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LiteratureRe: The Adventure Of Corper John by felnino(op): 11:20pm On Dec 19, 2013
Robinvandotmann: Fel nino u tawk am say u go do am and u do am. Shey i be bad guy ni? Why u kon dey represent me with badd character @ chief dotmann.
Mazi Dotmann, you be baddest guy ever liveth.
LiteratureRe: The Adventure Of Corper John by felnino(op): 6:03pm On Dec 19, 2013
Blood splashed on Bison's hand, he could not believe what he just saw, he looked through the tiny window of the slaughter room and saw about 8 police men advancing towards the building, they were armed with guns, and one of them who had probably seen his man holding a gun had shot him in the arm, Bison looked at the machete in his hand, he looked at Peter, Bison knew he had to escape, that was the most important thing now, he raised an alarm to inform his men that they were under attack, Bison's men went to the arsenal and carried guns and hand thrown grenades, they then went to confront the police, they marched out of the building and planned to surround the building and defend themselves, but as they were marching out those that were in front faced the wrath of the AK 47 as the police shot at their direction mercilessly, they all managed to get out of the building as some of them passed through the window, they formed a circle around the building and shot at the police, one of the kidnappers carried a grenade and removed It's cork, he then threw it at the first group of police, as the police saw it coming, they didn't need to ask Google what it was or what to do before they split for their dear lives, the grenade exploded within four seconds as It's sound echoed through the forest ………………… John felt uncomfortable as he heard the loud noise, he tried to figure out what it was, it was either a grenade or a car had just exploded, but he had not seen the police carry grenades, he relaxed and assured himself that the police would triumph, 15 seconds later they heard another explosion, John could not take it anymore, he got down from the car and went to the trunk, what are you trying to do? Joy asked him, what does it look like? He replied, I can't just sit here while my dad's life is in danger, I'm with you bro, TJ said as he also got down from the car and went to the trunk, Promise offered to help to as he got down from the car, Promise was an ex-soldier, he was dismissed from the army when he was caught hacking into one of their computers, it had been long, he thought to himself, now he needed to feel the moment again, John handed TJ and Promise a vest each and gave them guns, AK 47 to be precise, Promise taught them how to reload the guns as they were probably novices, they looked at the way Promise talked and knew he had experience, they nodded their heads in understanding when he had finished talking, John went to the window side and kissed Joy passionately, they might he seeing each other for the last time, John wore his bullet proof vest, and he, TJ and Promise left Joy and the driver alone in the car, Promise me you'll be back Joy shouted to John, John didn't reply, he wasn't ready to make any Promise he couldn't keep ……………………………………… Nelson and his men were still at battle, he had lost 2 men from his group but he didn't know about the others, he cocked him gun and shot at three kidnappers killing them instantly as he still lay on the floor with his men, the battle continued ……………………The people in the dungeon were happy and scared, at last the police had come to their rescue …………………… a few metres away Peter laid low on the floor as he heard gunshots, his heart was Still beating because few minutes ago he was about to be beheaded like a bull in the abattoir, he slowly crawled away from the slaughter room and back to the corridor, he saw a pair of trousers hanged on a window, he didn't need to write a letter of permission before he took it and wore it while sitting ………………………… Bison went to his room in the building, he brought a box from under the bed and opened it, it contained a pair of police uniform, he had always prepared for this day, he put on the uniform and carried a gun, he then sneaked out through the back door …………………………………… John and Co had jogged through the distance, they were now at the battle scene, John looked to his right and saw a police officer coming out through the back door of the building, the police officer was making suspicious movements, John looked at his face and recognized him instantly, it was one of the kidnappers, the one who dropped the key, the one who ordered men around, the police officer now increased his pace, John told Promise and TJ to carry on as he went after Bison ……………………… All the men in Nelson's group were nowhere to be found, he raised his head to get a proper view when a bullet hit him in the chest, he laid down in pain, the bullet had hit his chest but he still felt the pain, suddenly a kidnapper stood before him and aimed his gun at him, the kidnapper pulled the trigger but the gun clicked empty, he was out of ammo, the kidnapper quickly reloaded his gun and aimed it at Nelson again, Nelson swallowed his spit, he was face to face with death ……………………………………
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LiteratureRe: The Adventure Of Corper John by felnino(op): 4:30pm On Dec 19, 2013
topwiz: Which kind rough play be dis felnino, if mr peter die, I will trade u tø d aluu community før #30. sø u better cut åñd readjust ur story oooooo. I hãv nëvã bêëñ held down by a story b4........nice job, u deserve a big bowl of eba wit êgusi soup.
