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LiteratureRe: If You Are A Literati Then Get Inside Here... by donkross1(op): 6:50pm On Jul 17, 2016
treyliz:
ok sir....me no go skul just they use idea ni
Lol badt guy.
LiteratureRe: If You Are A Literati Then Get Inside Here... by donkross1(op): 4:20pm On Jul 17, 2016
treyliz:
sir hope i flow well
Sure.. just some errors buh u did well sir.
LiteratureRe: If You Are A Literati Then Get Inside Here... by donkross1(op): 9:23pm On Jul 16, 2016
treyliz:
challenge sir
Go on bruh
LiteratureRe: If You Are A Literati Then Get Inside Here... by donkross1(op): 2:35pm On Jul 16, 2016
olanshile2016:
shey I fit accept again
Sure.
LiteratureRe: If You Are A Literati Then Get Inside Here... by donkross1(op): 7:18am On Jul 16, 2016
[b]There was hear deafening silence as everybody just focused on the pastor as he conducted a deliverance on Mr Aderibigbe, at first he was still jerking around but after few minutes it reduced slowly until it got to a complete halt. As soon as he became sober, he starred around with all shades of embarrassment all over his face. His wife and children went closer to him and they all held each other passionately.

The pastor rounded up the service by sharing the benediction earlier than usual as the thanksgiving has been cut short by Mr Aderibigbe's drama. Have I mentioned to you that the Jones family are my next door neighbours? Oh yeah they are, enough about the Jones. Let me tell you about myself. My name is Lawrence Ajanaku, tall, dark, handsome, currently unemployed and in a relationship. I bet you wanna know who I am in a relationship with? Adenike Jones, the first and Only daughter of Mr and Mrs Jones.

As I was walking past the pastor's office heading towards the major exit, I heard Mr Aderibigbe's voice again.

"They are among us Pastor, it's not an illusion, I know what I saw" Said Mr Aderibigbe.
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LiteratureRe: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(op): 6:21am On Jul 16, 2016
Nazaretha:
I'll shoot you! angry
You will shoot yourself grin
LiteratureRe: If You Are A Literati Then Get Inside Here... by donkross1(op): 6:20am On Jul 16, 2016
olanshile2016:
Mr donkross, here I come abeg manage it,you no say I no be guru like you cheesy
Make sense wink.



Challenge Accepted tongue
LiteratureRe: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(op): 11:08pm On Jul 15, 2016
Nazaretha:
Hi, Charo. I'm here to comfort you.
Thr__e cheesy. Just wait make dem white tigers catch you again
RomanceRe: ** Romancelanders Voice Note 2016 Official Thread ** by donkross1(m): 10:49pm On Jul 15, 2016
VoteKenneth205:
Upload ur voice note bro!
I will but let me quickly go to the loo cheesy
RomanceRe: ** Romancelanders Voice Note 2016 Official Thread ** by donkross1(m): 10:42pm On Jul 15, 2016
undecided
LiteratureRe: If You Are A Literati Then Get Inside Here... by donkross1(op): 10:36pm On Jul 15, 2016
olanshile2016:
alright accepted
Over to you sir smiley
LiteratureRe: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(op): 10:18pm On Jul 15, 2016
Hawlahscho:
It's not undecided

I'm the real Slimmy undecided

If you like kill me in the next update, I know I didn't die real life. cheesy
grin cheesy grin
LiteratureRe: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(op): 10:07pm On Jul 15, 2016
DandyPearl:
hemm who's that person booboo? I don't know why people force themselves into being what they are not. Stealing someone else's story because them wan turn writer. Don't mind them jare shuga, just remove some part off it and let them complete it
Okay booboo wink
LiteratureRe: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(op): 10:06pm On Jul 15, 2016
Nmaglit:
Am a girl dankross
Ohh sorry ma'am cheesy and I am Donkross too tongue
LiteratureRe: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(op): 10:05pm On Jul 15, 2016
AustinBlinks:
Couldn't you have at the least asked me if i am the same "austinblinks" on that site before jumping to conclusions? Whoever it was on that site posted my story too, i know what it feels like when my stories are posted without crediting it to me so i have absolutely no reason to do it to someone else. For the record, the Austinblinks there is not me
Really? shocked Honestly I concluded it was you when I checked the guy's profile and saw your stories there. I didn't bother to ask you cos I know we maintain a very good relationship and because the story had my name on it. My bad bro, am sorry about that.
LiteratureRe: If You Are A Literati Then Get Inside Here... by donkross1(op): 9:59pm On Jul 15, 2016
[b]
It was a thanksgiving sunday and I sat down in my regular wing in the church watching everyone dancing as the Jones family marched forward methodically for their thanksgiving, even as people were dancing cheerfully and rejoicing I could still feel the negative energy around, I knew something was not right but couldn't really tell why I had that feeling. I quickly jumped to my feet as I saw one of the ushers starring and walking towards me, gradually I got lost in the music and I started dancing.


