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They followed the mad crowd around the town till they finally arrived at the "so called" king's palace, the king came out and the crowd chorused "Igwe" the king in response raised his hands and waved at them to acknowledge their greetings, then the three girls were presented to him, John stretched to get a sight of the king as his temper had reached boiling point, he hissed, the king looked like Mr Ibu, an Igbo film actor, this took his temper to the melting point of iron, this ugly man was going to take his one and only Joy forcefully as a wife and maybe Chinelo and Becky too, he knew the king would choose Joy to be his wife because no man could resist such beauty, his head was steaming like a steam train, no one and no one messes with his Joy, the three girls were forced into the palace as the king dismissed the crowd, John looked at TJ and the hunter, he had a plan ……………………………………………… Mr Adeboye checked out of his hotel room, he met the receptionist and dropped his room key, he then walked out of the hotel, since the hotel's parking lot was full he had parked his car along the street, he passed through the hotel's gate and walked towards his car, he was shocked by what he saw, the bumper and two side mirrors of his car had been removed, he stood for almost a minute, staring in disbelief, when will Nigeria become better? He thought, he finally opened the door of his BMW 5 series, he wondered how they did it without the car's alarm going off, this was the work of an expert, he thought, he dialled Nelson's number, Nelson was one of his friends, they had both attended the same secondary school, Nelson was a police officer in Lagos before he got transferred to Enugu where he became a DPO, Nelson had helped him recover this his same BMW car when it got stolen, he had then helped him to install a GPS tracking system into it, he had called Nelson before hand that he was coming to Enugu because of his son, Nelson picked the phone after three tries, he then asked for the description of his police station which he gave to him, Mr Adeboye started his car and headed for the police station ……………………………………… DPO Nelson had another worry apart from being sacked, his friend's son was missing, he had gone to check John's apartment but he found out that it was empty, he had also gone to the motor park where someone confirmed that about six corpers were on the missing bus, he knew but he didn't want to tell his friend on the phone, he had told Peter Adeboye to meet him in his office within the next 1 hour as he had somewhere to go to …………………………… Mr Adeboye was driving along the express road, he was deep in thought only for him to look foward and see a plank full of nails right ahead of him, he immediately slammed on his brake, suddenly two hefty armed men came out of nowhere, one man opened his door and knocked him out cold with the bottom of his gun ……………………………………… Some men were carrying fire wood to the king's palace, John had caught a toad, he planned on putting it inside the king's soup which was going to be cooked with the firewood, he only had to get closer to the pot, he had killed the toad and cut It's legs, it now looked like a piece of meat, if the king wanted to have his Joy he could have her in hell, they dressed like palace errand boys, they had gotten the clothes from where they were spread, John and Tomiwa carried firewood to the palace kitchen, as he dropped the firewood, he quickly tossed the toad delicacy into the boiling pot of soup ,.they walked away slowly not to arouse any suspicion, the king was in the palace with all his chiefs, he has chosen Joy and Chinelo to be his new wives while Becky would be his new wives servant, he dismissed his chiefs and went to have his supper, he ate his akpu like a glutton and then devoured his meat he saw one strange piece of meat and tasted it, it tasted delicious, he then tossed the rest into his mouth, little did he know that he was eating his last supper ………………………

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And they started their journey, the hunter's daughter was going with them too as she was going to carry some of the foodstuff that her father was going to buy from town, the corpers were all happy, finally all their troubles were going to come to an end, if they could reach town they were all going to call their parents, TJ smiled at his thoughts, if he called his father, he could go to extent of sending an helicopter, he father might not even know that he's not in Lagos yet, he was always busy with his business, Lagos today and London tomorrow, next week Johannesburg, next month Liverpool, well he was already used to his father not being around, John too thought about his father's reaction, his father would run to Enugu immediately, he knew his father would be worried about him, if his phone had not been collected by the kidnappers he would have had over 300 missed calls, his father does not joke with his only son, Joy didn't have any parent or relative to call, her father and mother both died in a car accident in Manchester, that was about 5 years ago, it was her father's life insurance money that was given to her that she had been using for her upkeep, she couldn't inherit her father's property yet because he had instructed in his will that his lawyer should not hand any property over to her until she had finished her NYSC, now she was going to Lagos to inherit her father's property, they walked through the bush path until they finally got to the wide road where Bison's men had harassed them, but no one was in sight today, they continued walking along the dusty road, John and Joy held hands and she put her head on his shoulder, see gbeke o,TJ thought in his mind, these people love don reach level 2, love ke? He had never really loved any girl, all he had for girls was lust, for him girls come and go, he used them like recharge cards, they walked for 15 minutes when they began to see more mud houses, they were closer to town, they passed through the small community and alas! They were finally at the tarred road, their Joy knew no bounds as the spotted a call center, they all ran with their full speed towards the yellow umbrella leaving the hunter behind, Chinelo too followed them, they heard drumming and cheering not far away from them, as they approached the call center, the man that was there was surprised to see them, he was trying to tell them something, he could not speak because he was dumb, he quickly wrote something on a paper and gave it to them, the drumming and cheering became louder as they saw a croud approaching them, they were probably celebrating something, John read the paper, "take the women away, no woman is allowed to be outside today ", before they say Phillipe Coutinho, four men grabbed Joy, Becky and Chinelo , it turned into a tussle between them as more men came to drag the ladies away, the hunter had just caught up with them, he had forgotten that it was the nwayi festival which no woman was allowed to come out for that day, any woman who was caught outside would become either the king's wife or slave, John took a deep breathe, he could not let Joy or Chinelo go like that, their walk to freedom had just become longer …………………………………………………

