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LiteratureRe: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(op): 5:34pm On Jul 11, 2016
Rukkydelta:
Donkross1 you can lie

I fearet thou you cool
Lol I no lie na, shey we were both guessing.
LiteratureRe: Racism! by donkross1(m): 4:07pm On Jul 11, 2016
RemenZack:
This is actually really nice. Thanks for adding more spice and ice to my work.
wink
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RomanceRe: I Am New Here!!!!! by donkross1(m): 4:06pm On Jul 11, 2016
timsonpreye:
bros pls let d CAT out of this bag before e die there do to lack of air, am waiting grin
Lmao.
RomanceRe: I Am New Here!!!!! by donkross1(m): 9:36am On Jul 11, 2016
fairygodgodess:
Knew what?winkwink *catwalks out of d thread before he talks*
cheesy grin cheesy
RomanceRe: I Am New Here!!!!! by donkross1(m): 9:32am On Jul 11, 2016
fairygodgodess:
I can see Egbon Mi donkross1 viewing the thread o, Welcome.
Hehehehe I just knew it cheesy grin... *seals lip n walks out of thread* Before I go let d cat outta the bag. grin
LiteratureRe: Literature Bloggers and writers Get In Here! (join in creating a collection!) by donkross1(m): 1:29pm On Jul 09, 2016
Diamondwriter:
welcome sir
smiley.
LiteratureRe: Literature Bloggers and writers Get In Here! (join in creating a collection!) by donkross1(m): 12:13pm On Jul 09, 2016
Diamondwriter:
u in?
Yes sir.
LiteratureRe: Racism! by donkross1(m): 11:40am On Jul 09, 2016
RemenZack:
As my nostrils sucked in the thick smoke, and my eyes took in red thick blood, almost as velvet, I could feel my belly churn vehemently.

My partner, Essien had been shot, twice or three times, I wasn't sure. But I could feel my ears ring after the white police officer had plunged a bullet from his gun.

Essien and I were on our way to visit my parents, but his breathing was ragged, and my heart was beating, "Thump! Thump!!". He would definitely survive, but not me. I was watching my lifeless body give up its last breath, as Essien took his last as well.]
Immediately I gave up my last breath, Suddenly out of no where a strange light shone so bright I had to use my hands to cover my eyes despite the fact that they were shut.

At that moment I began to hear some melodious voices singing in harmony, I was tempted to open my eyes to see where the song was coming from but I couldn't because of the bright light.


"Koffi Koffi" I heard a very deep voice call my name, the voice was so deep and strong that it could break down the cedars of Lebanon. "Who is calling me" I gathered all the strength in me to ask. "I am that I am" The voice replied.
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LiteratureRe: Literature Bloggers and writers Get In Here! (join in creating a collection!) by donkross1(m): 11:21am On Jul 09, 2016
Hnmm nice.
LiteratureRe: Roy Repents! by donkross1(m): 8:01pm On Jul 08, 2016
Rukkydelta:
Oyinprince and Donkross1 na so una one take dey do am
I'm watching you guys from 3D camera
grin
RomanceRe: Mods Shouldn't Be Allow To Contest For MR/MISS NL by donkross1(m): 6:15pm On Jul 08, 2016
LuveU2:
Helo everyone i am going to give donkross1 my first kiss this evening kiss

O come here again, kisskiss

now change your siggy baby wink
kiss kiss cheesy


Haa Siggy angry is that were we will start ni lipsrsealed
RomanceRe: Mods Shouldn't Be Allow To Contest For MR/MISS NL by donkross1(m): 6:05pm On Jul 08, 2016
LuveU2:
Falconey is a gentle man smiley grin Oya port to my team and take his place wink biafranbushboy isnt serious
Done grin Who kinginvalhala epp cheesy. Where make I start sef


Who else will love me if I vote for her candidate? grin

Kinglee1 sorry I snatched your crush fah.
RomanceRe: I Regret Voting Lanicky. by donkross1(m): 4:29pm On Jul 08, 2016
Monalisa185:
You should report those alternates to the super mods , or you quote the moniker, cc a super mod and lay your complaints there...the account should get a long ban, else they'll use it to cause trouble for you when the contest starts...