We were all still busy dancing when Mr Aderibigbe Jones made a very strange sound as he kept on dancing, though his dance steps were a bit awkward and didn't correlate with the beat, we all thought it was just one of his weird dance steps but he continued dancing even when the choirs had stopped singing, his beautiful wife Mrs Adebimpe together with their children Adeniyi and Adenike tried to make him stop but it even got worse, he pulled off his agbada and at that moment young men in the church gathered around him preventing him from stripping himself further.



"They are here!!!" Mr Aderibigbe kept on shouting repeatedly.
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LiteratureIf You Are A Literati Then Get Inside Here... by donkross1(op): 9:57pm On Jul 15, 2016
Whoever told you writing is a big deal? Let's prove them wrong, lets all come together and write a story right here, right now. All you have to do is imagine it, picture it in your head and pen it down. Are you in?


Cool so here are the rules...


1)I will start by posting the first part then who ever comments with 'Challenge Accepted' first after my post will be the one to write the next part, who ever comments with 'Challenge Accepted" first after the next post get to write the third part and on and on. You get?



2)Each part must be 200 words (no more, no less wink)


3)Make sure you are in alignment with the story line.


4)If there are further rules, I will squeeze em here cheesy



Shall we begin?
LiteratureRe: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(op): 6:39pm On Jul 15, 2016
Okay guys, it takes me a whole lot of time and commitment to start and finish a story, how then can you take my story to a new site or forum only to post it there without my permission or giving credit to me. First it was A new creation, now it's Palingenesis, Really guys? Really? That's just not right. I am not asking you not to post my stories but you should take my permission or at the very least give me the writer's credit, I saw my story 'the reunion' on triple l forum posted by AustinBlinks without my permission but I didn't even bother to confront him because I saw my name on it as the writer. You posting my stories without giving me credit is the height of it and it's so so so discouraging.
LiteratureRe: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(op): 6:16pm On Jul 15, 2016
Hawlahscho:
Honestly I've this strong feeling that this happened real life but kinda garnished by our Almighty writers.

Kudos Bro
Lol baba it's all fiction wink
LiteratureRe: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(op): 6:15pm On Jul 15, 2016
Hawlahscho:
Ko de ni da fun iyalaya Kong angry
Haha sho le to be ni? cheesy
LiteratureRe: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(op): 6:15pm On Jul 15, 2016
Nmaglit:
I neva suspected kong I saw him like a brother to slimmy n gentle. I just imaging d shock when slimmy finally finds out that is Kong not d white tigers,no wonder I was wondering y d white tigers will leave a trace wen the gun was found. That means Kong want to set d white tigers up.

This life Trust no one only TRUST GOD becos men can fail u at any time

Well don guys more strength to u
Thanks Ser
LiteratureRe: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(op): 6:12pm On Jul 15, 2016
SmartestPopQUEEN:
will yhu produce it now easily, or yhu still need Oyinprince the wicked producer to do it for both your sakes?
Na Oyin
LiteratureRe: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(op): 6:12pm On Jul 15, 2016
kikayboss:
yeeeehhh!!... donkross thanks a billion ....god bless you .....

oya you and neovictory should go an finish "apostacy" nowwwwwww....
Haa shocked * runsaway
LiteratureRe: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(op): 3:23pm On Jul 15, 2016
SmartestPopQUEEN:
Donkross and Oyin prince, If yhu see me, walking around your area, with full amunition, ak-47, grenades, and all range of sophisticated class A weapons.... Don't get it twisted, don't run away, just hand over that bastard Kong to me... Cos i have a feeling that yhu two are somehow involved in this.... Mission to kill Kong activated...
It's all Kong's ooh. I go give you hin address cheesy.
LiteratureRe: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(op): 2:17pm On Jul 15, 2016
missuniverse:
I knew it!
I said it!





but no one believed me...
grin I believed you na.
LiteratureRe: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(op): 11:18am On Jul 15, 2016
kikayboss:
aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh!!!!......Kong EFF up big time....i didn't even suspect him..
.chai
Happy birthday bruh..
LiteratureRe: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(op): 9:59am On Jul 13, 2016
Thiwhy. You look like someone I know. Is your name Toyin?
LiteratureRe: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(op): 9:57am On Jul 13, 2016
DandyPearl:
Donkross1 nd Oyinprince una well done ooo...
A lot of things don go on for here ooo and I'm officially lost tongue You two writers yaff complicated and difficult the whole issue now by taking Gentle out of the picture undecided
Lemme just jejenly they observe in 6D mode lipsrsealed


PS: Who's seen Heemah dis dayshuh Seems she's now living in Neptune smiley
Booboo wink
LiteratureRe: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(op): 8:50am On Jul 13, 2016
[b]"Kolawole, You guys did what? " Malia screamed.