I'm sorry, it doesn't always have to end happily
LiteratureRe: The Adventure Of Corper John by felnino(op): 12:43pm On Dec 19, 2013
Abeg, if you guys see anybody copying and posting this story on Facebook or any site, please help me abuse them in your native language.
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LiteratureRe: The Adventure Of Corper John by felnino(op): 11:33am On Dec 19, 2013
Kemi had finished preparing for work, her daughter Lisa was still sleeping, Lisa had just come home from a party that she went to the previous night, Kemi didn't bother to disturb her, she picked up her car key and went outside to her car, she started the engine and set off for work, she remembered her husband, she picked up her phone and dialled his number, it was switched off, she hissed, why was she even bothering herself, she got to the traffic light, it was already on red so she stopped, she remembered her sweet experience in the hands of chief, she smiled to herself, soon all chief's wealth would be hers, all she needed was 24 hours, before the balm that baba gave her would take effect, she had rubbed the balm on her laps before going to the club, baba had instructed her that any man she slept with after she had rubbed the balm on her laps would be under her control, the traffic light went from red to yellow and finally green, she drove off and continued her journey to the office ……………………………… John, Joy, TJ and Promise sat in the car, alongside Nelson's driver, John was deep in thought, he hoped his father would be found, alive, and with all his body parts complete, Joy kissed him on the cheeks and told him all would be fine, John looked at Joy, if he was in the mood he would have kissed her small inviting pink lips, but he was not in the mood, all he could think of now was how his father was going to be rescued ………………………… Peter was half asleep when the dungeon door was opened, two men came inside and released him from his chains, they then pulled him up and dragged him out of the dungeon, they then locked the dungeon door back, they forced him through a long dark corridor and they turned left, Peter knew there was trouble immediately, a left turn was not a good sign, was this how his life was going to end? Bison stood in the slaughter room waiting impatiently, they should have brought the man here already, he didn't know what was taking them long ………… Nelson took a deep breath, it had been quite a while that he had been on a mission, in fact he shouldn't be here, but he was here because his friends life was in danger and whoever was responsible was going to pay dearly, on a normal mission, his men would have handled it alone, but this was no ordinary mission, these kidnappers had threatened his Job and his friend's life, using his radio he told the other two groups to attack on his count, 3, 2, 1 the three groups attacked at once …………………………………… Bison took a machete from a corner, he was going to behead this one himself, two men held Peter's hands and legs and placed his head on a flat rock, Peter tried to struggle but he could not free himself, he said his last prayers, Bison raised his machete ready to behead the man before him …………………… the people in the dungeon heard a cry of pain from an area of the building, they now knew why they were kidnapped ……………………………………………
LiteratureRe: The Adventure Of Corper John by felnino(op): 11:31am On Dec 19, 2013
You guys got the Joy, Nadia is definitely my choice
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LiteratureRe: The Adventure Of Corper John by felnino(op): 10:11am On Dec 19, 2013
If the story was a nollywood film, what would your cast be? King Emeka is definitely Mr Ibu, both Yoruba and Igbo actors and actresses
LiteratureRe: The Adventure Of Corper John by felnino(op): 7:47am On Dec 19, 2013
Cold faya: I said its already on FB. If u didn't grant permission then u know waht it is.
Thanks bro, you are a hero, people like that guy gives Nigeria a bad name.
LiteratureRe: The Adventure Of Corper John by felnino(op): 7:25am On Dec 19, 2013
Zzzzz under blanket, wakes up and checks time, 7:15, running late for work, jumped up and ran to bathroom.
LiteratureRe: The Adventure Of Corper John by felnino(op): 12:06am On Dec 19, 2013
Cold faya: Nice one.

