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Literature › Re: Little Words And Happiness by Divepen1(mod): 8:10pm On Dec 26, 2018
ALAYORMII:
Lovely
Thanks boss..
Literature › Re: Little Words And Happiness by Divepen1(mod): 8:10pm On Dec 26, 2018
samuelchimmy:
Unfortunately this will not make front page
Loll.. It will at the right time...
Literature › Re: Today In The History Of Fortune City by Divepen1(mod): 8:08pm On Dec 26, 2018
Today, 2016
NOAA's father and Mummy Church were killed by Chloe
Literature › Re: A Foreign Literature Class Will Be Treating My Short Story. I'm Amazed. by Divepen1(mod): 6:15pm On Dec 26, 2018
doggedfighter:
Congregation Divepen,this is just the beginning of great achievements.
Thanks boss...
Literature › Re: A Foreign Literature Class Will Be Treating My Short Story. I'm Amazed. by Divepen1(mod): 6:15pm On Dec 26, 2018
madjune:
Will they pay you for reviewing your works in class or will they recommend it to the pulitzer committee?

If not, forget it cos you aint making money.
Logically, it's of no effect but having your unpublished work being read in a foreign class speaks to your level of improvement.
Literature › Re: A Foreign Literature Class Will Be Treating My Short Story. I'm Amazed. by Divepen1(mod): 5:09pm On Dec 26, 2018
Firstgentleman1:
Congratulations bro. This is not just a recognition of your unique talent, but also a testament of your kind heartedness and goodwill.

This is only the begining, because where fate is pushing you to is an unexplored territory.
Amennnnn ooo
Literature › Re: A Foreign Literature Class Will Be Treating My Short Story. I'm Amazed. by Divepen1(mod): 5:03pm On Dec 26, 2018
dominique:
Congrats mod. This will be a stepping stone to greater recognition. I pray the awesome writers we have on here get the recognition they deserve as well.