"You heard me right sweetie" Kolawole replied as he rushed to change his clothes.

"That was not the plan you told me about, you guys were just supposed to loot his house and not kill someone there" Malia still screaming.

"You had better just shut your before someone hears you" Kolawole barked.

"Why did you decide to involve me in all of this, now my conscience will haunt me for life" Malia sobbed

"Involved you? How? "

"If hadn't not agreed to help you guys distract that Roy guy, he might have been able to get back just in time to save his friend"

"Didn't you just tell me that the guy saw you and followed you, did antibacterial force him to follow you, did you put an hex on him, we only lured him with what he does best. Moreover he owes you his life because if he had returned while we were there, he would also be dead by now" Kolawole walked out of the room afte stating his points.


Malia kept on walking around the room, she just got herself in a plan that resulted to someone's life, though she knew nothing about the guy that was killed she still felt guilty. Thoughts of Roy flooded her mind too, all she knew about Roy doesn't go further than his name but she was still concerned about how he must be fell right now, if only she knew someone was going to die she wouldn't have agreed to help Kolawole her boyfriend in distracting Roy. If only she knew then she would have sticked to the plan of giving Roy a wrong number but she gave him her real phone number after Roy displayed his intelligence, she has made a lot of errors.

"Am sorry Roy" Malia whispered to herself.


________

Rofiat walked inside her house and saw Halimat and Hadijat sitting down in the lounge.

"Welcome" they greeted but got no response from Rofiat who just walked straight to the sofa to sit. They both walked closer to where she was sitting.

"Rofiat what happened" Hadijat asked.

"Gentle is dead" Rofiat announced

"What" Halimat and Hadijat Exclaimed "How, When, Where" Halimat rained questions.

"He was shot dead earlier today at his friend's house" Rofiat replied.

"Ohh my God, but who killed him" Hadijat asked.

"The white tigers" Rofiat replied.

"What" they both exlaimed again "How can they be so sure that it was the White tigers that killed him" Halimat

"We saw an handkerchief with their emblem on it and a gun that has been confirmed to be the tiger's" Rofiat

"How is Slimmy taking this" Hadijat asked as Halimat picked up her phone from the couch and dialled Oj's number.

"Slimmy has gone mad, like raving mad. He wants to kill all white tigers" Rofiat.

"Oh my God" Hadijat.

"Hello Oj" Halimat spoke on the phone. "Why in God's name did you kill Gentle, what sort of an animal are you, didn't you know how close we were to him" Halimat shouted

"Babe I swear to you, I didn't order anyone to be killed talk less of Gentle. You know what, let me call you back, I need to see all my boys right now"



"What did he say" Rofiat asked after Halimat dropped the phone.

"He said it's not them, that he didn't order Gentle's death" Halimat explained.

"Do you believe him Rofiat" Hadijat asked.

"It doesn't matter what I believe, Gentle's death must be avenged." Rofiat replied

"Maybe I should go and talk to him" Hadijat suggested

"You will do no such thing" Rofiat barked and at that moment, her phone beeped. She checked the phone and saw a message from Slimmy "Okay girls, I have to go right now and by the time I come back we will plan on how to sneak you two away untill all of these are over"


"We are not leaving without you because....." Halimat was about to object but Rofiat interrupted her.

"You two had better not try nonsense this time around" Rofiat screamed and both Halimat and Hadijat trembled "The other war is different from this, you girls are two Capon's girlfriend and a sister to a cultist, you will be the highest targets. You are leaving when I get back and that is final" Rofiat picked her car keys and left the house.

-----

+++

"Slimmy," OJ called as his call was finally answered. The emergency meeting with the Tigers has ended and Small and Hercules were the only ones left with him.

There was silence from the other end of the line, OJ was sure that Slimmy was listening. He thought of how best he could explain his not picking Slimmy's two calls earlier that day.

"Slimmy, I didn't order for anyone to be killed. Believe me I couldn't have ordered for Gentle to be killed, I have no reason to do that. Someone somewhere must be playing a game with us." Oj paused to listen, he didn't hear any response except for movements at the background. "See Slimmy, I would fish out anyone of my boys who secretly knows about this and I'll personally hand them over to you to punish."

OJ heard a short hiss and then the line went off.

+++

**15 minutes later**

"We're not leaving any one of the Tigers alive, wipe out every single person, wipe out anything or anyone related to them. I don't want to find a single trace of them anymore. Let their names be erased completely and forever in the books of history." Slimmy stood in front of the gathered members of the Arch Angels and charged them up for the battle. The members who were deeply agitated about the loss of Gentle and we I already gearing up for a fight became more provoked in their spirits as they could feel Slimmy's pain in his voice as he spoke to them..