Did u give this person d permission to post ur story on FB? Just to avoid plagiarism.

https://m.facebook.com/story.php?story_fbid=269632113195288&id=106939056131262&refid=8&_ft_=qid.5958723412281024077%3Amf_story_key.-8533831868614739827
Sorry I can't grant permission for that because of an agreement between me and my publisher
LiteratureRe: The Adventure Of Corper John by felnino(op): 10:42pm On Dec 18, 2013
Chief Dotmann woke up around 10 am, he felt satisfied, the lady who he slept with had left him in bed, he had met her in a night club, from there they drove to his apartment in Lagos, he remembered the instructions given to him by the native doctor, he had chewed the green kolanut before sleeping with the woman, now it was time for him to chew the red one, he pulled the drawer beside his bed and brought out the red kolanut, he chewed it immediately, now the process was complete, the woman's spirit would bring him more money, but she would die any moment after 24 hours, now he could do away with his range rover and buy something better, he picked his phone to call Ijeoma, he hoped she had completed the job, Ijeoma's phone rang several times but no one picked It, he prayed all was well, Ijeoma never wasted time picking his calls, he stood up and went into the bathroom ………………………………………………… Nelson picked his phone up and tried dialling Peter Adeboye's number again, still it was switched off he sat down on the couch and looked at John, suddenly an idea came to his mind, why hadn't he thought of it? He suddenly remembered that he had helped Peter install a police tracker inside his car, he still had the details of the tracker inside his laptop, he picked up his phone and called the specialist who helps him install trackers into police vehicles, within 15 minutes the man got to his house, Nelson gave him the details and he didn't use up to 5 minutes before he located the car, it was about 12,000 metres away from their current location, Nelson picked up his phone and called all his men, they were going for a serious mission, John and his friends offered to come, Nelson didn't like the idea but he said they could follow him under the condition that they were going to remain in the car, they all agreed, Nelson's men didn't take long to arrive, John and his friends entered the DPO's car, they then set out on their mission, Nelson's phone rang and he picked it, one of his men called to inform him that after further torture the suspect had confessed that she was sent by chief Dotmann, Nelson thanked his man for the good job and ended the call, he put two and two together, now he knew why Chief Dotmann was absent, that was a business for another day, right now they had to find his friend ………………………………………………… Peter Adeboye was no more lonely in the dungeon, his captives had brought in more people, five more people to be precise, four men and one woman, the men were also unclad and had their hair shaved, he was shy being naked in front of strangers but he knew he would have to get used to it ………………………………………… The tracking specialist whose name was Promise was the one directing the police convoy, he was also in Nelson's car which was the car that led the way, he told the driver to stop the car, he looked at his laptop and told the driver to take the next turn on the right which he did, soon they were off the tarred road, following the map on his laptop, he directed them through different turns, John thought the road felt familiar, it felt just like the road the kidnappers took them through, Joy and TJ also said the same thing, they made this known to Nelson, Nelson knew it had to be the kidnappers, Promise informed them that they were 1500 metres away from the cars location, Nelson ordered his driver to stop, now they had to continue on foot, Nelson went to the back of his car and picked a bullet proof vest from the trunk, he ordered his men to remember to wear their vest and make no noise as they moved, he told John and his friends to remain in his car no matter what happens, so Nelson and his 24 man squad walked for about 1400 metres when Nelson spotted Peter's car parked in front of an uncompleted building, Bison's building, he split his men into three and ordered them to surround the building, Nelson took one last look at his AK 47, they were going in hot …………………………………………………
LiteratureRe: The Adventure Of Corper John by felnino(op): 11:27am On Dec 18, 2013
2kass: The last story was actually confusing, sounded diff from the others.

Take your time bro, it's better to give quality at a slow pace than give quantity and lose your respect. Whenever TV stations broadcast their soap operas dey don't increase the timing cuz the viewers enjoyed or are enjoying it, if dey can't wait for the next episode at ur tyming dey shuld Go Fvck demselves..

Be mindful of quality
You understand me, I typed that episode in a bus, under pressure.
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LiteratureRe: The Adventure Of Corper John by felnino(op): 11:27am On Dec 18, 2013
adebayo201: that shd be 1am!