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John woke up still smiling, it was the best night sleep he's had for a long time, he was sleeping in the comfort of a girl he loved, no TJ had his leg over his body when he slept and he was not sleeping under any orange tree where ants crawled on his when he slept, he stood up and went outside, leaving his friends who were still asleep, he went to ease himself under a tree and went back to inside to lay beside Joy, he was not the only one who had a good night sleep, Joy woke up full of Joy, it had been almost a year since she had slept beside a man whom she liked and who also liked her too, she knew John was in love with her, she loved his warmth and manly presence as they lay......................... Thousands of miles away from them somebody didn't have a good night sleep, Mr Adeboye had traveled to Enugu in search of his son, he arrived Enugu around 9pm and decided to lodge in an hotel so that he could start searching for his son this morning, he rarely slept for 1 hour the previous night as thoughts began to occupy his mind, he hoped John was safe and sound, maybe he had an emergency and could not come home then his phone got spoilt or stolen, even if his phone got spoilt or stolen at least he knows his phone number, why didn't he call, he knew John to be a responsible man, unlike him, he had failed as a husband to John's mother and he was a bad father to John, John's mother had left him when he had beaten her for the umpteenth time after he came home drunk from the club, she packed her bags and left his house that very night never to return again, that time John was just a year and seven months old, he felt sorry for the boy, he never had a real mother to care for him, he went into the bathroom to have his bath ……………………………………………… The DPO was not in a good mood either, he called his men out, they all stood at ease before him as he addressed them, he challenged them to show why the police should be trusted, while the people of the community should feel safe and to show that they were more powerful than the trouble makers, with that he dismissed them................ Bison had a good night sleep, despite the events of the last two days, he had earned about 15 million naira that week, he had given his men 100,000 naira for each man or woman they brought, now he could buy that range rover suv like the type that Chief Dotmann brought two days ago, business was going on well, all he had to do was keep on kidnapping people...................... The corpers had taken their bath at a stream not far away from the hunter's house, they then had their breakfast of eba and ogbonna soup with antelope meat, John and Joy kept making eye contact with each other, they wanted each other badly, the hunter came out of his house carrying his dane gun, but he was not dressed in his hunter's outfit, he told them he was ready, they were also ready, they were ready to take the long walk to freedom ………………………………………

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Geestarry: Nepa don Bleep up. Y dem tek light na wen dis movie dey interesting. Felnino, abeg go on gen.

The Gen no wan gree start quick

can you believe that I had typed all this since morning and it got cancelled by mistake, I almost quit. Had to do it all over again.

can you believe that I had typed all this since morning and it got cancelled by mistake, I almost quit.