You welcome
You are wise n smart wink. I owe your candidate a vote. Just one vote ooh cheesy
LiteratureRe: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(op): 3:53pm On Jul 08, 2016
[b]It took him some few more seconds before he could open his eyes with so much quivering and trembling. Then he saw lifeless Gentle with the eyes widely opened and blood dripping out from several places in the body.

Slimmy fell down to his knees and gave a loud cry. A cry which echoed round the building and street and could be heard reverberating around the whole city.

He sustained the cry until he lost all his breath, he then fell on the floor right beside his brother.


"Gentle Noooo" He screamed again.

Nazaretha who was also sitting down right beside Gentle's lifeless body was shedding tears uncontrollably, his phone has been ringing repeatedly, different members of the arch angels has been calling him but he refused to pick any of their calls. His eyes were soaked in tears, he sobbed like a little child. Slimmy on the other hand had ran out of breath, he tried to scream again but his vocal cord couldn't produce any form of sound anymore, his red eyes popped out but a drop of tears was not in his eyes. He laid his dead brother's head on his laps while he sat on the floor, in a split second he was lost in thoughts, his mind travelled back in time to when He and Gentle were little kids, he remembered as they used to do the pillow fights, the days when they used to do the police and thief game. He remembered their first day in high school, how one of their classmates tried to bully him and how Gentle stood up for him as they both fought and defeated the bully together, he remembered how they used to be the best sports students right from the beginning through to the very end of their secondary school. How they both got admitted in the university, how happy and proud they made their parents when they got into the university, he remembered the countless fights they have both fought and won together. At that moment he felt guilty for Gentle's death, if only he had not decided to date the same girl his brother had eyes for, if only he had not allowed Gentle pack out of the mansion, if only he had instructed some of their boys to watch over Gentle, if only he had been a good brother which Gentle was to him till the very end, Slimmy screamed again after he noticed he had gathered enough strength, He roared again, a roar of pain, a roar of agony, a roar of regret, a roar of vengeance.
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Rofiat parked her car as she saw the Arch Angels bus Parked right in front of her, she dropped down and rushed to them.


"What's up guys, where dem Slimmy and Gentle dey?" She asked no one in particular.

"We never know ooh, None of dem dey pick their call" One of the guys replied.

"Even Nazaretha sef no pick call, and na the area wey hin tell me be this" Rofiat

"Na the same thing hin tell us too na, buh him no tell us the particular house abi make we begin dey burst all the houses for this area" the guy replied again.

"Make we still wait small, if we no kan hear from them then we might start bursting all the houses" Rofiat was about to turn back to go and park her car very well when they started hearing Slimmy's roar. Without telling each other, they all rushed inside the house that the noise was coming from. They charged in with trigger ready guns only to find Slimmy and Nazaretha sitting down on the ground, Rofiat walked closer to them and saw Gentle's body on the ground with bullet wounds.


"Is he dead?" She asked.

When she saw how Nazaretha was sobbing and how Slimmy's eyes were red shot, she answered the question herself.

"He is dead" Rofiat said and immediately she felt that her legs couldn't take the weight of her body anymore, she fell to the ground landing on her elblow, it was a loud thud but she couldn't feel the pain, she couldn't feel anything, her hands, her legs, her head, she she couldn't feel anything. She was filled with regrets, she didn't even get a chance to tell him how he felt about him, she had fallen in love with Gentle ever since she joined the Arch angels, she had always loved him all this while, she just didn't tell him because she was waiting for Gentle to love her back, she didn't tell him because of pride and now she will regret it all her life. If she had told him how she felt about him a long time ago, Gentle might have accepted to date her then Gentle wouldn't have fallen in love with Hadijat, Gentle wouldn't have been mad at his brother for loving Hadijat , he wouldn't have had a course to leave the mansion where no one could have attacked him. If she had told Gentle how she felt then Gentle would still be alive, Rofiat cried profusely. The rest of the guys also couldn't hold back the tears, they were all in shock and pain, they never saw Gentle as their leader, they saw him as a friend, he was the one they always approached if they needed Slimmy to do something for them, Gentle never saw them as his boys, he saw them as his brothers, he treated them with love and Respect. Gentle's death brought down a cloud of sadness, everybody stayed mute until one of the boys saw something strange right under the centre table, he moved closer and picked up a gun wrapped in an handkerchief, he then walked towards Slimmy.