Nice write up tho!!
from page 0 to page 5 grin
You are a good reader I must say, I rarely make such mistakes, it was because of the rush and pressure.
LiteratureRe: The Adventure Of Corper John by felnino(op): 11:13am On Dec 18, 2013
keep it coming guys your comments mean so much to me #loveyouall #nohomo
LiteratureRe: The Adventure Of Corper John by felnino(op): 11:01am On Dec 18, 2013
I had received threat calls and messages from my friends who are reading my story, haba #nobemyfault
LiteratureRe: The Adventure Of Corper John by felnino(op): 10:51am On Dec 18, 2013
sorry for the long wait guys, it was as if airtel had planned against me, I had to look for my ex sim (mtn) and made up with her again, this post had been ready since around 12am.
LiteratureRe: The Adventure Of Corper John by felnino(op): 10:45am On Dec 18, 2013
Nelson received an expected call, one of the chiefs called to inform him that the king was dead and the police was needed to make an investigation and state the cause of death, he knew the king was dead already because John had told him so, he was dressed in his police uniform already, he asked John and his friends to excuse him, he had to get to the king's palace, he went out of the house and he and his driver set out in his Toyota Prado SUV, John was a little bit scared, it just occured to him that if he was identified as the one who poisoned the king he might be charged to court for murder, it would be a case that he could not win, it would be John vs the entire community, ..................The hunter and his wife were close to the palace, they had almost gotten there when they heard people wailing, the hunter feared that the king was dead, and his fear was confirmed when a girl told him that the king had died the previous night, after hearing this, his wife Chinyere immediately sat on the ground and stared wailing, their son in law was dead, that hunter shouted on his wife to get up from the ground immediately, they stormed towards the palace and were about to enter the palace when two men who looked like balotelli stood in their in their way one of them asked where they were heading and told them to state their business, the hunter narrated their reason for being there, the guard told him that the king was dead, but he still allowed them to enter, the hunter and his wife were inside the palace, they were lucky to find Chinelo easily, Chinelo was wailing and her mother quickly went to console her, Chinelo told them Of she and the late king's love affair, they exclaimed after hearing what their daughter Said, they would be in big trouble if their daughter ever got pregnant, the hunter asked about John and the female corpers from Chinelo, she told him that she had not seen John or any of the female corpers but TJ had tried to come and rescue her, the hunter shook his head in self pity, the situation had turned around ……………………………………………… Nelson arrived at the palace with his officers who were specialized in such matters, they ordered that no member of the palace should leave, the specialist examined the king's corpse, they came up with a result within 30 minutes , they didn't need to ask ifa before they knew he was poisoned, they told Nelson their findings, he announced to the palace that their king was poisoned, the people in the palace shouted ahh! Nelson's men began their work, they started first by interrogating the palace cooks, they separated the people who prepared and served his food, Nelson personally went to interrogate Chinelo, he was told the king had died in her room, he saw that she was in a sober mood, he told her to calm down, all he was going to do was to ask her some questions, she nodded her head in approval, he started by asking her what the king was doing before he died, she answered shyly and told him that they had just finished making love, when he suddenly fell down and died, he asked her if the king had forced her to have sex, no she replied, she had done it willingly, he asked her if she was happy to have been in the palace before the king died, she said yes, Nelson examined her carefully, with his psychological instinct, he knew she was not lying, she looked young and harmless but then he reminded himself that looks could be deceiving, he asked her how old she was, she said she was 16 years old, Jesus! Nelson said within his mind, she was underage, the king had definitely committed child abuse, but he couldn't do anything about it even if the king was alive, the king had authority over such matters, he stood up and went out of her room, he placed her under the low priority suspect level, Sir, one of Nelson's men called him, he told him his attention was needed in the kitchen, when he got there another officer told him that they had tested the food that the king had eaten the previous night, it contained some toxic substances which they believed to be poison, Nelson told the chiefs about their discovery, he noticed that one of the chiefs, chief Doherty aka chief Dotmann was not present, he asked about