The birds in the forest flew away at the sound of the gunshot, the first one was followed by two quick ones, John and his friends laid motionless on the ground, John looked up and saw a gun pointing at his face, he raised his head more to study the person who had a gun to his face, no shoes, Dane gun and the man had a sack around his neck, John concluded that he was definitely a hunter, but at that period his name had been changed from hunter to hero as he was their saviour, the hunter had shot their abductors within the blink of an eye, they stood up slowly, John looked around to check if any of them were hurt, he didn't know whether to hug the hunter or prostrate for him, he had rescued them from the hands of death, they all thanked the hunter for his help as if he had given them 20 million naira each, the hunter replied them and said no worry my children, he went on to narrate how his one of his daughters had been kidnapped by those wicked men, TJ looked back and saw one of the men struggling to reach for his gun, with an anger that he had not shown for a long time, he stamped his foot into the man's neck, killing him instantly, they all stared at TJ in awe, except John, he had seen TJ portray that kind of anger before, the last time he saw such anger was when TJ was sent out of the examination hall by one of his lecturers, that time TJ had reacted by breaking both side mirrors of the lecturer's car, he knew TJ too well, for someone who joked most of the time, TJ had a horrible anger no one would wish to witness, my children where una dey come from and where una dey go? the hunter asked them, Tomiwa then narrated their ordeal in the hands of the kidnappers and their underwater adventure to the hunter who didn't seem surprised but just nodded his head slowly and said okay make una follow me, the didn't hesitate much, he had just saved their lives and earned a little trust from them, at least he had just saved their lives, he lead them through a different path, they walked for 10 minutes and began to wonder where he was taking them to, as if he was reading their minds, he told them that he was taking them to his house, from there he would take them to town the following morning, he introduced himself as Okeke, he was a hunter as they would have noticed, they walked for another 10 minutes before arriving at the hunter's house, the house was made from mud, Tomiwa couldn't have expected better, as they approached the house, a young boy ran out and said papa welcome, he introduced them to his son Obinna, where is ya mother? he asked the little boy, she has gone to the farm, the boy replied, just then a beautiful girl who was around 17 years old came out from the backyard, welcome papa she said softly, the hunter replied her and introduced them to his first daughter Chinelo, John saw TJ focusing on the girl like a lion focusing on its prey, TJ looked at John who gave him a stern look, he knew John meant hands off, the hunter ordered his daughter to prepare food for their guest, he then lead them into the house and asked them to sit down, 20 minutes later Chinelo walked in with their food, it was Akpu and ogbonna soup with antelope meat, they started devouring their food immediately it was dropped in front of them, nothing like forming, even Joy who had never eaten any Nigerian staple food before eat her akpu like a pro, Tomiwa was the first to finish his food, they washed their hands and drank water from a bowl made from calabash, they thanked the hunter or his hospitality and then they relaxed, they all slept and woke up 3 hours later, by then the hunter's wife had returned, she greeted them and offered them oranges, after they had eaten the oranges they went out to join the hunter who was by the fireside, they began to tell tales by the fireside as the moon smiled on them, they later went inside to sleep, the hunter's wife offered them 4 wrappers for them to cover themselves, she apologized for the shortage as that was all she had, Tomiwa, TJ and Becky grabbed theirs quickly and went to sleep, leaving one wrapper for John and Joy, John told Joy to use the wrapper as he could cope without a wrapper, Joy smiled and suggested they share the wrapper together, she winked at him and he got the memo, they laid side by side under the last wrapper and John put his hand over her and smiled in his sleep, the girl he loved was in his arms …………………………

Their hearts saddened as he stepped out of the bush pointing his gun at them, they recognized him instantly, he was one of Bison's men, he made a whistling sound and two other men came out holding swords, make una no even try run or else I go shoot una leg comot for una body, the man said in a deadly serious tone, na una go dey allow make Bison para for us abi? una own don finish today, he continued, oya in a straight line the second man ordered harshly, they dared not disobey men with swords and guns, ironically the lined up according to their height with Becky in front followed by Joy then John was behind her after him was Tomiwa then TJ was the last on the queue being the tallest, two men stood behind them while the other one who was holding the gun lead the way............................. Thousands of kilometers away, Mr Adeboye was in his sitting room sipping his red wine from his glass cup, he was a little worried because his only son, John was expected from Enugu the previous day, he had read in the morning paper how 9 people were found shot dead in Enugu state, he had dialled John's number several times the previous day and even that morning, it was time to take action, he could not just sit there and do nothing, just then Kemi his wife came to the sitting room and greeted him, she seemed less concerned about John's whereabouts, he knew she disliked John but he didn't know it was up to that extent, he hissed as she walked away, he stood up, picked his car keys and set out ………………………………………………… John and his friends had walked for about 15 minutes with their abductors, he had never killed anybody in his life before but he could swear he was going to kill these men with the slightest chance he had, they had threatened their lives enough, he remembered the fighting skills he had been taught when he was at the NYSC camp.............. The DPO sat in his office in deep thought, that morning was not a good one for him because he just got a call from the commissioner of police who threatened to sack him if the criminals who killed those 9 people which the TV news and newspaper broadcasted were not arrested, he had been receiving reports of kidnapping in the community and now was the time to act..................................... The man who held the gun suddenly stopped and said 'my guys wait I wan piss' , John was alert, now was his chance, he looked back at TJ who understood him, using his hand to signal to TJ he counted down with his fingers 5,4,3 he was ready to die trying 2,1 ........................

