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CallMeFemi: Good story....

Check my story out also...I'm sure you'll like it...and pls don't forget to comment...

www.nairaland.com/1565338/legend-ikotun-boy-callmefemi#20398796

let's go there

Gen2jaynee: nice one, na now i see dis story oooooooooooooooo

Good for you, no suspense.

orlahsco: Felnino, you are too much, May God continue to increase your wisdom and knowledge,nice one guy

Amen, I see you.

Adebolade: God will continue to bless you with more knowledge and wisdom. What a wonderful story! Just let me know if it is in a book or movie i promise to patronize even any of your books or movie.

The book is coming out soon.

Last day of the year, guys I still wanna know your opinion for the cast

DaizyJims: What an adventure! *Climbs down Zuma rock having been thru with this wonderful novel. Felnino, thumbs up! May God fill you up with more inspirations in Jesus name. Jah bless!

Amen in Jesus name

adebayo201: one of the kidnappers!

lwkmd

Holuphemmy93: Felnino u're a genius,dis write-up can be transformed into a nollywood movie

And which role do you want to play

Merry Christmas guys

Another story? hmm

whiteking169: Nice one bro,but i want you to go true your story line again and edit them,you dont go back to law school after service,you go for your NYSC after passing tru nigeria law school...[color=#770077][/color]John brought out his phone
to browse and check where he posted
to study law in a law school, not
again, he said when he saw where he
was posted to, he was posted to
Enugu…………………….THE
END

If your school does not release your name on time for law school you call go for NYSC, just like my elder bro

Ephhay: U r rily gud! I luv dis.

Thanks for the compliment

cotzywitzy: Nice one bro...

Thank you

Lord seyad: So this story has ended.. so i will hav to click that 'unfollow' button? hau..crying..

eyahh sorry

I've finally updated my pics

megola: wel, i.ve actually neva read any extremely long article on nairaland more or less a story. I came across dis topic on my operamini ist page and tot it was a news dat happened to a corp member. Wen i started readin i wantd to be discouraged since it wasnt a news, but d way u wrote it gave me courage to come back and read on. I was like dis person dat can sit to type all dese really tried..and indeed u tried..if d story was actually originated by u, i'l advise u not to waste d talent God has deposited in u, develop it and u'l see dat u're goin places..God bless u wit more wisdom and inspiration..

Amen ooooo

ANDREW2EIC: Thank you Mr Felnino for this exciting story. May God continue to bless you with more wisdom and inspirations. Thank you once again.

Amen

WizyJ88: Nice Story Bro.....
You really played ur part with ur pen,,,...
God Bless You With His Infinite Wisdom....

Amen

Yask2guy: Wow! What an interesting story with a good ending from a wonderful writer.
May God continue to grow you in wisdom and understanding.