him and he was told that chief Dotmann had travelled to Lagos two days ago, Nelson ordered that his men should round up all the cooks and take them to the police station for serious questioning, Nelson left the palace and went to town to buy some more clothes for John and his friends, as his driver was about to drive his car into his compound, he received a call from one of his men, his man informed him that after torturing the cooks, one of them confessed to have poisoned the king's food, Nelson went into his house and told John that they had found the person who poisoned the king, John was relieved when he heard what Nelson said, maybe he was not the one who was responsible for the king's death, he was glad someone else had also wanted the king dead, but one thing he didn't know was why? ………………………………
LiteratureRe: The Adventure Of Corper John by felnino(op): 4:39pm On Dec 17, 2013
John was troubled by what Nelson just told him, he went back to the sitting room and sat on the couch, could his father had been kidnapped by those wicked men? He asked himself, he went to the fridge to get a bottle of water, but this time he sipped it slowly instead of gulping it like a dragon that wants to put out It's fire, countless thoughts occupied his mind, Joy sat beside him and held his hands, she had listened to their conversation, she felt sorry for John, she had lost both her parents a few years ago in a car crash, but she had gotten over it, she wouldn't want him to lose his father, she looked at his face and tried to console him, he looked into her eyes and his heart melted, he almost smiled, he then held her head and placed it on his chest, 10 minutes later, John looked at Joy any saw that she had slept off, he stood up and carried her to the room where Becky was, he placed her on the bed gently and kissed her, he went to the room where the guys were and he lied down on the spare bed, he was deep in thought until 1 pm when nature came and closed his eyes ………………………………………………………… Kemi woke up with a smile on her face, her concubine had satisfied her more than her husband ever did, she even wondered maybe that was the reason why John's mother left, maybe he could not satisfy her in bed and she left for that reason, wise woman, Kemi thought to herself, she had made the right choice, but she herself won't leave the house for her husband, when he comes back with John, that is even if the useless boy was found alive, she would send an assassin to take care of them, her concubine was still sleeping, she didn't blame him, he had worked like a bull, she stood up and wore her cloth, she carried her hand bag and left his house, she drove back to her husband's house as she had to go to work that morning …………………………………………………… The corpers woke up early except John, he had woken up around 8:30 am, he stood up and walked towards the bathroom, he brushed his teeth and had his bath, he saw a new T-shirt and a pair of jeans on the bed, he didn't need to ask Google before he knew it was for him, he was happy he was not going to wear the smelly palace guard clothes again, he went out of the room and walked towards the dining room, there they were eating breakfast, he greeted them before sitting down with them at the dining table, the house help brought his own breakfast of moin - moin and pap and placed it before him, he ate silently without saying a word, when they had finished eating, Nelson announced to them that a police pickup was waiting outside to take four of them home as John would go later because he had some important issues to attend to, John then interfered, he told them what happened to his father, they all felt sorry for him and hoped that his father was not in the hands of the kidnappers, Tomiwa and Becky were inside the police pickup, Joy and TJ had refused to go, Joy said she was going to Nelson's place with him until he was ready to go, he was the only person she trusted, TJ was not going to leave his friend in this state of mind, he called his father using Nelson's phone, it was his father's assistant that picked the phone, his father was out of the country, he told the assistant to tell him that he would be spending a few more days in Enugu, the police pickup left on the journey to Lagos carrying only Tomiwa and Becky, John wished them safe journey ………………………………………………… The hunter and his wife wore their best clothes and began their journey to the palace, they were going to meet their new son-in-law …………………………………………………………
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LiteratureRe: The Adventure Of Corper John by felnino(op): 10:36am On Dec 17, 2013
jaeyoh: 9c 1 bro,fish as judge 2 humans,cnt wait 4 d update nd i must say i luv ur method of suspens
Go to the next page, you are far behind.
LiteratureRe: The Adventure Of Corper John by felnino(op): 10:29am On Dec 17, 2013
Lord seyad: Anybody here with fellino's no..lets kuku call am to complete this story na...,...
Tomiwa pinged me, but I was typing, no be My fault na my work no allow make I get enough time.