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Geestarry: **sobs** this one was damn too short. Try nd make it longer

I swear I was really busy today, sorry babe.

Sorry for the waste of time guys, I even had to squeeze time to post this. #sodamnbusy

They awoke to the sound of birds chirping in the forest, the sun was about setting, Tomiwa, the other male Corper had slept off while keeping watch over them, he forgot to wake John up to keep watch, John stood up and looked around, his back ached from sleeping on the ground, he looked at Joy, he was glad she had survived all what they had gone through, he somehow felt responsible for her safety, Becky the other female Corper was crying and lamenting that they would not get out of the forest, Joy moved closer to her and comforted her telling her all was going to be all right, John knew she was right, they didn't know which direction they were going, but he knew that once there is life, there is hope, they went in search of what to eat, luckily for them they found a pawpaw tree with ripe fruits, they shook the tree until two pawpaws fell, that was their breakfast, they needed water so they set back to the river they had just come from, but they were careful not to go to close to it, as they drank and washed their hands, legs and face, it was the first time any of the had voluntarily drank water from a river , did they have a choice? Now which way will they head? John called their attention so that they can decide, Tomiwa studied geography, so using the position of the sun he got their bearing and suggested they head west, what did they know? They rarely knew anything about geography, they set off on their journey, John was the one Who was in front, they had walked for two hours when they got to a wider road that was not tarred, they were glad because it meant they were closer to civilization, they navigated the road for 10 minutes when they suddenly heard a voice saying stop there ………………………………………………

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Not Guilty! You are therefore discharged and acquitted, John and his friends heaved a sigh of relief as the judgement was passed, John was the happiest amongst them because he had won his first major case, it was a special and unique one, it was underwater against the mer world, he knew he was destined for great things, he went to give the opposing lawyer a hand shake, the opposing lawyers hand was the softest and smoothest hand he had ever touched, he was full of Joy, he was the man of the moment, Joy stepped forward and gave him a hug, yes! he deserved it, the rest of his friends stepped forward and hugged him too, TJ gave him a pat on his cleanly shaved head and said that's my boy, the princess of the underwater world came forward gave John something that looked like a Pearl and whispered something in his ear, John looked at the pearl and nodded his head in understanding ………………………………
It was time for them to leave the underwater world, they were lead upwards by hefty mermen who helped them swim to the river bank and quickly swarm back to their underwater world, finally they were free from the water world, TJ had seen the mermaid tell John something in his ear, he wondered what she might have told him, maybe, she was asking for his bb pin or his twitter handle, TJ chuckled as he thought, John looked at Joy, she was dripping with water as her Corper vest stuck to her skin, he could now see her sexy and lovely body, she saw him looking and smiled at him, John looked back at the river which was now calm, if there was a world record for longest time spent by a human being underwater without air, they had now broken it, he looked at his watch which he could not see clearly, whatever the time was, the day was far spent as it was already evening, they continued their journey with great precaution as they could not afford another negative surprise that day, they found an orange tree in their path and plucked some oranges to cure their hunger, John watched as TJ devoured an orange, he just hoped there was no orange kingdom to arrest them again, they finally decided to spend their night under the orange tree, they would wake up in turns to keep watch of the others, as John lay down to sleep he looked at the bright side of their Journey, he had gotten a clean hair cut and shave from his kidnappers and he had received a very valuable jewel from the mermaid, he had also won his first major case in court, he was also closer to that girl he loved, a cool breeze blew as John fell into a deep sleep. Shh! no noise ………………………………………………………

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Temi take am easy

Temieasy: if not....waiting 4 d nxt updates

Temi take am easy

Mimisboygreat: Guy if u wnt this story to make front page you should atleast be posting 2 to 4 times in a day though it may depend on how less busy you are.. Still waiting sha.

Thanks bro I'll try my best, It's just that I am usually busy most times.

