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macjive01: It will not work, even if does it will not be coherent and will become a charade .

If u have written before, u would found out it takes a lot to build a character .

Eg if u are righting romance you might want to start off with a Jew man who graduates to a love-vendor.
Writing collabo with people of different ideology , writing prowess ,,will only make the character ill developed.

I'm all for it, sure there is nothing lost in trial.

However, for it to even has a decent chance to working, the writing would have to define their character , then they can be paired, with similar personality .
when they two personality meet who, first to write will have the privilege to Steer the discus to his desire.

Eg I'm a man writing of fancying isilove, and we are paired , I will be responsive to develop my character on how he feels for ishilove, and my desires for her.
While ishilove will develop her character a well.

When we met , even though ishilove ha written previously of her displeasure with me and her desire not to have sex with me, I could steer the discuss into getting her intoxicated for example , and having her.

Then her in turn, would have no other option but to flow up, write her displeasure of being taken advantage of.

Man forget it , it can't work.
Cos even if this scenario was to play out I will dive into banging her from the get go. And she will dive Into resisting me.

Is This To Make Me Give Up On The Idea?

Ishilove: I completely disagree.

Please Tell Him...

oluchy13: so so much intrested

Yeah Cool. Send Me A PM.

Eze Promoe: [color=crimson]I found this interesting. Although, initially i had a similar idea but i declined it due to the work i have at hand.
My idea was making a drama thread in the literature section, were an individual NL moniker would be the actors of the drama. But when i thought of the chit chats that would make the thread bumpy, i just have to wave it aside.
Anyways, that's a good inventive.[/color]

Not Bad. But Can We Stick To The Plan I Explained Above? I'll Be Glad To See You Participate. Thanks In Advance.

CHAPTER 6


In the conference room at the Police Headquarters, Tony, Deji, his boss, 'Inspector' Mike and Chief Superintendent Phillip were in the room. "How's the investigation going?" Phillip asked.

"I think we have the killer already." Mike responded.

"Tell us what you've got." Deji implored. Mike eyed him, then looked at his boss. Phillip nodded.

"We arrested a suspect, a man. He was last seen with Irene, the second girl walking out of the club-house." Mike said.

"Good Job. So did he spill? Or how did you come to the conclusion that he is the killer?" Phillip asked.

"I interrogated him." Mike said.

"I believe it was recorded." Phillip said.

"Yes it was." Mike said and brought out a small media recorder and handed it to his boss.

Phillip pressed the play button and Mike's voice came out

So tell me, why did you kill Irene?" Mike asked.

"I didn't kill here, I swear." The man said.

"But she was found dead beside your car and you were beside here. You even tried to run away when someone spotted you. Didn't you?" Mike's voice came again.

"I was scared. I mean I didn't expect to find her dead especially not after..."

"After what?" Mike boomed.

"We had s£x." The man said.

"You had s£x or you rap£d her," Mike said and a slap-like sound was heard. Phillip looked at Mike. Deji shook his head.

"We had s£x. I swear it was mutual agreement. We were supposed to go to my place together. I went back inside to buy a bottle of wine and I found her dead."

"So you got drunk, rap£d a young girl and killed her. Now you're saying you don't know how she died. I'm going to fry your a$$." Mike said in low tones.

"I swear I didn't kill her." The guy said and burst into tears as sounds of beating and torture came from the recorder." A click and the recording was over.

"Is that all?" Phillip asked.

"Yes sir." Mike replied.

"Well, you didn't do badly but did you allow him call a lawyer?" Phillip asked.

"No," Mike answered.

"And I see no reason why you tortured him. That's unprofessional and I'm disappointed really." Phillip said.

"But sir, I had to get him to confess."

"Oh, I see. Has he confessed now?"

"Give me more time," Mike murmured.

"Time. Hmm... You're going to do enough of it in jail. God help you if the suspect is proven innocent and he decides to sue the SPD then it'll be me frying your a$$.

"Hey Phillip. Let it go. I'm sure its a mistake on his part and he'll make up for it." Deji said.

"To hell with making a mistake. I f*ccking knew what I was doing and I know I'm gonna get the desired result. I'll get the killer, get all the credit and take your place boss. I don't care about you two being in the investigation. This is strictly a competition between me and you." He added pointing to Tony. He walked out of the room."

"Don't mind him. That's the way he is." Phillip said.

"You mean he has always been like this?" Why then did you assign him to this case?" Deji asked.

"Well, I was cornered. He's related to the commissioner. Nephew or cousin, I can't remember.

"It doesn't even matter." Deji cut in, irritated.

"Yeah," Phillip chuckled. "He failed Naval School and he was fixed to my neck. He has little or no sense at all. Insensitive and ill-mannered.

"I see. You have not much choice here."

"I don't. And he can't be taken off the investigation just anyhow." Phillip said.

"And he's going to keep slowing things down. There's nothing we can do than to tread gently with him." Tony spoke for the first time.

"Well, maybe that's a better option. What have you got so far?" Phillip asked, changing the subject.