"I heard that one of the Tigers have been taken down already just as the news came to you, kudos to you guys, that's the way to go. From this night, the numbers of the dead bodies would increase and we'll continue with the same tenacity. I want us to wipe out the Tigers in two weeks time." Slimmy continued his speech. There were no cheers from the crowd as they all were in a sober mood, mourning the death of their beloved Gentle. "What did I say?" Slimmy asked his listeners.

"Two weeks!" They all chanted.

"Good, you can all go back now. Remember, stay safe and stick together, " Slimmy charged. "Does anyone have a question?" Slimmy paused to look around. He saw two hands raised. "Yes, what's your question?"

"Boss, the weapons, who do we report to this time around?" The junior asked.

Slimmy paused and thought for some seconds. The last war, he had been the one in charge of that process since Host was alive but now he couldn't be because of his new position as the overall boss.

"Kong would take care of that, report to him tomorrow morning by 6am." Slimmy said and turned to the other person who raised his hand. The hand was down already.

"I wanted to ask you the same question," the person said.

"Okay, in the absence of any question. You can go now," Slimmy said, dismissing the crowd. After a minute, the place was almost empty except for the inner circus and two other girls who were discussing with Rough. Rough tapped one on her waist softly and the other on her back as she concluded their discussion. Rough as the top female member was responsible for relating with other female members directly.

After the girls had gone, she turned to face the guys who were patiently waiting for her. Slimmy, Nazaretha, Kong and Rough, each of them, their faces depicted deep sorrow. There was silence for a long moment. Slimmy then took off the hood cap he was putting on which he used in concealing his face from the clear view of the younger members. His eyes were teary for the first time but he received to let any drop from it. He sniffed in and began to talk.

"Kong, Nazaretha," he called softly and slowly. "Please make sure that the boys are well conducted and watch out for anyone who tries to disobey orders or sell us out to the enemies."

Kong and Nazaretha nodded their heads in response, they couldn't find words to say to console him or encourage him, the loss and grief was for all the members of the Arch Angels. Slimmy closed his eyes and rubbed his palm on his face, he took a long deep breath. Kong placed his palm on Slimmy's shoulder and shook him softly, closing his eyes too as if to absorb the pain. Kong who didn't go with the rest of the Angels to Roy's house, had called Nazaretha to tell him that he had returned from the assignment and ask why he had so many missed calls, that was how he got to hear the story from Nazaretha.

"Boss, you gotta be strong for us." Kong finally spoke. He shook Slimmy softly again and dropped his hands. He slowly walked away into another room in the mansion. Nazaretha also paused to stare at Slimmy for a while, then he followed Kong. Slimmy was left with Rough.

Rough for a while didn't talk. Slimmy's hand had been taken away from his face now, they were both looking at each other. Slimmy could connect to the grief in Rough's eyes, it was the same intensity as his. She walked closer to him, slowly and stopped at his front. She looked into his eyes again and took in a breath, then she hugged him, for the first time. Slimmy did not respond at first but after some seconds, he wrapped his hands around her too. He could hear her sobbing and could feel the tears dropping from her face on his shirt.

The embrace lasted for almost five minutes and she released him, holding his two hands in hers. She stared into his eyes for a moment, then she stepped forward and placed a very brief kiss on Slimmy's lips. Slimmy was lost for a while, he didn't understand what he was doing but he couldn't reprimand her.

"I wished I had expressed how I felt about Gentle to him," Rough finally spoke closing her eyes. "How I wish he would have able to receive that kiss." She released his hands and walked away, out from the lounge and the house.

Slimmy stood still and his mind dwelt on different thoughts. Rough had loved Gentle? He asked himself. But why hadn't Gentle noticed and returned the feeling? That way, there would have been no clash with them. But life was really unfair, sometimes, we tend to not even notice those who truly care and show deep concern for us
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Chapter 24A http://www.youngicee.com/2016/07/a-new-creation-chapter-24a.html?m=1
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EventsRe: Happpy Birthday Scentmarlc by donkross1(m): 1:28am On Jul 13, 2016
50scent:
Thankz maddest twinnie cheesy cheesy



Let the DJ giv us a busting jam
cheesy cheesy I don call Dj Cuppy.

EventsRe: Happpy Birthday Scentmarlc by donkross1(m): 1:23am On Jul 13, 2016
Happy birthday mate... Have a loud one
LiteratureRe: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(op): 7:56pm On Jul 11, 2016
yorhmienerd:
Start serving ur sentence or ELSE
We want to appeal the judgment na cheesy cheesy

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