LiteratureRe: The Adventure Of Corper John by felnino(op): 10:22am On Dec 17, 2013
John was so happy to see his father's friend, he ran towards him and hugged him, the rest of them were relieved to be behind the safety of a gate, TJ knew Mr Nelson, he always came around to check on them and give them money and foodstuff, TJ went closer to him and greeted him, Mr Nelson hugged TJ and John together, he looked over their shoulder and noticed two girls and a guy came with John and TJ, he wondered why John and TJ were dressed in the palace guards clothes, as if John was reading his mind, he introduced his friends to Uncle Nelson, as he usually calls him , Nelson asked them into his house, only a mad man would say no, Becky and Tomiwa wondered where John knew this man from, John had been a blessing to their journey, they didn't hesitate to move towards the house, at least this man seemed nice enough to be a kidnapper or a wife snatching king, they all followed him into the house, Nelson immediately ordered his house help to prepare food for 5 people, John greeted Nelson's wife who was surprised to see strange faces in their house, she saw John and immediately went to hug him, she thought he was dead, John was no visitor, he went into the kitchen and brought out 5 bottles of water from the fridge, and took 5 cups from the dining table, he handed his friends four bottled water and four cups and he poured himself some water, and gulped other down, it was as if the water had come from God's personal pool, they sat down in the sitting room and watched TV, they thought they would never watch TV again, John looked at Joy, he hoped that king had not touched her, cause if he did? he wouldn't mind killing him the second time, his mind came back to life when a plate of rice and turkey was placed before him, he began to dig in without hesitation, within seven minutes the mount Everest placed before him had become Jos plateau, after resting for five minutes he went to Mr Nelson and explained their adventure to him, but he didn't mention what the mermaid gave him or that he poisoned the king in his story, Nelson was astonished by his story, even people stronger than them did not escape alive, Nelson showed them to the two guest rooms, they could choose whichever room they wanted, they all moved up to the rooms, TJ and Tomiwa stayed in one while the girls went to the other One, as John wanted to go to the room, Nelson called him back, he had something to tell him ………………………………………
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LiteratureRe: The Adventure Of Corper John by felnino(op): 10:20am On Dec 17, 2013
John was so happy to see his father's friend, he ran towards him and hugged him, the rest of them were relieved to be behind the safety of a gate, TJ knew Mr Nelson, he always came around to check on them and give them money and foodstuff, TJ went closer to him and greeted him, Mr Nelson hugged TJ and John together, he looked over their shoulder and noticed two girls and a guy came with John and TJ, he wondered why John and TJ were dressed in the palace guards clothes, as if John was reading his mind, he introduced his friends to Uncle Nelson, as he usually calls him , Nelson asked them into his house, only a mad man would say no, Becky and Tomiwa wondered where John knew this man from, John had been a blessing to their journey, they didn't hesitate to move towards the house, at least this man seemed nice enough to be a kidnapper or a wife snatching king, they all followed him into the house, Nelson immediately ordered his house help to prepare food for 5 people, John greeted Nelson's wife who was surprised to see strange faces in their house, she saw John and immediately went to hug him, she thought he was dead, John was no visitor, he went into the kitchen and brought out 5 bottles of water from the fridge, and took 5 cups from the dining table, he handed his friends four bottled water and four cups and he poured himself some water, and gulped other down, it was as if the water had come from God's personal pool, they sat down in the sitting room and watched TV, they thought they would never watch TV again, John looked at Joy, he hoped that king had not touched her, cause if he did? he wouldn't mind killing him the second time, his mind came back to life when a plate of rice and turkey was placed before him, he began to dig in without hesitation, within seven minutes the mount Everest placed before him had become Jos plateau, after resting for five minutes he went to Mr Nelson and explained their adventure to him, but he didn't mention what the mermaid gave him or that he poisoned the king in his story, Nelson was astonished by his story, even people stronger than them did not escape alive, Nelson showed them to the two guest rooms, they could choose whichever room they wanted, they all moved up to the rooms, TJ and Tomiwa stayed in one while the girls went to the other One, as John wanted to go to the room, Nelson called him back, he had something to tell him ………………………………………
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LiteratureRe: The Adventure Of Corper John by felnino(op): 6:14am On Dec 17, 2013
amedino: This story can make a good Nollywood movie if taken to a good movie producer. @felnino u story worth millions of naira if ur story get to reach the desk of the likes of Desmond Elliot, Tunde Kelani, Amaka Igwe Tade Ogidan, Uche Jumbo and host of others. These are notable producer u can take these story to. But just beware... PLAGIARISTS are out there ready to pounce on your story. Keep it up.
