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Not easy writing horror stories. Critics think story writing is easy.
If its easy, go write am yourself.
I wish i can sell this story as a script to nollywood producers.

sinola:
Na Barry be the hero of this story.


A friend like Barry is rare to come by

indeed he is

Some of you don't have third eye thats why you can't see spirits and they won't appear to anyone ordinary. Go ask those who have the gift to see spirits.

LordLicifer:
I no dey read dis kin long tory, the headline and people's comments tells me all i.need ro know.


Motuary work? Someone have to do it. Na work.

Just like de time wey we dey do security job for hospital motuary , de even count deadi body..

not everyone spirit disturbs. Only people who have the gift of third eye.

illicit:
Now you are spoiling the fun...

I wasn't about it being fiction or real cos obviously it's not and it can't be

You probably watch too much nollywood and now u think like that

Its too typical...

Common, to be a good writer you have to be realistic even when writing non fiction

How does a corpse open and shut eyes in the morgue, if it can do that, then why is it there, lying dead, why can't it just go home or open it's mouth and shout

That story is not realistic at all at all, even if it is real, it is still not realistic

Too predictable, no twists and turns

Just casual everyday nollywood C and B story



Sorry again

Common u can do better and you will

you won't understand how the spiritual world thats why you talk like this. Anyways check out my other books.

illicit:
Now you are spoiling the fun...

I wasn't about it being fiction or real cos obviously it's not and it can't be

You probably watch too much nollywood and now u think like that

Its too typical...

Common, to be a good writer you have to be realistic even when writing non fiction

How does a corpse open and shut eyes in the morgue, if it can do that, then why is it there, lying dead, why can't it just go home or open it's mouth and shout

That story is not realistic at all at all, even if it is real, it is still not realistic

Too predictable, no twists and turns

Just casual everyday nollywood C and B story



Sorry again

Common u can do better and you will

maybe u can check the other of my stories

I just added more to the story

Betgold84:
Evaress nice write up
I'm a fan
Sleep day do me
But I gas read am finish.
You are captivating.

thanks a lot

talk2ben:
Lovely story, I had a swell time reading… Please can you share more interesting stories.

you can check my page out

talk2ben:
Lovely story, I had a swell time reading… Please can you share more interesting stories.

thanks a lot

Spreadlove8888:
Wow, You are amazing ❤️❤️❤️❤️
You just feed my soul.

read up

I want to rewrite the story . although this plot is nice tho. But i won't use Tony. I will use another guy who was a cultist and died. He warned daniel to tell his family not to bury his corpse until they appease the gods and they should be fast about it before his cult members come to take his body. He belongs to the serpentine cult group. Yes, occult bodies are the ones that mostly disturb at the morgue until you appease them.

illicit:
Download Canva and subscribe

Easier to use on a pc than a phone

Honestly it is self explanatory...

i swear this story is 60 percent real life story not fiction as you think. https://trustradio.com.ng/en/inside-eerie-daring-experiences-of-mortuary-attendants

Spreadlove8888:
You are doing well madam Op, ride on

Thanks a lot🥰

Israel5:
Where will find mortuary job? Please I need it. I have relevant qualifications

Go check online

illicit:
Download Canva and subscribe

Easier to use on a pc than a phone

Honestly it is self explanatory...

ok o. I no get pc for now sha

illicit:
I make AI videos...

It's not a lot of money tho, I just need to subscribe on canva, u can do it too even without tutorials, it's quite easy

Self explanatory...

can i email you so you can help lecture me more on that.

Kobojunkie:
Then do it! The information is available to do that for free online these days. 😒😒

book publishing requires lot of money. Making Ai videos also lot of money but selling of scripts do not.

illicit:
No doubt...

But not this particular one, too basic and very predictable...

i have other novels too. You can check my page out

Kobojunkie:
Use AI to develop it into a graphic novel, then find a book publisher instead. Nollywood no dey too make money. You can sell the book to teenagers and raise money for your own movie that way. Heck, you can even use AI to turn it into a movie yourself. 😒😒

i will like to learn how to do that

illicit:
I mean like you got a nice narrative style, cool diction, good presentation but the story itself too nollywoodish...

I am ur fan, see u next time...

😉

Abeg o. I need movie producers

illicit:
I mean like you got a nice narrative style, cool diction, good presentation but the story itself too nollywoodish...

I am ur fan, see u next time...

😉

help me find nollywood producer. I write scripts too

Authors in Nigeria are underrated due to lack of readers. Don't blame poverry for your inability to read.
Getting more knowledge is even another way to combat poverty and help the society improve.

illicit:
Nice try

This genre sha, it doesn't really make much sense

Just saying...

Sorry

Alright. Thanks for the review. I will improve on writing better stories

Kingrshd3:
I wonder how this kind long yeyebpost enter front page when I need garri to hold belle 😆 😂

if you don't have time. It doesn't mean others don't have time.

angelboy01:
Send me an email there's no DM here.

okay

angelboy01:
There are so many free ai tools. Just make chatgpt your best friend and watch YouTube videos you will get how to. I'm also into Faceless YouTube and the likes.

dm me so you can guide me on how to do that

angelboy01:
Yeah of course like the ones everyone is making on Facebook pages. Atleast you can also put your ebooks on your pages.

I'm not making that much money

angelboy01:
Yeah of course like the ones everyone is making on Facebook pages. Atleast you can also put your ebooks on your pages.

i wish i can really do that o. But it will cost a lot. I don't like have that funds

Atlantis585:
Men, you and the moderator just posted gibberish.

You copied this long garbage and dumped it here.

Seun please look into hiring capable moderators.

Not people who only look at headlines and push it to the front page without reading.

this is a novel on literature section where people go to read books. Literature section is also allowed in here.

adecares:
Wow,
You kept it cool
This is nice
I'm looking forward to reading more from you

Thank you Ade. Readers like you inspire me more