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Vacation is over ....

Toluwaferan:
love your story... thumbs up

Thanks ma'am

HOTsnow:
Eastern cape , free state provinces and western cape are peaceful and you will never hear of anything like xenophobia. KwaZulu natal and gauteng are. The Zulus are just like extreme Hausa in North east Nigeria.
Sorry bro. Try Universities in less congested cities with modest environment next time to get your grip in a new country.

You on point bro, especially KZN buh it's just a fictional story tho .

divineRx:
Wow nice one..i wish i could be a writer too

Did anyone say you can't? I am sure you can, just give it a try

oluwatymylehyn:
nice story, short and concised. thumps up nice story, short and concised. thumps up

Thanks bros

Ay04z:
sound like dis really happen to u ....feel like crying oo..

It's just fiction ooh bro no cry

Phinity318:
Choi warisdiz? shey u cannot convert it to long story ni? biko

Errrmm I fit try

Phinity318:
This story is not due for FP and now we wanting for more in it absence. story teller where art thou?

The End niyen Sir . It's a short story.

ellahzy:
Nice story..

Short nd Dope!

Thumbs up

Thank you Madam Ellah Zee

Ohamzee:
please what competition is that?

Afritalks Short Story Contest sir.

wackpoet:
bros , wow , just wow . As you carry bronze e mean say na Shakespeare and Chinua Achebe be first and second . I'm encouraged man really ; there's still hope for nairaland yet .

am glad you find it interesting boss .

rabex123:
Beautiful broda ur talented.keep it up

Thanks much boss.

ItsawrapOutfit:
Following

Boss, it's done and dusted already. It's just a short story

wakes:
JH the great city.

Naso

hefelove:
u try u carry bronze. u sabi I know say na u get the New Creation sha

As in?

hefelove:
u try u carry bronze

Lol na so.

ROYH:
Hmmm, Nice Story, Thank GOD For Your Dear Life...


Imagine This Happen In Nigera, Many Would Have Been Dead By Now...


Abeg, #SayNoToWaytinDonkross1CallAm

SayNoToTeamHero haa sorry SayNoToXenophobia


I dey feel the impact of your team here in literature section, big ups to you guys. Keep it up.

hefelove:
Donkross1 u don carry us go one site go read dis story before na shey u win sha

baba your boy been no win ooh, na 3rd your boy carry.

Space Purchased... Post No Bill


AustinBlinks baba, even if you no call me, I don show...

AustinBlinks:
Reading this again for the second time. Thumbs up

Am honored bro . Thanks.

AustinBlinks:
Come here Don... i hope me I'm not part of EVERYBODY. Enjoying this already!

Hehehehe you na my biggest boss na . This story is just a 2-thousand-word story that I wrote for some competition like that. How's your end bro?

Respekt Ser

skarlett:
Someone seems offended by my anti-assnal comments

Lol see you. Man city awaits you bhet let's not derail before Oyinprince will comman para.

skarlett:
Present!

Right here Ser... Man u fan shift for me joor.

edimahgurl:
hehehe cray boi..u didn't even allow me to tink of wah I said

Haha cray cray geh

edimahgurl:
Beautiful story my boys ..Donkross,I wud love 2 see u ,u've got a good sense of humour ,I love guys like u..All d same,I love wat u guys put up here..itz ssowonderful.keep it up!

Oya comman see me na

Oyinprince:
Welcome welcome boss.
DONKROSS, where that girl wey suppose dey serve drinks na? You never release am from your room?

I be man of God na.

Mindfrick:
Donkross1 To God Wu Made Me I Shed Tears..."in The Hospital When She Called Her Children" Dat Scene Caught My Heart Weeping. Keep Calm Bro. It Will Be Well Wit Yr Soul. I Love U Nd Always Be Yr Fan!

Thanks bossman. I appreciate gaan... God bless bruh.

SmartestPopQUEEN:
boss, I don't mean to be Rude, buh, I think that Que should rather be put to, THEBLESSED.MAN, T.GO.LD1, RO.HY nd Mrlem.uel... They are the C.P.U behind that HERO TEAM..

Lol you sef dey take me serious? Moi was only kidding joor

Oyinprince:
Yes, I no dey kill. You think say I be like you, roaming to and fro, looking for characters to kill, after you don kill them finish for New Creation

Taah

#Tarasha: You killed a whole family just in one day

You killed her first love

You killed all the politicians finish.


#inseparable You killed frank and many many people

#NewCreation You killed Host and his girlfriend, you killed Gentle

Should I go on? Very Wicked Character Killer

SmartestPopQUEEN:
this guy is too funny...... Well thanks for the safe wheelbarrow ride yhu gave me.... Be fast and bring the others...


Oyinboss.. Ride on

Queen Which one be Team hero again, una get super powers ?

olanshile2016:
Roman... what? you no fit go religion section ehn

Hehehehe Atheists too full that place jaare