Amen

I was Santa claus yesterday during Carol

Nelson made a call to the palace, he told them that the culprit had been apprehended and that they were free to go where they want to, Chinelo, still weeping, went with her parents back to their home, the only thing she had gained was a new wrapper and some of the royal beeds, she was back to square one, right from where she started………………………………… John and Joy sat in the sitting room of Nelson’s house, playing with each other, John looked at his father who was now dressed in a decent cloth, John sensing what his father was thinking said Dad this is Joy, my fiancée, Joy’s and Peter’s eyebrows were raised, Joy was surprised, they had never talked about getting engaged, talk less of marriage, and there he was introducing her as his fiancée, he didn’t even say girlfriend, Peter was also surprised, his son had just finished his youth service, he hasn’t even gotten a job and he already has a fiancée?! Well, what could he do about it? John was already an adult, at his age he was already engaged with John’s mum, he wondered why John decided to study law like his mother, Peter felt bad at the thought of John’s mum, he knew he had treated her badly and he wish he knew where she was so that he could just apologize to her, he was fed up with Kemi, she is rude, saucy and to worsen her case she is a bad cook, John stood up and pulled Joy with him, he took her to the balcony of Nelson’s house, he knelt down in front of Joy and brought out the golden pearl, Joy parker, will you marry me? John asked, Joy didn’t know what to say, the man she loved proposed to her with a pearl instead of a ring, it was awkward, when she made up her mind she said yes John, yes!
Kemi was driving, her daughter Lisa was with her, she was taking her to LC’s, one of the best night clubs in Lagos, Kemi looked at Lisa who was excited, she sighed, if Peter finds out that Lisa is not his daughter he would kill her, but she will kill him first, she looked at her watch, it was 9pm, Lisa looked at her mum, right now her mum was the best mum in the world, none of her friends mum ever take them clubbing, instead they tell them not to ever go out at night, suddenly her mother lost control of the steering and their car smashed into pole and tumbled, Lisa struggled to get out of the car after it came to a stop, the car was upside down, she pushed the car’s door open and crawled out to the other side where her mum was, Mum! Mum! Are you alright? Lisa asked but she got no reply, she managed to pull the door open, lo and behold, a splinter of glass had cut her mother’s throat, blood was gushing from her throat like a tap, noooo! Lisa shouted, she quickly stood up and ran to get help, she continued running in exactly no direction, she saw a group of men standing and ran towards them, when she got to their place, it smelled of cigarette smoke, please help me, my mother is bleeding to death, the men, seven in number, who didn’t even understand what she said were aroused to see such a beautiful girl dressed in skimpy clothes in their zone at that time of the night, you no dey fear? one of then asked, Sniper, JJ carry this girl go base, their boss said, they didn’t even say a word, they carried her like a cotton wool and took her into an uncompleted building, she tried to scream but they held her mouth, they entered the building, pulled off her skimpy cloth and tied her to a table, Lisa was scared, were they going to rape her? She asked herself, please don’t rape me, she pleaded, but her pleas fell on deaf ears as the master of the hoodlums took her virginity, she felt a pain she had never experienced as her raped her, when he was done, a second person took her, when he was also done, another man came, no not another one she said, the hard looking man gave her a back hand slap across her cheek, you dey craze, he said, na me you dey call ‘another one’? I be your papa mate? He asked with authority, he entered her and raped her mercilessly, the last thing Lisa saw before she fainted was another man trying to get between her legs……………………………………………………………..