"Boss" He called out.

Slimmy raised his head slowly and saw the guy holding a gun wrapped in an handkerchief in his hands.

"Where did you get that from" Slimmy asked.

"I saw it under the table there" the guy pointed towards where he picked the gun "I think the attackers forgot this" He added as he handed over the gun to Slimmy.

"White Tigers" Slimmy said in a calm tone "White tigers killed my brother"

Everybody looked at Slimmy as he gently laid his brother's head on the floor, he rose up slowly with the gun still in his hands.

"I will kill all the white tigers, I will start with the lowest ranked member and end with their capon, I will kill all of them, I will Kill everybody, heads will roll, I will kill every single one of them or my name Is not Slimmy" Slimmy still speaking softly.
[/b]


Chapter 23A http://www.youngicee.com/2016/07/a-new-creation-chapter-23a.html
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CelebritiesRe: Lai Mohammed Mourns Bukky Ajayi by donkross1(m): 3:13pm On Jul 07, 2016
Ohhhhhhhhhhh God grin cheesy. Make baba lai no dey talk again na.
CelebritiesRe: Top Five Hottest Nairaland Music Artistes by donkross1(m): 3:11pm On Jul 07, 2016
But why una no like airforce1 angry wetin e do sef
LiteratureRe: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(op): 2:31pm On Jul 07, 2016
kikayboss:
its like a member of arch angels joined forces with some white tigers dudes to off gentle......clap for them.....dem go meet me for front ....

donkross1 no sha kill OJ ooo....cos i don dey smell am for your mind.......

oyinprince you have killed rofiats boo abi.....oya clap for yasef ......
Lmao.
spikedawson:
I say It was Gentle's destiny for him to die in the university it just can't be averted. If the main character is Slimmy then gentle should die I don't know why but I liked as gentle died. And about Tarababy she's got her hands full on the vice president and Nasiru's case so If u need protection Donkross1 you have to do better than that because no one wants a replay of Spartarcus "KILL THEM ALL" here Abeg maybe you do as she wants or go to orija's shrine to ask for the help of the gods
Lol.
LiteratureRe: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(op): 2:30pm On Jul 07, 2016
hefelove:
wait o wen slimmy got to that house when he was about to enter u guys said slimmy saw Rofiat boot print on the ground abeg what is the meaning of this? I have wanted to ask since yesterday but it skipped my mind abi na error typing? oyinprince ati donkross1 ewa dami loun o
Lol Rough not Rough's. Rough as in yama yama.
LiteratureRe: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(op): 11:41am On Jul 07, 2016
SmartestPopQUEEN:
believe me, Tarasha wount stand a chance, cos we are coming on a vengeful mission... I hope yhu've watched tha last episode of Spartacus season1, 'KILL THEM ALL'?....... Yhu ve got only one option outta this, Return Gentle to Us Unharmed... Comply, now, when we are still being NICE....
Iffahear say Tarasha no go stop una grin.
LiteratureRe: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(op): 11:40am On Jul 07, 2016
spikedawson:
Everyone kinda felt hurt when Gentle died but I say "those who live by the sword shall die by the sword" or in this case "gentle that lived as a cultist was killed by cultists" its a vicious circle it justs keep circling. Whoever it is that killed gentle would also be killed by a cultist.

My big question.
Who would kill that person? My biggest bet is in Rofiat


Who killed Gentle? I think its that moro.nic (if there is any word like that) guy that OJ's girlfriend (is it Hadijat or Halimat? oh!!! I always get confused about these names) gave food to.