Definitely a typo, After all i is next to o on the keyboard
Thanks boss. And Amen to that prayer.
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Literature › Re: A Foreign Literature Class Will Be Treating My Short Story. I'm Amazed. by Divepen1(mod): 5:02pm On Dec 26, 2018
Codes151:
It’s not a big deal! I have more than 1m people using my research, reports, essay and summary for presentation, summary or references
Well, it's a big deal to me o
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Literature › Re: A Foreign Literature Class Will Be Treating My Short Story. I'm Amazed. by Divepen1(mod): 5:01pm On Dec 26, 2018
AntiWailer:
Congrats dear
Thanks..
Literature › Re: A Foreign Literature Class Will Be Treating My Short Story. I'm Amazed. by Divepen1(mod): 5:01pm On Dec 26, 2018
BruncleZuma:
So who dey PostGrad no fit type 'hope'...? Congrats Op
Thanks boss.. lol
Literature › Re: 'Lost But Satisfied' A Thriller By Akíntayo Akinjide by Divepen1(mod): 8:52am On Dec 26, 2018
Eberechi24:
I Kant take this. Divepen come and hold me o before I lose it..
Please o. Remember the last person you fought is still on the hospital o
Literature › Re: 'Lost But Satisfied' A Thriller By Akíntayo Akinjide by Divepen1(mod): 8:15am On Dec 26, 2018
Eberechi24:
Nice one, Happy Christmas divepen kiss kiss
Merry New Year in Advance
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Literature › Re: 'Lost But Satisfied' A Thriller By Akíntayo Akinjide by Divepen1(mod): 8:13am On Dec 26, 2018
queenitee:
Chioma, Chioma, warn yourself o, don't lemme hate you. Kilode na? Once and Stone are enough, must you kill everybody?
Lolll... Spoilers: Start hating Chioma now..
Literature › Re: 'Lost But Satisfied' A Thriller By Akíntayo Akinjide by Divepen1(mod): 8:12am On Dec 26, 2018
LightQueen:
Thanks for the update
You're so welcome..
Literature › Re: 'Lost But Satisfied' A Thriller By Akíntayo Akinjide by Divepen1(mod): 8:12am On Dec 26, 2018
germaphobe:
this update na complete merry chrismas
Loll . Thanks baba
Literature › Re: 'Lost But Satisfied' A Thriller By Akíntayo Akinjide by Divepen1(mod): 9:30pm On Dec 25, 2018
Thanks...
Literature › Re: 'Lost But Satisfied' A Thriller By Akíntayo Akinjide by Divepen1(mod): 8:52pm On Dec 25, 2018
Chapter 26
The Recruit
Chioma, like an empress, turned to Mike and gave him a heart-warming smile. She had killed the third best assassin in Fortune City. She would make sure she changed the opportunity every one of them got. Henceforth, she would make sure the assassins were equal and were treated so. Nobody would be better than anybody else. Nobody would have more skills than anybody else. All equality would remain even after her death. She wouldn’t leave Chief’s place. She had a new plan and would ensure it was implemented.
Bidemi’s statue would be carved into the centre of the new community Chief’s men were building. Although, the plan wasn’t in the plan Rachael wrote at first.
‘You’ll be my P.A’, she said as she turned to Mike. She placed her hand on him, dragged him nearer and sucked his lips.
What happened was tragic, all right, but Chioma and Mike couldn’t think about it because something began to come through the bush, towards them.
They separated. Chioma took aim of the spot the noise was coming from.
‘Once, the hole wey baba talk sey mey we close don dey…’ a male voice echoed in the dam as the bushes kept rumbling as if they were being stomped by an hippopotamus. The fat guy stopped at the sight of the gun pointed at him.
‘You … You are not dead….’ the guy said. His round face became void of expression as he saw Once and Stone tied to the tree, dead.
‘Yes, I’m not dead, now, get on your knee’.
‘I told them I’m not part of it ooo. I told them it’s not part of the plan…’ the short guy said. His knees dug into the sand.
‘What plan? And who are you?’ Chioma said, moving nearer,’ erm...Mike, dump those fools into the dam. Use the chain to tie them before throwing them. I don’t want the stench of their dead bodies to pollute the air. Mike left her side and started working on her orders. Her mother's body could remain there until she was in control.
‘Yes, you what’s the plan? Who are you?’
‘I’m Don’.
‘Your real name before I blow off your head’.
‘I’m Precious. I’m a recruit. My job is to make sure nobody discovers this dam’.
Chioma’s eyes hovered past the guy’s head and traced the wall, which stood at the far end of the water. The wall went round the dam and went past the bushes to a place she couldn’t see.
‘So, you are saying there is …. This is part of Chief Ajanaku’s project’.
The guy nodded.
‘Do you know me?’
The guy shook his head, his body doing the same.
‘I’m Chioma, I’m Chief’s P.A. I’ll soon be in charge and I want you to work for me’. She paused and watched his eyes widen in its socket. She smiled.
‘You … you are not killing me’.
She nodded and dropped her hand. ‘The fight was between Once and me. Now we are even. Rise up. I want you to work with and for me’, she said as she fiddled with the gun. The guy nodded.
‘Be here… I’ll send message to you on what to do next. Mike will bring a means of communication to you’.
Mike came out of the river and came towards them, his eyes fixed on the short fat guy. He was proud of himself. Chioma slowly changed her expression to conform to his, playing with his subconscious. She turned and pecked Don, whose face brightened. She turned to Mike and pecked him. The pain of the chain and the rape got to her again. She bent, shut her eyes, and allowed the pain to relieve itself.
‘Are you alright?’ Mike said.
She raised her hand and nodded.
‘Mike, meet Don. Mike, I’ll fill you in later but you are my vice in the plan I would be relaying to you on the way home'.
Mike blinked severally as he watched her turn towards the bush.
‘Where’s the way?’ She said.
‘That way’, Mike and Don said at once.
Don rushed to the path. Mike went back to pick his weapon bag and when he met her, she handed the gun to him. Then, she told him the plan, making sure Don heard her.
When they got where the fence met, she and Mike went out of a small door and proceeded through another set of bushes, from where they took Mike’s car to chief’s abode.
When they got home, Chioma told Chief what Once did to her, making sure she expressed her anger at Chief about keeping her in the dark concerning the dam.
Chief told her Once talked him into keeping the Dam and five other places from Chioma. He handed over the information concerning those places. And he told her he wouldn’t worry about Once’s death but she shouldn't have been the one to kill him. She didn't understand him and wouldn't stress herself about it.
Now, her next mission was to kill Once’s alibi, whoever she was, and she would eliminate Chief's priest and then proceed to Jessica.
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Literature › Re: 'Lost But Satisfied' A Thriller By Akíntayo Akinjide by Divepen1(mod): 8:51pm On Dec 25, 2018
LightQueen:
Well done Divepen1
I still dey your back
Trust ya....
Literature › Re: 'Lost But Satisfied' A Thriller By Akíntayo Akinjide by Divepen1(mod): 12:33pm On Dec 25, 2018
CivilzedTyger:
Thank you OP for this one. Merry Christmas man.
You're welcome... Wish you the same.
Literature › Re: 'Lost But Satisfied' A Thriller By Akíntayo Akinjide by Divepen1(mod): 11:21am On Dec 25, 2018
Deeviiid:
Ahh! What did i just read??
what a cruel way to die.