Nelson was in his office in the morning, Peter, John and Joy were on their way to Lagos in the police van, he took the news paper on his table and read it, he was shocked when he saw one of the headlines, one man identified as Doherty Anthony Lemeta was found hanged in his residence in Lagos, Nelson sighed, Chief Dotmann had committed suicide, well it made his Job easier, no need for them chasing a dead man, the lady who was responsible for the King’s death would be charged to court immediately, he sipped his coffee, he was having his best morning of the year, he had caught the kidnappers who were threatening his job, his friend and his son were safe and on his way to Lagos, what else could he ask for?...................................
The police van carrying Peter, John and Joy came to stop in front of a big mansion where Joy resides, Joy had called her lawyer to meet her in the house, she had to sign the papers to inherit her parents property, her lawyer sat in front of the house wearing a white shirt and black skirt, John down from the back of the van and walked with Joy into her compound, now he knew where she lived, he saw a woman waiting in front of Joy’s mansion, they reached where the woman was, meet my lawyer Mrs Adebayo, Joy said, John looked at the woman, he had seen her before in the photo’s at home, Mum?! John said, she recognized him even though it had been 22 years, John?! The woman said, John went to hug his mother, he had hoped to see her, Joy immediately got the memo, her lawyer was John’s Mum, John had told her about his mother, Peter got down from the car to see what was going on, he saw his wife Mary, his heart sank and he was ashamed, he slowly walked towards where Mary was with his head hung in shame, he looked at Mary and started to talk Mary said shh! And she went to hug her husband………………………………………….
Peter and John reached home, as they entered their home phone rang Peter went to pick it, the expression on his face was sad when he dropped the phone, he told John that Kemi had died in a car accident the previous night, John felt sorry for her even though she was always mean to him, the phone rang again, Peter picked it up and showed a sad worried face again he dropped the phone, Lisa was found beside the road yesterday, she is in the hospital now, Peter said, Peter took the car keys to his Toyota Corolla and went outside, he entered the car and John joined him, they drove to the hospital, on getting to the hospital the doctor told Peter that Lisa had lost a lot of blood and needed blood, Peter offered to donate blood as he and Kemi were in the same blood group so Lisa should also be, the doctor suggested they do a test before anything else, when the results came out Lisa’s blood group was different from Peter’s, he wondered how that was possible, John immediately interfered, he offered to donate blood as he belonged to blood group ‘O’ , which he definitely inherited from his mother, they tested him and he was in O group, they collected blood from him and transferred it to Lisa, Peter was still surprised, how was it possible? He asked the doctor to do a DNA test on Lisa, the test was carried out and they discovered that his DNA and Lisa’s did not match, Peter felt betrayed, he didn’t even feel pity for Kemi again, she had done a really bad thing…………………..
Few days later John went to Joy’s house, he knelt in front of her and said ‘for the second time, Joy parker, would you marry me?’ he brought out a gold ring from his pocket, for the second time, yes! Joy answered, they kissed each other as John inserted the ring which was molded from the gold pearl into Joy’s finger, he carried her into a bedroom in her mansion, he kissed her on the neck, and he entered her and they made love for an hour, they had finally made love after all these while of wanting themselves, it was the first of many to come………………………………………………………. John went home and saw his mother seated in the sitting room, he greeted her, so you are coming back to us? He asked, yes, she said, John went into Lisa’s room, she was asleep, her father had decided to still take her as his daughter, she had nowhere to go, he closed the door and went to meet his father in the balcony, Nelson told me you had quite an adventure in Enugu, can you gist me? Peter asked, you wont believe if I told you John answered, John brought out his phone to browse and check where he posted to study law in a law school, not again, he said when he saw where he was posted to, he was posted to Enugu…………………….THE END…………………………………………………