Here's morning tea for you guys ……………
They were led to another part of the river where a lot of mermen and mermaids were, it looked like a place where they had their events , then the trial began, the opposition lawyer started by accusing humans of murder and pollution of their water world, he pleaded with the court to give the humans the justice they deserve which was death, then John was called to defend his friends, he first started by greeting that judge and the entire members of the underwater world, he then asked the opposing lawyer what his best food was, the opposing lawyer replied and said he eats underwater plants, John then said he was also guilty of murder because the plants also had life, he said that if the plants could move and talk they would also put the merman and mermaids on trial, he explained that fish was one of man's best food and that man even reared them for food, he went ahead to say that they were some humans who kept fish as pet, he narrated their ordeal in the hands of the kidnappers and begged the court to have mercy on them as they all had families to return to, when John had finished speaking, the court jury then swarm away to decide on the outcome of the trial, TJ chuckled as the jury swarm away, he could not believe his eyes, they were being tried by fish, he was guilty of eating fish ranging from cat fish pepper soup, tilapia, Titus, sardine and many more than he could count, in fact fish was in the moin - moin they hand for breakfast that morning, the jury were back and they were not smiling, they told the judge their decision and went back to their position, the judge cleared his throat and said here is our decision, after hearing from both lawyers, this underwater court finds the humans ………….........................

The corpers struggled for air as they were drawn down deeper into the river, suddenly a bright light shone and they all became unconscious ……………………………………………………………
Joy was the first to wake up in the unusual environment, as she opened her eyes a tilapia fish passed in front of her, she was shocked as she noticed they were underwater and she could breathe, John and the rest too woke up and were shocked but amazed that they could breathe underwater, as they tried to move they realised that they had been tied down by some mysterious sea plant, as they tried struggling to free themselves a voice echoed 'what are you looking for in my kingdom you worthless and wicked human beings '? They looked around but could not find anybody, you fish eaters disgust me and do not deserve to be alive, I don't know why my daughter rescued you people from the drowners but you are going to face the panel tonight, it was then that the merman showed his self to the corpers, he was very handsome and had a the trunk of a human being and the rest of his body from his waist was like a fish, John had heard of mammy water, he had even seen them in movies like H2O but he never imagined it was anything as beautiful as that, the merman swam towards them and looked at their faces before swimming away, then another figure approached them, it was a mermaid, the most beautiful thing TJ had ever seen in his life, she came towards them and told them how she had rescued them from the drowners, she also told them that her father, the king hated human beings and was going to put them on trial, if they were found guilty they would be eaten by fish, she also told them that they had to pick one of them to be their lawyer and that they had an hour before trial, she then swam away, they spent the next 45 minutes debating who would be their lawyer as John and TJ both studied law, they finally agreed that John should be their lawyer as he had taken good decisions for them, they had not waited too long when some huge mermen came to lead them to trial …………………………………………………………

John looked down at that river, it was flowing fast, he looked at TJ who nodded at him he looked back and saw that the armed men were closing in on them, he held Joy's hand and said we all jump at the count of 3 okay, by then the men were 50 feet apart from them shouting stop! stop there! With Joy's hand in his John counted 1, 2 , and at the count of three the youth corpers Jumped down the cliff, by the time the men got there, John and his friends were half way down the cliff, the men turned back disappointed, Bison was going to be mad at them........... Splash! John and his friends landed into the river, they tried to swim as the strong river current carried them along, he held on tight to Joy's hand, no matter what happens he's not going to let go, he didn't bother much about TJ, he knows he'll be fine, he looked back and saw that the other male and female corper were doing well, they journeyed along the river as the current continued to push them down the river, John's heart raced as he sighted something that looked like a crocodile ahead of them, his heart pounded even faster as they got near it, it was then he realised that it was just a log of wood, he felt relieved as his heart beat reduced, he and Joy held on to the log of wood as their Journey continued, TJ looked to his side as he saw monkeys on the trees beside the river chattering and jumping happily, for one second he wished he could take their place, he had had enough worries for that day, he looked at John and Joy floating away with the log, he smiled a bit, he knew John liked Joy a lot because he had told him about her before, he had never seen John go crazy about a girl before, at least he was happy for John whose dreams were coming true but maybe not the way he had wanted or imagined it, the river slowed down as it brought them into a larger river, this was probably the end of the river , he thought, he was right, it was the end of the river but the beginning of a new journey as they felt something like ropes pulling them into the river, they tried to scream for help but their words became bubbles as they were dragged underwater ……………………

I'm busy guys, updating soon.