The book is coming out next year
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LiteratureRe: The Adventure Of Corper John by felnino(op): 6:13am On Dec 17, 2013
Mimisboygreat: Congratulobia@felnino! Front page things atlast! Keep it up bro more grease to ur elbows#YNWA
Thanks bro, you've been here for me
LiteratureRe: The Adventure Of Corper John by felnino(op): 12:03am On Dec 17, 2013
Ego2: will u update dis story nw b4 i unleash terror on u
Ego no unleash terror On me, but you can unleash cash on me
LiteratureRe: The Adventure Of Corper John by felnino(op): 12:01am On Dec 17, 2013
pfijacobs: Oya sharply
You guys are always hungry for more
LiteratureRe: The Adventure Of Corper John by felnino(op): 11:32pm On Dec 16, 2013
Temieasy: finally frontpage tinz...felino let kip it rolling...*more updates*..
Thanks bro, you are part of the foundation of the story's success, you guys kept me going, thank you and love you all.
LiteratureRe: The Adventure Of Corper John by felnino(op): 11:10pm On Dec 16, 2013
Mimisboygreat: which boys?
Sterling, Henderson, Flanagan and Allen.
LiteratureRe: The Adventure Of Corper John by felnino(op): 11:05pm On Dec 16, 2013
Sorry for the late update guys, I was not kidnapped by Bison, I was Just busy at work and I started typing this immediately I got home.
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John, TJ and Tomiwa sat under a tree not far from the palace, the only news john wanted to hear was that the king was dead so that he could carry out his plan to perfection, the hunter had left them and gone back to his home, he seemed less bothered than they were, maybe he wanted something like that, his daughter getting married to a king, TJ looked at John in surprise, he had never seen him act with so much determination, Joy had surely had a lot of impact on him, Tomiwa mind had wandered away, he was thinking of his father, his mother and his little sisters, though he had not informed them of his decision to come to Lagos two days ago, he just hoped they have not tried dialing his handset yet, his mind was brought back to reality when he saw a guard running towards their direction, John was battle ready, if the guard was coming for him, he was going to use his combat moves now, the guard ignored them and branched to the house behind them, the guard seemed worried as he knocked on the chiefs door, the chief came out almost immediately as if he had been expecting him, John looked back to see what was going on between them, he heard the guard say something like ‘the Igwe is dead’ then the chief reacting to what he had said as if he was in trouble, John’s greatest news had been confirmed, his plot had succeeded, the Igwe was dead, he signaled to TJ and Tomiwa who also knew what was going on, they had to execute their plan now……………………………………………. The hunter entered his house singing a joyful song, when his wife saw him alone she asked of their daughter Chinelo, he then went on to explain what happened to his wife, as soon as he finished narrating the story she started dancing and singing, they both sang and danced together, their dream had come true, they were now officially In-Laws with the most influential man in town, they were now In-Laws with the king……………………………………. It was 9 pm, Nelson was in his sitting room with his wife, he was worried, his friend had not come to his house and his phone number still switched off, he had to act fast, he feared the worst, something might had happened to his friend, maybe he was not lost but had fallen victim to the ruthless kidnappers, he stood up and left his wife in the sitting room, he had to go to bed because he had the feeling that tomorrow was going to be a long day…………………………………………………………….. Kemi was having the time of her life, she was in another man’s bed, her husband had travelled to Eungu in search of her stepson, she hissed at the thought of it, she couldn’t care less if John was Dead but she was glad her husband was gone because now she would have the chance to sleep about with other men, she smiled as her concubine came out of the bathroom and smiled at her, she knew what the smile meant, he was ready for round two……………………………………………….. Chinelo was in tears as she realized that she had made a mistake, her husband was dead and for all she cared she could be pregnant for him, her dreams only lasted for a few hours as it had vanished from her face like a smoke, she had different thoughts, what would she tell her parents, what if the new king would not want her, suddenly a guard grabbed her arm, she looked up at his face and recognized him instantly, it was one of those corpers, we have to leave here now TJ said to Chinelo, instead of following him, she placed