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 Literature / Immortalise Nigerian Writers, Let The New Copy From The Old by Djlawz(m): 12:54am On May 05, 2010 |
New Nigerian authors are not performing to expected capacity. Either their poems are to shabby or d books have no suspense or action to make u want to read for a whole day. I think that the Old Nigerian literature is far better than the present. Post your comments please let us save our dying history |
| Forum Games / Re: Nigerian Slangs by Djlawz(m): 8:01am On Apr 22, 2010 |
Bang - Bleep crash- sleep shift- steal arrange- steal lekpa- ugly chow- food nush- food straf- have sex arrange- beating 4rm a lt of boys |
| Politics / Re: Must The Nigerian Police Be Bribed For Everything? by Djlawz(m): 12:22am On Apr 22, 2010 |
At list in jtown dey ar nocturnal creaturez and deir uniform adaptz perfectly, if ur cut God myte hav 2 help u in clearing d charges. Bail is said 2 be free bt u aint got 5k u aint going no where |
| Poems For Review / Re: Murder At Dawn by Djlawz(m): 11:40pm On Apr 21, 2010 |
A wonderful work, i must say u spoke al our mindz, but a lil bit of charactrization wud hav done d ryte trick. Wonderful work man |
| Poems For Review / Re: Murder At Dawn by Djlawz(m): 11:40pm On Apr 21, 2010 |
A wonderful work, i must say u spoke al our mindz, but a lil bit of charactrization wud hav done d ryte trick. Wonderful work man |
| Literature / Re: *a Slow One* -- Critics Are Very Welcome, I'm Striving For Excellence @ What I D by Djlawz(m): 11:19pm On Apr 21, 2010 |
Its a nice piece, but u need more flavour, u got the descriptive flow but the flaw in vividnes is constant. A lil bit of continuity an less juxtapositions, u need a clear work an ur numerous juxtaposition dosnt help ur use of language. Consider the diction and ur piece is d bomb |
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