Anyways Oyinprince and Donkross1 9ce story u've here been following on your website but couldn't comment there. Ur biggest ghost fan


****ghost mode deactivated****
Hnmmm deep guess, let's read on n see if you are right about that. Thanks for deactivating cheesy
LiteratureRe: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(op): 11:39am On Jul 07, 2016
Silensa:
D Prince and Donkross1 even though you guys have conspired against Gentle, bear it in mind that if he dies we will riot.
grin grin
LiteratureRe: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(op): 9:20am On Jul 07, 2016
SmartestPopQUEEN:
embarassed all this while i spent, hoping for a Miracle to happen, this two Pen Master's still didn't find it difficult to take Gentle from Me... Oh My! Heads will roll..... Vexing mood..... Am collaborating with Slimmy on this Vengeance Mission... We gonna start with yhu Two... OYINPRINCE and Donkross.... Operation Kill them all... Oyin and Don.... Watch your back.... embarassed
Oyin call Tarasha to come n protect us ooh cheesy
LiteratureRe: Tarasha - (An Action Thriller) - Story Of The Month - January 2016 by donkross1(m): 3:00pm On Jul 06, 2016
Rukkydelta:
M.Y.B
Rukkydelta:
M.Y.B
hefelove:
lmaooooo yes? who u epp?
Rukkydelta:
M.Y.B
The guy don hear na cheesy



Thanks for the thing we talked about wink
RomanceRe: Why Was My Thread Locked?? by donkross1(m): 12:09pm On Jul 06, 2016
Rukkydelta:
My boss I greet you
Yes o cos na me be the ugliest on nl and I dey sure say na me suppose to win am
Na the mods come put sand sand for my garri
Lol see you. Check your pm, me n u get talks
RomanceRe: Why Was My Thread Locked?? by donkross1(m): 11:59am On Jul 06, 2016
Rukkydelta:
All this mods na bad belle them be o

Them forget say God dey

I dey carry this case go meet Olukun cos na him be the god wey people sabi fear wella
Lol so u sef dey contest cheesy
LiteratureRe: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(op): 10:23am On Jul 06, 2016
emerald18:
Ehyaaa...rest in peace gentle @ oga oyin more ink to your pen
More ink so he can Kill Slimmy, Rofiat, Halimat and Hadijat abi cry
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LiteratureRe: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(op): 10:15am On Jul 06, 2016
Oyinprince:
Babe, I can gum the pieces of your heart if you'll allow me to. Don't mind Kross, He killed Gentle. You know I wouldn't do that, I'm a gentleman
Oya swear with your left eye grin
LiteratureRe: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(op): 10:04am On Jul 06, 2016
ChizzyMaris:
*Wailing loudly* You've done it! You've broken the remaining pieces of my heart. donkross or is it oyinprince . How dare you kill Gentle?.. I warned you o, I warned you.
Na Oyin ooh, I begged him buh he didn't listen
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LiteratureRe: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(op): 8:26am On Jul 06, 2016
d1ever:
Slimmy mood activated... cmin 4 donkross this means war... u better resurrect gentle like John sno if u no want wahala.
We no get witch wey dey serve red god here na angry how we wan resurrect am now huh
LiteratureRe: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(op): 8:01am On Jul 06, 2016
hefelove:
ile lo lo tarara ile lo tarara gentle lo le o ile lo lo tarara. Oro nla le da eh eh eh oro nla le da eyin te pa gentle te je o dagba o gbogbo yin ma ku cry
cry cry cry R.I.P Gentle
RomanceRe: MR NAIRALAND: 3 Have Withdraw More To Come Till It Remain These Guys by donkross1(m): 7:13am On Jul 06, 2016
BiafraBushBoy:
grin grin... By the time we come for finest boy cheesy, you will be on the run..... smiley

You better ask the female contestants... We don't need a win, we only frustrate the winners!!!

Take time cool
Lool market at work again cheesy cheesy

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