©2O13 : All Contents therein are the Exclusive
works of the Above Writer,Copying is utterly
Prohibited, except with the permission of the author ...Resemblance of Names to anybody is
Coincidental as the Names are Just Figment of the
Writers Imagination.

typing the concluding part.........

Good morning friends, Carol things on point.

Zombie mode

John held the pearl in his hands, he remembered the words the mermaid told him to say, Pearl of the river bring Joy back to life, John said slowly, as he said so, the pearl began to glow like a bulb, when he saw this, his hopes were raised, the Police men and soldiers watched in anticipation as they saw all that was going on, he looked at Joy, her cloth was stained with blood, God please let this work! John prayed in his mind, he opened Joy’s mouth which was already becoming stiff and put the pearl in her mouth and made sure it went down her throat, before John could say Luis Suarez, Joy woke up and coughed, she vomited something identical to the pearl in size and shape, but this one was made of pure gold, John was the happiest man on earth, he hugged the still coughing Joy, Joy looked at him in surprise, she looked at her chest and the bullet wound was gone, ‘the bullet wound, it’s gone’ Joy said laughing, she looked at John’s teary eyes, don’t tell me I died and came back to life, Joy asked John, shh say no more, John said while putting his hands on her lips, the both of them kissed passionately as the police men and soldiers clapped and cheered, Peter didn’t understand what just happened or who the girl was, but he felt happy for his son, he liked what he just saw………………………………….
Kemi sat in her office happily when an Idea suddenly occurred to her, she could use the balm on her boss who had been troubling her for sex ever since she started working there, she would just control him and ask him for a promotion and a salary of one million per month, she stood up and made way to her bosses office, she knocked the door of her bosses office, a man voice said come in, Kemi entered the office and shut the door behind her, her boss was happy to see her, so Kemi what brings you to my office? Her boss asked, Kemi didn’t say a word, she moved to her where her boss was and sat on his laps, her boss could not believe it, she had finally agreed to his advances, he began to handle her bosoms, Kemi was not concerned about romance today, if not for the balm that she wanted to use on him she wouldn’t even think of having sex with him, she stood up and pulled his trousers down, she pulled down her panties and rode him on the chair for 5 minutes, she reached climax point and stood up from her boss, it was quick and precise, she didn’t do it for pleasure but for power, she put her panties back on and went out of her bosses office, her boss just sat on the chair looking surprised, he was not even satisfied, and when he thought he had had his way with this woman she had walked out on him half satisfied…………………………………………… Nelson went to the soldiers and thanked them for coming to their rescue, they might not have been alive if the soldiers had not come to their rescue, the drivers corpse was removed from the front seat Nelson’s car and placed at the back of one of the police pickup’s, Nelson took a towel from the trunk of his car, he cleaned the blood from the front seat and dashboard, Peter, John, Joy, TJ and Promise entered the car, Peter sat in the front seat with his friend, John sat at the backseat beside Joy, he put his arms around her neck and she put her head on his chest, John was still in shock, minutes ago he thought he had lost her, Nelson reversed the windshieldless car and drove after his men who led the way, Peter had tried to start his car but the petrol had been drained from it, maybe Nelson’s men would bring it for him later, as for him, he would never step foot in that place again, he might never even come to Enugu state again…………………………………………. Chief Dotmann sat the sitting room of his Lagos apartment sipping on his red wine, all he could think of was how to spend his money that would come a few hours soon, after two hour passed he went into his room and brought out a calabash from his wardrobe, he went to the drawer beside his bed and brought out the half eaten green and red kolanut and put it inside the calabash, he covered the calabash and opened it after a minute, behold! Different bonds of Pounds were inside the calabash, he smiled, it worked, but the lady he slept with would die soon, he heard a knock on his door, he wasn’t expecting anybody, he quickly put the calabash full of money inside his wardrobe and locked it, he went to the sitting room and opened the door, he was shocked as if he had just seen a ghost, it was the woman who he slept with yesterday, Kemi spoke up, go and will your properties to me Kemi Adeboye of 11, Henderson street, Agege Lagos and after that go and hang yourself, Dotmann stood transfixed like a dummy, yes mistress, he answered…………………………

typing ………

Can't update yet guys, Saturday chores are killing me.

amedino: Felnino am afraid to tell u this, ur story has gone viral. I read them on several facebook pages and blogs.. Remember i told u about plagiarists. Now someone else is taking the credit for your sweat. Well it's not your fault. Plagiarism is difficult to control these days.

Thank you, people like them don't end up well, I weep for the future of Nigeria

don kross: How we take sure say d Tori na felnino own sef. #Juzataught

I feel a little bit insulted, but It's not your fault, it's the fault of the never do well copy cats.

Angel0: which side u c am for fcbk?abeg tell me mek i go thr go complete d reading..fel dey do guy cos say we dey hail am!

no be so my padi , Na my battery fault, I was very frustrated, and any other site apart from nairaland that you find this story means it was copied

