.

oNe

Hehehe, pls eldee don't. The last time u put ir effort into sth,d whole NL waited foreva b4 abddulegend came tru lol

oNe

Happy nu year Ibis
Mykali . .compliments. .mehn.

oNe

04kaa:

oya faint mobingo

lmao. .ofoka u nor well o

oNe