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Okay, me don land GIDIGBA after 5 days of interrupted reading, I managed to finish this story just now.


this goes to EVERYBODY who has taken seats without my notice and permission; I HEREBY BANISH YOU ALL.

Then, I have my observations about the story:
1. Freda in the earlier chapters said Mia gave birth at age 12, at Germany it turned 13 - that's understandable though

2. Earlier on Freda said she's not sure if Mia was her daughter therefore cannot allow her get married to the crown prince but at this tail end she changed the story to she EXCHANGED Mia at the Hospital.

3. The story taking a direction to Germany was way off it for me, the Germany side of the story soured the taste of the story as it was boring and nothing realistic about it. That's my opinion though.

4. The writer didn't give us any insight about Choudhary's origin, you said he is white, came down to Nigeria for a woman and after losing her stayed back to get another one or what? You need to clear me on this.

5. Then, you made travelling to Germany look so easy as if one can just wake up and pack his things and head to Germany within an hour without processes.

6. I LOVE ALL THE DRAMA HAPPENING IN DIKE'S HOUSE - I read this story just because of the drama between the seven wives and the prince. Please, endeavor to give us more in subsequent updates.

More observations to come soon... All the same good work.

I suggest you publish and probably PRODUCE this piece as a MOVIE.

Well done Madam Chumzypinky.

yorhmienerd:
Lit-land is even drier than Sahara desert nowadays. Repeated story lines with non-dedicated writers.

I'm only taking solace in reading old stories. Everybody is kinda busy, maybe 'cos of recession. Nobody has the time to churn out good stories again.


To madam repogirl please help by updating your stories. The last update was Feb. 6 on your blog

Nawa ooo... Does it mean I can't read stories anymore here?