The room was empty as all the prisoners had escaped through the ceiling, he raised an alarm and informed all the men that the prisoners had escaped and he needed to have them back, all the men ran out in search of John and his mates because prisoners meant money, John and his friends ran through the back of the building into the forest as fast as they could because sooner or later their captors would find out that they had escaped, before they could say Nelson Mandela 6 armed men were after them, it was now a race of life and death called stop and you are dead, TJ had been in a similar situation before when he was being chased by cultists in his university for dating the girlfriend of one of them, that time he ran through the school premises to the nearest police station or else he would have surely been beaten to coma, he had then called his father who had then called the commissioner of police to get the cultists arrested, they ran through the forest without knowing where exactly they were heading to, luckily for John the men had not collected his wrist watch, he checked the time as he was running, it was 4:20 pm, as they continued running one of the male corpers whose name was Chidi fell and twisted his ankle, they had already ran far ahead before TJ looked back and noticed what had happened, none of them dared go back to rescue him, John felt sorry for Chidi as the men pounced on him and dragged him back, one man dragged him as the remaining 5 continued the pursuit, as John and his friends ran on they jumped over a pit which was full of bones and skulls and produced a bad odor, John concluded that that was probably where the men dumped the remains of their victims, they ran and turned left but the men kept pursuing them, they arrived at a cliff which had a river at It's bottom, John and his friends looked back, there was only one thing to do …………………………

John looked at Joy's hair and noticed that she had a hair pin, can you throw me your hair pin? John asked politely, okay Joy replied as she removed her hair pin and tossed it at John, with his shackle bound hands he pick up the pin, as he tried to use the pin to pick the lock of his chains, the door opened and 3 men came in and took the four other people who were not corpers, John heard one of them say something about beheading them and using their organs for money rituals, John silently prayed to God for a miracle, as the last armed man was about to close the door he mistakenly shut the door on the bunch of keys attached to his belt hole, the keys fell inside the room as the man shut the door, that was the fastest prayer that God had ever answered him, now he had to act fast, heaven had helped him now he had to help himself, he got back to picking the lock as he was sweating as if he was inside an oven, he was relieved when he picked the first lock, he had never done such before but he had now put the movies he watched into good use, as his left hand was free he used it to pick the second lock,it took about 3 minutes for him to pick the lock until it opened, with both his hands free he stretched to where the key was but he was just a few inches short, he looked around and remembered their clothes which was in the middle of the room, he stretched to where the clothes were and took his boxers and used often it to try to get the key, He threw his boxers over the bunch of keys and pulled it nearer, now he had the keys, he had tried 3 keys before the fourth one opened the shackles on his feet, now free, he out on his boxers and went to release Joy first, he tried the keys that released him first and it opened all her shackles, he tried it for TJ too and It worked, when TJ was free John have him the keys to release the other 3 people while he dressed up, when they were all released and dressed up, John had a plan to get them out of there.. ……………………… Bison was in the slaughter room when he noticed that his keys were not with him, he quickly retraced his steps in search of the keys, he searched everywhere but could not find his keys, he then remembered that he had not searched the dungeon, with his pistol in his hand he ran to the dungeon, he then ordered the two guards to open the door, when the door was opened, Bison could not believe his eyes ………………………

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They entered the building which was dark and damp and smelled of death, escaping was not an option as they were surrounded by hard looking, heartless and hefty armed men, they were lead to a dark room they called the dungeon, where they were chained. TJ said to John 'on the bright side we'll pray to God for forgiveness and end up in heaven ' prayers! John hadn't thought of that, he began to pray to God for forgiveness, he asked God to find them a way out of this smelly, dark dungeon, he had not finished praying when one man walked in carrying injections all filled with a substance that neither of them knew about, the man began to inject each of them with the substance, as he was injected, John began to recite psalm 23, he had not reach 'thou anoint my head with oil ' when he suddenly felt dizzy, as his eyes were about to close the last thing he saw was Joy who was already unconscious …………………………………………………………… It was almost evening when they woke up, they must have slept for about 5 hours, it was then John noticed that he was naked and all his hair was shaven, not only him but all the guys who were in the dungeon, he looked towards Joy's direction, she was untouched and so were the remaining women in the dungeon, he and Joy's eyes met, he was a little shy, he liked the idea of being naked in front of her but not under such circumstances, their clothes were in the center of the room, John felt uneasy, he was not used to being naked in front of women, but he knew TJ was, he had to find a way to free himself and get out of this mess along with Joy and TJ at least, he looked at the far end of the room and noticed that some of them were weeping, John studied the room for escape points, the window was not an option as it was high, very small and had a hard burglary barricade in front of it, he looked up at the ceiling, the door was not an option either as two armed men were outside guarding it, he looked at Joy then he had an idea …………………………

domido: i got u on this bro. i usually don't read wen i see about 2 pages but ur story title captivated me. nice story keep it up and the updates flowing...

Thanks bro