Suddenly three bullets pierced the kidnapper’s chest before he could pull the trigger, Nelson managed to look back and saw Promise with a gun, Nelson felt relieved, Promise had just saved his life, Promise advanced to where Nelson was and dragged him to safety with one hand like soldiers do while he held the gun in his other hand, when they reached a safe place, Nelson tried to stand up, he looked into Promise’s eyes and said thank you, I hope John didn’t come with you? Nelson asked, the poor boy couldn’t just sit and watch Promise answered him, Promise was right but Nelson didn’t want John getting into trouble……………………………………………………. TJ was not used to handling guns but he knew that once he pulled the trigger bullets would come out of the gun, he remembered how he used to play COD (Call Of Duty), an action video game, he lay on the floor and aimed, he took his first shot at a kidnapper and missed, then he took two more and he got a kidnapper in the arm, suddenly a soldier jumped over him followed by more soldiers, soon up to 20 soldiers arrived at the scene and took control of the situation, Nelson was impressed from where he stood, he had told one of his men to go back and tell the soldiers that they had an emergency before they even started the attack on the kidnappers, and within 30 minutes the soldiers had arrived, the soldiers came with more sophisticated weapons, the enemy were falling like bowling pins, Nelson looked on in amazement, the soldiers had better strategies than the police, within 10 minutes they had already got very close to the building, they rounded up 5 kidnappers and marched them out, the soldiers also came out with the hostages, one of them wore only boxers, they still had chains dangling from their hands and feet, the soldiers had used their guns to break the chains, Nelson counted five people but he could not see Peter among them, he waited in anticipation for Peter to come out from the building, suddenly he saw a man wearing only trousers jumping through the window, the man stood up and ran with his hands up towards where the soldiers were, Nelson did not need to ask Google who it was, still feeling pains in his chest, Nelson ran towards Peter as if Peter was a goal keeper who had saved the last penalty in a penalty shoot-out, Peter was scared at first when he saw a police officer running towards him, he raised up his hands the more and said please o! please! I’m not among them o! He took a closer look at the person running towards him, Nelsonnnnnnnnn! Peter shouted he ran towards Nelson, the two friends hugged themselves as everybody looked on……………………………………………….. John had been running after Bison for 7 minutes, Bison had no idea anyone was after him, John started getting tired, he went down on his knees and aimed, boom! The first shot got Bison in his left buttocks, Bison fell to the ground and tried to stand up again, as he stood up John gave it another shot, this time he got Bison’s right lap, Nelson walked tiredly to where bison was and knocked him out with the end of his gun, John didn’t know where the strength came from, he pulled Bison by the leg back the way they came………………………………………… Nelson and Peter were under a tree, Nelson told Peter that John was alive, but he doesn’t know his whereabout, Nelson feared that John had been shot among the police officers, they started searching among the dead police and kidnappers on the ground, Peter’s heart was heavy, TJ knew John was not among the dead people on the floor because he saw him go after a man dressed in police uniform, as TJ opened his mouth to speak, he sighted John coming out of the woods with a man on his shoulder, there TJ said as Nelson and Peter looked in the direction where TJ pointed, they all ran towards John as he dropped they man he was carrying on the floor, John ran and hugged his father, Nelson inspected the man John dropped, it was Chike Uche also known as Bison, he was wanted for the murder of his wife………………………………………. 15 police officers and 17 kidnappers were killed, 5 police officers were injured and 3 kidnappers were injured, a police officer read out the stats for Nelson as they were going back to where their cars were parked, they walked for 1500 metres before they finally reached where their cars were parked, John could not wait to see Joy, he walked elegantly like a soldier who had come back from war triumphant, Nelson looked forward, he could not believe his eyes, his car windshield was broken and blood had splattered on the front seat, the driver, lifeless, had his head on the horn as the horn sounded continuously, John immediately ran to check on Joy, nooooo! He shouted, Joy had been shot in the chest, he looked at her face and said don't leave me, It's gonna be alright, Nelson looked away, one of the kidnappers who probably escaped had shot Joy and his driver, Joy managed to look at John, I love you, she said slowly and she died, John cried like he had never cried before, TJ came to console him, it was then John remembered, he immediately reached into his empty wallet and brought the Pearl out, it was around the size of his thumb, and transparent, he looked at it desperately, he remembered the instruction the mermaid gave him, it was his only hope …………………………………………

ifex370: a few metres away Peter
laid low on the floor as he heard
gunshots, his heart was Still beating
because few minutes ago he was about
to be beheaded like a bull in the
abattoir, he slowly crawled away from
the slaughter room and back to the
corridor,

















phew...

una no want make the man die ni?