Divepen1, thanks for the update and a Merry Christmas to you!
I wish you the same ooo
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Literature › Re: Today In The History Of Fortune City by Divepen1(mod): 10:05am On Dec 25, 2018
queenitee:
We the inhabitants of Fortune city
Oya na
Literature › Re: 'Lost But Satisfied' A Thriller By Akíntayo Akinjide by Divepen1(mod):
queenitee:
RIP Once and Stone
Indeed.. We'll hold service for them and drink to their afterlife
Literature › Re: 'Lost But Satisfied' A Thriller By Akíntayo Akinjide by Divepen1(mod): 9:03am On Dec 25, 2018
queenitee:
Don't you dare, he's mine
Please shed little blood oo
Literature › Re: 'Lost But Satisfied' A Thriller By Akíntayo Akinjide by Divepen1(mod): 8:01am On Dec 25, 2018
Chapter 25

Skip if you hate blood

No Coincidence
The Chain was too tight. She wondered who gave him such idea but Once tied her with chain that it was hard to float out to the surface of the water. She watched her mother's body float away. She was weak from being raped by the two men that she couldn’t plead for her life any more.
Once said he wanted to make her life miserable and he had successfully done that, but he wasn't satisfied. He wanted her to pay more for hoping he would die. He wanted her to die fighting the water for her life.
Once and Stone carried her to the middle of the dam and dropped her into it. She sunk into the water. At first, the ray of the sun was beginning to give her a little light, but her fight with the water began, she couldn’t see the light anymore; in fact, she saw nothing the only thing she saw was the cold hand of death struggling with her precious breathe and she held them back within.
Rachael had trained every one of them to survive under water for ten minutes. And she had kept doing that training. Although, they lost few assassins to this training she had always come out the best in staying under the water.
As she laid under the water, she knew she had up to eight minutes to live.
She began to count time for herself as she held on to the breath. As the last breath gushed out of her lungs, she shook terribly. She fought hard but couldn’t hold the breath anymore. She was too tired and needed rest. The chain held her to the bottom so the thought of swimming up was impossible. She knew it was over. And decided that giving up was the only option, that releasing her breath, to inhale the water, was the best option.
The chain sank her into the soil, and made other insect crawl over her. Her body shook, as it demanded unavailable air. She released the breath and water rushed into her mouth and nose, choking her.
She yearned for air. She needed air but it wasn't coming. Rather, it kept itself out of her reach. She opened her mouth again, needing air desperately but it was out of her reach; instead, the water entered her mouth and choked her. She couldn’t fight it anymore. She gave up the ghost.
***
Something choked her. Chioma wanted to cough it out and she did. The choking objects were still there in her nose, lungs, and her mouth. She coughed and opened her eyes, gasping for breath. Fresh air was available in abundance. She opened her mouth to help her nose in sulking fresh air. She panted and looked at the face looking at her. It was the face of the guy that crushed over her, Mike. She knew and pretended as if she didn’t always see his eyes roaming her body. And there he was today, smiling. He sighed.
‘Oh…’ He said, as he sighed again.
She sat up, trying to avoid his touch and eyes. She panted.
‘Ehy… Stay calm. You need to relax. Don’t move’. Mike removed the sweatshirt he was putting on.
She was wet. The only clothing left on her was her pant and her top. Once had removed her bum short when he was forcing his way into her. Water dropped from her head to the grass she was sitting on. Her body itched her as the grass stuck to her body.
‘Once…’she said as her thought-flow became clear.’ Where’s Once’?
‘He’s still alive for you to kill’, Mike said as he turned and pointed to a direction. Her eyes following his navigation.
Once and Stone were tied to two trees, and they were both bleeding from their legs. Once was staring at her in disbelief.
‘How-?' She said as she turned to him.
‘I was following you. I followed you to the shed, as I used to. And I saw when he carried you away into the car and I followed you here. I couldn’t get to them until they had gone into the river to dump you. I took away all their weapons and got ready for them to come out of the river. I shot their legs because they are yours to kill’.
Chioma heart warmed and a big smile crept to her face as she saw Once wincing in pain. She looked at Mike, pulled his head nearer, and kissed him. Her heart warmed. The bushes around fell towards them as though they also wanted a taste of the kiss, as though they would like to know how it felt to receive a kiss from a lady, from Chioma.
‘Thank you... You saved my life. I’ll forever be grateful. In the meantime, do you have anything sharp item in your tool bag?’
Mike nodded as he produced a pocketknife and gave her. She smiled and held it firmly as she moved to Once. He wouldn’t talk as she came nearer and she was glad he looked horrible and terrified. She licked her lower lips.
Water dripped from her body on to the floor but wasn't audible. She needed something audible, something ear piercing.
‘You will never get the chance to sleep with any woman, in heaven and in earth’, she said as she began to unzip his trouser. He looked at her quizzically as he breathed hot air on her body. She didn’t mind being near him. She checked his pocket and saw two stick sweet. She unwrapped them.
‘Toast…To death’. She hit the two sweet-sticks against themselves and put one into Once’s mouth. He didn’t reject it as against what she expected.
‘I don’t understand. Does it make you think better?’
He smiled. She smiled too. She pulled out his penis and played with it as she opened the blade of the knife.
‘So, tell me how… How did you manage to make Bidemi’s death a suicide?’
He eyed her. She smiled as she noticed he was trying to prove strong. She loved strong people, she always overcame them. Bidemi was a subject anybody could ask. Even Chief, who was a man of focus, couldn’t help being tempted by her and if she had given him the chance, he would have fallen too.
‘A little something for you little brother’, she said as she smiled at Once’s penis. He stiffened. She licked her lower lip. And with all her strength, she began to butcher his penis.
‘Help…’ He screamed and wriggled but the rope that held him restricted his movement. ‘No…’
She wasn't bothered by the blood splashing to her face and her hand. She kept tearing the manhood from its source and when it was remaining a bit of flesh, she left it, dangling from its source.
‘Enjoy the pain’, she said as she turned to look at Mike. Mike stared at her as if she was the ghost he had been trying to hide from. He swallowed hard.
She smiled at him and blinked. She had rattled his thought and she knew how to rattle him the more, how to make him to always want to please her. She pecked him and left his side to wash her face in the dam.
Stone on the other hand kept repeating ‘hun?’ and stared blankly into the space. Once was still crying and panting in the background, his noise louder than those of the birds.
‘Gun... Please…’ She said as she returned. Though, Chief later made her his P.A, he first made Rachael train her as an assassin and she was ready to use her skills. She aimed at Once’s head.
‘Now, tell me… About Bidemi’.
‘He indeed tried committing suicide. I don’t know why. Ask Rachael…’
‘Shhh’, she said. She loved to kill him once and for all and that she did. She shot Stone also and left him stone dead.
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Literature › Re: 'Lost But Satisfied' A Thriller By Akíntayo Akinjide by Divepen1(mod): 8:01am On Dec 25, 2018
crownaayam17:
Walai you don blow @sir divepen1
Thanks...
Literature › Re: Today In The History Of Fortune City by Divepen1(mod): 7:01am On Dec 25, 2018
2016 Shayla kills Lila, the prostitute. *Moriah and Chloe meet.....
2017 * Once announced that Jerry, Bidemi Adeoti was alive * Jerry and Pastor Matthew left Green City for Brown Valley
Literature › Re: Werewolves Of New York by Divepen1(mod): 12:00am On Dec 25, 2018
IamFlameX:
Chapter 2 is coming soon.
Your comments will be highly appreciated.
*** Constructive criticism is also HIGHLY welcome.
This book belongs Faleena Hopkins..