her head on the late King’s chest and wept, TJ had to leave, he had tried his best………………………………………………………… Joy was sitting on her bed when a guard barged into her room, she recognized him instantly, it was John, the love of her life, she almost wept as they kissed each other, John said they had to leave quick, Tomiwa had rescued Becky, TJ had gone to rescue Chinelo, they had to meet them at the rendez vous point, they ran through the palace which was now in disorder as everybody was weeping for the king, they ran through the back door and towards a tree, John could see Tomiwa, Becky and TJ but Chinelo was not with them, he asked TJ what went wrong, TJ replied and said she does not want to leave her new husband, they ran to the main road, they didn’t know where they were heading to, but they kept running, suddenly John remembered the place, it was the road to his dad’s friends house, Mr Nelson, he had visited there twice, Mr Nelson though always came to check up on him at least once every month, this way everybody John said to them, they didn’t know where they were going but they had all learned to trust John’s decision, he ran towards the black gate and knocked it furiously, a gate man opened the gate, he recognized John, Oga mi wetin happen now? He asked John they pushed him out of the way, entered the compound and locked the gate behind them, Nelson ran out of his house wearing pyjamas, he thought it was his friend Mr Adeboye, but it was someone he was even more glad to see, he was so happy, John was alive………………………………………………………………………
LiteratureRe: The Adventure Of Corper John by felnino(op): 10:32pm On Dec 15, 2013
Mimisboygreat: we have thrashed them. Oya come update
You no see say those boys dey ball?
LiteratureRe: The Adventure Of Corper John by felnino(op): 10:29pm On Dec 15, 2013
King Emeka drank almost a two liters of palm wine, now it was time for him to go and sleep with one of his new wives, he tried to stand up but he fell back to his chair immediately, he was a little bit drunk, he then used the table in front of him to support himself, he staggered towards Chinelo’s room………………………………. Chinelo was not in the least bothered, she had just become the wife of a king, she was a Queen now, ‘Queen Chinelo’ she said to herself, she had left the bush home where she was with her parents, at least life in the palace won’t be as boring and stressful as life in her parents home, she admired the new wrapper she was wearing, it was given to her by one of the palace maids, she could now do as she wishes, she would convince the king to build a new house for her parents, suddenly someone had entered her room, it was the king, she stood up and said Igwe good evening, the king didn’t even say much, he pulled the wrapper she was wearing off her body, she now stood unclad before him, he pushed her and she fell on the bed, he pulled his trousers down and lay on her with his heavy weight, Chinelo did not even try to resist, she knew the king would love her more if she bore him a child, she knew the result of sex and she was ready to bear the consequences, King Emeka entered her and he knew pleasure………………………………………………………… Nelson had waited for two hours and his friend had not showed up, he dialed his phone number but it was switched off, he wondered what must have gone wrong, maybe he had missed his way and his phone’s battery was flat, he left the police station as he had more important issues to attend to, he instructed the constable to bring Mr Adeboye to his residence when he comes to the station, he entered his SUV and told his driver where they were going to, they set out and a patrol van followed them……………………………………………………….. Mr Adeboye woke up in a small dark room, he was unclad, in chains and all his hair had been shaved off, he was terrified, he was alone in a strange place, he thought about his son, maybe the same thing he was experiencing had happened to his son, he knew Nelson would find him, but it was a matter of when……………………………………………….. The wore his trousers, he was fully satisfied, his new wife had given him pleasure that he had not experienced for a long time, he wondered what his other new wife had in store for him, as he turned to go out of Chinelo’s room, he suddenly felt a sharp pain in his stomach, before he knew it, a seizure took over him and he fell to the ground, Chinelo saw what was happening and she shouted for help, immediately two guards came in and saw their king vomiting foam, suddenly he stopped moving, one of them placed his chest on their king’s heart and didn’t detect any heart beat, hell was about to break loose, their king was dead………………………………………………………………………………………

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