https://books.google.com.ng/books/about/Werewolves_of_New_York.html?id=PiWhswEACAAJ&source=kp_book_description&redir_esc=y

Send a proof that you're this author.
Literature › Re: 'Lost But Satisfied' A Thriller By Akíntayo Akinjide by Divepen1(mod): 11:58pm On Dec 24, 2018
CivilzedTyger:
Nice update man.
Thanks boss. .
Literature › Re: A Foreign Literature Class Will Be Treating My Short Story. I'm Amazed. by Divepen1(mod): 11:58pm On Dec 24, 2018
emperorblog21:
okay that good sir.
blessed hustle
Thanks baba. Amemm
Literature › Re: 'Lost But Satisfied' A Thriller By Akíntayo Akinjide by Divepen1(mod): 11:57pm On Dec 24, 2018
Imagindat:
More update please. I am enjoying this story. Welldone bro.
Coming. Tomorrow unfailingly..
Literature › Re: 'Lost But Satisfied' A Thriller By Akíntayo Akinjide by Divepen1(mod): 11:57pm On Dec 24, 2018
germaphobe:
oh menh, everywhere rugged die
Aswear down..
Literature › Re: 'Lost But Satisfied' A Thriller By Akíntayo Akinjide by Divepen1(mod): 11:57pm On Dec 24, 2018
skubido:
Hmmmmm

OP tanks for the update
You're welcome baba... Do you think Once should have raped her..?

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